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Chapter 2 is back and better! (I read all your comments and tried improving)
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[i][b]Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
Chapter 2
Battling Together In Synch!
~On The Way To The Park~
Adrian: I wonder who I’ll battle next.
Austin: I don’t care who I’m battling, I just wanna have some fun!
(Adrian looks at Austin reluctantly, [i][b]We arrive at the park and two huge kids start yelling at other kids)
Austin: I wonder what’s going on!
(Austin runs toward them)
Adrian: Austin wait!
Austin: Yo, what’re you doing here?
Ben: Yo, I’m Ben, now leave!
Stephan: What he said!
Austin: But this park is for everyone, not just for you!
Ben: Why you!
(Ben starts getting close to Austin staring him down, I run up to him angrily)
Adrian: Leave him alone!!
Austin: *Gasps* Adrian…
Ben: Or what?!
Adrian: Or I’ll show you what’s up!
Stephan: Why’re you guys even here?
Austin: We came here to practice!
Ben: You guys are Bladers?! *Laughs*
Adrian: I bet I can take you down in a battle!
Stephan: If you really think so, meet us here, for a battle tomorrow!
Adrian: I’ll take you down!
Ben: But, it’ll be a Tag Battle!
Austin: We’ll take you down!
Adrian: When did I say--
Stephan: Deal, you meet us here at this exact same time!
Austin: You’ve got a deal, we’ll beat you!
Adrian: What did you get us into?
Austin: An awesome battle!
Adrian: *Sighs* Fine, but your training with me! You need to learn how to win.
Austin: But I wanna--
Adrian: You can’t always have fun! You need to take things more seriously if we lose this, we’ll never be able to blade here again!
Austin: Ok.
~Back At Home~
Adrian: Just, listen to everything I say and do whatever I say then we’ll win!
Austin: Got it!
(Adrian and Austin start doing push-ups)
Adrian: Come on, push yourself to the limit!
Austin: I’ve reached my limit.
Adrian: We’re not stopping!
(Adrian starts doing push-ups fast, Austin falls over)
Adrian: *Sighs*
Austin: *Laughs Sheepishly*
~In The House Basement~
Adrian: Just lift these weights.
(Adrian gives Austin super heavy weights)
Austin: How do you carry these?!
Adrian: You’ve just gotta focus and stretch your arms out like a bird.
(Austin tries lifting the weights, Austin falls over)
Adrian: Maybe we should get to battling.
Austin: Finally.
~2 Minutes Later~
(Austin pushes the stadium to the middle of the basement)
Adrian: Me and Asriel will be going easy.
Austin: You better not hold back!
Adrian: Ugh, fine.
(Austin puts Anpao in Attack Mode)
Adrian/Austin: 3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!
Adrian/Austin: *Gasps* No Eclipse Shoot?
Adrian: Twilight Shoot!
Austin: Sol Spark!
(Asriel and Anpao hit each other with a barrage of attacks)
Adrian: Asriel!!
(Adrian’s Resonance Aura flares up Asriel blazes out of the Bey)
Austin: Anpao!
(Austin’s Resonance Aura flares up Anpao blazes out of the Bey)
Adrian: Twilight Blight!
Austin: Sol Flare!
(Asriel and Anpao slam into each other, Asriel and Anpao burst)
Austin/Adrian: *Gasps*
Adrian: Looks like we’re an even match, let’s keep going.
Austin: Got it!
~The Next Day At The Park~
Stephan: So, you decided to show up!
Austin: You bet we did!
Adrian: We’re here to reclaim the park.
(A crowd of kids starts cheering in the background)
Ben: Whatever, Curse Ragnaruk is gonna send you flying out of the stadium!
Stephen: Glide Satomb is gonna make you regret messing with us!
Adrian/Austin: We’ll beat you head on!
(A random kid starts live-streaming the battle)
~In BC Sol~
(The TV Flickers on)
Free: What’s this?
Valt: Looks like it’ll be an awesome battle!
~Back At The Park~
Random Kid: First battle!
Adrian: Just stick to the plan.
Austin: Got it!
(Austin puts Anpao in ten-bladed defense mode)
Random Kid: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Austin/Adrian/Ben/Stephan: Go, Shoot!
(Adrian and Austin pull off powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Adrian: That’s the stuff!
Austin: Take the center, Anpao!
(Anpao takes the center)
Stephan/Ben: Go!
(Glide Satomb and Curse Ragnaruk both go for the center)
Adrian: Now!
(Asriel hits Cure Ragnaruk away from Anpao, Anpao and Glide Satomb start clashing)
Ben: What do you think you’re doing?
Adrian: Ending this. Twilight Shoot!
(Asriel hits Curse Ragnaruk with a powerful flurry of attacks)
Ben: *Gasps*
Stephan: Give up already!
Austin: I’m not giving up!
Stephan/Ben: End this!
(Curse Ragnaruk and Glide Satomb slam Asriel and Anpao into each other, Anpao and Asriel start clashing)
Adrian: What do you think you’re doing?
Austin: I have an idea, you’ve just gotta trust me!
Adrian: *Sighs*
Austin/Adrian: Go!
(Anpao and Asriel start rotating fast while clashing, Anpao, and Asriel head towards Ben and Stephan’s Bey)
Ben/Stephan: *Gasps*
(Austin and Adrian’s Resonance Aura flares up Anpao and Asriel blaze out of the Bey)
Austin/Adrian: Twin Gryo!
(Anpao and Asriel slam into Curse Ragnaruk and Glide Satomb, Curse Ragnaruk and Glide Satomb burst)
Stephan/Ben: No way!
Adrian/Austin: Yes! Now, you leave the park and don’t try taking over the park ever again!!
Ben/Stephan: Yes sirs!
(Ben and Stephan run away, Everyone starts cheering for our victory)
Austin: So, what do you think of me now?
(Adrian turn my head while blushing)
Adrian: You’re not that bad.
(Austin hugs Adrian)
Adrian: Alright, let go!
~In BC Sol~
Free: That was an interesting battle.
Valt: Something seemed off, with his resonance.
Free: What do you mean?
Valt: When he was powering up, I saw Asriel flash purple.
Free: Not a good sign.
Valt: Yeah, I’m gonna keep tabs on him.[/b][/i] [/b][/i]
Chapter 2
Battling Together In Synch!
~On The Way To The Park~
Adrian: I wonder who I’ll battle next.
Austin: I don’t care who I’m battling, I just wanna have some fun!
(Adrian looks at Austin reluctantly, [i][b]We arrive at the park and two huge kids start yelling at other kids)
Austin: I wonder what’s going on!
(Austin runs toward them)
Adrian: Austin wait!
Austin: Yo, what’re you doing here?
Ben: Yo, I’m Ben, now leave!
Stephan: What he said!
Austin: But this park is for everyone, not just for you!
Ben: Why you!
(Ben starts getting close to Austin staring him down, I run up to him angrily)
Adrian: Leave him alone!!
Austin: *Gasps* Adrian…
Ben: Or what?!
Adrian: Or I’ll show you what’s up!
Stephan: Why’re you guys even here?
Austin: We came here to practice!
Ben: You guys are Bladers?! *Laughs*
Adrian: I bet I can take you down in a battle!
Stephan: If you really think so, meet us here, for a battle tomorrow!
Adrian: I’ll take you down!
Ben: But, it’ll be a Tag Battle!
Austin: We’ll take you down!
Adrian: When did I say--
Stephan: Deal, you meet us here at this exact same time!
Austin: You’ve got a deal, we’ll beat you!
Adrian: What did you get us into?
Austin: An awesome battle!
Adrian: *Sighs* Fine, but your training with me! You need to learn how to win.
Austin: But I wanna--
Adrian: You can’t always have fun! You need to take things more seriously if we lose this, we’ll never be able to blade here again!
Austin: Ok.
~Back At Home~
Adrian: Just, listen to everything I say and do whatever I say then we’ll win!
Austin: Got it!
(Adrian and Austin start doing push-ups)
Adrian: Come on, push yourself to the limit!
Austin: I’ve reached my limit.
Adrian: We’re not stopping!
(Adrian starts doing push-ups fast, Austin falls over)
Adrian: *Sighs*
Austin: *Laughs Sheepishly*
~In The House Basement~
Adrian: Just lift these weights.
(Adrian gives Austin super heavy weights)
Austin: How do you carry these?!
Adrian: You’ve just gotta focus and stretch your arms out like a bird.
(Austin tries lifting the weights, Austin falls over)
Adrian: Maybe we should get to battling.
Austin: Finally.
~2 Minutes Later~
(Austin pushes the stadium to the middle of the basement)
Adrian: Me and Asriel will be going easy.
Austin: You better not hold back!
Adrian: Ugh, fine.
(Austin puts Anpao in Attack Mode)
Adrian/Austin: 3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!
Adrian/Austin: *Gasps* No Eclipse Shoot?
Adrian: Twilight Shoot!
Austin: Sol Spark!
(Asriel and Anpao hit each other with a barrage of attacks)
Adrian: Asriel!!
(Adrian’s Resonance Aura flares up Asriel blazes out of the Bey)
Austin: Anpao!
(Austin’s Resonance Aura flares up Anpao blazes out of the Bey)
Adrian: Twilight Blight!
Austin: Sol Flare!
(Asriel and Anpao slam into each other, Asriel and Anpao burst)
Austin/Adrian: *Gasps*
Adrian: Looks like we’re an even match, let’s keep going.
Austin: Got it!
~The Next Day At The Park~
Stephan: So, you decided to show up!
Austin: You bet we did!
Adrian: We’re here to reclaim the park.
(A crowd of kids starts cheering in the background)
Ben: Whatever, Curse Ragnaruk is gonna send you flying out of the stadium!
Stephen: Glide Satomb is gonna make you regret messing with us!
Adrian/Austin: We’ll beat you head on!
(A random kid starts live-streaming the battle)
~In BC Sol~
(The TV Flickers on)
Free: What’s this?
Valt: Looks like it’ll be an awesome battle!
~Back At The Park~
Random Kid: First battle!
Adrian: Just stick to the plan.
Austin: Got it!
(Austin puts Anpao in ten-bladed defense mode)
Random Kid: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Austin/Adrian/Ben/Stephan: Go, Shoot!
(Adrian and Austin pull off powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Adrian: That’s the stuff!
Austin: Take the center, Anpao!
(Anpao takes the center)
Stephan/Ben: Go!
(Glide Satomb and Curse Ragnaruk both go for the center)
Adrian: Now!
(Asriel hits Cure Ragnaruk away from Anpao, Anpao and Glide Satomb start clashing)
Ben: What do you think you’re doing?
Adrian: Ending this. Twilight Shoot!
(Asriel hits Curse Ragnaruk with a powerful flurry of attacks)
Ben: *Gasps*
Stephan: Give up already!
Austin: I’m not giving up!
Stephan/Ben: End this!
(Curse Ragnaruk and Glide Satomb slam Asriel and Anpao into each other, Anpao and Asriel start clashing)
Adrian: What do you think you’re doing?
Austin: I have an idea, you’ve just gotta trust me!
Adrian: *Sighs*
Austin/Adrian: Go!
(Anpao and Asriel start rotating fast while clashing, Anpao, and Asriel head towards Ben and Stephan’s Bey)
Ben/Stephan: *Gasps*
(Austin and Adrian’s Resonance Aura flares up Anpao and Asriel blaze out of the Bey)
Austin/Adrian: Twin Gryo!
(Anpao and Asriel slam into Curse Ragnaruk and Glide Satomb, Curse Ragnaruk and Glide Satomb burst)
Stephan/Ben: No way!
Adrian/Austin: Yes! Now, you leave the park and don’t try taking over the park ever again!!
Ben/Stephan: Yes sirs!
(Ben and Stephan run away, Everyone starts cheering for our victory)
Austin: So, what do you think of me now?
(Adrian turn my head while blushing)
Adrian: You’re not that bad.
(Austin hugs Adrian)
Adrian: Alright, let go!
~In BC Sol~
Free: That was an interesting battle.
Valt: Something seemed off, with his resonance.
Free: What do you mean?
Valt: When he was powering up, I saw Asriel flash purple.
Free: Not a good sign.
Valt: Yeah, I’m gonna keep tabs on him.[/b][/i] [/b][/i]
Aug. 08, 2021 2:24 AM
after Austin was talking the bolde was gone
And NICE CHAPTER!
And NICE CHAPTER!
Aug. 08, 2021 2:31 AM
Definitely improve. I who has Asrial and who has Anpao? Sorry, I forgot. Also “Austin huge Adrian” auto correct is the bet.
Aug. 08, 2021 2:36 AM
(Aug. 08, 2021 2:31 AM)LJ-Blader Wrote: [ -> ]Definitely improve. I who has Asrial and who has Anpao? Sorry, I forgot. Also “Austin huge Adrian” auto correct is the bet.
Adrian is Asriel's owner and Austin is Anpao's owner also forgot to mention that Asriel was created by my good old buddy
Aug. 08, 2021 2:40 AM
(Aug. 08, 2021 2:36 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ](Aug. 08, 2021 2:31 AM)LJ-Blader Wrote: [ -> ]Definitely improve. I who has Asrial and who has Anpao? Sorry, I forgot. Also “Austin huge Adrian” auto correct is the bet.
Adrian is Asriel's owner and Austin is Anpao's owner also forgot to mention that Asriel was created by my good old buddy BeybladeManiac0 so shout out to him, also yeah, I meant to say hug and Huge lemme fix that, also for some reason I can't edit the bold so it's stuck like that.
Alright, makes way more sense also Great chapter!
Also I'm talking about the Bold part
Aug. 08, 2021 2:46 AM
3) New Rival!
4) Surging Hurricane, Hurricane Ragnaruk!
5) Burning Jealousy!
6) Wild Dragon, Savage Wyvern!
4) Surging Hurricane, Hurricane Ragnaruk!
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AUSTRALIAN KIYAMA!!!
5) Burning Jealousy!
6) Wild Dragon, Savage Wyvern!
Aug. 08, 2021 2:50 AM
this episode was poggers!! nice one!
Aug. 08, 2021 2:55 AM
Savage sounds Familiar?
(Aug. 08, 2021 2:46 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ]3) New Rival!
4) Surging Hurricane, Hurricane Ragnaruk!Spoiler (Click to View)AUSTRALIAN KIYAMA!!!
5) Burning Jealousy!
6) Wild Dragon, Savage Wyvern!
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Australian Kiyama? Dang Rantaro you sure do have a lot of relatives
Aug. 08, 2021 3:53 AM
The kiyamas spread across the universe.
Aug. 08, 2021 7:22 AM
Australian Kiyama?
Aug. 08, 2021 4:36 PM
So, there's gonna be a character contest, you need to add Bey details and if it's a Yang or Yin Bey it cannot be a Legend's Bey, (Well, you can only not own a legend's Bey that was in sparking) and that's pretty much it, deadline: Friday The 13th (Me just realizing that next Friday is Friday the 13th and freaking out)
Aug. 08, 2021 4:46 PM
Could we get a template for each bey?
Aug. 08, 2021 4:50 PM
(Aug. 08, 2021 4:46 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: [ -> ]Could we get a template for each bey?
Like this?
Yang Blade
Yang Chip
'Chassis
Aug. 08, 2021 4:50 PM
(Aug. 08, 2021 4:36 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ]So, there's gonna be a character contest, you need to add Bey details and if it's a Yang or Yin Bey it cannot be a Legend's Bey, (Well, you can only not own a legend's Bey that was in sparking) and that's pretty much it, deadline: Friday The 13th (Me just realizing that next Friday is Friday the 13th and freaking out)
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA FRIDAY 13 REEEEEEEEEEEEEE
alright i may enter!
Aug. 08, 2021 4:54 PM
Yin System
Yin Core Weight:
Yin Armor:
Yin Chip:
Yin Blade:
Yang System
Yang Chip
Yang Blade
'Chasiss
Yin Core Weight:
Yin Armor:
Yin Chip:
Yin Blade:
Yang System
Yang Chip
Yang Blade
'Chasiss
Aug. 08, 2021 4:54 PM
(Aug. 08, 2021 4:36 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ]So, there's gonna be a character contest, you need to add Bey details and if it's a Yang or Yin Bey it cannot be a Legend's Bey, (Well, you can only not own a legend's Bey that was in sparking) and that's pretty much it, deadline: Friday The 13th (Me just realizing that next Friday is Friday the 13th and freaking out)My last birthday was Friday 13th. Anyways, I might be doing a character.
(Aug. 08, 2021 4:54 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ]Yin SystemDon't forget the drivers
Yin Core Weight:
Yin Armor:
Yin Chip:
Yin Blade:
Yang System
Yang Chip
Yang Blade
'Chasiss
Aug. 08, 2021 4:56 PM
And disk in yin. Really excited to make a bey for this series.
Aug. 08, 2021 4:56 PM
(Aug. 08, 2021 4:54 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: [ -> ](Aug. 08, 2021 4:36 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ]So, there's gonna be a character contest, you need to add Bey details and if it's a Yang or Yin Bey it cannot be a Legend's Bey, (Well, you can only not own a legend's Bey that was in sparking) and that's pretty much it, deadline: Friday The 13th (Me just realizing that next Friday is Friday the 13th and freaking out)My last birthday was Friday 13th. Anyways, I might be doing a character.
(Aug. 08, 2021 4:54 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ]Yin SystemDon't forget the drivers
Yin Core Weight:
Yin Armor:
Yin Chip:
Yin Blade:
Yang System
Yang Chip
Yang Blade
'Chasiss
The Disk and Drivers basically stay the same (But Yin Beys don't have disks)
Aug. 08, 2021 4:57 PM
Huh, do you mean yang sense chassis?
Aug. 08, 2021 4:59 PM
(Aug. 08, 2021 4:57 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: [ -> ]Huh, do you mean yang sense chassis?
So, basically, Yang Chasiss' aren't compatible with disks, just like in Sparking.
Aug. 08, 2021 5:42 PM
Character Name: Kenji Sudo
Age: 12
Height: 5'6
Hair Color: White
Eye Color: Red
Beyblade: Rebel Magician
Yin System
Yin Core Weight: Gen
Yin Armor: 2
Yin Chip: Magician
Yin Blade: Rebel
In japanese Wakiya's name is Komurasaki Wakiya
so Wally's name is Komurasaki Wally
Age: 12
Height: 5'6
Hair Color: White
Eye Color: Red
Beyblade: Rebel Magician
Yin System
Yin Core Weight: Gen
Yin Armor: 2
Yin Chip: Magician
Yin Blade: Rebel
(Aug. 07, 2021 11:19 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: [ -> ](Aug. 07, 2021 11:17 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]Ah, Wyvern?I can't recognise the surname but since he has a "W" name, probably yes
In japanese Wakiya's name is Komurasaki Wakiya
so Wally's name is Komurasaki Wally
Aug. 08, 2021 5:52 PM
If I like your post for the Character Contest (Like, click the star) Then that means your in.