Aug. 10, 2021 10:36 PM
Aug. 10, 2021 10:42 PM
(Aug. 10, 2021 10:36 PM)Dread hades12 Wrote: [ -> ]Genisisblader we need a final participant in rougeblader's cbts thread wanna pick a combo and join?
Same thing for you Legendjustice
Bruh, wrong thread. If they want to enter they will, you don't need to tell them to. (srry if I sounded too serious)
Aug. 10, 2021 10:49 PM
Grammar: 4/5 I keep thinking like i saw a mistake then a re-read it and I did see a mistake so you can work on that but beside that things were okay!
Plot: 5/5 Its nice and simple to understand we're the characters are good job on that!
Characters: 4.1/5 you brought them alive it's just that something felt of about how it was played like how wally came out of nowhere but hey that's just me.
Diolouge: 4/5 Idk what too say lol
Length: 4/5 it wasn't to long but it WASN'T short good job!
Over all: 17/20 it wasn't your best chapter but knowing you you'll improve!
Plot: 5/5 Its nice and simple to understand we're the characters are good job on that!
Characters: 4.1/5 you brought them alive it's just that something felt of about how it was played like how wally came out of nowhere but hey that's just me.
Diolouge: 4/5 Idk what too say lol
Length: 4/5 it wasn't to long but it WASN'T short good job!
Over all: 17/20 it wasn't your best chapter but knowing you you'll improve!
Aug. 10, 2021 10:52 PM
(Aug. 10, 2021 10:49 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]Grammar: 4/5 I keep thinking like i saw a mistake then a re-read it and I did see a mistake so you can work on that but beside that things were okay!
Plot: 5/5 Its nice and simple to understand we're the characters are good job on that!
Characters: 4.1/5 you brought them alive it's just that something felt of about how it was played like how wally came out of nowhere but hey that's just me.
Diolouge: 4/5 Idk what too say lol
Length: 4/5 it wasn't to long but it WASN'T short good job!
Over all: 17/20 it wasn't your best chapter but knowing you you'll improve!
Austin: Alright, so--
(Wally appears in the room)
Ren/Austin: What the--
Lol, yeah, I couldn't come up with a good reason why Wally would be over, thanks for the rating!
Aug. 10, 2021 11:07 PM
(Aug. 10, 2021 10:52 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ]maybe wally could burst the door idk.(Aug. 10, 2021 10:49 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]Grammar: 4/5 I keep thinking like i saw a mistake then a re-read it and I did see a mistake so you can work on that but beside that things were okay!
Plot: 5/5 Its nice and simple to understand we're the characters are good job on that!
Characters: 4.1/5 you brought them alive it's just that something felt of about how it was played like how wally came out of nowhere but hey that's just me.
Diolouge: 4/5 Idk what too say lol
Length: 4/5 it wasn't to long but it WASN'T short good job!
Over all: 17/20 it wasn't your best chapter but knowing you you'll improve!
Austin: Alright, so--
(Wally appears in the room)
Ren/Austin: What the--
Lol, yeah, I couldn't come up with a good reason why Wally would be over, thanks for the rating!
Aug. 10, 2021 11:10 PM
Oh I know how about Wally bust down the door and then turns into count night from Beyblade burst turbo and has a new bey called midnight aether/ eclipse.
Aug. 11, 2021 7:29 PM
4) Wild Dragon, Savage Wyvern!
5) Battling A Legend!
6) Friends Forever!!
5) Battling A Legend!
6) Friends Forever!!
Aug. 12, 2021 10:52 AM
Name: Acheros Izumi
Age: 11
Appearance: Paled skinned boy of average height.Medium length black hair with a white streak (messy). Wears black hoodie with a white abstract bey's image on it. Ripped jeans.
Personality: So basically he is free but has Shu traits too (Kind, encouraging, short temper etc.)
Bey: Dire Aeneas 4B' Xtend+'
Launcher: Black with a bit of translucent blue and white.
Chip - Aeneas: Left spin with a Perseus-like design (black white and teal) has metal on the white parts. Bahamut slopes.
Blade - Dire: Smooth, sharp metal blades on a rounded ring made out of offensive rubber. (White blades, black rubber)
Chassis - 4B: Chassis which can change modes from attack to defense. Attack: when hit hard enough 4hard plastic blades will poke out from the disc. Defense: When being attacked, 6 rounded blades made out of rubber will pop out to prevent attacks.
Driver- Xtend+': Xtend+ but with 9 modes that can change in the heat of battle.
Special moves: Dire break: Basically the chassis activating in attack mode.
Dire spin: Driver changes modes giving it extra spin.
Plague scythe: hits the opponent with all of its blades and hits it high in the air (98% burst chance).
Btw this bey can spin steal not equalise (I mean it can but it's gimmick is to spin steal.
Yang system
Age: 11
Appearance: Paled skinned boy of average height.Medium length black hair with a white streak (messy). Wears black hoodie with a white abstract bey's image on it. Ripped jeans.
Personality: So basically he is free but has Shu traits too (Kind, encouraging, short temper etc.)
Bey: Dire Aeneas 4B' Xtend+'
Launcher: Black with a bit of translucent blue and white.
Chip - Aeneas: Left spin with a Perseus-like design (black white and teal) has metal on the white parts. Bahamut slopes.
Blade - Dire: Smooth, sharp metal blades on a rounded ring made out of offensive rubber. (White blades, black rubber)
Chassis - 4B: Chassis which can change modes from attack to defense. Attack: when hit hard enough 4hard plastic blades will poke out from the disc. Defense: When being attacked, 6 rounded blades made out of rubber will pop out to prevent attacks.
Driver- Xtend+': Xtend+ but with 9 modes that can change in the heat of battle.
Special moves: Dire break: Basically the chassis activating in attack mode.
Dire spin: Driver changes modes giving it extra spin.
Plague scythe: hits the opponent with all of its blades and hits it high in the air (98% burst chance).
Btw this bey can spin steal not equalise (I mean it can but it's gimmick is to spin steal.
Yang system
Aug. 12, 2021 11:57 AM
I might not able to join any contests because I'm sick lol
Aug. 12, 2021 2:01 PM
Name: Ryo kurogami
Bey: Undead Deathsycther 5B Metal Zephyr
Age 13
Bio When Ryo was a small boy he got the chance to battle Valt Aoi. This motivated him to create the perfect bey. 6 years later he used his dad's( Daigo) hollow Deathsycther to create the vicious undead Deathsycther. And is now A rank #3 he rose so quickly the legends had to hold a meeting about this while Daigo just smiled proudly.
Chip: Deathsycther represents the face of death and death's scythe
Blade- undead: Undead features one black and one right side. The black side has a long metal scythe that will slide forward to deal devastating damage. The other side is lined with 3 upper mini blades lined with rubber so it can spin steal from left spins and KO right spins.
Chassis- 5B: 5B can either increase attack or stamina power. When the heavy side is lined up with the long black scythe upon a hard impact it will lift upwards and fuse with the scythe increasing attack power. When lined up with the white side 5B will create tons and tons of weight on the whites allowing it to spin steel from left spins greater and if it's lined up with the white side above the strong impact from that specific side it will rotate to the black side with the size lift upwards and have switched from stamina to attack mode.
Tip: Metal Zephyr is Zephyr but lined with heavy metal this increasing the weigh of Deathsycther.
Note: this is a yang bey.
Bey: Undead Deathsycther 5B Metal Zephyr
Age 13
Bio When Ryo was a small boy he got the chance to battle Valt Aoi. This motivated him to create the perfect bey. 6 years later he used his dad's( Daigo) hollow Deathsycther to create the vicious undead Deathsycther. And is now A rank #3 he rose so quickly the legends had to hold a meeting about this while Daigo just smiled proudly.
Chip: Deathsycther represents the face of death and death's scythe
Blade- undead: Undead features one black and one right side. The black side has a long metal scythe that will slide forward to deal devastating damage. The other side is lined with 3 upper mini blades lined with rubber so it can spin steal from left spins and KO right spins.
Chassis- 5B: 5B can either increase attack or stamina power. When the heavy side is lined up with the long black scythe upon a hard impact it will lift upwards and fuse with the scythe increasing attack power. When lined up with the white side 5B will create tons and tons of weight on the whites allowing it to spin steel from left spins greater and if it's lined up with the white side above the strong impact from that specific side it will rotate to the black side with the size lift upwards and have switched from stamina to attack mode.
Tip: Metal Zephyr is Zephyr but lined with heavy metal this increasing the weigh of Deathsycther.
Note: this is a yang bey.
Aug. 12, 2021 4:27 PM
Chapter 5 has risen up!
Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
Chapter 5
Wild Dragon, Savage Wyvern!
~In The Park~
All: 3! 2! 1!
Wally/Ren: Go, Shoot!
(Wally pulls off a powerful Sparking Shoot, Ren pulls off an Eclipse Shoot)
Ren: Take the center, mate!
Wally: Go, Jet Satomb!
(Ragnaruk takes the center and blocks all of Jet Satomb’s attacks)
Wally: Come on!
Ren: Tempest Zone!
(Jet Satomb slams into Ragnaruk and bursts)
Wally: *Gasps*
Austin: It's Squall Ragnaruk with a Burst Finish! Ren’s the winner!
Ren: I’m on a roll, mate!
Wally: I must admit, you’re a strong one.
(Adrian walks up to Austin, Wally, and Ren)
Austin: Adrian--
Adrian: I’m here to battle Ren.
Ren: You want another shot at me mate?
Adrian: Yeah, and I promise--
(Adrian’s Dark Resonance Aura flares up and his eyes turn purple)
Adrian: I promise I’ll defeat you!
Ren: Whatever, I’ll defeat you anyways!
Wally: I’ll be the referee! First battle!!
Ren: What makes you think you can win this battle?
Me: You don’t know everything about the Yin System, do you?
Ren: I just evolved Ragnaruk, of course, I don’t!
Me: Well, then, you’re doomed.
(Adrian does something to his Bey)
All: *Gasps*
(Adrian holds up Asriel)
Adrian: This is the Heavy Mode!
Wally: “Heavy Mode?!”
Ren: Wait, where did the Yin Weight go?
Adrian: It’s on the bottom of the layer, I replaced it with the Yin Armor to make it heavy!
Ren: Dang, this’ll be fun!
Me: (It sure will be) *Smiles Evilly*
Wally: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Adrian/Ren: Go, Shoot!
(Ren and Adrian pull off powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Adrian: Twilight Shoot!
(Asriel hits Ragnaruk with a barrage of powerful strikes, Ragnaruk gets knocked off balance with each hit)
Ren: *Gasps*
Adrian: Putting the Yin Armor on the top of the layer adds extra attack and weight, Ragnaruk will eventually fall!
Ren: I don’t think so, Tempest Zone!
(Ragnaruk creates a mini tornado and blocks all of Asriel’s attacks)
Wally: Asriel’s attacks are starting to fail!
Austin: Go, Adrian! And Ren!
Adrian: Asriel!!
(Adrian’s Resonance Aura flares up Asriel blazes out of the Bey)
Adrian: Blow 'em into pieces! Twilight Strike!!
(Asriel speeds up and slams into Ragnaruk, Ragnaruk gets sent flying in the air and bursts)
Ren: *Gasps*
Wally: It’s Twilight Asriel with a Burst Finish! Adrian Saito is the winner!!
Adrian: I’m done here.
(Adrian tries walking away but Austin grabs Adrian’s shoulder)
Austin: Why don’t you hang out with us for a bit?
Adrian: Ugh, fine.
Wally (Thoughts): The Yin and Yang System, it’s definitely the strongest System around, I’ve got to create one!
(Wally walks away)
Austin: Wally, where are you going?
Wally: I have to go home for a bit, I’ll be back in an hour.
Ren: Alright mate, we’ll see you later!
~At The Komurasaki Mansion~
Servant: Master Wally, you’re back early.
Wally: Yeah, I want to create a new Bey!
Servant: Did your Bey get destroyed again?
Wally: No, we need this evolution to get stronger!
Servant: Right this way sir!
~In The Workroom~
Servant: We have the most expensive machines to help you create your Bey, I’ll call the scientists.
Wally: I’ll create my Bey on my own.
Servant: Ok, I’ll be in the kitchen fixing your five-course meal for dinner.
Wally (Thoughts): My Bey will be a Wyvern, just like my cousin Wakiya’s Bey!
(Wally types up an image on the screen and edits it)
Wally (Thoughts): I’ll defeat Wakiya, and show him how much stronger I’ve gotten!
~58 Minutes Later~
Wally: It’s done! Savage Wyvern has been created!!
(Wally holds Wyvern up)
Wally: It’s time to battle the Saito brothers!
~At The Park~
(Wally runs up to us)
Adrian: So, you’re back.
Wally: I am, with my new Yang Bey, Savage Wyvern!!
(Wally holds up Wyvern)
Austin: Wow, it looks like a--
Wally: Yup, it’s a Yang Bey!
Adrian: Isn’t that Wakiya Komursaki’s Bey?
Wally: I forgot to tell you that Wakiya is my cousin! *Smiles Sheepishly*
All: Seriously?!
Wally: Yeah, he’s the most awesome cousin ever! So, I made a Wyvern!
Ren: (Wouldn’t say the best cousin ever.)
Austin: Awesome, wanna battle?!
Wally: Totally.
Ren: I’ll be the referee mates! Inspect your opponent’s Bey!
Austin (Thoughts): Savage Wyvern, a Clockwise Spinning Defense Type! It has six large blades that can be used to absorb attacks against Left Spin Beys, and it’ll be free spinning against Right Spin Beys! It’ll chassis is free spinning and it also has metal balls on it! The Driver has five metal balls, the huge one is in the middle and can counter strike when hit hard enough, the other four metal balls around the tip, when it leans on the driver, it’ll get right back up! This Bey will hard to beat!
Ren: First battle!
Wally: I created Wyvern with the best machines in the world, it’ll be impossible to beat!
Austin: I’ll beat it head-on!
(Austin puts Anpao in Attack Mode)
Ren: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Wally/Austin: Go, Shoot!
(Wally and Austin pull off Eclipse Shoots)
Austin: Go, Anpao!
Wally: Take the center, Wyvern!
(Wyvern takes the center and blocks all of Anpao’s attacks)
Austin: *Gasps*
Wally: Savage Shield!
(Wyvern brushes off all Anpao’s attacks with its spinning blades)
Adrian (Thoughts): Looks like Wyvern can easily block all of Anpao’s attacks without breaking a sweat, Austin will have to do better than that if he wants to bear Wally.
Austin: I’m not finished, Anpao!!
(Austin’s Resonance Aura flares up Anpao blazes out of the Bey)
Wally: This is the end for you! Wyvern!!
(Wally’s Resonance Aura flares up Wyvern blazes out of the Bey, Anpao hits Wyvern up the stadium slope)
Austin: Yes!
Wally: Savage Crash!
Austin: *Gasps* Counter quick, Sol Spark!
(Wyvern and Anpao slam into each other, both Beys get sent flying out of the stadium)
Austin/Wally: *Gasps*
Ren: It’s a simultaneous Over Finish! No points were awarded!
Austin: Come on!
Wally: Looks like I need to train harder!
Ren: This battle has ended in a draw!
Austin: *Gasps* What do you mean?!
Adrian: It’s getting late, mom will get mad.
Austin: But!
(Adrian starts dragging Austin by the hand on the floor)
Adrian: We can battle tomorrow.
Austin: Aw man, I really wanna battle!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
Chapter 5
Wild Dragon, Savage Wyvern!
~In The Park~
All: 3! 2! 1!
Wally/Ren: Go, Shoot!
(Wally pulls off a powerful Sparking Shoot, Ren pulls off an Eclipse Shoot)
Ren: Take the center, mate!
Wally: Go, Jet Satomb!
(Ragnaruk takes the center and blocks all of Jet Satomb’s attacks)
Wally: Come on!
Ren: Tempest Zone!
(Jet Satomb slams into Ragnaruk and bursts)
Wally: *Gasps*
Austin: It's Squall Ragnaruk with a Burst Finish! Ren’s the winner!
Ren: I’m on a roll, mate!
Wally: I must admit, you’re a strong one.
(Adrian walks up to Austin, Wally, and Ren)
Austin: Adrian--
Adrian: I’m here to battle Ren.
Ren: You want another shot at me mate?
Adrian: Yeah, and I promise--
(Adrian’s Dark Resonance Aura flares up and his eyes turn purple)
Adrian: I promise I’ll defeat you!
Ren: Whatever, I’ll defeat you anyways!
Wally: I’ll be the referee! First battle!!
Ren: What makes you think you can win this battle?
Me: You don’t know everything about the Yin System, do you?
Ren: I just evolved Ragnaruk, of course, I don’t!
Me: Well, then, you’re doomed.
(Adrian does something to his Bey)
All: *Gasps*
(Adrian holds up Asriel)
Adrian: This is the Heavy Mode!
Wally: “Heavy Mode?!”
Ren: Wait, where did the Yin Weight go?
Adrian: It’s on the bottom of the layer, I replaced it with the Yin Armor to make it heavy!
Ren: Dang, this’ll be fun!
Me: (It sure will be) *Smiles Evilly*
Wally: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Adrian/Ren: Go, Shoot!
(Ren and Adrian pull off powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Adrian: Twilight Shoot!
(Asriel hits Ragnaruk with a barrage of powerful strikes, Ragnaruk gets knocked off balance with each hit)
Ren: *Gasps*
Adrian: Putting the Yin Armor on the top of the layer adds extra attack and weight, Ragnaruk will eventually fall!
Ren: I don’t think so, Tempest Zone!
(Ragnaruk creates a mini tornado and blocks all of Asriel’s attacks)
Wally: Asriel’s attacks are starting to fail!
Austin: Go, Adrian! And Ren!
Adrian: Asriel!!
(Adrian’s Resonance Aura flares up Asriel blazes out of the Bey)
Adrian: Blow 'em into pieces! Twilight Strike!!
(Asriel speeds up and slams into Ragnaruk, Ragnaruk gets sent flying in the air and bursts)
Ren: *Gasps*
Wally: It’s Twilight Asriel with a Burst Finish! Adrian Saito is the winner!!
Adrian: I’m done here.
(Adrian tries walking away but Austin grabs Adrian’s shoulder)
Austin: Why don’t you hang out with us for a bit?
Adrian: Ugh, fine.
Wally (Thoughts): The Yin and Yang System, it’s definitely the strongest System around, I’ve got to create one!
(Wally walks away)
Austin: Wally, where are you going?
Wally: I have to go home for a bit, I’ll be back in an hour.
Ren: Alright mate, we’ll see you later!
~At The Komurasaki Mansion~
Servant: Master Wally, you’re back early.
Wally: Yeah, I want to create a new Bey!
Servant: Did your Bey get destroyed again?
Wally: No, we need this evolution to get stronger!
Servant: Right this way sir!
~In The Workroom~
Servant: We have the most expensive machines to help you create your Bey, I’ll call the scientists.
Wally: I’ll create my Bey on my own.
Servant: Ok, I’ll be in the kitchen fixing your five-course meal for dinner.
Wally (Thoughts): My Bey will be a Wyvern, just like my cousin Wakiya’s Bey!
(Wally types up an image on the screen and edits it)
Wally (Thoughts): I’ll defeat Wakiya, and show him how much stronger I’ve gotten!
~58 Minutes Later~
Wally: It’s done! Savage Wyvern has been created!!
(Wally holds Wyvern up)
Wally: It’s time to battle the Saito brothers!
~At The Park~
(Wally runs up to us)
Adrian: So, you’re back.
Wally: I am, with my new Yang Bey, Savage Wyvern!!
(Wally holds up Wyvern)
Austin: Wow, it looks like a--
Wally: Yup, it’s a Yang Bey!
Adrian: Isn’t that Wakiya Komursaki’s Bey?
Wally: I forgot to tell you that Wakiya is my cousin! *Smiles Sheepishly*
All: Seriously?!
Wally: Yeah, he’s the most awesome cousin ever! So, I made a Wyvern!
Ren: (Wouldn’t say the best cousin ever.)
Austin: Awesome, wanna battle?!
Wally: Totally.
Ren: I’ll be the referee mates! Inspect your opponent’s Bey!
Austin (Thoughts): Savage Wyvern, a Clockwise Spinning Defense Type! It has six large blades that can be used to absorb attacks against Left Spin Beys, and it’ll be free spinning against Right Spin Beys! It’ll chassis is free spinning and it also has metal balls on it! The Driver has five metal balls, the huge one is in the middle and can counter strike when hit hard enough, the other four metal balls around the tip, when it leans on the driver, it’ll get right back up! This Bey will hard to beat!
Ren: First battle!
Wally: I created Wyvern with the best machines in the world, it’ll be impossible to beat!
Austin: I’ll beat it head-on!
(Austin puts Anpao in Attack Mode)
Ren: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Wally/Austin: Go, Shoot!
(Wally and Austin pull off Eclipse Shoots)
Austin: Go, Anpao!
Wally: Take the center, Wyvern!
(Wyvern takes the center and blocks all of Anpao’s attacks)
Austin: *Gasps*
Wally: Savage Shield!
(Wyvern brushes off all Anpao’s attacks with its spinning blades)
Adrian (Thoughts): Looks like Wyvern can easily block all of Anpao’s attacks without breaking a sweat, Austin will have to do better than that if he wants to bear Wally.
Austin: I’m not finished, Anpao!!
(Austin’s Resonance Aura flares up Anpao blazes out of the Bey)
Wally: This is the end for you! Wyvern!!
(Wally’s Resonance Aura flares up Wyvern blazes out of the Bey, Anpao hits Wyvern up the stadium slope)
Austin: Yes!
Wally: Savage Crash!
Austin: *Gasps* Counter quick, Sol Spark!
(Wyvern and Anpao slam into each other, both Beys get sent flying out of the stadium)
Austin/Wally: *Gasps*
Ren: It’s a simultaneous Over Finish! No points were awarded!
Austin: Come on!
Wally: Looks like I need to train harder!
Ren: This battle has ended in a draw!
Austin: *Gasps* What do you mean?!
Adrian: It’s getting late, mom will get mad.
Austin: But!
(Adrian starts dragging Austin by the hand on the floor)
Adrian: We can battle tomorrow.
Austin: Aw man, I really wanna battle!
Aug. 12, 2021 4:31 PM
nice episode lad!
Aug. 12, 2021 5:31 PM
(Aug. 12, 2021 4:27 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 5 has risen up!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
Chapter 5
Wild Dragon, Savage Wyvern!
~In The Park~
All: 3! 2! 1!
Wally/Ren: Go, Shoot!
(Wally pulls off a powerful Sparking Shoot, Ren pulls off an Eclipse Shoot)
Ren: Take the center, mate!
Wally: Go, Jet Satomb!
(Ragnaruk takes the center and blocks all of Jet Satomb’s attacks)
Wally: Come on!
Ren: Tempest Zone!
(Jet Satomb slams into Ragnaruk and bursts)
Wally: *Gasps*
Austin: It's Squall Ragnaruk with a Burst Finish! Ren’s the winner!
Ren: I’m on a roll, mate!
Wally: I must admit, you’re a strong one.
(Adrian walks up to Austin, Wally, and Ren)
Austin: Adrian--
Adrian: I’m here to battle Ren.
Ren: You want another shot at me mate?
Adrian: Yeah, and I promise--
(Adrian’s Dark Resonance Aura flares up and his eyes turn purple)
Adrian: I promise I’ll defeat you!
Ren: Whatever, I’ll defeat you anyways!
Wally: I’ll be the referee! First battle!!
Ren: What makes you think you can win this battle?
Me: You don’t know everything about the Yin System, do you?
Ren: I just evolved Ragnaruk, of course, I don’t!
Me: Well, then, you’re doomed.
(Adrian does something to his Bey)
All: *Gasps*
(Adrian holds up Asriel)
Adrian: This is the Heavy Mode!
Wally: “Heavy Mode?!”
Ren: Wait, where did the Yin Weight go?
Adrian: It’s on the bottom of the layer, I replaced it with the Yin Armor to make it heavy!
Ren: Dang, this’ll be fun!
Me: (It sure will be) *Smiles Evilly*
Wally: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Adrian/Ren: Go, Shoot!
(Ren and Adrian pull off powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Adrian: Twilight Shoot!
(Asriel hits Ragnaruk with a barrage of powerful strikes, Ragnaruk gets knocked off balance with each hit)
Ren: *Gasps*
Adrian: Putting the Yin Armor on the top of the layer adds extra attack and weight, Ragnaruk will eventually fall!
Ren: I don’t think so, Tempest Zone!
(Ragnaruk creates a mini tornado and blocks all of Asriel’s attacks)
Wally: Asriel’s attacks are starting to fail!
Austin: Go, Adrian! And Ren!
Adrian: Asriel!!
(Adrian’s Resonance Aura flares up Asriel blazes out of the Bey)
Adrian: Blow 'em into pieces! Twilight Strike!!
(Asriel speeds up and slams into Ragnaruk, Ragnaruk gets sent flying in the air and bursts)
Ren: *Gasps*
Wally: It’s Twilight Asriel with a Burst Finish! Adrian Saito is the winner!!
Adrian: I’m done here.
(Adrian tries walking away but Austin grabs Adrian’s shoulder)
Austin: Why don’t you hang out with us for a bit?
Adrian: Ugh, fine.
Wally (Thoughts): The Yin and Yang System, it’s definitely the strongest System around, I’ve got to create one!
(Wally walks away)
Austin: Wally, where are you going?
Wally: I have to go home for a bit, I’ll be back in an hour.
Ren: Alright mate, we’ll see you later!
~At The Komurasaki Mansion~
Servant: Master Wally, you’re back early.
Wally: Yeah, I want to create a new Bey!
Servant: Did your Bey get destroyed again?
Wally: No, we need this evolution to get stronger!
Servant: Right this way sir!
~In The Workroom~
Servant: We have the most expensive machines to help you create your Bey, I’ll call the scientists.
Wally: I’ll create my Bey on my own.
Servant: Ok, I’ll be in the kitchen fixing your five-course meal for dinner.
Wally (Thoughts): My Bey will be a Wyvern, just like my cousin Wakiya’s Bey!
(Wally types up an image on the screen and edits it)
Wally (Thoughts): I’ll defeat Wakiya, and show him how much stronger I’ve gotten!
~58 Minutes Later~
Wally: It’s done! Savage Wyvern has been created!!
(Wally holds Wyvern up)
Wally: It’s time to battle the Saito brothers!
~At The Park~
(Wally runs up to us)
Adrian: So, you’re back.
Wally: I am, with my new Yang Bey, Savage Wyvern!!
(Wally holds up Wyvern)
Austin: Wow, it looks like a--
Wally: Yup, it’s a Yang Bey!
Adrian: Isn’t that Wakiya Komursaki’s Bey?
Wally: I forgot to tell you that Wakiya is my cousin! *Smiles Sheepishly*
All: Seriously?!
Wally: Yeah, he’s the most awesome cousin ever! So, I made a Wyvern!
Ren: (Wouldn’t say the best cousin ever.)
Austin: Awesome, wanna battle?!
Wally: Totally.
Ren: I’ll be the referee mates! Inspect your opponent’s Bey!
Austin (Thoughts): Savage Wyvern, a Clockwise Spinning Defense Type! It has six large blades that can be used to absorb attacks against Left Spin Beys, and it’ll be free spinning against Right Spin Beys! It’ll chassis is free spinning and it also has metal balls on it! The Driver has five metal balls, the huge one is in the middle and can counter strike when hit hard enough, the other four metal balls around the tip, when it leans on the driver, it’ll get right back up! This Bey will hard to beat!
Ren: First battle!
Wally: I created Wyvern with the best machines in the world, it’ll be impossible to beat!
Austin: I’ll beat it head-on!
(Austin puts Anpao in Attack Mode)
Ren: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Wally/Austin: Go, Shoot!
(Wally and Austin pull off Eclipse Shoots)
Austin: Go, Anpao!
Wally: Take the center, Wyvern!
(Wyvern takes the center and blocks all of Anpao’s attacks)
Austin: *Gasps*
Wally: Savage Shield!
(Wyvern brushes off all Anpao’s attacks with its spinning blades)
Adrian (Thoughts): Looks like Wyvern can easily block all of Anpao’s attacks without breaking a sweat, Austin will have to do better than that if he wants to bear Wally.
Austin: I’m not finished, Anpao!!
(Austin’s Resonance Aura flares up Anpao blazes out of the Bey)
Wally: This is the end for you! Wyvern!!
(Wally’s Resonance Aura flares up Wyvern blazes out of the Bey, Anpao hits Wyvern up the stadium slope)
Austin: Yes!
Wally: Savage Crash!
Austin: *Gasps* Counter quick, Sol Spark!
(Wyvern and Anpao slam into each other, both Beys get sent flying out of the stadium)
Austin/Wally: *Gasps*
Ren: It’s a simultaneous Over Finish! No points were awarded!
Austin: Come on!
Wally: Looks like I need to train harder!
Ren: This battle has ended in a draw!
Austin: *Gasps* What do you mean?!
Adrian: It’s getting late, mom will get mad.
Austin: But!
(Adrian starts dragging Austin by the hand on the floor)
Adrian: We can battle tomorrow.
Austin: Aw man, I really wanna battle!
Adrian finally defeated Ren lol
Aug. 12, 2021 5:37 PM
(Aug. 12, 2021 5:31 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: [ -> ](Aug. 12, 2021 4:27 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 5 has risen up!
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Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
Chapter 5
Wild Dragon, Savage Wyvern!
~In The Park~
All: 3! 2! 1!
Wally/Ren: Go, Shoot!
(Wally pulls off a powerful Sparking Shoot, Ren pulls off an Eclipse Shoot)
Ren: Take the center, mate!
Wally: Go, Jet Satomb!
(Ragnaruk takes the center and blocks all of Jet Satomb’s attacks)
Wally: Come on!
Ren: Tempest Zone!
(Jet Satomb slams into Ragnaruk and bursts)
Wally: *Gasps*
Austin: It's Squall Ragnaruk with a Burst Finish! Ren’s the winner!
Ren: I’m on a roll, mate!
Wally: I must admit, you’re a strong one.
(Adrian walks up to Austin, Wally, and Ren)
Austin: Adrian--
Adrian: I’m here to battle Ren.
Ren: You want another shot at me mate?
Adrian: Yeah, and I promise--
(Adrian’s Dark Resonance Aura flares up and his eyes turn purple)
Adrian: I promise I’ll defeat you!
Ren: Whatever, I’ll defeat you anyways!
Wally: I’ll be the referee! First battle!!
Ren: What makes you think you can win this battle?
Me: You don’t know everything about the Yin System, do you?
Ren: I just evolved Ragnaruk, of course, I don’t!
Me: Well, then, you’re doomed.
(Adrian does something to his Bey)
All: *Gasps*
(Adrian holds up Asriel)
Adrian: This is the Heavy Mode!
Wally: “Heavy Mode?!”
Ren: Wait, where did the Yin Weight go?
Adrian: It’s on the bottom of the layer, I replaced it with the Yin Armor to make it heavy!
Ren: Dang, this’ll be fun!
Me: (It sure will be) *Smiles Evilly*
Wally: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Adrian/Ren: Go, Shoot!
(Ren and Adrian pull off powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Adrian: Twilight Shoot!
(Asriel hits Ragnaruk with a barrage of powerful strikes, Ragnaruk gets knocked off balance with each hit)
Ren: *Gasps*
Adrian: Putting the Yin Armor on the top of the layer adds extra attack and weight, Ragnaruk will eventually fall!
Ren: I don’t think so, Tempest Zone!
(Ragnaruk creates a mini tornado and blocks all of Asriel’s attacks)
Wally: Asriel’s attacks are starting to fail!
Austin: Go, Adrian! And Ren!
Adrian: Asriel!!
(Adrian’s Resonance Aura flares up Asriel blazes out of the Bey)
Adrian: Blow 'em into pieces! Twilight Strike!!
(Asriel speeds up and slams into Ragnaruk, Ragnaruk gets sent flying in the air and bursts)
Ren: *Gasps*
Wally: It’s Twilight Asriel with a Burst Finish! Adrian Saito is the winner!!
Adrian: I’m done here.
(Adrian tries walking away but Austin grabs Adrian’s shoulder)
Austin: Why don’t you hang out with us for a bit?
Adrian: Ugh, fine.
Wally (Thoughts): The Yin and Yang System, it’s definitely the strongest System around, I’ve got to create one!
(Wally walks away)
Austin: Wally, where are you going?
Wally: I have to go home for a bit, I’ll be back in an hour.
Ren: Alright mate, we’ll see you later!
~At The Komurasaki Mansion~
Servant: Master Wally, you’re back early.
Wally: Yeah, I want to create a new Bey!
Servant: Did your Bey get destroyed again?
Wally: No, we need this evolution to get stronger!
Servant: Right this way sir!
~In The Workroom~
Servant: We have the most expensive machines to help you create your Bey, I’ll call the scientists.
Wally: I’ll create my Bey on my own.
Servant: Ok, I’ll be in the kitchen fixing your five-course meal for dinner.
Wally (Thoughts): My Bey will be a Wyvern, just like my cousin Wakiya’s Bey!
(Wally types up an image on the screen and edits it)
Wally (Thoughts): I’ll defeat Wakiya, and show him how much stronger I’ve gotten!
~58 Minutes Later~
Wally: It’s done! Savage Wyvern has been created!!
(Wally holds Wyvern up)
Wally: It’s time to battle the Saito brothers!
~At The Park~
(Wally runs up to us)
Adrian: So, you’re back.
Wally: I am, with my new Yang Bey, Savage Wyvern!!
(Wally holds up Wyvern)
Austin: Wow, it looks like a--
Wally: Yup, it’s a Yang Bey!
Adrian: Isn’t that Wakiya Komursaki’s Bey?
Wally: I forgot to tell you that Wakiya is my cousin! *Smiles Sheepishly*
All: Seriously?!
Wally: Yeah, he’s the most awesome cousin ever! So, I made a Wyvern!
Ren: (Wouldn’t say the best cousin ever.)
Austin: Awesome, wanna battle?!
Wally: Totally.
Ren: I’ll be the referee mates! Inspect your opponent’s Bey!
Austin (Thoughts): Savage Wyvern, a Clockwise Spinning Defense Type! It has six large blades that can be used to absorb attacks against Left Spin Beys, and it’ll be free spinning against Right Spin Beys! It’ll chassis is free spinning and it also has metal balls on it! The Driver has five metal balls, the huge one is in the middle and can counter strike when hit hard enough, the other four metal balls around the tip, when it leans on the driver, it’ll get right back up! This Bey will hard to beat!
Ren: First battle!
Wally: I created Wyvern with the best machines in the world, it’ll be impossible to beat!
Austin: I’ll beat it head-on!
(Austin puts Anpao in Attack Mode)
Ren: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Wally/Austin: Go, Shoot!
(Wally and Austin pull off Eclipse Shoots)
Austin: Go, Anpao!
Wally: Take the center, Wyvern!
(Wyvern takes the center and blocks all of Anpao’s attacks)
Austin: *Gasps*
Wally: Savage Shield!
(Wyvern brushes off all Anpao’s attacks with its spinning blades)
Adrian (Thoughts): Looks like Wyvern can easily block all of Anpao’s attacks without breaking a sweat, Austin will have to do better than that if he wants to bear Wally.
Austin: I’m not finished, Anpao!!
(Austin’s Resonance Aura flares up Anpao blazes out of the Bey)
Wally: This is the end for you! Wyvern!!
(Wally’s Resonance Aura flares up Wyvern blazes out of the Bey, Anpao hits Wyvern up the stadium slope)
Austin: Yes!
Wally: Savage Crash!
Austin: *Gasps* Counter quick, Sol Spark!
(Wyvern and Anpao slam into each other, both Beys get sent flying out of the stadium)
Austin/Wally: *Gasps*
Ren: It’s a simultaneous Over Finish! No points were awarded!
Austin: Come on!
Wally: Looks like I need to train harder!
Ren: This battle has ended in a draw!
Austin: *Gasps* What do you mean?!
Adrian: It’s getting late, mom will get mad.
Austin: But!
(Adrian starts dragging Austin by the hand on the floor)
Adrian: We can battle tomorrow.
Austin: Aw man, I really wanna battle!
Adrian finally defeated Ren lol
It's about time, lol
Aug. 12, 2021 6:20 PM
Adrian: It’s on the bottom of the layer, I replaced it with the Yin Armor to make it heavy!
Me: (It sure will be)
Who is talking? Is it adrien or Austin I’m so confused
Me: (It sure will be)
Who is talking? Is it adrien or Austin I’m so confused
Aug. 12, 2021 6:22 PM
(Aug. 12, 2021 6:20 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]Adrian: It’s on the bottom of the layer, I replaced it with the Yin Armor to make it heavy!
Me: (It sure will be)
Who is talking? Is it adrien or Austin I’m so confused
UGH!!! My mistake, I think it was Adrian
Aug. 12, 2021 6:22 PM
(Aug. 12, 2021 6:22 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ]oh i was confused too(Aug. 12, 2021 6:20 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]Adrian: It’s on the bottom of the layer, I replaced it with the Yin Armor to make it heavy!
Me: (It sure will be)
Who is talking? Is it adrien or Austin I’m so confused
UGH!!! My mistake, I think it was Adrian
Aug. 12, 2021 6:25 PM
Eh, we all get there at some point tho
Aug. 12, 2021 9:46 PM
It took me SO long to write that😅
Aug. 12, 2021 9:51 PM
I'm going to be busy this week (And I don't wanna announce the winners on Friday The 13th)
3rd:!
2nd:!
1st:!!
All of these characters will be featured in the fanfiction thank you everyone who won and have a nice day!
3rd:
2nd:
1st:
All of these characters will be featured in the fanfiction thank you everyone who won and have a nice day!
Aug. 12, 2021 9:53 PM
ooooooooooooooo i forgot to participate lol
congrats to everyone!
congrats to everyone!
Aug. 12, 2021 9:58 PM
Yeah congrats!
Aug. 12, 2021 10:02 PM
Yay! Thanks UnseenBurst!
Good Job to all!
Good Job to all!
Aug. 12, 2021 10:03 PM
Blackout Asriel
Morningstar Anpao
dang these sound cool
Morningstar Anpao
dang these sound cool
Aug. 12, 2021 10:22 PM
(Aug. 12, 2021 9:51 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ]I'm going to be busy this week (And I don't wanna announce the winners on Friday The 13th)
3rd: "GhostFox"!
2nd: "LJ-Blader"!
1st: "Hollowmind8"!!
All of these characters will be featured in the fanfiction thank you everyone who won and have a nice day!
Nice
Anyways, if you're not, then I am