(Jul. 03, 2021 12:48 AM)LegendJustice Wrote:(Jul. 02, 2021 9:36 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: awesome
Thx mind rating?
sure
(Jul. 03, 2021 12:48 AM)LegendJustice Wrote:(Jul. 02, 2021 9:36 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: awesome
Thx mind rating?
sure i'll give it a go
Grammar: 5/5 - I didn't really see anything wrong with it, great job!
Story: 4/5 - This is kind of a meh, the story has gotten better an can still get better, there could be times where I don't really understand the transitioning, great job with this tho!
Characters: 4.5/5 - This is also very good, it's just that there's so many characters in sometimes most characters don't show up in the episodes they're supposed to show up in.
Dialouge: 5/5 - The dialouge is so great, I can see them transitioning between sentences and everything. Great job!
Length: 3.5/5 - This chapter wasn't long, but it wasn't really short either. Nice job and I know you can improve!
All 'n All (Total): 21/25! You're doing really good! Keep up the good work!