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ColdFlames13 · Jul. 05, 2021 5:03 PM

(Jul. 05, 2021 4:10 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jul. 05, 2021 9:12 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Sth really funny is that Unseen posted the "-Echo- Achilles" Chapter after you introduced "-Sound- Fafnir". Coincidence? I think not!
What are you trying to say?

"Echo" Achilles and "Sound" Fafnir??

Get it? Lol!

LegendJustice · Jul. 05, 2021 5:05 PM

(Jul. 05, 2021 5:03 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote:
(Jul. 05, 2021 4:10 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: What are you trying to say?

"Echo" Achilles and "Sound" Fafnir??

Get it? Lol!

I GET it!!!!!

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Hollowmind13 · Jul. 05, 2021 5:43 PM

At least you got it in time

I'm the original creator of "Welcome to the WBO".
Rank 0 means I'm better than 1°

LegendJustice · Jul. 05, 2021 10:05 PM

Can some one rate my recent chapter?

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

UnseenBurst · Jul. 05, 2021 10:24 PM

(Jul. 05, 2021 10:05 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Can some one rate my recent chapter?

I'll rate the next chapter u post promise

The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

LegendJustice · Jul. 05, 2021 10:25 PM

(Jul. 05, 2021 10:24 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [quote='LegendJustice' pid='1776520' dateline='1625519138']
Can some one rate my recent chapter?

I'll rate the next chapter u post promise
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"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

UnseenBurst · Jul. 05, 2021 10:32 PM

(Jul. 05, 2021 10:25 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jul. 05, 2021 10:24 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [quote='LegendJustice' pid='1776520' dateline='1625519138']
Can some one rate my recent chapter?

I'll rate the next chapter u post promise
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Alr, it's almost finished

The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

LegendJustice · Jul. 05, 2021 10:32 PM

Sorry that was a glitch

(Jul. 05, 2021 10:32 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 05, 2021 10:25 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: I'll rate the next chapter u post promise
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Alr, it's almost finished

Okay same here

Chapter 19 Let's Go!!!! I know I said I was gonna post tomorrow but my schedule change
Ruckus's Debut!!!

Spoiler (Click to View)

So will anyone rate UnseenBurst or anyone else?

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Beyl0v3r · Jul. 05, 2021 11:33 PM

Ronan:huh what's going on over there?
(He walks over to where Ruckus and Jacob were battling)
Ronan:who are you?
Ruckus:the names Ruckus! And I'm gonna take you down!
Ronan:oh getting straight to the point, huh? Ok! Challenge taken!
PS not part of fan fic

But LG, if this set of dialog can spark up Ronan's introduction, please include it.

UnseenBurst · Jul. 06, 2021 12:04 AM

(Jul. 05, 2021 10:32 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Sorry that was a glitch

(Jul. 05, 2021 10:32 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Alr, it's almost finished

Okay same here

Chapter 19 Let's Go!!!! I know I said I was gonna post tomorrow but my schedule change
Ruckus's Debut!!!

Spoiler (Click to View)
Satsu: Jacob there you are!!!

Jacob: Oh, Hey!

Satsu: Announcement in announcement hall!

Jacob: Oka-

Satsu: Just come!!!

(Satsu drags Jacob)

Shun: Hey guys, I saved you some seats!
(Shun said waving)

Remington: Move your hands I can't see!

Shun: Sorry.

(Jacob and Satsu take there seats)

Kris: Thank you all for coming, as some of you know the WBO held a mini tournament to see who can come to the battle island and one blader beat all the challenges! Introducing Ruckus De La Russo!!!

Satsu: **Whispers** so this was what this was about? What a waste of time.

Jacob: Not a complete waste! It's nice to know new bladers are Joining!

Ruckus: Hey everyone, Me and Ragnarok are taking you all down!!!

Ryui: As if!

Ruckus: Say that again I dare you!!!

Jacob's mind: Huh, why does that voice sound familiar?

(Jacob has a flashback)

Young Jacob: Say that again I dare you!!!!

Young Ryui: AS IF!!!
(End of flashback)

Jacob: Wait, RYUI is on the island???!!!!!

Shun: Took you long enough.

Kris: Okay everyone you may return to be what you were doing

(Everyone leaves)

Kris: Oh Jacob can you stay?

Jacob: Sure!

Kris: Can you show Ruckus around the Island?

Jacob: Sure but if he gets on my bad side where gonna have a problem.

Kris: Um,I'll make sure that will not happen!

(Jacob leaves)

Jacob: Ruckus! Wait up.

Ruckus: Oh, Hi your Jacob right? The creator of Justice beys!!

Jacob: That's me! And I'm gonna show you around this place!

Ruckus: Okay.

Jacob: That was announcement hall, then we have The workshop, we also have the training room and the match room An-.

Ruckus: The dorms I know!

Jacob: Oh okay And then we have some of the storage and that's all you need to know, lol I forgot the kitchen.

Ruckus: Oh, Okay! Can you show me to the training room?

Jacob: Sure!

(They head to the training room)

Gaza: Rip!!!

Austin: Again!

Jacob: Wow lots of people are here!

Ruckus: Yeah! Who is that guy?

Jacob: Those 2 over there are Austin and Gaza, the over there we have Remington with Ronan, and the we have the other Ronin!

Ruckus: Nice! Wanna battle?

Jacob: Sure!

Ruckus: K!

(People start circling around them)

Gaza: I can my reff!!!

Ruckus: Sure!

Gaza: Okay, Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Jacob & Ruckus: Let it .... Rip!!!

(Jacob and Ruckus pull of amazing Justice launches)

Gaza: amazing launches from both bladers!

Ruckus: Ragnarok! Let's go! Crash Launch!

Jacob: Jax counter!!

(Ragnarok speeds up and attacks Jackal but Jackal dodges but in time)

Gaza: Woah Ragnarok is speeding crazy!!!

Ruckus: Did I mention Ragnarok is an attack type?

Jacob: Nope, not at all but we can take you! Jackal!!!!

(Jacob's aura fires up)

Gaza: What's Ruckus gonna do to get out of this onr????!!!!!!!I

Ruckus's mind: Okay, Ragnarok What should I do?

Ragnarok: Do what makes you win!

Ruckus: LET'S GO! CRASH SMASH!!!

Jacob: JAX SWORD!!

Gaza: Wow! Both beys are fighting fire with fire!

Austin: Who's gonna win?

(There a a huge white light)

(Both beys burst)

Gaza: It's a draw no points rewarded!

Ruckus: GG that was unseenly fun!!!

Jacob: I know I have a feeling you and me are gonna do just fine!
So will anyone rate UnseenBurst or anyone else?

I'm busy at the moment (Moment Driver LOL) But I'll rate it later (But I posted the next chapter on Dynachi so feel free to rate that)

The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

GenesisBlader · Jul. 06, 2021 12:06 AM

(Jul. 06, 2021 12:04 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 05, 2021 10:32 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Sorry that was a glitch

Okay same here

Chapter 19 Let's Go!!!! I know I said I was gonna post tomorrow but my schedule change
Ruckus's Debut!!!

Spoiler (Click to View)
Satsu: Jacob there you are!!!

Jacob: Oh, Hey!

Satsu: Announcement in announcement hall!

Jacob: Oka-

Satsu: Just come!!!

(Satsu drags Jacob)

Shun: Hey guys, I saved you some seats!
(Shun said waving)

Remington: Move your hands I can't see!

Shun: Sorry.

(Jacob and Satsu take there seats)

Kris: Thank you all for coming, as some of you know the WBO held a mini tournament to see who can come to the battle island and one blader beat all the challenges! Introducing Ruckus De La Russo!!!

Satsu: **Whispers** so this was what this was about? What a waste of time.

Jacob: Not a complete waste! It's nice to know new bladers are Joining!

Ruckus: Hey everyone, Me and Ragnarok are taking you all down!!!

Ryui: As if!

Ruckus: Say that again I dare you!!!

Jacob's mind: Huh, why does that voice sound familiar?

(Jacob has a flashback)

Young Jacob: Say that again I dare you!!!!

Young Ryui: AS IF!!!
(End of flashback)

Jacob: Wait, RYUI is on the island???!!!!!

Shun: Took you long enough.

Kris: Okay everyone you may return to be what you were doing

(Everyone leaves)

Kris: Oh Jacob can you stay?

Jacob: Sure!

Kris: Can you show Ruckus around the Island?

Jacob: Sure but if he gets on my bad side where gonna have a problem.

Kris: Um,I'll make sure that will not happen!

(Jacob leaves)

Jacob: Ruckus! Wait up.

Ruckus: Oh, Hi your Jacob right? The creator of Justice beys!!

Jacob: That's me! And I'm gonna show you around this place!

Ruckus: Okay.

Jacob: That was announcement hall, then we have The workshop, we also have the training room and the match room An-.

Ruckus: The dorms I know!

Jacob: Oh okay And then we have some of the storage and that's all you need to know, lol I forgot the kitchen.

Ruckus: Oh, Okay! Can you show me to the training room?

Jacob: Sure!

(They head to the training room)

Gaza: Rip!!!

Austin: Again!

Jacob: Wow lots of people are here!

Ruckus: Yeah! Who is that guy?

Jacob: Those 2 over there are Austin and Gaza, the over there we have Remington with Ronan, and the we have the other Ronin!

Ruckus: Nice! Wanna battle?

Jacob: Sure!

Ruckus: K!

(People start circling around them)

Gaza: I can my reff!!!

Ruckus: Sure!

Gaza: Okay, Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Jacob & Ruckus: Let it .... Rip!!!

(Jacob and Ruckus pull of amazing Justice launches)

Gaza: amazing launches from both bladers!

Ruckus: Ragnarok! Let's go! Crash Launch!

Jacob: Jax counter!!

(Ragnarok speeds up and attacks Jackal but Jackal dodges but in time)

Gaza: Woah Ragnarok is speeding crazy!!!

Ruckus: Did I mention Ragnarok is an attack type?

Jacob: Nope, not at all but we can take you! Jackal!!!!

(Jacob's aura fires up)

Gaza: What's Ruckus gonna do to get out of this onr????!!!!!!!I

Ruckus's mind: Okay, Ragnarok What should I do?

Ragnarok: Do what makes you win!

Ruckus: LET'S GO! CRASH SMASH!!!

Jacob: JAX SWORD!!

Gaza: Wow! Both beys are fighting fire with fire!

Austin: Who's gonna win?

(There a a huge white light)

(Both beys burst)

Gaza: It's a draw no points rewarded!

Ruckus: GG that was unseenly fun!!!

Jacob: I know I have a feeling you and me are gonna do just fine!
So will anyone rate UnseenBurst or anyone else?

I'm busy at the moment (Moment Driver LOL) But I'll rate it later (But I posted the next chapter on Dynachi so feel free to rate that)

awesome chapter my guy!

i love how jacob forms a friendship with ruckus!

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

LegendJustice · Jul. 06, 2021 2:26 AM

(Jul. 06, 2021 12:06 AM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 06, 2021 12:04 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I'm busy at the moment (Moment Driver LOL) But I'll rate it later (But I posted the next chapter on Dynachi so feel free to rate that)

awesome chapter my guy!

i love how jacob forms a friendship with ruckus!

Thanks it's glad to have some support

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

TylerOfChaos · Jul. 06, 2021 2:50 AM

Meet the Tyler Williams! (aka me but in Beyblade)
He wants to be the best of the best! He wants to defeat all of the legends!
His Beyblade is GreatSword Terrios. The Black and Blue dragon wielding 3 swords! One on the Tail. The other 2 attached to the arms.
Cockier than Aiga, more persistant than Hyuga! This guy just doesn't know when to quit!

Personality being: Cocky, Loves making friends, refuses to give up, Fear of cockroaches (lol), seeks to have a strong bond with Terrios.
Wants to defeat Nazo (the antagonist) and his bey, Wrath Nemesis.(Just like Phi, his last name is unknown)
Age: 13 to 14
This character is from my own fanfic but, since you guys had some characters of your own, I decided to bring mines up

LegendJustice · Jul. 06, 2021 3:03 AM

(Jul. 06, 2021 2:50 AM)TylerOfChaos Wrote: Meet the Tyler Williams! (aka me but in Beyblade)
He wants to be the best of the best! He wants to defeat all of the legends!
His Beyblade is GreatSword Terrios. The Black and Blue dragon wielding 3 swords! One on the Tail. The other 2 attached to the arms.
Cockier than Aiga, more persistant than Hyuga! This guy just doesn't know when to quit!

Personality being: Cocky, Loves making friends, refuses to give up, Fear of cockroaches (lol), seeks to have a strong bond with Terrios.
Wants to defeat Nazo (the antagonist) and his bey, Wrath Nemesis.(Just like Phi, his last name is unknown)
Age: 13 to 14
This character is from my own fanfic but, since you guys had some characters of your own, I decided to bring mines up

Nice!

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

TylerOfChaos · Jul. 06, 2021 3:25 AM

(Jul. 06, 2021 3:03 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Nice!

thx lol

LegendJustice · Jul. 06, 2021 3:33 AM

Okay so the winners of the drum roll please!!!

@BladeKingX UnseenBurst thanks for everyone who came out!!!

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

TylerOfChaos · Jul. 06, 2021 3:50 AM

winners for what

LegendJustice · Jul. 06, 2021 4:00 AM

Character Contest

Next chapter is Ultimate battle!
Hint: Noooo Why!!!???L

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Legend27 · Jul. 06, 2021 6:34 AM

This is awesome

Valt and Valkyrie are my favorite
[Video: https://imgflip.com/gif/61frs5://]

TylerOfChaos · Jul. 06, 2021 8:43 AM

(Jul. 06, 2021 4:00 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Character Contest

Next chapter is Ultimate battle!
Hint: Noooo Why!!!???L

soooooo.... my oc wont be in? Unhappy

Hollowmind13 · Jul. 06, 2021 9:47 AM

(Jul. 06, 2021 4:00 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Character Contest

Next chapter is Ultimate battle!
Hint: Noooo Why!!!???L

Going to break a bey?

I'm the original creator of "Welcome to the WBO".
Rank 0 means I'm better than 1°

LegendJustice · Jul. 06, 2021 4:12 PM

(Jul. 06, 2021 9:47 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Jul. 06, 2021 4:00 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Character Contest

Next chapter is Ultimate battle!
Hint: Noooo Why!!!???L

Going to break a bey?

Yeah you read my mind guess who's hey is gonna be broken

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

GenesisBlader · Jul. 06, 2021 4:15 PM

(Jul. 06, 2021 4:12 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jul. 06, 2021 9:47 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Going to break a bey?

Yeah you read my mind guess who's hey is gonna be broken

NOOOOO JACOB JACKAL NOOOOOOO

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

LegendJustice · Jul. 06, 2021 4:16 PM

(Jul. 06, 2021 4:15 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 06, 2021 4:12 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Yeah you read my mind guess who's hey is gonna be broken

NOOOOO JACOB JACKAL NOOOOOOO

I WON'T DO THAT TO MY MAIN CHARACTER..... yet

Hint: S

That's all

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

GenesisBlader · Jul. 06, 2021 4:18 PM

(Jul. 06, 2021 4:16 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jul. 06, 2021 4:15 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: NOOOOO JACOB JACKAL NOOOOOOO

I WON'T DO THAT TO MY MAIN CHARACTER..... yet

Hint: S

That's all

OH NO SHUN OR SATSU NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz