awesome

Thx mind rating?

sure

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awesome

Thx mind rating?

sure i'll give it a go

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Grammar: 5/5 - I didn't really see anything wrong with it, great job!

Story: 4/5 - This is kind of a meh, the story has gotten better an can still get better, there could be times where I don't really understand the transitioning, great job with this tho!

Characters: 4.5/5 - This is also very good, it's just that there's so many characters in sometimes most characters don't show up in the episodes they're supposed to show up in.

Dialouge: 5/5 - The dialouge is so great, I can see them transitioning between sentences and everything. Great job!

Length: 3.5/5 - This chapter wasn't long, but it wasn't really short either. Nice job and I know you can improve!

All 'n All (Total): 21/25! You're doing really good! Keep up the good work!

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"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

Thx mind rating?

sure

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Thx mind rating?

sure i'll give it a go

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Grammar: 5/5 - I didn't really see anything wrong with it, great job!

Story: 4/5 - This is kind of a meh, the story has gotten better an can still get better, there could be times where I don't really understand the transitioning, great job with this tho!

Characters: 4.5/5 - This is also very good, it's just that there's so many characters in sometimes most characters don't show up in the episodes they're supposed to show up in.

Dialouge: 5/5 - The dialouge is so great, I can see them transitioning between sentences and everything. Great job!

Length: 3.5/5 - This chapter wasn't long, but it wasn't really short either. Nice job and I know you can improve!

All 'n All (Total): 21/25! You're doing really good! Keep up the good work!

You have a good fan fic and a good rate system thanks dude!

UnseenBurst No offense I love your fan fic to and your rate system

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   "From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

sure

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sure i'll give it a go

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Grammar: 5/5 - I didn't really see anything wrong with it, great job!

Story: 4/5 - This is kind of a meh, the story has gotten better an can still get better, there could be times where I don't really understand the transitioning, great job with this tho!

Characters: 4.5/5 - This is also very good, it's just that there's so many characters in sometimes most characters don't show up in the episodes they're supposed to show up in.

Dialouge: 5/5 - The dialouge is so great, I can see them transitioning between sentences and everything. Great job!

Length: 3.5/5 - This chapter wasn't long, but it wasn't really short either. Nice job and I know you can improve!

All 'n All (Total): 21/25! You're doing really good! Keep up the good work!

You have a good fan fic and a good rate system thanks dude!

UnseenBurst No offense I love your fan fic to and your rate system

It's cool (besides I just copy and paste from other people lol)

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

You have a good fan fic and a good rate system thanks dude!

UnseenBurst No offense I love your fan fic to and your rate system

It's cool (besides I just copy and paste from other people lol)

Woah why didn’t I do that!

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Name: Finn Sumiye

Age: 16

Personality: Very intense blader he's rude to most people and he's one of the strongest blades around messing with him would be a mistake. He's always practicing to be the best and never stops his defense is one of the best out there. He's beaten Delta Zakuro before (Not the DeltaZakuro from WBO) and he's beaten Dante Koryu.

Bey: Monarch Forneus GigaWheel Universe (Green)

Layer: Monarch Forneus: It's set up to have a defense like a tank it has metal on it to giving it extra weight.

Disk: GigaWheel: It's the heaviest disk ever it's meant to make sure defense beys never get knocked over.

Universe: it's Universe except for o being green.

Attacks: Monarch Defense Monarch Drift Ultra Monarch Drift Monarch Crash!!

Alliance: He has no friends

No friends……….. poor guy

Your in

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Name: Finn Sumiye

Age: 16

Personality: Very intense blader he's rude to most people and he's one of the strongest blades around messing with him would be a mistake. He's always practicing to be the best and never stops his defense is one of the best out there. He's beaten Delta Zakuro before (Not the DeltaZakuro from WBO) and he's beaten Dante Koryu.

Bey: Monarch Forneus GigaWheel Universe (Green)

Layer: Monarch Forneus: It's set up to have a defense like a tank it has metal on it to giving it extra weight.

Disk: GigaWheel: It's the heaviest disk ever it's meant to make sure defense beys never get knocked over.

Universe: it's Universe except for o being green.

Attacks: Monarch Defense Monarch Drift Ultra Monarch Drift Monarch Crash!!

Alliance: He has no friends

No friends……….. poor guy

Your in

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Okay I’ll just have a character contest again since I’m out of characters

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Winners will be announced on July the 7th I will be choosing 1 person so good luck!

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   "From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

It's cool (besides I just copy and paste from other people lol)

Woah why didn’t I do that!

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Name: Finn Sumiye

Age: 16

Personality: Very intense blader he's rude to most people and he's one of the strongest blades around messing with him would be a mistake. He's always practicing to be the best and never stops his defense is one of the best out there. He's beaten Delta Zakuro before (Not the DeltaZakuro from WBO) and he's beaten Dante Koryu.

Bey: Monarch Forneus GigaWheel Universe (Green)

Layer: Monarch Forneus: It's set up to have a defense like a tank it has metal on it to giving it extra weight.

Disk: GigaWheel: It's the heaviest disk ever it's meant to make sure defense beys never get knocked over.

Universe: it's Universe except for o being green.

Attacks: Monarch Defense Monarch Drift Ultra Monarch Drift Monarch Crash!!

Alliance: He has no friends

No friends……….. poor guy

Your in

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Name: Finn Sumiye

Age: 16

Personality: Very intense blader he's rude to most people and he's one of the strongest blades around messing with him would be a mistake. He's always practicing to be the best and never stops his defense is one of the best out there. He's beaten Delta Zakuro before (Not the DeltaZakuro from WBO) and he's beaten Dante Koryu.

Bey: Monarch Forneus GigaWheel Universe (Green)

Layer: Monarch Forneus: It's set up to have a defense like a tank it has metal on it to giving it extra weight.

Disk: GigaWheel: It's the heaviest disk ever it's meant to make sure defense beys never get knocked over.

Universe: it's Universe except for o being green.

Attacks: Monarch Defense Monarch Drift Ultra Monarch Drift Monarch Crash!!

Alliance: He has no friends

No friends……….. poor guy

Your in

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Okay I’ll just have a character contest again since I’m out of characters

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Winners will be announced on July the 7th I will be choosing 1 person so good luck!

hold on ima make several characters lol

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sure

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sure i'll give it a go

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Grammar: 5/5 - I didn't really see anything wrong with it, great job!

Story: 4/5 - This is kind of a meh, the story has gotten better an can still get better, there could be times where I don't really understand the transitioning, great job with this tho!

Characters: 4.5/5 - This is also very good, it's just that there's so many characters in sometimes most characters don't show up in the episodes they're supposed to show up in.

Dialouge: 5/5 - The dialouge is so great, I can see them transitioning between sentences and everything. Great job!

Length: 3.5/5 - This chapter wasn't long, but it wasn't really short either. Nice job and I know you can improve!

All 'n All (Total): 21/25! You're doing really good! Keep up the good work!

You have a good fan fic and a good rate system thanks dude!

UnseenBurst No offense I love your fan fic to and your rate system

thanks man

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"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

Woah why didn’t I do that!

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No friends……….. poor guy

Your in

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No friends……….. poor guy

Your in

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Okay I’ll just have a character contest again since I’m out of characters

---

Winners will be announced on July the 7th I will be choosing 1 person so good luck!

hold on ima make several characters lol

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You have a good fan fic and a good rate system thanks dude!

UnseenBurst No offense I love your fan fic to and your rate system

thanks man

No problem

---

                       
   "From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Justice Chip: Zelos - Zelos is a white and blue chip with metal tip that helps with the lock. It has a blue knight looking to the right.

Justice Ring: Oracle - Oracle is a blue Justice ring with blue magic figaments all around it. It also has 4 rubber blades, and 4 regular blades, making for a whopping 8 attack points.

Forge Disc: Convert

Performance Tip: Reverse - Reverse is a balance tip that can switch from a rubber flat tip to a rubber sharp tip. It is blue.

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"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

Justice Chip: Zelos - Zelos is a white and blue chip with metal tip that helps with the lock. It has a blue knight looking to the right.

Justice Ring: Oracle - Oracle is a blue Justice ring with blue magic figaments all around it. It also has 4 rubber blades, and 4 regular blades, making for a whopping 8 attack points.

Forge Disc: Convert

Performance Tip: Reverse - Reverse is a balance tip that can switch from a rubber flat tip to a rubber sharp tip. It is blue.

I think you need a character too

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I'm the original creator of "Welcome to the WBO".
Rank 0 means I'm better than 1°

Justice Chip: Zelos - Zelos is a white and blue chip with metal tip that helps with the lock. It has a blue knight looking to the right.

Justice Ring: Oracle - Oracle is a blue Justice ring with blue magic figaments all around it. It also has 4 rubber blades, and 4 regular blades, making for a whopping 8 attack points.

Forge Disc: Convert

Performance Tip: Reverse - Reverse is a balance tip that can switch from a rubber flat tip to a rubber sharp tip. It is blue.

I think you need a character too

he said we only need a beyblade

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I think you need a character too

he said we only need a beyblade

but lol can't be too sure ima just make a character

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Blader: Zane Orinari

Age: 12

Height: 4'6

E/C: Blue

H/C: White

Characteristics: Zane is a very short boy for his age. He has a blue jacket with white stripes and a black beyblade logo at the back of it. He also has a black shirt with a white collar and black pants with blue shoes with white outlines. He also has a blue star on his forehead.

Personality: Zane is very laid-back, carefree, and an overall chill person. He is very nice and caring.

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"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

It was the Beyblade contest, now it's the Character contest

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I'm the original creator of "Welcome to the WBO".
Rank 0 means I'm better than 1°

It was the Beyblade contest, now it's the Character contest

ok im dum alright thanks jit

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"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

It was the Beyblade contest, now it's the Character contest

Yes I'm desperate

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I think you need a character too

he said we only need a beyblade

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he said we only need a beyblade

but lol can't be too sure ima just make a character

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Blader: Zane Orinari

Age: 12

Height: 4'6

E/C: Blue

H/C: White

Characteristics: Zane is a very short boy for his age. He has a blue jacket with white stripes and a black beyblade logo at the back of it. He also has a black shirt with a white collar and black pants with blue shoes with white outlines. He also has a blue star on his forehead.

Personality: Zane is very laid-back, carefree, and an overall chill person. He is very nice and caring.

Your in the character contest

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Justice Chip: Zelos - Zelos is a white and blue chip with metal tip that helps with the lock. It has a blue knight looking to the right.

Justice Ring: Oracle - Oracle is a blue Justice ring with blue magic figaments all around it. It also has 4 rubber blades, and 4 regular blades, making for a whopping 8 attack points.

Forge Disc: Convert

Performance Tip: Reverse - Reverse is a balance tip that can switch from a rubber flat tip to a rubber sharp tip. It is blue.

Nice

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What is Zane's bey name?

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   "From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

It was the Beyblade contest, now it's the Character contest

Yes I'm desperate

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he said we only need a beyblade

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but lol can't be too sure ima just make a character

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Blader: Zane Orinari

Age: 12

Height: 4'6

E/C: Blue

H/C: White

Characteristics: Zane is a very short boy for his age. He has a blue jacket with white stripes and a black beyblade logo at the back of it. He also has a black shirt with a white collar and black pants with blue shoes with white outlines. He also has a blue star on his forehead.

Personality: Zane is very laid-back, carefree, and an overall chill person. He is very nice and caring.

Your in the character contest

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Justice Chip: Zelos - Zelos is a white and blue chip with metal tip that helps with the lock. It has a blue knight looking to the right.

Justice Ring: Oracle - Oracle is a blue Justice ring with blue magic figaments all around it. It also has 4 rubber blades, and 4 regular blades, making for a whopping 8 attack points.

Forge Disc: Convert

Performance Tip: Reverse - Reverse is a balance tip that can switch from a rubber flat tip to a rubber sharp tip. It is blue.

Nice

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What is Zane's bey name?

Oracle Zelos Convert Reverse...

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I'm the original creator of "Welcome to the WBO".
Rank 0 means I'm better than 1°

Yes I'm desperate

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Your in the character contest

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Nice

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What is Zane's bey name?

Oracle Zelos Convert Reverse...

Oh....

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So far the contestants in the Character contest are

UnseenBurst @BladeKingX

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Also UnseenBurst can you rate my recent chapters?

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Chapter 17!! Is out thanks for being patient!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Beyblade Burst Justice
Chapter 17
Flare!

Austin: So we having this battle or what!?

Fukui: Your going down!

Austin & Fukui: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!

Fukui: Let’s show him what we got! Frazer!

(Fukui starts attacking Aeolus).

Austin: Aeolus!!!!

(Austin’s aura starts Flaring)!

Hanami: Welcome Blader’s to this exciting match!!

Austin & Fukui: Hanami!?

Hanami: Yes since you just started this battle is now a ranked battle in the battle island!

Austin’s mind: so this went from a practice battle to an official battle? Life is just crazy some times but I can take it!

Fukui: Frazer! Faze Guard!

(Frazer’s move stops Aeolus from attacking).

Austin: *Gasp*

Hanami: Woah! And here I thought being faze was going through things!! How is Austin gonna get out of this one!

Austin: Let’s go!!

(Aeolus starts gaining speed)!

Austin: Savage Crush!

(Aeolus uses the rails the speed up even more and before Frazer has a chance it stops spinning)

Ref: 1 points goes to Austin.

Hanami: WOW! Folks we just saw a move like no other!

Fukui’s mind: Hm this Austin is real interesting but I was trained by the best!

Fukui: **Puts on Zeletric Gear** Try us now!

Austin: What is that?

Ref: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Jacob & Fukui: Let it rip!!

(Meanwhile with the gang)

Jacob: Wow! Austin has this in the bag!

Shun: Let’s head to the match room that’s where the battle is!

Jacob’s mind: Well I wanted to stay in my bed and watch the match but whatever.

(Both of the boys head to the match room)

Satsu: What took you guys so long?

Shun: Yeah, yeah.

Jacob: Go Austin!

(There is a huge explosion)

Austin’s mind: Why won’t this armor come off?!

Austin: Let’s go!

(Aeolus changes to defense mode)

Fukui: Zeletric Whip!

(Aeolus does not move a bit)

Hanami: WOAH! That defense is out of this world!!

Fukui: Zeletric Rush!!

(Frazer starts attacking at insane speed but Aeolus does not move)

Austin: Now do it!

(Aeolus goes into attack mode and attacks Frazer)

Fukui: I-impossible…..

(Frazer burst)

Ref: Austin Claims 2 points Austin wins!

Hanami: Such skill and IQ!!! Austin wins the match with 3 points!

Austin: Great match Fukui! It was super flare!

Fukui: …..

(Jacob and the gang walk up)

Jacob: Great match to the both of you!

Satsu’s mind: Yeah right I saw Austin winning from a mile away!

????: Interesting.

All: FREE DE LA HOYA!!

Free: Ow watch it your hurting the ears.

All: Sorry!

Free: Well I came here to speak with Kris.

Kris: Hello Free follow me!

What does Kris wanna tell Free find out on the next chapter on Beyblade burst Justice!

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UnseenBurst can you please rate this chapter?

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@BladeKingX mind rating?

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Upcoming chapters!!!

18) The bey of Beat! Sound Fafnir! Free has a secret that only kris knows!!!!!!???????

19) Ruckus debut! The rookie blades Ruckus earns his spot in the battle island!!

20) Ultimate Battle!!!

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Alright so does any one wanna rate? I wanna know what I can improve on!!!!????

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Update: They will be a returning legend from dual layer he was also in evolution so you can guess

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   "From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

E next chapter is coming in a few hours so get pumped!!!

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   "From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Oracle Zelos Convert Reverse...

Oh....

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So far the contestants in the Character contest are

UnseenBurst @BladeKingX

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Also UnseenBurst can you rate my recent chapters?

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Chapter 17!! Is out thanks for being patient!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Beyblade Burst Justice
    Chapter 17
         Flare!

Austin: So we having this battle or what!?

Fukui: Your going down!

Austin & Fukui: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!

Fukui: Let’s show him what we got! Frazer!

(Fukui starts attacking Aeolus).

Austin: Aeolus!!!!

(Austin’s aura starts Flaring)!

Hanami: Welcome Blader’s to this exciting match!!

Austin & Fukui: Hanami!?

Hanami: Yes since you just started this battle is now a ranked battle in the battle island!

Austin’s mind: so this went from a practice battle to an official battle? Life is just crazy some times but I can take it!

Fukui: Frazer! Faze Guard!

(Frazer’s move stops Aeolus from attacking).

Austin: *Gasp*

Hanami: Woah! And here I thought being faze was going through things!! How is Austin gonna get out of this one!

Austin: Let’s go!!

(Aeolus starts gaining speed)!

Austin: Savage Crush!

(Aeolus uses the rails the speed up even more and before Frazer has a chance it stops spinning)

Ref: 1 points goes to Austin.

Hanami: WOW! Folks we just saw a move like no other!

Fukui’s mind: Hm this Austin is real interesting but I was trained by the best!

Fukui: **Puts on Zeletric Gear** Try us now!

Austin: What is that?

Ref: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Jacob & Fukui: Let it rip!!

(Meanwhile with the gang)

Jacob: Wow! Austin has this in the bag!

Shun: Let’s head to the match room that’s where the battle is!

Jacob’s mind: Well I wanted to stay in my bed and watch the match but whatever.

(Both of the boys head to the match room)

Satsu: What took you guys so long?

Shun: Yeah, yeah.

Jacob: Go Austin!

(There is a huge explosion)

Austin’s mind: Why won’t this armor come off?!

Austin: Let’s go!

(Aeolus changes to defense mode)

Fukui: Zeletric Whip!

(Aeolus does not move a bit)

Hanami: WOAH! That defense is out of this world!!

Fukui: Zeletric Rush!!

(Frazer starts attacking at insane speed but Aeolus does not move)

Austin: Now do it!

(Aeolus goes into attack mode and attacks Frazer)

Fukui: I-impossible…..

(Frazer burst)

Ref: Austin Claims 2 points Austin wins!

Hanami: Such skill and IQ!!! Austin wins the match with 3 points!

Austin: Great match Fukui! It was super flare!

Fukui: …..

(Jacob and the gang walk up)

Jacob: Great match to the both of you!

Satsu’s mind: Yeah right I saw Austin winning from a mile away!

????: Interesting.

All: FREE DE LA HOYA!!

Free: Ow watch it your hurting the ears.

All: Sorry!

Free: Well I came here to speak with Kris.

Kris: Hello Free follow me!

What does Kris wanna tell Free find out on the next chapter on Beyblade burst Justice!

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UnseenBurst can you please rate this chapter?

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@BladeKingX mind rating?

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Upcoming chapters!!!

18) The bey of Beat! Sound Fafnir! Free has a secret that only kris knows!!!!!!???????

19) Ruckus debut!  The rookie blades Ruckus earns his spot in the battle island!!

20) Ultimate Battle!!!

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Alright so does any one wanna rate? I wanna know what I can improve on!!!!????

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Update: They will be a returning legend from dual layer he was also in evolution so you can guess

RICKSON HAD DUAL LAYER

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Let it RIP! (Former) Leader of the SpryzenLightnings! A short story below!
“Sup Darkstalker”, said Peril.
“Sup”, replied Darkstalker. 
Darkstalker thought, Enchant Peril to obey me in 10 seconds. (If you didn’t know, Darkstalker was a animus dragon.) In ten seconds, Darkstalker whispered to Peril, “Go. Go kill everybody using the coronavirus. GO NOW!” She spread the virus all through Jade Mountain! Everyone was infected, but the Beyblade Warriors came! They gave antidotes! You can be a Beyblade Warrior by wearing masks, washing hands, and most, maintain social distance! Stop the spread of the virus, and let’s get rid of it!

Oh....

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So far the contestants in the Character contest are

UnseenBurst @BladeKingX

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Also UnseenBurst can you rate my recent chapters?

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Chapter 17!! Is out thanks for being patient!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Beyblade Burst Justice
    Chapter 17
         Flare!

Austin: So we having this battle or what!?

Fukui: Your going down!

Austin & Fukui: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!

Fukui: Let’s show him what we got! Frazer!

(Fukui starts attacking Aeolus).

Austin: Aeolus!!!!

(Austin’s aura starts Flaring)!

Hanami: Welcome Blader’s to this exciting match!!

Austin & Fukui: Hanami!?

Hanami: Yes since you just started this battle is now a ranked battle in the battle island!

Austin’s mind: so this went from a practice battle to an official battle? Life is just crazy some times but I can take it!

Fukui: Frazer! Faze Guard!

(Frazer’s move stops Aeolus from attacking).

Austin: *Gasp*

Hanami: Woah! And here I thought being faze was going through things!! How is Austin gonna get out of this one!

Austin: Let’s go!!

(Aeolus starts gaining speed)!

Austin: Savage Crush!

(Aeolus uses the rails the speed up even more and before Frazer has a chance it stops spinning)

Ref: 1 points goes to Austin.

Hanami: WOW! Folks we just saw a move like no other!

Fukui’s mind: Hm this Austin is real interesting but I was trained by the best!

Fukui: **Puts on Zeletric Gear** Try us now!

Austin: What is that?

Ref: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Jacob & Fukui: Let it rip!!

(Meanwhile with the gang)

Jacob: Wow! Austin has this in the bag!

Shun: Let’s head to the match room that’s where the battle is!

Jacob’s mind: Well I wanted to stay in my bed and watch the match but whatever.

(Both of the boys head to the match room)

Satsu: What took you guys so long?

Shun: Yeah, yeah.

Jacob: Go Austin!

(There is a huge explosion)

Austin’s mind: Why won’t this armor come off?!

Austin: Let’s go!

(Aeolus changes to defense mode)

Fukui: Zeletric Whip!

(Aeolus does not move a bit)

Hanami: WOAH! That defense is out of this world!!

Fukui: Zeletric Rush!!

(Frazer starts attacking at insane speed but Aeolus does not move)

Austin: Now do it!

(Aeolus goes into attack mode and attacks Frazer)

Fukui: I-impossible…..

(Frazer burst)

Ref: Austin Claims 2 points Austin wins!

Hanami: Such skill and IQ!!! Austin wins the match with 3 points!

Austin: Great match Fukui! It was super flare!

Fukui: …..

(Jacob and the gang walk up)

Jacob: Great match to the both of you!

Satsu’s mind: Yeah right I saw Austin winning from a mile away!

????: Interesting.

All: FREE DE LA HOYA!!

Free: Ow watch it your hurting the ears.

All: Sorry!

Free: Well I came here to speak with Kris.

Kris: Hello Free follow me!

What does Kris wanna tell Free find out on the next chapter on Beyblade burst Justice!

---

UnseenBurst can you please rate this chapter?

---

@BladeKingX mind rating?

---

Upcoming chapters!!!

18) The bey of Beat! Sound Fafnir! Free has a secret that only kris knows!!!!!!???????

19) Ruckus debut!  The rookie blades Ruckus earns his spot in the battle island!!

20) Ultimate Battle!!!

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Alright so does any one wanna rate? I wanna know what I can improve on!!!!????

---

Update: They will be a returning legend from dual layer he was also in evolution so you can guess

RICKSON HAD DUAL LAYER

CLOSE

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NamanSpryzen do you wanna enter the contest

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@Hollowmind8 do you wanna enter?

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   "From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Oh....

---

So far the contestants in the Character contest are

UnseenBurst @BladeKingX

---

Also UnseenBurst can you rate my recent chapters?

---

Chapter 17!! Is out thanks for being patient!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Beyblade Burst Justice
    Chapter 17
         Flare!

Austin: So we having this battle or what!?

Fukui: Your going down!

Austin & Fukui: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!

Fukui: Let’s show him what we got! Frazer!

(Fukui starts attacking Aeolus).

Austin: Aeolus!!!!

(Austin’s aura starts Flaring)!

Hanami: Welcome Blader’s to this exciting match!!

Austin & Fukui: Hanami!?

Hanami: Yes since you just started this battle is now a ranked battle in the battle island!

Austin’s mind: so this went from a practice battle to an official battle? Life is just crazy some times but I can take it!

Fukui: Frazer! Faze Guard!

(Frazer’s move stops Aeolus from attacking).

Austin: *Gasp*

Hanami: Woah! And here I thought being faze was going through things!! How is Austin gonna get out of this one!

Austin: Let’s go!!

(Aeolus starts gaining speed)!

Austin: Savage Crush!

(Aeolus uses the rails the speed up even more and before Frazer has a chance it stops spinning)

Ref: 1 points goes to Austin.

Hanami: WOW! Folks we just saw a move like no other!

Fukui’s mind: Hm this Austin is real interesting but I was trained by the best!

Fukui: **Puts on Zeletric Gear** Try us now!

Austin: What is that?

Ref: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Jacob & Fukui: Let it rip!!

(Meanwhile with the gang)

Jacob: Wow! Austin has this in the bag!

Shun: Let’s head to the match room that’s where the battle is!

Jacob’s mind: Well I wanted to stay in my bed and watch the match but whatever.

(Both of the boys head to the match room)

Satsu: What took you guys so long?

Shun: Yeah, yeah.

Jacob: Go Austin!

(There is a huge explosion)

Austin’s mind: Why won’t this armor come off?!

Austin: Let’s go!

(Aeolus changes to defense mode)

Fukui: Zeletric Whip!

(Aeolus does not move a bit)

Hanami: WOAH! That defense is out of this world!!

Fukui: Zeletric Rush!!

(Frazer starts attacking at insane speed but Aeolus does not move)

Austin: Now do it!

(Aeolus goes into attack mode and attacks Frazer)

Fukui: I-impossible…..

(Frazer burst)

Ref: Austin Claims 2 points Austin wins!

Hanami: Such skill and IQ!!! Austin wins the match with 3 points!

Austin: Great match Fukui! It was super flare!

Fukui: …..

(Jacob and the gang walk up)

Jacob: Great match to the both of you!

Satsu’s mind: Yeah right I saw Austin winning from a mile away!

????: Interesting.

All: FREE DE LA HOYA!!

Free: Ow watch it your hurting the ears.

All: Sorry!

Free: Well I came here to speak with Kris.

Kris: Hello Free follow me!

What does Kris wanna tell Free find out on the next chapter on Beyblade burst Justice!

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UnseenBurst can you please rate this chapter?

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@BladeKingX mind rating?

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Upcoming chapters!!!

18) The bey of Beat! Sound Fafnir! Free has a secret that only kris knows!!!!!!???????

19) Ruckus debut!  The rookie blades Ruckus earns his spot in the battle island!!

20) Ultimate Battle!!!

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Alright so does any one wanna rate? I wanna know what I can improve on!!!!????

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Update: They will be a returning legend from dual layer he was also in evolution so you can guess

RICKSON HAD DUAL LAYER

He had but he wasn't on dual layer. It could be Zac (if you count galaxy zeutron as an "appearance"), Zander (he doesn't own Buster Xcalius)... Uhh, I just remember those two.

LegendJustice maybe, I need to think about it

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I'm the original creator of "Welcome to the WBO".
Rank 0 means I'm better than 1°

Hint: Dark

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RICKSON HAD DUAL LAYER

He had but he wasn't on dual layer. It could be Zac (if you count galaxy zeutron as an "appearance"), Zander (he doesn't own Buster Xcalius)... Uhh, I just remember those two.

LegendJustice maybe, I need to think about it

Ok!

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   "From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Hint: Dark

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He had but he wasn't on dual layer. It could be Zac (if you count galaxy zeutron as an "appearance"), Zander (he doesn't own Buster Xcalius)... Uhh, I just remember those two.

LegendJustice maybe, I need to think about it

Ok!

Sasha? Dark Doomzicor?

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Hint: Dark

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He had but he wasn't on dual layer. It could be Zac (if you count galaxy zeutron as an "appearance"), Zander (he doesn't own Buster Xcalius)... Uhh, I just remember those two.

LegendJustice maybe, I need to think about it

Ok!

Mmkay, my entry is the one for Beyblade burst beyzitzu XD

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Let it RIP! (Former) Leader of the SpryzenLightnings! A short story below!
“Sup Darkstalker”, said Peril.
“Sup”, replied Darkstalker. 
Darkstalker thought, Enchant Peril to obey me in 10 seconds. (If you didn’t know, Darkstalker was a animus dragon.) In ten seconds, Darkstalker whispered to Peril, “Go. Go kill everybody using the coronavirus. GO NOW!” She spread the virus all through Jade Mountain! Everyone was infected, but the Beyblade Warriors came! They gave antidotes! You can be a Beyblade Warrior by wearing masks, washing hands, and most, maintain social distance! Stop the spread of the virus, and let’s get rid of it!

Hint: Dark

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He had but he wasn't on dual layer. It could be Zac (if you count galaxy zeutron as an "appearance"), Zander (he doesn't own Buster Xcalius)... Uhh, I just remember those two.

LegendJustice maybe, I need to think about it

Ok!

Daigo? He didn't appeared at sparking?

About my entry, I'm thinking if I'm going to make a fanfic, and if I do I don't want to spoil characters

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I'm the original creator of "Welcome to the WBO".
Rank 0 means I'm better than 1°

Hint: Dark

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Ok!

Daigo? He didn't appeared at sparking?

About my entry, I'm thinking if I'm going to make a fanfic, and if I do I don't want to spoil characters

i feel you man, i feel you

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"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

Daigo? He didn't appeared at sparking?

About my entry, I'm thinking if I'm going to make a fanfic, and if I do I don't want to spoil characters

i feel you man, i feel you

I think I'm going to submit. Don't raise your expectations.

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I'm the original creator of "Welcome to the WBO".
Rank 0 means I'm better than 1°

Chapter 18
The bey of sound! Sound Fafnir!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Kris: I heard what happened and is Farnir okay?

Free: ..... Fafnir will be okay I just have to fix it.

Kris: I know who can help!

Free: Who?

Kris: Jacob Kong! He created Justice beys!

(Free leaves)

(With Jacob)

Jacob: What a nice day at the battle island!

(Someone knocks on Jacobs dorm)

Jacob: Come in!

Free: Are you Jacob?

Jacob: FREE DE LA HOYA!!!!!!! Um, where are my manners yes I’m Jacob!

Free: I need your help to help me make a new Fafnir:

Jacob: Sure! But what happened to Phantom Fafnir?

Free: Let’s just go.

(They head to the work shop)

Jacob: Okay, let’s get started!

{Six hours later}

Free: it’s done, Sound Fafnir.

Free’s mind: Sound Fafnir can sense it’s opponent attacks from 2 minutes before it attacks.

Jacob: Wanna test it out?

Free: Sure I guess.

Free & Jacob: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!!

(Jacob & Free do amazing Justice launches)

Jacob: J Crash!!

(Jackal goes straight for Fafnir)

Free: Fafnir! Sound Clash!

(Fafnir stops Jackal from attacking)

Free: Sound Claw!

(Fafnir speeds up to Jackal and Jackal burst)

Jacob: H-how

Free: Well I have to go bye.

Jacob: Some Fafnir used my power against me! I still have so much to learn

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   "From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

EXCUSE ME WHAT SIR

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Chapter 18
The bey of sound! Sound Fafnir!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Kris: I heard what happened and is Farnir okay?

Free: .....  Fafnir will be okay I just have to fix it.

Kris: I know who can help!

Free: Who?

Kris: Jacob Kong! He created Justice beys!

(Free leaves)

(With Jacob)

Jacob: What a nice day at the battle island!

(Someone knocks on Jacobs dorm)

Jacob: Come in!

Free: Are you Jacob?

Jacob: FREE DE LA HOYA!!!!!!! Um, where are my manners yes I’m Jacob!

Free: I need your help to help me make a new Fafnir:

Jacob: Sure! But what happened to Phantom Fafnir?

Free: Let’s just go.

(They head to the work shop)

Jacob: Okay, let’s get started!

{Six hours later}

Free: it’s done, Sound Fafnir.

Free’s mind: Sound Fafnir can sense it’s opponent attacks from 2 minutes before it attacks.

Jacob: Wanna test it out?

Free: Sure I guess.

Free & Jacob: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!!

(Jacob & Free do amazing Justice launches)

Jacob: J Crash!!

(Jackal goes straight for Fafnir)

Free: Fafnir! Sound Clash!

(Fafnir stops Jackal from attacking)

Free: Sound Claw!

(Fafnir speeds up to Jackal and Jackal burst)

Jacob: H-how

Free: Well I have to go bye.

Jacob: Some Fafnir used my power against me! I still have so much to learn

Fafnir can SENSE ITS OPPONENTS MOVE?!?

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Also, wHaT aBoUt My Character