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GenesisBlader · Jul. 04, 2021 8:08 PM

(Jul. 04, 2021 8:01 PM)Beyl0v3r Wrote: EXCUSE ME WHAT SIR

(Jul. 04, 2021 7:56 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Chapter 18
The bey of sound! Sound Fafnir!

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Kris: I heard what happened and is Farnir okay?

Free: ..... Fafnir will be okay I just have to fix it.

Kris: I know who can help!

Free: Who?

Kris: Jacob Kong! He created Justice beys!

(Free leaves)

(With Jacob)

Jacob: What a nice day at the battle island!

(Someone knocks on Jacobs dorm)

Jacob: Come in!

Free: Are you Jacob?

Jacob: FREE DE LA HOYA!!!!!!! Um, where are my manners yes I’m Jacob!

Free: I need your help to help me make a new Fafnir:

Jacob: Sure! But what happened to Phantom Fafnir?

Free: Let’s just go.

(They head to the work shop)

Jacob: Okay, let’s get started!

{Six hours later}

Free: it’s done, Sound Fafnir.

Free’s mind: Sound Fafnir can sense it’s opponent attacks from 2 minutes before it attacks.

Jacob: Wanna test it out?

Free: Sure I guess.

Free & Jacob: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!!

(Jacob & Free do amazing Justice launches)

Jacob: J Crash!!

(Jackal goes straight for Fafnir)

Free: Fafnir! Sound Clash!

(Fafnir stops Jackal from attacking)

Free: Sound Claw!

(Fafnir speeds up to Jackal and Jackal burst)

Jacob: H-how

Free: Well I have to go bye.

Jacob: Some Fafnir used my power against me! I still have so much to learn

Fafnir can SENSE ITS OPPONENTS MOVE?!?

Also, wHaT aBoUt My Character

(Jul. 04, 2021 7:56 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Chapter 18
The bey of sound! Sound Fafnir!

Spoiler (Click to View)
Kris: I heard what happened and is Farnir okay?

Free: ..... Fafnir will be okay I just have to fix it.

Kris: I know who can help!

Free: Who?

Kris: Jacob Kong! He created Justice beys!

(Free leaves)

(With Jacob)

Jacob: What a nice day at the battle island!

(Someone knocks on Jacobs dorm)

Jacob: Come in!

Free: Are you Jacob?

Jacob: FREE DE LA HOYA!!!!!!! Um, where are my manners yes I’m Jacob!

Free: I need your help to help me make a new Fafnir:

Jacob: Sure! But what happened to Phantom Fafnir?

Free: Let’s just go.

(They head to the work shop)

Jacob: Okay, let’s get started!

{Six hours later}

Free: it’s done, Sound Fafnir.

Free’s mind: Sound Fafnir can sense it’s opponent attacks from 2 minutes before it attacks.

Jacob: Wanna test it out?

Free: Sure I guess.

Free & Jacob: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!!

(Jacob & Free do amazing Justice launches)

Jacob: J Crash!!

(Jackal goes straight for Fafnir)

Free: Fafnir! Sound Clash!

(Fafnir stops Jackal from attacking)

Free: Sound Claw!

(Fafnir speeds up to Jackal and Jackal burst)

Jacob: H-how

Free: Well I have to go bye.

Jacob: Some Fafnir used my power against me! I still have so much to learn

nice chapter, but its kind of short

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

LegendJustice · Jul. 04, 2021 8:20 PM

(Jul. 04, 2021  8:08 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 04, 2021  8:01 PM)Beyl0v3r Wrote: EXCUSE ME WHAT SIR

Fafnir can SENSE ITS OPPONENTS MOVE?!?

Also, wHaT aBoUt My Character

(Jul. 04, 2021  7:56 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Chapter 18
The bey of sound! Sound Fafnir!

Spoiler (Click to View)
Kris: I heard what happened and is Farnir okay?

Free: ..... Fafnir will be okay I just have to fix it.

Kris: I know who can help!

Free: Who?

Kris: Jacob Kong! He created Justice beys!

(Free leaves)

(With Jacob)

Jacob: What a nice day at the battle island!

(Someone knocks on Jacobs dorm)

Jacob: Come in!

Free: Are you Jacob?

Jacob: FREE DE LA HOYA!!!!!!! Um, where are my manners yes I’m Jacob!

Free: I need your help to help me make a new Fafnir:

Jacob: Sure! But what happened to Phantom Fafnir?

Free: Let’s just go.

(They head to the work shop)

Jacob: Okay, let’s get started!

{Six hours later}

Free: it’s done, Sound Fafnir.

Free’s mind: Sound Fafnir can sense it’s opponent attacks from 2 minutes before it attacks.

Jacob: Wanna test it out?

Free: Sure I guess.

Free & Jacob: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!!

(Jacob & Free do amazing Justice launches)

Jacob: J Crash!!

(Jackal goes straight for Fafnir)

Free: Fafnir! Sound Clash!

(Fafnir stops Jackal from attacking)

Free: Sound Claw!

(Fafnir speeds up to Jackal and Jackal burst)

Jacob: H-how

Free: Well I have to go bye.

Jacob: Some Fafnir used my power against me! I still have so much to learn

nice chapter, but its kind of short

I know my battery at 10 percent when I was markings it

(Jul. 04, 2021 8:01 PM)Beyl0v3r Wrote: EXCUSE ME WHAT SIR

(Jul. 04, 2021 7:56 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Chapter 18
The bey of sound! Sound Fafnir!

Spoiler (Click to View)
Kris: I heard what happened and is Farnir okay?

Free: ..... Fafnir will be okay I just have to fix it.

Kris: I know who can help!

Free: Who?

Kris: Jacob Kong! He created Justice beys!

(Free leaves)

(With Jacob)

Jacob: What a nice day at the battle island!

(Someone knocks on Jacobs dorm)

Jacob: Come in!

Free: Are you Jacob?

Jacob: FREE DE LA HOYA!!!!!!! Um, where are my manners yes I’m Jacob!

Free: I need your help to help me make a new Fafnir:

Jacob: Sure! But what happened to Phantom Fafnir?

Free: Let’s just go.

(They head to the work shop)

Jacob: Okay, let’s get started!

{Six hours later}

Free: it’s done, Sound Fafnir.

Free’s mind: Sound Fafnir can sense it’s opponent attacks from 2 minutes before it attacks.

Jacob: Wanna test it out?

Free: Sure I guess.

Free & Jacob: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!!

(Jacob & Free do amazing Justice launches)

Jacob: J Crash!!

(Jackal goes straight for Fafnir)

Free: Fafnir! Sound Clash!

(Fafnir stops Jackal from attacking)

Free: Sound Claw!

(Fafnir speeds up to Jackal and Jackal burst)

Jacob: H-how

Free: Well I have to go bye.

Jacob: Some Fafnir used my power against me! I still have so much to learn

Fafnir can SENSE ITS OPPONENTS MOVE?!?

Also, wHaT aBoUt My Character

He is gonna be battling the other ronin

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

GenesisBlader · Jul. 04, 2021 8:23 PM

(Jul. 04, 2021  8:20 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jul. 04, 2021  8:08 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:

nice chapter, but its kind of short

I know my battery at 10 percent when I was markings it

(Jul. 04, 2021  8:01 PM)Beyl0v3r Wrote: EXCUSE ME WHAT SIR

Fafnir can SENSE ITS OPPONENTS MOVE?!?

Also, wHaT aBoUt My Character

He is gonna be battling the other ronin

oh ok

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

LegendJustice · Jul. 04, 2021 8:46 PM

Ronan vs Ronin

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Beyl0v3r · Jul. 04, 2021 9:34 PM

(Jul. 04, 2021 8:46 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Ronan vs Ronin

Pfft haha ok but just because can Ronin beat Ronan then Ronan tags along with the squad?

Ronan:Your power is inferior compared to mine...

Not part of fan fic

LegendJustice · Jul. 05, 2021 12:16 AM

(Jul. 04, 2021 9:34 PM)Beyl0v3r Wrote:
(Jul. 04, 2021 8:46 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Ronan vs Ronin
Pfft haha ok but just because can Ronin beat Ronan then Ronan tags along with the squad?

Ronan:Your power is inferior compared to mine...

Not part of fan fic

Lol

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

ColdFlames13 · Jul. 05, 2021 12:18 AM

I haven't been on in a while but I did think of a bey lol.

Gloom Hades Zenith Destroy'

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LegendJustice · Jul. 05, 2021 12:20 AM

(Jul. 05, 2021 12:18 AM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: I haven't been on in a while but I did think of a bey lol.

Gloom Hades Zenith Destroy'

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I will explain this bey in a bit

Okay but your gonna need a character too tho

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

ColdFlames13 · Jul. 05, 2021 12:21 AM

(Jul. 03, 2021 10:58 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: The next Dynachi chapter will come out on July 6th!! Get pumped for the new Achilles coming!!

(Jul. 05, 2021 12:20 AM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jul. 05, 2021 12:18 AM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: I haven't been on in a while but I did think of a bey lol.

Gloom Hades Zenith Destroy'

Spoiler (Click to View)

I will explain this bey in a bit

Okay but your gonna need a character too tho

Ik

UnseenBurst · Jul. 05, 2021 12:46 AM

~This Post Has Been Deleted~

The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

LegendJustice · Jul. 05, 2021 12:53 AM

(Jul. 05, 2021 12:46 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 22 is out!!

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Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 22
Hero From Greek Mythology Echo Achilles!!!

Shu: So, Sebastian’s been taken over by Spryzen.

(I nod my head sadly)

Ryuji: Moping around isn’t gonna help!! We’ve gotta raid inferno!!

Valt: We don’t have the strength to do that.

Shu: Not yet.

Brooke: What do you mean “Not yet”?

Shu: If we’re going to stand a chance against Aiden and Sebastian you’ve gotta get super strong.

Adam: How do we do that?!

Shu: We’re going on a Training Journey.

Valt: I know exactly where to go first!!

(Valt gets up)

Vira: Valt?

Me: Vira!!

(I jump on her and start hugging her)

Vira: Ok I missed you too, now get off!

(I get off her)

Me: Pack your stuff!! We’re going on a training journey!!

Vira: Don’t we need to book a plane?

Shu: I’ve got a Private Plane!

Valt: Shu is loaded.

(Valt whispers to us)

Shu: I heard that!!

(We Fly Over To Aiger’s Farm, We land in a small city)

Shu: This is the closest we can get.

Me: So where do we go?

(Valt points into the forest)

Ryuji: We have to go there?!

Adam: Is The Rich Boy scared he’s gonna get a scratch?

Ryuji: I JUST GOT A MANICURE!!!

(We all look silently at Ryuji)

Ryuji: What?!

Shu: If you wanna stay here you can and get kidnapped.

Ryuji: They could use me for a ransom!!

(Ryuji runs into the forest)

Valt: Did you have to scare him?

Shu: It was more fun and efficient.

(Shu and Valt laugh)

Me: Old people jokes.

Adam: I know right.

Valt: We’re not that old!!

~In The Middle Of The Forest~

Me: Are we there yet?

Adam: Nope.

Ryuji: I really wish I brought my butlers.

(Valt reads the map)

Valt: Um.

Shu: Please don’t tell me we’re lost.

Valt: We’re lost.

(Everyone groans)

Shu: Why don’t we have lunch?

Ryuji; A 5-course buffet?!

Shu: Some burgers.

(Valt takes out some burgers and gives them to everyone)

Valt: Enjoy!!

Ryuji: Just a burger?!

Brooke: Either go hungry or eat it.

(Ryuji starts eating the burger reluctantly, I start chomping down on my burger)

???: What are they doing in my forest.

(Someone swoops me up and takes me into the trees)

Me: Ah!!

Valt: Vlad!!

Adam: Nobody takes my friend!

(Adam starts running after them)

Shu: Come on, let's go!!

Ryuji: Is it a huge deal if we lost 1 person?

(Valt and Vira give Ryuji and mad look)

Ryuji: I was kidding, maybe.

(Everyone runs after me and Adam)

Me: Let me go!! Where are you taking me?!

???: Just stay quiet then you’ll be fine.

(He drops me out of the trees into a farm)

~Akabane Farm~

Me: Woah, this place is awesome!!

???: You’re Vlad Aoi!! Oh my gosh, I’m so sorry!!

Me: No problem! I’m pretty sure this is where Valt and Shu wanted to take us!

Agnus: I’m Agnus Akabane!!

Me: Nice to meet you!!

Agnus: Dad comes over here!!

(A tall man walks towards us)

???: Don't tell me you brought another “Intruder” here.

Me: Hi!

???: Agnus, who is that kid?

Agnus: This is Vlad Aoi!!

???: Aoi? Are you related to Valt Aoi?

Me: Yup.

Aiger: I’m Aiger Akabane!! Me and your father were good friends back in the day!!

Agnus: You also inspired me to create a Dynachi Bey!!

Me: Really, wanna battle?

Agnus: Sure, Echo Achilles will send you flying!!

(We go to the battle room)

Aiger: Inspect your opponent’s bey!!

Me (Thoughts): Echo Achilles a clockwise spinning balance type. It has 2 swords and 2 shields, you can add 2 swords and 2 shields as armor to up your attack and defense, The defense blades have rubber on them and the sword has rubber on them. It’s strong but I can handle it!!

Aiger: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Agnus: Let it rip!!

(The reboot tip stick comes out)

Agnus: Achilles, take the center!!

(Achilles takes the center)

Me: Rush Launch!!

Agnus: Saw that coming!! Echo Defense!!

(Achilles takes all of Valtryek’s blows)

Me: *Gasps*

Agnus: I’ve been practicing for a long time!!

Me: I can breakthrough!! Valiant Spring Attack!!

(Valtryek slashes at Achilles and sends Achilles flying in the air)

Agnus: I won’t give up!! Echo Shield!!

Me: Heroic Reboot!!

(Achilles and Valtryel send each other flying out of the stadium)

Aiger: It’s Echo Achilles with a ring-out finish!! Agnus claims 1 point!!

(Valt Brooke Adam Ryuji Vira and Shu run in the battle room)

Valt/Adam: The cavalry has arrived!!

(Shu and Brooke facepalm)

Aiger: Valt!!

Valt: Aiger!!

(Valt and Aiger run-up to each other doing a handshake)

Aiger: How’ve you been!

Valt: Awesome!! What about you!

Aiger: Great!!

Shu: Long time no see Aiger.

Aiger: Hey Shu.

Adam: Spill the beans, why’d you take Vlad!!

Aiger: Sorry about that, he’s obsessed with thinking that our farm will get raided!!

Agnus: Yeah, sorry about that.

Me: We were in the middle of a battle, so can we get on with it?

Valt: Sure.

Agnus (Thoughts): Vlad is strong, I barely won that battle, I’m going to have to attack hard!

(Agnus puts Achilles in Attack Mode and puts Achilles armor on)

Aiger: Second battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Agnus/Me: Let it rip!!

(The reboot tip stick comes out)

Agnus: Echo Launch!!

Me: Rush Launch!!

(Valtryek and Achilles hit each other with a barrage of strikes)

Aiger: Woah, this is getting interesting!

(Valtryek and Achilles send each other flying into the wall)

Me: Valiant Spring Winged Launch!!

Agnus: Echo Rebound!!

(Valtryek and Achilles bounce off the wall and start clashing)

Agnus: Achilles!!

(Agnus’ Resonance Aura flares up)

Achilles: Agnus let’s go!!

Agnus: Echo Whip!!

(Achilles slashes with its rubber blade, Valtryek gets sent flying in the air)

Me: I won’t give up!! Valtryek!!!

(My Resonance Aura flares up)

Valtryek: Let’s go!!

Shu: *Gasps*

(I hit the wall and speed up)

Me: Time for a counterstrike!!

(The reboot tip stick comes in suddenly)

Me: Heroic Reboot!!

Agnus: I didn’t wanna have to do this but I’ll have to!!

(Agnus’ hairband breaks and his hair grows wild, Agnus roars)

Agnus: Echo Sword!!

Me: Heroic Spring Attack!!

(An enormous explosion occurs, The roof rips off)

Me/Agnus: HAAAAAAA!!!

(Achilles gets shot up in the air, Achilles bursts)

Agnus: *Gasps*

Aiger: It’s Valiant Valtryek with a burst finish!! The winner is Vlad Aoi!!

Me: Yes!!

Adam: Nice one!!

Shu (Thoughts): He battles just like Valt, he’s going to be amazing.

Agnus: Dang it!!

(Agnus smashes his hand into the ground)

Aiger: You can always use the loss as a learning experience!!

(Aiger smiles)

Shu: You’re the one to talk.

Valt: I know right!!

(Valt laughs)

Aiger: What do you mean?!

(We all laugh)

~1 Hour Later~

Agnus: Bye Vlad, it was fun battling you!!

Me: It really was!!

(We all wave as we leave)

Me: Where are we going next?

Shu: BC Sol.

Me/Brooke/Adam/Ryuji: BC Sol?!

Valt: Yup, it’s a great chance to get stronger there!! (Also an old friend is still there)

Me: What’d you say?

Valt: Oh nothing, let’s just get outta here!

Me: This is going to be awesome!!
ColdFlames13 Your character has arrived.

You posted on my Fan tic dude lol

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

UnseenBurst · Jul. 05, 2021 12:56 AM

(Jul. 05, 2021 12:53 AM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jul. 05, 2021 12:46 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 22 is out!!

Spoiler (Click to View)
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 22
Hero From Greek Mythology Echo Achilles!!!

Shu: So, Sebastian’s been taken over by Spryzen.

(I nod my head sadly)

Ryuji: Moping around isn’t gonna help!! We’ve gotta raid inferno!!

Valt: We don’t have the strength to do that.

Shu: Not yet.

Brooke: What do you mean “Not yet”?

Shu: If we’re going to stand a chance against Aiden and Sebastian you’ve gotta get super strong.

Adam: How do we do that?!

Shu: We’re going on a Training Journey.

Valt: I know exactly where to go first!!

(Valt gets up)

Vira: Valt?

Me: Vira!!

(I jump on her and start hugging her)

Vira: Ok I missed you too, now get off!

(I get off her)

Me: Pack your stuff!! We’re going on a training journey!!

Vira: Don’t we need to book a plane?

Shu: I’ve got a Private Plane!

Valt: Shu is loaded.

(Valt whispers to us)

Shu: I heard that!!

(We Fly Over To Aiger’s Farm, We land in a small city)

Shu: This is the closest we can get.

Me: So where do we go?

(Valt points into the forest)

Ryuji: We have to go there?!

Adam: Is The Rich Boy scared he’s gonna get a scratch?

Ryuji: I JUST GOT A MANICURE!!!

(We all look silently at Ryuji)

Ryuji: What?!

Shu: If you wanna stay here you can and get kidnapped.

Ryuji: They could use me for a ransom!!

(Ryuji runs into the forest)

Valt: Did you have to scare him?

Shu: It was more fun and efficient.

(Shu and Valt laugh)

Me: Old people jokes.

Adam: I know right.

Valt: We’re not that old!!

~In The Middle Of The Forest~

Me: Are we there yet?

Adam: Nope.

Ryuji: I really wish I brought my butlers.

(Valt reads the map)

Valt: Um.

Shu: Please don’t tell me we’re lost.

Valt: We’re lost.

(Everyone groans)

Shu: Why don’t we have lunch?

Ryuji; A 5-course buffet?!

Shu: Some burgers.

(Valt takes out some burgers and gives them to everyone)

Valt: Enjoy!!

Ryuji: Just a burger?!

Brooke: Either go hungry or eat it.

(Ryuji starts eating the burger reluctantly, I start chomping down on my burger)

???: What are they doing in my forest.

(Someone swoops me up and takes me into the trees)

Me: Ah!!

Valt: Vlad!!

Adam: Nobody takes my friend!

(Adam starts running after them)

Shu: Come on, let's go!!

Ryuji: Is it a huge deal if we lost 1 person?

(Valt and Vira give Ryuji and mad look)

Ryuji: I was kidding, maybe.

(Everyone runs after me and Adam)

Me: Let me go!! Where are you taking me?!

???: Just stay quiet then you’ll be fine.

(He drops me out of the trees into a farm)

~Akabane Farm~

Me: Woah, this place is awesome!!

???: You’re Vlad Aoi!! Oh my gosh, I’m so sorry!!

Me: No problem! I’m pretty sure this is where Valt and Shu wanted to take us!

Agnus: I’m Agnus Akabane!!

Me: Nice to meet you!!

Agnus: Dad comes over here!!

(A tall man walks towards us)

???: Don't tell me you brought another “Intruder” here.

Me: Hi!

???: Agnus, who is that kid?

Agnus: This is Vlad Aoi!!

???: Aoi? Are you related to Valt Aoi?

Me: Yup.

Aiger: I’m Aiger Akabane!! Me and your father were good friends back in the day!!

Agnus: You also inspired me to create a Dynachi Bey!!

Me: Really, wanna battle?

Agnus: Sure, Echo Achilles will send you flying!!

(We go to the battle room)

Aiger: Inspect your opponent’s bey!!

Me (Thoughts): Echo Achilles a clockwise spinning balance type. It has 2 swords and 2 shields, you can add 2 swords and 2 shields as armor to up your attack and defense, The defense blades have rubber on them and the sword has rubber on them. It’s strong but I can handle it!!

Aiger: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Agnus: Let it rip!!

(The reboot tip stick comes out)

Agnus: Achilles, take the center!!

(Achilles takes the center)

Me: Rush Launch!!

Agnus: Saw that coming!! Echo Defense!!

(Achilles takes all of Valtryek’s blows)

Me: *Gasps*

Agnus: I’ve been practicing for a long time!!

Me: I can breakthrough!! Valiant Spring Attack!!

(Valtryek slashes at Achilles and sends Achilles flying in the air)

Agnus: I won’t give up!! Echo Shield!!

Me: Heroic Reboot!!

(Achilles and Valtryel send each other flying out of the stadium)

Aiger: It’s Echo Achilles with a ring-out finish!! Agnus claims 1 point!!

(Valt Brooke Adam Ryuji Vira and Shu run in the battle room)

Valt/Adam: The cavalry has arrived!!

(Shu and Brooke facepalm)

Aiger: Valt!!

Valt: Aiger!!

(Valt and Aiger run-up to each other doing a handshake)

Aiger: How’ve you been!

Valt: Awesome!! What about you!

Aiger: Great!!

Shu: Long time no see Aiger.

Aiger: Hey Shu.

Adam: Spill the beans, why’d you take Vlad!!

Aiger: Sorry about that, he’s obsessed with thinking that our farm will get raided!!

Agnus: Yeah, sorry about that.

Me: We were in the middle of a battle, so can we get on with it?

Valt: Sure.

Agnus (Thoughts): Vlad is strong, I barely won that battle, I’m going to have to attack hard!

(Agnus puts Achilles in Attack Mode and puts Achilles armor on)

Aiger: Second battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Agnus/Me: Let it rip!!

(The reboot tip stick comes out)

Agnus: Echo Launch!!

Me: Rush Launch!!

(Valtryek and Achilles hit each other with a barrage of strikes)

Aiger: Woah, this is getting interesting!

(Valtryek and Achilles send each other flying into the wall)

Me: Valiant Spring Winged Launch!!

Agnus: Echo Rebound!!

(Valtryek and Achilles bounce off the wall and start clashing)

Agnus: Achilles!!

(Agnus’ Resonance Aura flares up)

Achilles: Agnus let’s go!!

Agnus: Echo Whip!!

(Achilles slashes with its rubber blade, Valtryek gets sent flying in the air)

Me: I won’t give up!! Valtryek!!!

(My Resonance Aura flares up)

Valtryek: Let’s go!!

Shu: *Gasps*

(I hit the wall and speed up)

Me: Time for a counterstrike!!

(The reboot tip stick comes in suddenly)

Me: Heroic Reboot!!

Agnus: I didn’t wanna have to do this but I’ll have to!!

(Agnus’ hairband breaks and his hair grows wild, Agnus roars)

Agnus: Echo Sword!!

Me: Heroic Spring Attack!!

(An enormous explosion occurs, The roof rips off)

Me/Agnus: HAAAAAAA!!!

(Achilles gets shot up in the air, Achilles bursts)

Agnus: *Gasps*

Aiger: It’s Valiant Valtryek with a burst finish!! The winner is Vlad Aoi!!

Me: Yes!!

Adam: Nice one!!

Shu (Thoughts): He battles just like Valt, he’s going to be amazing.

Agnus: Dang it!!

(Agnus smashes his hand into the ground)

Aiger: You can always use the loss as a learning experience!!

(Aiger smiles)

Shu: You’re the one to talk.

Valt: I know right!!

(Valt laughs)

Aiger: What do you mean?!

(We all laugh)

~1 Hour Later~

Agnus: Bye Vlad, it was fun battling you!!

Me: It really was!!

(We all wave as we leave)

Me: Where are we going next?

Shu: BC Sol.

Me/Brooke/Adam/Ryuji: BC Sol?!

Valt: Yup, it’s a great chance to get stronger there!! (Also an old friend is still there)

Me: What’d you say?

Valt: Oh nothing, let’s just get outta here!

Me: This is going to be awesome!!
ColdFlames13 Your character has arrived.

You posted on my Fan tic dude lol

OMG so sorry I'm really out of it lemme fix that

The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

LegendJustice · Jul. 05, 2021 12:59 AM

(Jul. 05, 2021 12:46 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: ~This Post Has Been Deleted~

But great chapter

(Jul. 05, 2021 12:56 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 05, 2021 12:53 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: You posted on my Fan tic dude lol

OMG so sorry I'm really out of it lemme fix that

No problem dude

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

GenesisBlader · Jul. 05, 2021 1:07 AM

OML hillarious man

lol unseen i see what you meant

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LegendJustice · Jul. 05, 2021 1:09 AM

The Release date for chapter 19 is July 6!!!!

(Jul. 04, 2021 8:01 PM)Beyl0v3r Wrote: EXCUSE ME WHAT SIR

(Jul. 04, 2021 7:56 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Chapter 18
The bey of sound! Sound Fafnir!

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Kris: I heard what happened and is Farnir okay?

Free: ..... Fafnir will be okay I just have to fix it.

Kris: I know who can help!

Free: Who?

Kris: Jacob Kong! He created Justice beys!

(Free leaves)

(With Jacob)

Jacob: What a nice day at the battle island!

(Someone knocks on Jacobs dorm)

Jacob: Come in!

Free: Are you Jacob?

Jacob: FREE DE LA HOYA!!!!!!! Um, where are my manners yes I’m Jacob!

Free: I need your help to help me make a new Fafnir:

Jacob: Sure! But what happened to Phantom Fafnir?

Free: Let’s just go.

(They head to the work shop)

Jacob: Okay, let’s get started!

{Six hours later}

Free: it’s done, Sound Fafnir.

Free’s mind: Sound Fafnir can sense it’s opponent attacks from 2 minutes before it attacks.

Jacob: Wanna test it out?

Free: Sure I guess.

Free & Jacob: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!!

(Jacob & Free do amazing Justice launches)

Jacob: J Crash!!

(Jackal goes straight for Fafnir)

Free: Fafnir! Sound Clash!

(Fafnir stops Jackal from attacking)

Free: Sound Claw!

(Fafnir speeds up to Jackal and Jackal burst)

Jacob: H-how

Free: Well I have to go bye.

Jacob: Some Fafnir used my power against me! I still have so much to learn

Fafnir can SENSE ITS OPPONENTS MOVE?!?

Also, wHaT aBoUt My Character

yEs iT CaN!!!

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Beyl0v3r · Jul. 05, 2021 2:49 AM

(Jul. 05, 2021 1:09 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: The Release date for chapter 19 is July 6!!!!

(Jul. 04, 2021 8:01 PM)Beyl0v3r Wrote: EXCUSE ME WHAT SIR

Fafnir can SENSE ITS OPPONENTS MOVE?!?

Also, wHaT aBoUt My Character

yEs iT CaN!!!

ReEeEeEe HoW

LegendJustice · Jul. 05, 2021 3:13 AM

(Jul. 05, 2021 2:49 AM)Beyl0v3r Wrote:
(Jul. 05, 2021 1:09 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: The Release date for chapter 19 is July 6!!!!

yEs iT CaN!!!
ReEeEeEe HoW

Jacob
I DoNt KnOw

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

GenesisBlader · Jul. 05, 2021 3:18 AM

(Jul. 05, 2021 1:09 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: The Release date for chapter 19 is July 6!!!!

(Jul. 04, 2021 8:01 PM)Beyl0v3r Wrote: EXCUSE ME WHAT SIR

Fafnir can SENSE ITS OPPONENTS MOVE?!?

Also, wHaT aBoUt My Character

yEs iT CaN!!!

nice!

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

LegendJustice · Jul. 05, 2021 3:30 AM

(Jul. 05, 2021 3:18 AM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 05, 2021 1:09 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: The Release date for chapter 19 is July 6!!!!

yEs iT CaN!!!
nice!

Yeah I'll post more about Sound Fafnir soon

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

UnseenBurst · Jul. 05, 2021 3:54 AM

(Jul. 05, 2021 3:30 AM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jul. 05, 2021 3:18 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: nice!

Yeah I'll post more about Sound Fafnir soon

Sound Fafnir is an awesome name

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LegendJustice · Jul. 05, 2021 3:55 AM

(Jul. 05, 2021 3:54 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 05, 2021 3:30 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Yeah I'll post more about Sound Fafnir soon

Sound Fafnir is an awesome name

Thanks! I was judging between Phantom Fafnir or Sound Fafnir

Sound Fafnir Info

Spoiler (Click to View)

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Hollowmind13 · Jul. 05, 2021 9:12 AM

(Jul. 05, 2021 12:46 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: ~This Post Has Been Deleted~

Sth really funny is that Unseen posted the "-Echo- Achilles" Chapter after you introduced "-Sound- Fafnir". Coincidence? I think not!

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LegendJustice · Jul. 05, 2021 4:10 PM

(Jul. 05, 2021 9:12 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Jul. 05, 2021 12:46 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: ~This Post Has Been Deleted~
Sth really funny is that Unseen posted the "-Echo- Achilles" Chapter after you introduced "-Sound- Fafnir". Coincidence? I think not!

What are you trying to say?

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Beyl0v3r · Jul. 05, 2021 4:23 PM

(Jul. 05, 2021 3:13 AM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jul. 05, 2021 2:49 AM)Beyl0v3r Wrote: ReEeEeEe HoW
Jacob
I DoNt KnOw

I hAtE yOu BuT I ScArEd-riyui

PS Sry if I spelled it wrong

LegendJustice · Jul. 05, 2021 4:52 PM

(Jul. 05, 2021 4:23 PM)Beyl0v3r Wrote:
(Jul. 05, 2021 3:13 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Jacob
I DoNt KnOw
I hAtE yOu BuT I ScArEd-riyui

PS Sry if I spelled it wrong

Speaking of Ryui he is in the next chapter

Oop did I just give you a hint **winks*

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably