Why do you always say Matthew E. just call him Matthew......
The Blader's spirit
Poll: what did you think
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| Total: | 100% | 52 vote(s) |
because there are two matthews
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The first one is the main character's friend, while the second one, Matthew E. is the main character's cousin who lives in Bermuda.
It cuts down on confusion as to who is talking...
Which I support.
It cuts down on confusion as to who is talking...
Which I support.
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now no more character request I MEAN IT THIS TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
new chapter up guys 
I have a question:
How come you don't put the chapters in spoilers? It would make the story easier to navigate though instead of scrolling down so far to find the chapter someone would have liked to view.
How come you don't put the chapters in spoilers? It would make the story easier to navigate though instead of scrolling down so far to find the chapter someone would have liked to view.
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this story has potincial
I don't like the story because it's boring, and the characters have no character.
This thread is full of SPAM! I might have to report it! No kidding!
This thread is full of SPAM! I might have to report it! No kidding!
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(Apr. 18, 2012 6:07 AM)Fakirs Duck Wrote: I don't like the story because it's boring, and the characters have no character.dont please i worked so hard on this and i want to see it through to the end
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(Apr. 18, 2012 12:36 AM)Takasu Wrote: I have a question:well the thing is....................................i dont know how
How come you don't put the chapters in spoilers? It would make the story easier to navigate though instead of scrolling down so far to find the chapter someone would have liked to view.
Oh man, I can't belive I forgot to tell you that nations XD
It's simply [ spoiler ] story [/ spoiler] without the spaces in the []'s.
It should become this:
It's simply [ spoiler ] story [/ spoiler] without the spaces in the []'s.
It should become this:
Spoiler (Click to View)
thank you i will change it
(Apr. 18, 2012 7:16 AM)nationsbeyblade Wrote:(Apr. 18, 2012 6:07 AM)Fakirs Duck Wrote: I don't like the story because it's boring, and the characters have no character.dont please i worked so hard on this and i want to see it through to the end
This thread is full of SPAM! I might have to report it! No kidding!
(Apr. 18, 2012 12:36 AM)Takasu Wrote: I have a question:well the thing is....................................i dont know how
How come you don't put the chapters in spoilers? It would make the story easier to navigate though instead of scrolling down so far to find the chapter someone would have liked to view.
Alright... I'll give you another chance... I understand how hard you worked...
thank you i will learn from my mistakes and not spam
new chapter up guys enjoy!
Nice one!
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thanks
EPIC STORY XD
thanks luck
Can i be on it?
And my name is NPB then! Remember it!
Bey is Ray Sagittario D125 SF.
Personality: Happy and likes running.
And my name is NPB then! Remember it!
Bey is Ray Sagittario D125 SF.
Personality: Happy and likes running.
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new chapter up BOOOYA!!!
chapter 21 up
enjoy it!
enjoy it!
It's like Nations and Luck are just spamming this thread. Don't worry, you'll learn. 
Anyway, you need some help, huh? I recommend you go to The Writer's Handbook and Stairs on Becoming A Better Writer for help and stuff. It will improve your grammar and spelling and other very important things a story should have.
Now, I recommend that you put in more description and not only dialogue. I mean, talking's all good but there should be a part in where you describe the environment and problem of the Protagonist and his pals. Now on to, character. Character development is critical for a story, so to start the development is personalities. Work on those and you'll do well. Also, please please please, put punctuation and capital letters. With these too, your on the steady road to become a better writer.
Anyway, you need some help, huh? I recommend you go to The Writer's Handbook and Stairs on Becoming A Better Writer for help and stuff. It will improve your grammar and spelling and other very important things a story should have.
Now, I recommend that you put in more description and not only dialogue. I mean, talking's all good but there should be a part in where you describe the environment and problem of the Protagonist and his pals. Now on to, character. Character development is critical for a story, so to start the development is personalities. Work on those and you'll do well. Also, please please please, put punctuation and capital letters. With these too, your on the steady road to become a better writer.
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3 more chapters uploaded
im feeling in a writing mood
im feeling in a writing mood
new chapter up (finnaly)
i will upload more soon