You did a good job at sharing your time at the event, but the tournament report is for Beywiki and not-based on personal experience. Because this for Beywiki, you'd also want to refrain from using smilies. There are a few punctuation errors, too.
I think a perfect example of a tournament report was @[xVaretyr]'s for Hato's Birthday Bash. I'd say you should use this as a guideline: http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Hato-s-B...2015-Draft
Keep at it!
I think a perfect example of a tournament report was @[xVaretyr]'s for Hato's Birthday Bash. I'd say you should use this as a guideline: http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Hato-s-B...2015-Draft
Keep at it!