To discuss writing in general, whether it be asking for advice on a chapter your about to post, asking for tips or strategies, telling what you do to cure writers block, etc.

Yeah, got this idea from the General GFX thread. No copywrite intended

I took the mary-sue test the other day, and got a 3. It was a long test, but here's a link to it:

http://www.springhole.net/quizzes/marysue.htm

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"Life isn't about how hard you can hit;
it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
{[YT]} [|BEYBLOG|] (â—ŠSoG-My Bookâ—Š)/<DA>\

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He was inspired by me. So proud of leself.
I took it and got 22. Meh, cliche with the larger twist.

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My characters' results (I only did my main protagonists). You guys might not know them, but still, you'll see that they are balanced.

Kyo (Beyblade: Redemption) - 5
Crane (Elephant Strife) - 4
Viper (Elephant Strife) - 0 what the hell?
Grant (Codename: ALPHA BLOOD) - 10

I'll post the rest later

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"Yeah we're all going the same way down. I'm just trying to write it all down." - The Airborne Toxic Event

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My characters' results (I only did my main protagonists). You guys might not know them, but still, you'll see that they are balanced.

Kyo (Beyblade: Redemption) - 5

I'll post the rest in a few

Wow, nice score! I think you scored better than Temporal

@Taiwo Seigi...aha, you need some work...

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"Life isn't about how hard you can hit;
it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
{[YT]} [|BEYBLOG|] (â—ŠSoG-My Bookâ—Š)/<DA>\

As long as it's not too cliche, I'm good. I gives it a recognizable feel to it, but not too much. But I could always improve.

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I just took it and got an 18 for Kiernan in my Lost in Darkness story, which I think is good for me because my characters usually suck. I still have to work some things out for him though, since I'm not really sure about some things for him. I keep getting ideas for it, but sometimes they contradict themselves. Time to get working on the rest of my characters...

EDIT: Just did the test for Patrick and either got a 7 or a 12. I'm not sure if having powers (power over earth in his case) but he doesn't gain them in the story is a yes to this question, "Does your character become a genetically, scientifically, cybernetically, or magically altered/enhanced being, possibly with new powers?" The word "become" threw me off, since he had the powers before the story started, and he didn't gain them within the timeline of the story.

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Haha! I took took the Mary-Sue test and:
Jet Sai- 4! (Spinning out of Control, Beyblade)
Leon Dunn- 6! (The Boom Boom Alchemist, FMA)

Didn't see that coming...

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Person:"Brad, sign my launcher! Brad, sign everything I own!"
BeyBrad:"Did you see me sign that kid's shoe? He was like 'BRAD, CAN U SIGHN MAH SHOO?!' and I was like 'Yeeeaaahhh... ?'
CyberBlader27: Cant believe I missed Beyblade Crusade 2011... :( LMAO Quotes:

Spoiler (Click to View)

I beat my brother in an anime style way but i then found out that u cant use quick plays from your hand on your opponents turn.

Did you have duel disks? Or were you on motorcycles?

How do you make a evil Scorpio 100df and what parts do you need[/i]

seriously, just stop being so damn lazy.

purple ponies

Name: Seniel hatakashi
Nationality: American
Personality: Energetic, Friendly, Loyal, and Good humored, tempered
Age: 12
Team: none
Bey: Gravitate Pegasus (or spaţiu) AMGB 159 (Armored Magnetic Gravity Bowl) CS

ahem
what are you doing?

Name: Kastu Katsume
Nationality: American
Personality: Energetic, Friendly, Loyal, and Good humored
Age: 15
Team: none
Bey: Lunar Raven (or Corus) AMGB 155 (Armored Magnetic Gravity Bowl) CS

My biggest phobia is... wait for it... Dark Wolf.

Lol
Its to much strength to handle. Lol

Part of the day:

Spoiler (Click to View)

BD145 (Boost Disk 145)
* Weight: 8 grams

BD145 shares a similar trait with its partner Hell, in that, like Hell is one of the widest Metal Wheels ever released, BD145 is the widest Track ever. This Track is unique both because of its width and also its ability to change modes. Changing modes is similar to how it is done with SW145, however this time, instead of removing the changeable part from the bottom and flipping it, it is removed from the top and then flipped. BD145 has two modes:

* Normal Mode

In Normal Mode the "Boost Disk" sits lower on the Track, which causes most Beyblades to scrape the Beystadium floor easily due to the three downward facing protrusions. However, when using a taller Bottom such as RF, this tendency is lessened somewhat, and the wide diameter of BD145, while it is not able to necessarily provide Smash Attack, it assists in "pushing" the opposing Beyblade out of the Beystadium.

* Boost Mode

Boost Mode works exclusively in combination with Hell. The three upward facing protrusions on BD145 go past the bottom of the Metal Wheel into the gaps of Hell itself and unlike Normal Mode, there is absolutely no space between the Metal Wheel and Boost Disk. This mode has proven to be incredibly effective in Stamina, Defense, and even Attack customizations.
Use in Attack Customizations

Somewhat surprisingly, BD145 found use in Attack customizations such as MF Lightning L-Drago BD145LRF. The increased diameter allowed by BD145 makes it easier to strike the opposing Beyblade, and in combination with the high Smash Attack of Lightning L-Drago and the speed of LRF, this combination is deadly.
Use in Defense Customizations

BD145 is the heaviest Track available, and that along with the fact that it almost completely nullifies low Attackers makes it one of the best Defense Tracks available. It can be used in the custom MF-H Basalt Kerbecs BD145CS/MB.
Use in Balance Customization

Along with having great Stamina, the combo MF Hell Bull/Kerbecs BD145CS (Boost Mode) also has good Defense against Attackers which will be partially neutralized by both the wide, plastic "Boost Disk", and the rubber surrounding the sharp tip of CS.

Thank you Beywiki!

Yeah, some questions are quite confusing. Like, in the beginning of my story, the protagonist's mother is killed. But the question says, "Does the character have a depressing past?" Well, no, it's a depressing present.

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Seth from my book that i am writing got a 10. I took me forever.

My character got 3.

Made some adjustments to Chapter 1 of Beyblade VS Battle Strikers

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"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

Hah, I just noticed that I've never do e a 3rd
person perspective in a story. Would you guys say that's harder or easier? Think I wanna give it a shot...

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"Life isn't about how hard you can hit;
it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
{[YT]} [|BEYBLOG|] (â—ŠSoG-My Bookâ—Š)/<DA>\

I'm not a fan of 3rd person perspective. But you know what I want to try? Present tense. Looks interesting.

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"Yeah we're all going the same way down. I'm just trying to write it all down." - The Airborne Toxic Event

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hey guys i need your help, i need people to get this link: http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-New-stor...g-your-way and vote on it, so can people please put this in their signature? also nice idea for a thread, pretty clever idea.

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Start by putting it in your own signature? Just a thought.

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"Yeah we're all going the same way down. I'm just trying to write it all down." - The Airborne Toxic Event

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Hah, I just noticed that I've never do e a 3rd
person perspective in a story. Would you guys say that's harder or easier?
Think I wanna give it a shot...

People say it's easier, but I'm not a fan of it.

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Spoiler (Click to View)

Person:"Brad, sign my launcher! Brad, sign everything I own!"
BeyBrad:"Did you see me sign that kid's shoe? He was like 'BRAD, CAN U SIGHN MAH SHOO?!' and I was like 'Yeeeaaahhh... ?'
CyberBlader27: Cant believe I missed Beyblade Crusade 2011... :( LMAO Quotes:

Spoiler (Click to View)

I beat my brother in an anime style way but i then found out that u cant use quick plays from your hand on your opponents turn.

Did you have duel disks? Or were you on motorcycles?

How do you make a evil Scorpio 100df and what parts do you need[/i]

seriously, just stop being so damn lazy.

purple ponies

Name: Seniel hatakashi
Nationality: American
Personality: Energetic, Friendly, Loyal, and Good humored, tempered
Age: 12
Team: none
Bey: Gravitate Pegasus (or spaţiu) AMGB 159 (Armored Magnetic Gravity Bowl) CS

ahem
what are you doing?

Name: Kastu Katsume
Nationality: American
Personality: Energetic, Friendly, Loyal, and Good humored
Age: 15
Team: none
Bey: Lunar Raven (or Corus) AMGB 155 (Armored Magnetic Gravity Bowl) CS

My biggest phobia is... wait for it... Dark Wolf.

Lol
Its to much strength to handle. Lol

Part of the day:

Spoiler (Click to View)

BD145 (Boost Disk 145)
* Weight: 8 grams

BD145 shares a similar trait with its partner Hell, in that, like Hell is one of the widest Metal Wheels ever released, BD145 is the widest Track ever. This Track is unique both because of its width and also its ability to change modes. Changing modes is similar to how it is done with SW145, however this time, instead of removing the changeable part from the bottom and flipping it, it is removed from the top and then flipped. BD145 has two modes:

* Normal Mode

In Normal Mode the "Boost Disk" sits lower on the Track, which causes most Beyblades to scrape the Beystadium floor easily due to the three downward facing protrusions. However, when using a taller Bottom such as RF, this tendency is lessened somewhat, and the wide diameter of BD145, while it is not able to necessarily provide Smash Attack, it assists in "pushing" the opposing Beyblade out of the Beystadium.

* Boost Mode

Boost Mode works exclusively in combination with Hell. The three upward facing protrusions on BD145 go past the bottom of the Metal Wheel into the gaps of Hell itself and unlike Normal Mode, there is absolutely no space between the Metal Wheel and Boost Disk. This mode has proven to be incredibly effective in Stamina, Defense, and even Attack customizations.
Use in Attack Customizations

Somewhat surprisingly, BD145 found use in Attack customizations such as MF Lightning L-Drago BD145LRF. The increased diameter allowed by BD145 makes it easier to strike the opposing Beyblade, and in combination with the high Smash Attack of Lightning L-Drago and the speed of LRF, this combination is deadly.
Use in Defense Customizations

BD145 is the heaviest Track available, and that along with the fact that it almost completely nullifies low Attackers makes it one of the best Defense Tracks available. It can be used in the custom MF-H Basalt Kerbecs BD145CS/MB.
Use in Balance Customization

Along with having great Stamina, the combo MF Hell Bull/Kerbecs BD145CS (Boost Mode) also has good Defense against Attackers which will be partially neutralized by both the wide, plastic "Boost Disk", and the rubber surrounding the sharp tip of CS.

Thank you Beywiki!

yea i just wanted to know if anyone would help, also whats that character thing? i've only just come back to wiritng stories, and i haven't heard of this.

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also whats that character thing?

It's a mary sue test. What is a mary sue? Just a person/character who is annoyingly amazing, can come back from the dead, is all around loved by every character, takes over as the main character, has had a terrible past, etc... Those are some examples.

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Spoiler (Click to View)

Person:"Brad, sign my launcher! Brad, sign everything I own!"
BeyBrad:"Did you see me sign that kid's shoe? He was like 'BRAD, CAN U SIGHN MAH SHOO?!' and I was like 'Yeeeaaahhh... ?'
CyberBlader27: Cant believe I missed Beyblade Crusade 2011... :( LMAO Quotes:

Spoiler (Click to View)

I beat my brother in an anime style way but i then found out that u cant use quick plays from your hand on your opponents turn.

Did you have duel disks? Or were you on motorcycles?

How do you make a evil Scorpio 100df and what parts do you need[/i]

seriously, just stop being so damn lazy.

purple ponies

Name: Seniel hatakashi
Nationality: American
Personality: Energetic, Friendly, Loyal, and Good humored, tempered
Age: 12
Team: none
Bey: Gravitate Pegasus (or spaţiu) AMGB 159 (Armored Magnetic Gravity Bowl) CS

ahem
what are you doing?

Name: Kastu Katsume
Nationality: American
Personality: Energetic, Friendly, Loyal, and Good humored
Age: 15
Team: none
Bey: Lunar Raven (or Corus) AMGB 155 (Armored Magnetic Gravity Bowl) CS

My biggest phobia is... wait for it... Dark Wolf.

Lol
Its to much strength to handle. Lol

Part of the day:

Spoiler (Click to View)

BD145 (Boost Disk 145)
* Weight: 8 grams

BD145 shares a similar trait with its partner Hell, in that, like Hell is one of the widest Metal Wheels ever released, BD145 is the widest Track ever. This Track is unique both because of its width and also its ability to change modes. Changing modes is similar to how it is done with SW145, however this time, instead of removing the changeable part from the bottom and flipping it, it is removed from the top and then flipped. BD145 has two modes:

* Normal Mode

In Normal Mode the "Boost Disk" sits lower on the Track, which causes most Beyblades to scrape the Beystadium floor easily due to the three downward facing protrusions. However, when using a taller Bottom such as RF, this tendency is lessened somewhat, and the wide diameter of BD145, while it is not able to necessarily provide Smash Attack, it assists in "pushing" the opposing Beyblade out of the Beystadium.

* Boost Mode

Boost Mode works exclusively in combination with Hell. The three upward facing protrusions on BD145 go past the bottom of the Metal Wheel into the gaps of Hell itself and unlike Normal Mode, there is absolutely no space between the Metal Wheel and Boost Disk. This mode has proven to be incredibly effective in Stamina, Defense, and even Attack customizations.
Use in Attack Customizations

Somewhat surprisingly, BD145 found use in Attack customizations such as MF Lightning L-Drago BD145LRF. The increased diameter allowed by BD145 makes it easier to strike the opposing Beyblade, and in combination with the high Smash Attack of Lightning L-Drago and the speed of LRF, this combination is deadly.
Use in Defense Customizations

BD145 is the heaviest Track available, and that along with the fact that it almost completely nullifies low Attackers makes it one of the best Defense Tracks available. It can be used in the custom MF-H Basalt Kerbecs BD145CS/MB.
Use in Balance Customization

Along with having great Stamina, the combo MF Hell Bull/Kerbecs BD145CS (Boost Mode) also has good Defense against Attackers which will be partially neutralized by both the wide, plastic "Boost Disk", and the rubber surrounding the sharp tip of CS.

Thank you Beywiki!

The mary sue test? It's basically where you answer questions about a character in your story, and at the end of it, they give you your total score. The higher the score is, the more of a Mary Sue your character is.
If you want to know more about Mary Sue's, go here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mary_Sue

Beaten by CyberBlader27

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Check out my newest stories, Lost in Darkness, and The Arsonists!

Do you like writing? Do you like to read stories? Do you like Beyblades? If the answer is yes to any of these, come visit this site! http://beybladefiction.freeforums.org/

ok i'm confused, with the test is it the lower the number the better? or the higher the better?

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Hah, I just noticed that I've never do e a 3rd
person perspective in a story. Would you guys say that's harder or easier? Think I wanna give it a shot...

I can tell you , in hong kong HKPNVE (a pokemon discus net)
There are sooooo many 3rd person writings,
so I don't think it will be very hard......?
Besides, one of my writing in the writing battle is in 3rd person.
All you have to know is the narrator knows everything, but don't explain too much.

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Let the wings of hope spread to the whole world!

New story :
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Yoku-s-s...ary-Hereos

Alright, then one more question: is there a way to be 1st person omniscient, as opposed to 3rd person omniscient?

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"Life isn't about how hard you can hit;
it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
{[YT]} [|BEYBLOG|] (â—ŠSoG-My Bookâ—Š)/<DA>\

I don't get it.
Mind describe it clearly?

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Let the wings of hope spread to the whole world!

New story :
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Yoku-s-s...ary-Hereos

Alright, then one more question: is there a way to be 1st person omniscient, as opposed to 3rd person omniscient?

Well, if your character is...God? I don't know, watching people through some sort of mystical force? Other than some supernatural way, I don't think so.