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LegendJustice · Aug. 14, 2021 1:20 AM

Nah I’m talking how I just gotta think of a way for Savage Aeolus will get destroyed

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

ColdFlames13 · Aug. 14, 2021 1:23 AM

(Aug. 14, 2021 1:20 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Nah I’m talking how I just gotta think of a way for Savage Aeolus will get destroyed

Ik. I'm saying like it took hours to make this so YOU BETTER MAKE HIM OP

LegendJustice · Aug. 14, 2021 1:25 AM

(Aug. 14, 2021 1:23 AM)ColdFlames13 Wrote:
(Aug. 14, 2021 1:20 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Nah I’m talking how I just gotta think of a way for Savage Aeolus will get destroyed

Ik. I'm saying like it took hours to make this so YOU BETTER MAKE HIM OP

If Savage is gonna break…. It’s gonna break a legend!

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

ColdFlames13 · Aug. 14, 2021 1:29 AM

(Aug. 14, 2021 1:25 AM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Aug. 14, 2021 1:23 AM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: Ik. I'm saying like it took hours to make this so YOU BETTER MAKE HIM OP

If Savage is gonna break…. It’s gonna break a legend!

R.I.P Savage... But never fear!

What actually happened:

Austin: RONIN! I HAVE AN IDEA.. BREAK MY BEY SO I CAN UPGRADE!

Ronin: O k .

(Aug. 14, 2021 1:29 AM)ColdFlames13 Wrote:
(Aug. 14, 2021 1:25 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: If Savage is gonna break…. It’s gonna break a legend!

R.I.P Savage... But never fear!

What actually happened:

Austin: RONIN! I HAVE AN IDEA.. BREAK MY BEY SO I CAN UPGRADE!

Ronin: O k .

Guess where I Stole got this from

LegendJustice · Aug. 14, 2021 1:36 AM

(Aug. 14, 2021  1:29 AM)ColdFlames13 Wrote:
(Aug. 14, 2021  1:25 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: If Savage is gonna break…. It’s gonna break a legend!

R.I.P Savage... But never fear!

What actually happened:

Austin: RONIN! I HAVE AN IDEA.. BREAK MY BEY SO I CAN UPGRADE!

Ronin: O k .

(Aug. 14, 2021  1:29 AM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: R.I.P Savage... But never fear!

What actually happened:

Austin: RONIN! I HAVE AN IDEA.. BREAK MY BEY SO I CAN UPGRADE!

Ronin: O k .

Guess where I Stole got this from

Idk

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

ColdFlames13 · Aug. 14, 2021 1:41 AM

(Aug. 14, 2021 1:36 AM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Aug. 14, 2021 1:29 AM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: R.I.P Savage... But never fear!

What actually happened:

Austin: RONIN! I HAVE AN IDEA.. BREAK MY BEY SO I CAN UPGRADE!

Ronin: O k .

Guess where I Stole got this from

Idk

bruhblade burst

LegendJustice · Aug. 14, 2021 4:58 PM

Chapter 25 is gonna be way more longer and I'm gonna add more plot and detail

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

GenesisBlader · Aug. 14, 2021 5:02 PM

(Aug. 14, 2021 4:58 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Chapter 25 is gonna be way more longer and I'm gonna add more plot and detail

nice! cant wait!

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

LegendJustice · Aug. 14, 2021 5:03 PM

Trust me I have a LOT of ideas for this cuapter!

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

LegendJustice · Aug. 17, 2021 1:43 AM

Chapter 25 Wants To Be A Superstar!

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"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

GenesisBlader · Aug. 17, 2021 1:50 AM

(Aug. 17, 2021 1:43 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Chapter 25 Wants To Be A Superstar!

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Chapter 25: New Tournament?!

~A Plane Lands In An American Airport~

Jacob: We're finally here!

Satsu: Finally, Shun your leg was in my face!

Shun: Sorry, I wanted to stretch...

Ruckus: Guys, calm down let's head to the Arena and register!

Jacob: Okay, let's go ahead and go!
~Jacob And The Gang Head To The Arena~

Receptionist: Hello, so what's your name?

Jacob: I'm Jacob!

Receptionist: And are your friends here, Shun, Ruckus & Satsu?

Jacob: Yup!

Receptionist: Alright, |The Receptionist starts typing down| You have been registered! We'll have someone lead you to your dorms.

All: Thanks!

|They all start roaming around the Arena|

Jacob: Hey Satsu! Wanna explore with me?

Satsu: What have a got to lose? Where do you wanna go first?

Jacob: It seems like there's a small training room over there! We can go train!

|Satsu starts having flashbacks|

Satsu: You actually beat me!

Jacob: Of course I did! Now, will you join the Ace Vols?

Satsu: Only on one condition!

Jacob: What would that be?

Satsu: You help me make a Justice bey!

Jacob: Deal!

|End of flashback|

Satsu's Mind: Jacob hasn't changed at all.

Satsu: Sure, I'll take you down in a battle!

Jacob (says while running): That is if you can keep up!

Satsu: You little!

~With Shun & Ruckus~

Shun: So this place is huge, where do you wanna go?

Ruckus: A place me and Roktavor can get stronger!

Shun: dude you do know that your bey Crash Roktavor is an exact Copy of Crash Roktavor by Ranjiro Kiyama!

Ruckus: Hmm then let's make it an original!

Shun: I like the way you think, I see a workshop over there!

Ruckus: Then what are we waiting for?

~In the Workshop~

Shun: So, what are we making?

Ruckus: The plan is to make it an original right? So I figured we'd make this! |Ruckus says while holding up Roktavor|.

Shun: Alright! |Shun starts designing some time of armor| Keep talking!

|Ruckus starts talking about how he wants it in the background|

Shun: The design is ready!

Ruckus: Alright time to print this bad boy up!

Shun: WAIT!

|Ruckus Jumps In Fear|

Ruckus: DUDE! Why'd you do that?

Shun: Oh it's not loading.

Ruckus: Oh.

|They wait there awkwardly|

~With Satsu & Jacob~

Jacob: JACKAL! Drift Speed!

Jackal: *Roars*

|Jackal Speeds Crazy And Charging Towards Slayer|

Satsu: Slayer! Access Gaurd!!

|A Huge Wall Pops Out of Slayer That Blocks Jackal's attack, And Sends Jackal Flying|

Jacob: *Gasp* Where did you learn that move?!

Satsu: A girl gotta keep her secrets!

~With Shun and Ruckus~

Shun: Alright, the Printing has just begun!!!!!

~20 Minutes Later~

Ruckus: Finally done! Hurricane Roktavor! The best stamina type in the world!!! |Ruckus says while holding up Roktavor|

Shun: We'll see about that!

|Jacob & Satsu Walk In|

Jacob: Satsu I'm telling you that win was a fluke!

Satsu: Say that Slayer!!

Shun: Uh, we're about to battle here take your couple problems else we're!!

Jacob & Satsu: COUPLE? SHAME ON YOU, WERE NOTHING LIKE EACH OTHER!!!!!

Ruckus: Speak for yourself! Now Shun will you help me try out Hurricane Roktavor?

Satsu & Jacob: Hurricane Roktavor?

Shun: Yeah, Ruckus evolved his Beyblade!

Jacob: This will be an amazing match!

|Just Then Someone Announce Ruckus|

Ruckus: I guest I have a match, see y'all later!

All (Except Ruckus): Later!

Ruckus's Mind: Now that I evolved my bey and I didn't tell the judges I should have to upper hand in this match!

Hanami: Hello all you beautiful bladers!!!! Today we have Ruckus De La Russo!!!

|Ruckus Walks on the Stage|

Ruckus: We're gonna win!!!

Hanami: and his opponent! Jio Darkside!

Jio: The Darkness will consume you!

Ruckus: Are you on drugs?

|The Crowd Laughs|

Hanami: Let's not take things too far!

Referee: First Battle. Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Ruckus & Jio: Let It Rip!!!!

(Ruckus and Jio do Justice Launches)

Hanami: Amazing Justice launches!!

Jio: Joker! Demon Wisdom...

|Joker's Avatar Comes Out Like A Red Devil|

Hanami: WOAH!

Ruckus: Duel Typhoon!!

|Roktavor Creates A Defense Tornado|

Jio: You think that's gonna work?

Ruckus: Yup!!

Jio: Gyro Darker!

|Joker Speeds around Roktavor Creating a Tornado in a Tornado|

Ruckus's Mind: That move was supposed the work, how did he?

Jio: Joker, summon the darkness!

|Jio's Resonance Aura flares up, Joker's avatar burst out of it, and it sends Roktavor flying|

Hanami: WOAH! Joker sends Roktavor flying!

Ruckus: I'm taking you down even if I die!

Jio: Don't make promises you can't keep!

Referee: Second battle. Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Ruckus & Jio: Let It Rip!
(Both bladers do Justice launches)

Jio: Fly Dark!

|Joker jumps in the air, and lands on Roktavor|

Hanami: Woah!!! What will Roktavor do?

Ruckus: Get out of there!

|Roktavor goes to the center|

Ruckus: This is the last and final move I'll use on you, Hurricane
Center!!

|Roktavor burst out of the Bey, and the wings start creating a huge Typhoon, Joker goes in for an attack but the Typhoon is too huge and sends Joker flying and burst|

Jio: *Gasp*

Ruckus: *smiles* Next time, think before you act!

|The crowd roars|

Referee: It's Roktavor with a burst finish, with a score of 2-0 Ruckus De la Russo wins!

Hanami: WHAT. AN. AMAZING. BATTLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! We just saw the burst of a lifetime!!

Jio: You are strong, next time I promise I will destroy you!

Ruckus: Don't keep promises you can't keep!

Crowd: OOOOOHHHHHHH!!!!

Hanami: RUCKUS JUST USED JIO'S WORDS AGAINST HIM!!!

Ruckus: *smiles*

nice episode, i enjoyed it!

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

LegendJustice · Aug. 17, 2021 5:40 AM

Chapter 26 could make you cry and A beybade that starts with A gets destroyed

ColdFlames13 It's show time!

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Hollowmind13 · Aug. 17, 2021 11:16 AM

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What a fast printer you got there. 20 minutes...

Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st

LegendJustice · Aug. 17, 2021 5:22 PM

(Aug. 17, 2021 11:16 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
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Shun: Alright, the Printing has just begun!!!!!

~20 Minutes Later~

Ruckus: Finally done!
What a fast printer you got there. 20 minutes...

What can I say Shun has perks….

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

UnseenBurst · Aug. 17, 2021 5:23 PM

(Aug. 17, 2021 5:22 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Aug. 17, 2021 11:16 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
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Shun: Alright, the Printing has just begun!!!!!

~20 Minutes Later~

Ruckus: Finally done!
What a fast printer you got there. 20 minutes...

What can I say Shun has perks….

20 Minutes?! Anyways cool chapter!

The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

LegendJustice · Aug. 17, 2021 5:23 PM

(Aug. 17, 2021 5:23 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Aug. 17, 2021 5:22 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: What can I say Shun has perks….

20 Minutes?! Anyways cool chapter!

Thanks!

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

ColdFlames13 · Aug. 17, 2021 10:26 PM

(Aug. 17, 2021 5:40 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Chapter 26 could make you cry and A Beyblade that starts with A gets destroyed

ColdFlames13 It's showtime!

Showime

LegendJustice · Aug. 27, 2021 10:32 PM

Short is in the house!

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"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably