Trickster:
Plot - 15 points
Grammar - 15 points
Atmosphere - 15 points
Character Development - 15 points
Vocabulary - 18 points
Total: 78
Not bad, just not good. I would have given a higher score for plot had I actually been able to follow it.
SaintBlader:
Plot - 18 points
Grammar - 19 points
Atmosphere - 20 points
Character Development - 15 points
Vocabulary - 20 points (Awesome usage of scienfitic-knowhow in there)
Total: 92
Well. That was a good read, short but a good read. Character dev could be better, and plot could be a bit more drawn out and complex
NDS:
Plot - 20 points
Grammar - 20 points
Atmosphere - 20 points
Character Development - 20 points
Vocabulary - 20 points
Total: 100
Stop making me so freaking antsy. Great work as usual. Plot could use a touch of ease in terms of following it.
DK:
Plot - 13 points
Grammar - 17 points
Atmosphere - 15 points
Character Development - 15 points
Vocabulary - 15 points
Total: 75
Not much to say. It was too short to really show what you got.
Kira:
Plot - 15 points
Grammar - 19 points
Atmosphere - 18 points
Character Development - 19 points
Vocabulary - 19 points
Total: 90
Pretty good, just nothing wowing.
Ultra:
Plot - 20 points
Grammar - 18 points
Atmosphere - 20 points
Character Development - 20 points
Vocabulary - 18 points
Total: 96
As bad as you thought this was, it's quite solid.
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