Man. that was EPIIIIC

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Credit goes to OTHELLOG. His shop!(down here) but it's closed :(
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Free-Sig...eed-CLOSED

Thank you. Chapter 5 is nearly ready.

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Yay!!! Can't wait 2 read it!

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Bezerker of Darkness

yo dude im gonna take this and put it all together by copy and paste and then send it to you by email

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i may need help
:chiefuh:

Tips on your story
1. Everyone can't have blonde hair. It would look like u have no imagination or good ideas. U see my character has blue hair and Gingka has red hair etc.
2. Everyone can't have blue eyes either. Same thing that I told u in tip 1.
3. Make every characters different than each other except the ones already made.

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Bezerker of Darkness

yo dude im gonna take this and put it all together by copy and paste and then send it to you by email

Why would you do that?

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I just want to add on a little bit to the end of chapter 4.

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Jet finally looked up but Shadow had gone. I tried my best to comfort him but nothing I said helped.
"No, Eagle." he said to his Bey. His eyes started glowing red.
"We'll get revenge." said Jet. I tried to convince him not to but he had his mind set for revenge. His eyes never changed to their normal color.

Chapter 5 is based 2 months later.

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Hope you enjoy chapter 5. I didn't have a lot of time to work on it but here it is:

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2 MONTHS LATER

"Hurry up, Higuchi!" shouted Jet. We were only halfway up the mountain. A large building came into sight.
"That's the place." Jet shouted.
"Are you sure Jet? We've been to many places and none of them were the right place." I said, exhausted but eager to keep going.
"I'm sure this is the right place." Jet said but he didn't realize the Beys coming from all directions. We both launched our Beys. Mine was charging right through all the other Beys but Jet's was having some trouble. Suddenly, one Bey came and knocked Jet's Bey straight back at him. Now the Bey was coming straight for him.
"Go Perseus," I shouted, "Cross Black Excalibur!" Gravity Perseus raised some of the rocks and dropped them straight on the other Beys. All the Beys had disappeared.
"We're in the right place." I said, trying to cheer Jet up but he was in no mood for jokes. Once we reached the building we could see no way in. All of a sudden, the man I met in the desert, approached us. Jet took his launcher out and launched his Bey.
"Higuchi, C'mon! Why aren't you launching?"
"I left my launcher down where we battled all the other Beys." I said.
"Quickly. Go get it." Jet shouted.

I ran at full speed back up to Jet. I was hoping that I hadn't been to late. But I was.

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All character requests will be added in Chapter 6 and 7.

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I got a character.
Name: Akune Okita
Hair:black
Bey:Burn Libra ED145 RF (Balance and Stamina type)
Special Moves:Burning Tornado.When the beyblade is about to lose all its stamina it boosts the stamina half way so it wont fall yet. Sand Spin track.ED145(spin track)turns into sand and gets a little bit bigger than the bey and when the opponent's bey attacks the spin track sand will go all over the bey and will slow it down.
Skin color:tan
Eye color:light blue
Personalitymart,Quiet,Competitive
Clothes:A white Tee with his name on the front signed by other people.Blue Jeans.Blue Wristband if he sweats.Black High tops Converse.Slanted Red Belt with a skull in the front.

Accepted but I might change a few things.

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ok and theres another personality i forgotvil.Can u also make him be part of the the Darkness bladers?

Ok. He might be in chapter 6 or 7.

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When will it be released? And GREAT story!

Thank you. I'm very busy these days so maybe tomorrow or Saturday.

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Can i Request a character
Nameorikore
Bey:Raze Fox BD230CS
Appereance:Black hair with red highlights. Black puffy no sleeve shirt. Dark jeans.
Personality:Brave and takes lots of chances in battles,
Skin color:Tan
Eyes:green

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I have a character request

It is a boy
Name: Hoozuki Amias
Clothes: Black Tank Top, Blue Jeans, sandals
Eye Color: yellow
Hair Color: Purple, covers his left eye
Beyblade: Fang Kerbecs R145D
Personality: Friendly (except to the darkness bladers)
Special Move: Triple Fang Strike, Kerbecs' spin track glows, Cerberus bit beast appears and all thhree heads strike oponent

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I forgot one thing about my character beyblade gear: Rev up launcher, Grey launcher grip, Angle compus

All Accepted. I can only take a few more character requests.

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Ok I hope this one gets in
Name: Kyro Kiba
Gender: Male
Personality: Very Jolly but has a more serious side
Bey: Beat Fox 145MF (Balance)
Special move: Killing Claw
Deals damage at the opponent... But deals damage to itself too.
Wears a purple and black T-shirt and wears black pants with white sneakers.
Oh and and awesome story!!!

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Great Scott! Signature made by me finally!
"That's what they'll say to me, say to me, say to me... This One's A Fighter!" Gym Class Heroes Feat. Ryan Tedder, "The Fighter"

Call me Septy, if my name's too long; Read my stories: Shadows of The Condemned, The Lost Birthday and The Crimson Winter

Accepted. I am currently not taking anymore requests.

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Sorry I wasn't here for the last week. Nice story! Chapter 5 was short yet interesting. It says Jet has a bey... Hmm... YAY!

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Youtube! l MA Bladers! l FiNal DrivE! l BlueBomberForums! l Dragon Adopters!

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Person:"Brad, sign my launcher! Brad, sign everything I own!"
BeyBrad:"Did you see me sign that kid's shoe? He was like 'BRAD, CAN U SIGHN MAH SHOO?!' and I was like 'Yeeeaaahhh... ?'
CyberBlader27: Cant believe I missed Beyblade Crusade 2011... :( LMAO Quotes:

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I beat my brother in an anime style way but i then found out that u cant use quick plays from your hand on your opponents turn.

Did you have duel disks? Or were you on motorcycles?

How do you make a evil Scorpio 100df and what parts do you need[/i]

seriously, just stop being so damn lazy.

purple ponies

Name: Seniel hatakashi
Nationality: American
Personality: Energetic, Friendly, Loyal, and Good humored, tempered
Age: 12
Team: none
Bey: Gravitate Pegasus (or spaţiu) AMGB 159 (Armored Magnetic Gravity Bowl) CS

ahem
what are you doing?

Name: Kastu Katsume
Nationality: American
Personality: Energetic, Friendly, Loyal, and Good humored
Age: 15
Team: none
Bey: Lunar Raven (or Corus) AMGB 155 (Armored Magnetic Gravity Bowl) CS

My biggest phobia is... wait for it... Dark Wolf.

Lol
Its to much strength to handle. Lol

Part of the day:

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BD145 (Boost Disk 145)
* Weight: 8 grams

BD145 shares a similar trait with its partner Hell, in that, like Hell is one of the widest Metal Wheels ever released, BD145 is the widest Track ever. This Track is unique both because of its width and also its ability to change modes. Changing modes is similar to how it is done with SW145, however this time, instead of removing the changeable part from the bottom and flipping it, it is removed from the top and then flipped. BD145 has two modes:

* Normal Mode

In Normal Mode the "Boost Disk" sits lower on the Track, which causes most Beyblades to scrape the Beystadium floor easily due to the three downward facing protrusions. However, when using a taller Bottom such as RF, this tendency is lessened somewhat, and the wide diameter of BD145, while it is not able to necessarily provide Smash Attack, it assists in "pushing" the opposing Beyblade out of the Beystadium.

* Boost Mode

Boost Mode works exclusively in combination with Hell. The three upward facing protrusions on BD145 go past the bottom of the Metal Wheel into the gaps of Hell itself and unlike Normal Mode, there is absolutely no space between the Metal Wheel and Boost Disk. This mode has proven to be incredibly effective in Stamina, Defense, and even Attack customizations.
Use in Attack Customizations

Somewhat surprisingly, BD145 found use in Attack customizations such as MF Lightning L-Drago BD145LRF. The increased diameter allowed by BD145 makes it easier to strike the opposing Beyblade, and in combination with the high Smash Attack of Lightning L-Drago and the speed of LRF, this combination is deadly.
Use in Defense Customizations

BD145 is the heaviest Track available, and that along with the fact that it almost completely nullifies low Attackers makes it one of the best Defense Tracks available. It can be used in the custom MF-H Basalt Kerbecs BD145CS/MB.
Use in Balance Customization

Along with having great Stamina, the combo MF Hell Bull/Kerbecs BD145CS (Boost Mode) also has good Defense against Attackers which will be partially neutralized by both the wide, plastic "Boost Disk", and the rubber surrounding the sharp tip of CS.

Thank you Beywiki!

I forgot to mention his Bey...
Midnight Eagle 85 XF

He decided to change his performance tip.

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Read the comment I made:

http://beybladefiction.freeforums.org/cr...-t104.html

As it says, it is extremely bland, you jump right into a dull battle which gives no scenery description. The battle is over before the scenario is introduced. We want more depth!

If you want, you can read my battle scenes (link in sig). http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-The-Wild...acters-ATM

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Thank you for your opinion. I will do my best to make it better.

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Hope you like Chapter 6.

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Jet was lying on the ground with a small nosebleed. He seemed to be unconscious but my anger and pain made me not pay any attention. There was not a person in sight. But I all I really wanted to do now was to get revenge on all of the darkness bladers. The weather suddenly turned against me. I had to drag Jet down the hill and we found a large cave in the side of the hill that seemed perfect for resting in.

It took him a while to regain consciousness again.
"It's nice to see ya again, Pal." I said to Jet unaware of his confused face.
"What I miss?" He said sarcastically, "So where is Midnight Eagle?" Then it struck me. I had left his Bey there when I pulled him down.
I was stuck for words.
"Emm... Well you see..." I said, not knowing what else to say. "I think it is..." I left a pause there just so I could prepare for the anger. "On top of the hill."

It was a couple of minutes before Jet could get his mind around it. He was worried that he might have lost his Bey again. He never wanted it to happen again.
"Lets go then!" He shouted.

We were halfway up the hill when we were approached by a tall thin teenager about 16. He grabbed his black launcher grip with a metallic green string launcher. The string had had black launcher rubber with a green Bey-pointer. He prepared to launch.

His skin was fair and had clots of dirt. His hair was messy and dirty and it was a very shiny blonde. He was wearing a dirty green T-Shirt that looked like it was never washed. He was also wearing denim jeans with dirty white tennis shoes.

"Let it Rip!" He shouted. I then grabbed my launcher.

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Haha, Rei is finally here! Can't wait to see (or read, rather) more of him.

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