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[BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (NOT Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 05, 2011 This is my first BeyStory that I have put here so I hope you enjoy it. I am also not accepting character requests. Chapter 1 Spoiler (Click to View) RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - BillyBlast - Jul. 05, 2011 It's OK I guess though I think it was 1.Short 2.Quick with no intro 3.Pretty Random RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - CyberBlader27 - Jul. 05, 2011 (Jul. 05, 2011 9:21 PM)BillyBlast Wrote: It's OK I guess though I think it was 4.With a few grammar errors RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 05, 2011 Chapter 2 Spoiler (Click to View) RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - MakaCHOP! - Jul. 05, 2011 Not bad...I like it! But as billyblast said it is random. RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 05, 2011 Thank you. Chapter 3 should be posted maybe tomorrow or Thursday. Anyone got any character requests before I start? RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - CyberBlader27 - Jul. 05, 2011 Wait one sec, gotta dig up an old character request...Well, so, here we go! Name: Jet Sai Hair: Black Eyes: Red Shirt: White tee-shirt with a black Beyblade B (like Madoka) Jacket: black sweatshirt with red pocket trim, red hood inside, and red zipper Pants: Dark blue jeans Belt: Black with red eagle belt buckle Shoes: Black boots with red bottoms Bey(!): Midnight Eagle 85 F (Epic upper-attack-ness! I dunno, I like Midnight and it's good for upper.) Black metal wheel, red metal clear wheel, dark red spintrack and performance tip, black face bolt with red eagle Fun facts: Normal black launcher grip, red string launcher, black string. Red Launcher Rubber, red Grip Rubber, black Beypointer. When some one tries to hurt his friends, they get a blade to the face! Special Move: Midnight Flier! Midnight Eagle gets knocked back, he bounces back off a wall and flies into the air, delivering a tornado pushed piledriver. This is not Metal Wheel to Facebolt, more Performance Tip to Facebolt. Brave and powerful, Jet says the most important thing of all is...THE BLADER'S SPIRIT!!! Almost says "Go! Eagle!" as much as Gingka says "PEGASUS!!!!!!" RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 05, 2011 Accepted! Thanks for the Character. He can be the main character's friend. RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - CyberBlader27 - Jul. 05, 2011 YAY!!! That's always the best position (besides villian)! But at this point, you have a villian, sooo yay! RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 06, 2011 This is based 1 year later Spoiler (Click to View) RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - CyberBlader27 - Jul. 07, 2011 I love it! Can't wait to see Jet battle. Oh, and by hood inside, I meant like the inside of his sweatshirt hood RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Sparx000 - Jul. 07, 2011 Name:Unknown(Most call him "shadow of the west" because of his american voice when/if he talks) Bey:Unknown Shadow S100 G Looks:He has blue eyes, blonde hair and very pale skin.(But he mostly coveres his face with his cloak)He has a black hooded cloak, kind of like a grim reaper. Personallity ![]() Dark move ![]() RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 07, 2011 OK. I'll add him onto to chapter 4 RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 07, 2011 Please enjoy Chapter 4 Spoiler (Click to View) RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - CyberBlader27 - Jul. 08, 2011 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 08, 2011 Don't worry, Jet will be back. He wants to seek revenge. RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Iakou - Jul. 08, 2011 Cool, can't wait to see jet's return RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Sparx000 - Jul. 08, 2011 WOW.You did more with my character than I could have!It's always nice to see a writer who dosent godmod himself. RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 08, 2011 *Godmod*? What does that mean? RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Sparx000 - Jul. 08, 2011 Godmod is when you make a character who is as powerful as a god. e.g: Name:Killersaurus Bey ![]() S.M ![]() He never loses! That would be a godmod RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 08, 2011 Ok. Chapter 5 should be posted maybe tomorrow or Sunday. Anymore requests? RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Primal - Jul. 08, 2011 I'd like to request a character, if I can. Name: Rei Yumiya Bey: Vulcan Unicorno 90XF (Special Move: Impaling Strike; Unicorno stops moving, builds up speed, and charges into the opponent's Bey.) Appearance: Fair skin, icy blue eyes, medium-length dirty blonde hair, dark green shirt with a black jacket, denim jeans, and white tennis shoes. Blading gear: Black Launcher Grip, metallic green Beylauncher w/ black Launcher Rubber, green Bey Pointer, and Metal Assist. Personality: Extremely motivated and competitive, absentminded at times, kind of a loudmouth, an overall a good-hearted person. EDIT: Rei is a male, BTW. ![]() RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 08, 2011 Accepted. I will add it to Chapter 5. RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Smart Blader - Jul. 09, 2011 I've got one. Name: Sars Noxwell Beyblade: Heaven L-drago. He got the fusion wheel heaven from inside a rock that shot down from the sky. Performance tip stamina spike, its so sharp it leaves tracks, spin track is lightning zinger that attracts electrical charges. Eyes:Yellow Hair: Sky blue low cut and very shiny Skin color: Cream Clothes: Yellow and black sleeveless shirt that has golden writing saying let it rip. White shorts with black socks and white shoes with lightning bolts on them. With a golden chain saying S for Sars and dirty raps on each arm at the bottom. Special Move: Sars has a light move called light beam of judgement. His bey rubs against the opponent and sends them flying then L-drago floats into the air in a twisting motion then comes down on you in a form of a light beam and it puts a giant hole in the stadium. Bey gear: White launcher, yellow rip cord thats shaped like lightning. Personality: Serious, nice in a cool way, prankster, confident, and conceded. RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 09, 2011 Accepted. He will be in Chapter 6 or 7. |