PLZ! PLZ BROH I WAN MAKE A CHAR RECUEST AND RIGHT YAH STRY 4 U!

Enough kidding. On to the meat:

1. A lot of dialogue. Descriptions, transitions! Where they at?!

2. This story moves way too fast. Slow. It. Down. And. Take. Your. Time...

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"Life isn't about how hard you can hit;
it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
{[YT]} [|BEYBLOG|] (â—ŠSoG-My Bookâ—Š)/<DA>\

O.o Okay uh Sparta is it okay to be confused? How are you gonna right my story and 2. uh character request and 3. Uh i think its pretty details (other then the fact idc how my work ends up sometimes O.o lol)

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Why I cant buy stuff from people's shops due to Addres giving
Re-creation
O.o <----------- GET OVER HERE
Me OH S@$!