(Nov. 02, 2021 4:19 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: [ -> ]Also congrats unseen for participating in a tournament for the first time also you got decent br points
Thanks but this isn't exactly the right place to congratulate me, this is DeltaZakuro's Fanfic area so please don't post on it unless you're talking about the fanfic
Coming Chapters
Chapter 26: A New Shu, Spriggans Retribution!!
Chapter 27: Triple Threat! Battle Royale!!
Chapter 28: The Battle At Sunset!!
Chapter 29: Decisive Battle: Athena VS Lane!!
Chapter 30: Fierce Showdown! Aiga VS Lane!!
Why I submitted the Valkyrie evolution is because I thought it would be interesting if lane broke Valkyrie since Valt is the #1 ranked blader in the legends
(Nov. 02, 2021 11:58 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: [ -> ]Why I submitted the Valkyrie evolution is because I thought it would be interesting if lane broke Valkyrie since Valt is the #1 ranked blader in the legends
Thing is, Lane has already destroyed Valkyrie in a recent episode (Episode 20 I believe it was) and Valt simply just repaired Brave Valkyrie. Like I already stated, Valkyrie evolving is meaningless in this story (hence why I deleted the post for a "new" Spriggan)
So the new chapter is gonna be delayed a little bit as my Wifi is down (im on a phone with about 4 bars of service) so new Chapter will be delayed for a little while until my wifi comes back.
This applies to all my Fanfictions.
Internet has been restored at my house so now i can start writing again. New Chapter will hopefully be out sometime this week
Chapter 28 will be renamed to "Decisive Battle On The High Seas: Athena VS Lane!!"
Chapter 29 is "A Champions Legacy"
Story Of Lanes Sister Season 2 Chapter 28: Decisive Battle On The High Seas: Athena VS Lane!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1152727663-story...lade-burst
Upcoming Chapters
Chapter 29: Athenas Resolve! Sovereign Adeona!!
Chapter 30: A Champions Legacy!!
Chapter 31: Full Powered Mastery! Athena's New Flare!!
Chapter 32: The Greatest Battle Royale Ever!
Chapter 33: The New Beys Of The Sun! Hyperion And Helios!!
Chapter 34: The Bonds That We Share!
Chapter 35: The Dark Prince Of The Black Sun! Dark Matter Lucifer!!
Sovereign Adeona.Barrage.8A
Sovereign Ring (Sv) - A Right Spin Sparking Ring that has 4 large and thick blades that have rubber for absorbing and dealing strong attacks. It also has 4 smaller blades for dealing follow up attacks.
Adeona IV (Ad4) - Unlike its Dual Spin Predecessors, Adeona IV is a right spin only chip that features an Adeona motif. The chip has Metal in it followed by a blue metal chip Core, the chip also features a Burst Stopper just like Belial2
8A Chassis - An attack single chassis that features a sharp design and a very heavy weight
Barrage' Driver (Ba') - A driver with an integrated disk built into it. The driver has a POM semi flat as a primary contact point on a Strong launch. When the bey slows down, two tabs retract and the semi flat tip retracts to a rubber plate which resembles Almights tip which makes the bey more mobile and fast
User: Athena Valhalla
Special Moves: Sovereign Symphony, Barrage Dance
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Dark Matter Lucifer.Dropper
Dark Matter Lucifer Layer (dLc) - A right spin layer with a Lucifer motif. The layer is incredibly bulky and a similar shape to a right spin Dread base with 2 trident like contact points that resemble that of Lucifer The End. The gimmick is when on a strong shoot, 2 cyan colored blades will extend and it activates burst stoppers. The layer also features 2 symmetrical metal blades on it and it has a metal center.
Dropper Driver (Dp) a Fused driver that has a very heavy weight featuring a ball tip which is shaped exactly like Massive but made of metal which is surrounded by a POM Ring which is separated from the ball, The gimmick is when on a strong shoot; The POM Ring is locked and is stationary and when the bey starts to slow down , the ring is dropped and is free spin. The driver also has pretty tight spring which makes the bey nearly unburstable. The ring is simply pushed back up and it locks into place to reset the gimmick.
Owner: Lane Valhalla
Special Moves: Dark Matter Shield, Dark Matter Slash, Dark Matter Dropper
Coming Chapters
Chapter 31: Full Powered Mastery! A Battle On A Stormy Night!!
Chapter 32: Devoted Spirits! Tag Battle!!
Chapter 33: Prince Of The Black Sun! Dark Matter Lucifer!!
Chapter 34: Be Strong! The Princess Of The Sun Of Light Rises!!
Chapter 35: Explosive Battle! Bonds Of Legends!
Chapter 36: The Grand Event! Legends Reunited!!
Chapter 37: Explosive Attack! Spark-Drive System!!
Chapter 38: A Grand Revolution! Battle Royale!!
Story Of Lanes Sister Season 2 Chapter 31: Full Powered Mastery! A Battle On A Stormy Night!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1153973989-story...lade-burst
Season 2 OP 2 coming soon. Title is called "Finding My Reasons Why"
Story Of Lanes Sister Season 2 Opening #2: Finding My Reasons Why (FULL SONG)
[Chorus]
Finding my reasons why, I'm learning to be strong
Take my hand and I'll come along
I feel my head start to spin at all of the muddy flashbacks
My hands are shaking and I feel my heart start to tense
Cause of something worth grabbing hold of
And that's all I've got
I smell the scent of the day and night
Even when I'm staring at the sky
I've started seeing that I can only really change myself
And that's all I've got
[Verse 1]
Dreams that you can't erase no matter what!
The present is unstoppable
You love someone, then you become much stronger than you were
I'd like to thank my happiness and joy
Learned why I lost when I was beaten up
The people around me won't let up
So I will let this crimson lotus bloom
And I will shine the fate
[Chorus]
Finding my reasons why, I'm learning to be strong
Take my hand and I'll come along
I feel my head start to spin at all of the muddy flashbacks
My hands are shaking and I feel my heart start to tense
Cause of something worth grabbing hold of
And that's all I've got
I smell the scent of the day and night
Even when I'm staring at the sky
I've started seeing that I can only really change myself
And that's all I've got
[Verse 2]
The sound of thunder outside piercing in my ears
Is there anything that you can just protect if you never even face your fears?
You can't just be nice now
Good and evil entangled in water, hypocrites can be seen by the light
Tell me why, tell me why, tell me why, tell me, I need you!
One flower continues in the struggle to blossom
It's more beautiful than love!
Dreams that you can't erase no matter what!
The present is unstoppable
You love someone, then you become much stronger than you were
Just never give up on all of your dreams
Learned why I lost when I was beaten up
The world around me won't let up
So I will let this crimson lotus bloom
Its roots in my heart, where it bleeds
[Chorus]
Finding my reasons why, I'm learning to be strong
Take my hand and I'll come along
I feel my head start to spin at all of the muddy flashbacks
My hands are shaking and I feel my heart start to tense
Cause of something worth grabbing hold of
And that's all I've got
I smell the scent of the day and night
Even when I'm staring at the sky
I've started seeing that I can only really change myself
And that's all I've got
Finding my reasons why, I'm learning to be strong
Take my hand and I'll come along
I feel my head start to spin at all of the muddy flashbacks
My hands are shaking and I feel my heart start to tense
Cause of something worth grabbing hold of
And that's all I've got
I smell the scent of the day and night
Even when I'm staring at the sky
I've started seeing that I can only really change myself
And that's all I've got
Finding My Reasons Why, I'm learning to be strong
Take My Hand and I'll come along.
[Song Ends]
Instruments Used in this song: Piano, Violin, Guitar, Drums
Animation Scenes
1. Athena in front of the Sparking Legend Tour Cruise Ship
2. Wakiya, Chiki and Hikaru and Hyuga (the Throwaway characters)
3. Athena launching her bey and bursting through Valkyrie, Spriggan and Achilles.
4. Athena above the White Sun with Adeona behind and and jabs her sword towards the viewer as the bey follows suit
5. Scene of all the Legends together
6. Shu Kurenai in a city like setting with his eyes and scar glowing and Aiga with the Achilles avatar behind him
7. Athena VS Lane
8. Lane holding a purple flame in its hand as he closes it and it turns into his bey and he spreads the wings of a demon
9. Athena emerges from white fire and she, Lane and the Legends hold up their beys.
Thoughts? Opinions?
(Nov. 20, 2021 3:30 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]S2 Chapter 33
https://www.wattpad.com/1156027197-story...lade-burst
pretty decent chapter! im proud to say that this 8x7-9+3-10+10-48x42=84th episode was a blast to read and it was pretty obvious that lane was gonna win (not saying its plot armor just saying as in its literally the 33rd episode) but it still amused me to watch it! also loved the enthusiastic interactions between the asahi bros and athena and also loved the battle! also the last predicament for next episode makes me insanely hyped for the next episode! keep up the good work DZ!
(Nov. 19, 2021 6:53 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]Season 2 OP 2 coming soon. Title is called "Finding My Reasons Why"
Story Of Lanes Sister Season 2 Opening #2: Finding My Reasons Why (FULL SONG)
[Chorus]
Finding my reasons why, I'm learning to be strong
Take my hand and I'll come along
I feel my head start to spin at all of the muddy flashbacks
My hands are shaking and I feel my heart start to tense
Cause of something worth grabbing hold of
And that's all I've got
I smell the scent of the day and night
Even when I'm staring at the sky
I've started seeing that I can only really change myself
And that's all I've got
[Verse 1]
Dreams that you can't erase no matter what!
The present is unstoppable
You love someone, then you become much stronger than you were
I'd like to thank my happiness and joy
Learned why I lost when I was beaten up
The people around me won't let up
So I will let this crimson lotus bloom
And I will shine the fate
[Chorus]
Finding my reasons why, I'm learning to be strong
Take my hand and I'll come along
I feel my head start to spin at all of the muddy flashbacks
My hands are shaking and I feel my heart start to tense
Cause of something worth grabbing hold of
And that's all I've got
I smell the scent of the day and night
Even when I'm staring at the sky
I've started seeing that I can only really change myself
And that's all I've got
[Verse 2]
The sound of thunder outside piercing in my ears
Is there anything that you can just protect if you never even face your fears?
You can't just be nice now
Good and evil entangled in water, hypocrites can be seen by the light
Tell me why, tell me why, tell me why, tell me, I need you!
One flower continues in the struggle to blossom
It's more beautiful than love!
Dreams that you can't erase no matter what!
The present is unstoppable
You love someone, then you become much stronger than you were
Just never give up on all of your dreams
Learned why I lost when I was beaten up
The world around me won't let up
So I will let this crimson lotus bloom
Its roots in my heart, where it bleeds
[Chorus]
Finding my reasons why, I'm learning to be strong
Take my hand and I'll come along
I feel my head start to spin at all of the muddy flashbacks
My hands are shaking and I feel my heart start to tense
Cause of something worth grabbing hold of
And that's all I've got
I smell the scent of the day and night
Even when I'm staring at the sky
I've started seeing that I can only really change myself
And that's all I've got
Finding my reasons why, I'm learning to be strong
Take my hand and I'll come along
I feel my head start to spin at all of the muddy flashbacks
My hands are shaking and I feel my heart start to tense
Cause of something worth grabbing hold of
And that's all I've got
I smell the scent of the day and night
Even when I'm staring at the sky
I've started seeing that I can only really change myself
And that's all I've got
Finding My Reasons Why, I'm learning to be strong
Take My Hand and I'll come along.
[Song Ends]
Instruments Used in this song: Piano, Violin, Guitar, Drums
Animation Scenes
1. Athena in front of the Sparking Legend Tour Cruise Ship
2. Wakiya, Chiki and Hikaru and Hyuga (the Throwaway characters)
3. Athena launching her bey and bursting through Valkyrie, Spriggan and Achilles.
4. Athena above the White Sun with Adeona behind and and jabs her sword towards the viewer as the bey follows suit
5. Scene of all the Legends together
6. Shu Kurenai in a city like setting with his eyes and scar glowing and Aiga with the Achilles avatar behind him
7. Athena VS Lane
8. Lane holding a purple flame in its hand as he closes it and it turns into his bey and he spreads the wings of a demon
9. Athena emerges from white fire and she, Lane and the Legends hold up their beys.
Thoughts? Opinions?
I personally think this is good. Its a song grounded in reality — the imagery, as if attentive to the surroundings and its whereabouts; and the literal phrases that emphasize Athena’s emotions. This theme song conveys the fanfic’s ongoing theme of emotions and gathering strength, and the lyrics show just that. Awesome job
Next Episode is gonna be pretty sick, also probably going to be my longest chapter yet which will hopefully exceed 3,000 Words.