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new chapter will be worked on when i get home. will try to have it out sometime this weekend.
Preview From The New Chapter
Full chapter tomorrow?
If Ranjiro wins this is by far the most unexpected fanfiction ever. I’m wishing Rantaro will win but since Lane is related to the protagonist.....
Lane- Black Sun
Rago- True Black Sun
New chapter has been finished. I'll have it copy/pasted here shortly.
Great chapter
Chapter 9
(Dec. 07, 2020  12:14 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 9

Sad Ranjiro noises
Can we make characters to be in this or not?
(Dec. 07, 2020  2:02 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]Can we make characters to be in this or not?
No the contest ended a month ago but there might be one more contest next season of DeltaZakuros story.
(Dec. 07, 2020  2:12 AM)Darkus/Flasher Wrote: [ -> ]
(Dec. 07, 2020  2:02 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]Can we make characters to be in this or not?
No the contest ended a month ago but there might be one more contest next season of DeltaZakuros story.
Oh rip
I don’t understand how flare is deadly. Flare takes off after the Beyblade anime in this story so I don’t quite understand how it is lethal. I get something has to be a catalyst, but I don’t think that something non-lethal being lethal just shouldn’t be the catalyst. Just my take on the story element
(Dec. 07, 2020  3:14 AM)Pikachu Sensei Wrote: [ -> ]I don’t understand how flare is deadly. Flare takes off after the Beyblade anime in this story so I don’t quite understand how it is lethal

yeah, however im gonna really expand on the whole flare thing, make it into a little more than what it actually is.
Flare is the only thing Lane eats for Breakfast, Lunch, and Dinner, and for Beyblade too.
Chapter 10: Phantom Dragon! Mirage Fafnir! Summary

with the Legend League starting in a matter of weeks, Athena trains hard. as she is training, she meets Legend Blader Free De La Hoya, another blader who seems to have a grudge against Lane.
(Dec. 07, 2020  3:22 AM) Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 10: Phantom Dragon! Mirage Fafnir! Summary

with the Legend League starting in a matter of weeks, Athena trains hard. as she is training, she meets Legend Blader Free De La Hoya, another blader who seems to have a grudge against Lane.

Lane going to get murdered when Free dies (it’s a grudge refrence if you watched the horror movie)
And you tried to cover up Ragnarok breaking with Valt vs. Xhaka? Shame. (Btw in hasbro they call him Xander that might be easier)
(Dec. 07, 2020  2:09 PM)TwistedWerewolf Wrote: [ -> ]And you tried to cover up Ragnarok breaking with Valt vs. Xhaka? Shame. (Btw in hasbro they call him Xander that might be easier)
It is stated he gets it repaired. i use Xhaka because im using japanese naming for beys so i figured to use the japanese naming too
(Dec. 07, 2020  2:20 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]
(Dec. 07, 2020  2:09 PM)TwistedWerewolf Wrote: [ -> ]And you tried to cover up Ragnarok breaking with Valt vs. Xhaka? Shame. (Btw in hasbro they call him Xander that might be easier)
It is stated he gets it repaired. i use Xhaka because im using japanese naming for beys so i figured to use the japanese naming too

Ok. Just so you know that first part was meant to be a joke
(Dec. 07, 2020  2:09 PM)TwistedWerewolf Wrote: [ -> ]And you tried to cover up Ragnarok breaking with Valt vs. Xhaka? Shame. (Btw in hasbro they call him Xander that might be easier)

Technically Xhaka is easier as it has one less letter than Xander. Took me ten years to type that word.
the next chapter will be in honor and memory of Pikachu Sensei (6Jupiter5's Niece) who just recently passed away in a Hit and Run accident. as a friend of Pikachu Sensei and 6Jupiter5, this is the best i can possibly do. RIP Pikachu Sensei, you will be missed and im sorry for your loss.
(Dec. 11, 2020  8:50 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]the next chapter will be in honor and memory of Pikachu Sensei (6Jupiter5's Niece) who just recently passed away in a Hit and Run accident. as a friend of Pikachu Sensei and 6Jupiter5, this is the best i can possibly do. RIP Pikachu Sensei, you will be missed and im sorry for your loss.

I was having such a good day till I saw this
(Dec. 12, 2020  5:39 PM)TwistedWerewolf Wrote: [ -> ]
(Dec. 11, 2020  8:50 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]the next chapter will be in honor and memory of Pikachu Sensei (6Jupiter5's Niece) who just recently passed away in a Hit and Run accident. as a friend of Pikachu Sensei and 6Jupiter5, this is the best i can possibly do. RIP Pikachu Sensei, you will be missed and im sorry for your loss.

I was having such a good day till I saw this

I saw it in the middle of the night yesterday (waiting for episode).....still very sad about the event. Pikachu Sensei was so cool Unhappy
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