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Are you having a Character Contest soon? I really wanna add a character.
(Aug. 30, 2021  6:57 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ]
Are you having a Character Contest soon? I really wanna add a character.

Unfortunately no. Chiki is the only character contest character that i allowed, Season 2 has its own set of characters (mainly returning ones) and Season 3 has pretty much Athena, Lane, The New Protags and the DB Characters (Bell, Rashad, Basara, Ranzo and Ilya)
New Chapter Coming soon, i had fun writing this one

Chapter 47: Explosion! The Crimson Champion VS The Jet-Black Sun!!
Chapter 48: Triple Suns! Athena VS Hikaru And Hyuga!!

Chapter 46
https://www.wattpad.com/1122411171-story...lade-burst
(Sep. 01, 2021  11:22 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]New Chapter Coming soon, i had fun writing this one

Chapter 47: Explosion! The Crimson Champion VS The Jet-Black Sun!!
Chapter 48: Triple Suns! Athena VS Hikaru And Hyuga!!

Chapter 46
https://www.wattpad.com/1122411171-story...lade-burst

*Squeals like a little girl* This chapter was amazing!!

Dub Names

Guide Adeona - Guardian Adeonis
Angelic Adeona - Angelica Adeonis
Adeona Heaven - Adeonis Heavenbringer
Adeona Royal - Adeonis Royalbringer
Flare Lucifer - Fire Lucius
Zone Xcalibur - Zenith Xcalius
Utopia Genesis - No change

Chapter 47
https://www.wattpad.com/1124220731-story...lade-burst
(Sep. 02, 2021  6:06 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]Dub Names

Guide Adeona - Guardian Adeonis
Angelic Adeona - Angelica Adeonis
Adeona Heaven - Adeonis Heavenbringer
Adeona Royal - Adeonis Royalbringer
Flare Lucifer - Fire Lucius
Zone Xcalibur - Zenith Xcalius
Utopia Genesis - No change

Chapter 47
https://www.wattpad.com/1124220731-story...lade-burst

Iam catching up with this fic, Iam on chapter 20 right now.
bruh athena you sussy baka bring back lane and he might just go good with season 3
The full list of DB Beys for Season 3

Chapter 48
https://www.wattpad.com/1124778943-story...lade-burst
3 more chapters left of Season 1, big things are coming.
being totally honest i think athena is maybe gonna win
(Sep. 04, 2021  2:56 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]The full list of DB Beys for Season 3

Chapter 48
https://www.wattpad.com/1124778943-story...lade-burst

(Sep. 05, 2021  2:50 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ]
(Sep. 04, 2021  2:56 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]The full list of DB Beys for Season 3

Chapter 48
https://www.wattpad.com/1124778943-story...lade-burst


UB... *sniff* just, please don't mention his name again... *sniff*

anyway, this was an epic episode and athena was being a sussy baka as always... and i sure hope that she defeats lane and teaches him a lesson or two about resonance and flare!

(*sniff* pinkrose would've been proud to see the piticall of such a great fanfic...)
(Sep. 05, 2021  2:53 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote: [ -> ]
(Sep. 05, 2021  2:50 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ]

UB... *sniff* just, please don't mention his name again... *sniff*

anyway, this was an epic episode and athena was being a sussy baka as always... and i sure hope that she defeats lane and teaches him a lesson or two about resonance and flare!

(*sniff* pinkrose would've been proud to see the piticall of such a great fanfic...)

um, by "his/him" are you referring to Pink? Pink goes by she/her.
(Sep. 05, 2021  5:56 AM)reshiwum Wrote: [ -> ]
(Sep. 05, 2021  2:53 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote: [ -> ]UB... *sniff* just, please don't mention his name again... *sniff*

anyway, this was an epic episode and athena was being a sussy baka as always... and i sure hope that she defeats lane and teaches him a lesson or two about resonance and flare!

(*sniff* pinkrose would've been proud to see the piticall of such a great fanfic...)

um, by "his/him" are you referring to Pink? Pink goes by she/her.
oh my bad
(Sep. 05, 2021  9:46 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 50
https://www.wattpad.com/1125850339-story...lade-burst

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this chapter was so epic!!!!! i cant wait for the finale!!!
Final Chapter will be out tomorrow evening, I am very excited for everyone to read it.
The Final Chapter will be out shortly but I do have some exciting news for Season 2.

- New Legends like Daina and Phi are coming
- There will be 52 Chapters instead of 38
- There will be a new tournament at the end of the season called the Sparking Tour or something along those lines.

Very excited for the things to come and I hope everyone likes it. New Chapter will be out shortly, hopefully within an hour

Season 1 Finale
https://www.wattpad.com/1125985500-story...lade-burst
(Sep. 06, 2021  8:09 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]The Final Chapter will be out shortly but I do have some exciting news for Season 2.

- New Legends like Daina and Phi are coming
- There will be 52 Chapters instead of 38
- There will be a new tournament at the end of the season called the Sparking Tour or something along those lines.

Very excited for the things to come and I hope everyone likes it. New Chapter will be out shortly, hopefully within an hour

Season 1 Finale
https://www.wattpad.com/1125985500-story...lade-burst

THIS CHAPTER WAS THE DEFINITION OF AMAZING!!!
lol this is kinda like a reference to beyblade burst turbo episode 50, nice! i'll keep reading

WOW! THIS WAS AMAZING! It was so epic, perfectly fits for a finale! great job on this season! (for some reason athena feels like a sussy baka)
(Insert Fan Boy Scream Here)

I loved this, my favorite part was definitely Heaven Symphony!

I again thank you DeltaZakuro for being Athena to all.
My long-overdue thoughts about this fanfic. Ive been reading as a "ghost" here and there, as I was a little afraid to spam your notifs with liked messages, rip. But nevertheless, Ill try to make my thoughts as short and easy-to-understand as possible

This really has to be my favorite OC fic in the Beyblade fandom. On the surface, Athena seems like another "Sibling OC" trope and ready to be ignored. But I kid nonreaders not -- Athena is one of the best sibling OCs in the Beyblade Burst fanfiction community. She has a clear motive and is not like your "energetic, happy-go-lucky protagonist who wants to befriend everyone" idea. She is clearly on a mission and her character grows as the mission progresses. She is one heck of an OC to read about and Delta evidently put in a lot of effort into her. She is a unique character and Im glad to read a story with her in it

Awesome fanfic and character. Athena is amazing
Guardian Adeona.Love.6A

Guardian Ring (Gr) - The ring features a shape very similar to that of the World wing but it's a bit more thicker and jagged as it has 4 wings that can move into different, it can basically awaken like Imperial Dragon. The ring is also Flippable like World too. Right spin looks like Guide and Left looks like Angelic.

Adeona III Chip (Ad3) - A clear Superking chip that has a similar face to Hyperion but the yellow parts are all purple and some stickers are blue. It is also Dual spin.

6A Chassis (6A) - An LR Double Chassis that has 6 blades that look like that of 1A. The chassis also has 2 modes: in one mode, The blades are fixed and can't move and the other mode allows for free spin

Love Driver (Lv) - An attack type driver that has a pretty segmented base similarly to Venture but it's a tad bit shorter and the tip is actually a hole flat instead of simply an Accel tip. It also has the same rubber ring too.

User: Athena Valhalla

Special Moves: Guardian Upper, Guardian Break, Guardian Shoot, Guardian Slash
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