This chapter was really awesome! (Tho Chiki's language was a bit off the charts) Anyways, I love how Chiki was encouraging Athena to do better because She wanted a true rival, and we got to saw Chiki's true self, (I knew she was too nice to be legit) and (I can't spell her Bey's name lol) Chiki's Bey's avatar was sick, (Though I do prefer Adeona's avatar) overall awesome chapter! Looks like Lane has his sights on Aiga, that battle will be interesting in the next chapter. Though the battle ended in a draw so it kinda felt like a filler but whatever the chapter is to good for me to care about that.
Are you having a Character Contest soon? I really wanna add a character.
(Aug. 30, 2021 6:57 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ] This chapter was really awesome! (Tho Chiki's language was a bit off the charts) Anyways, I love how Chiki was encouraging Athena to do better because She wanted a true rival, and we got to saw Chiki's true self, (I knew she was too nice to be legit) and (I can't spell her Bey's name lol) Chiki's Bey's avatar was sick, (Though I do prefer Adeona's avatar) overall awesome chapter! Looks like Lane has his sights on Aiga, that battle will be interesting in the next chapter. Though the battle ended in a draw so it kinda felt like a filler but whatever the chapter is to good for me to care about that.
Are you having a Character Contest soon? I really wanna add a character.
Unfortunately no. Chiki is the only character contest character that i allowed, Season 2 has its own set of characters (mainly returning ones) and Season 3 has pretty much Athena, Lane, The New Protags and the DB Characters (Bell, Rashad, Basara, Ranzo and Ilya)
(Sep. 01, 2021 11:22 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]New Chapter Coming soon, i had fun writing this one
Chapter 47: Explosion! The Crimson Champion VS The Jet-Black Sun!!
Chapter 48: Triple Suns! Athena VS Hikaru And Hyuga!!
Chapter 46
https://www.wattpad.com/1122411171-story...lade-burst
*Squeals like a little girl* This chapter was amazing!!
The battle with Chiki was awesome! It really shows Athena's growth and strength! It was amazing! And when Adeona went in for the final blow! It was amazing, I loved it so much! I'm thinking of doing a Sparking or DB OC now, I've just gotta think about the plot and stuff then it'll be complete. But anyway, the start of the battle with Lean and Aiga was awesome! I loved the clash and everything! (Though it's kinda obvious Lean is gonna win) But, the battle with Chiki and Athena kinda felt rushed, you had plenty of time and space to add some more. But other than that the chapter was amazing as usual! You did awesomely.
Dub Names
Guide Adeona - Guardian Adeonis
Angelic Adeona - Angelica Adeonis
Adeona Heaven - Adeonis Heavenbringer
Adeona Royal - Adeonis Royalbringer
Flare Lucifer - Fire Lucius
Zone Xcalibur - Zenith Xcalius
Utopia Genesis - No change
Chapter 47
https://www.wattpad.com/1124220731-story...lade-burst
(Sep. 02, 2021 6:06 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]Dub Names
Guide Adeona - Guardian Adeonis
Angelic Adeona - Angelica Adeonis
Adeona Heaven - Adeonis Heavenbringer
Adeona Royal - Adeonis Royalbringer
Flare Lucifer - Fire Lucius
Zone Xcalibur - Zenith Xcalius
Utopia Genesis - No change
Chapter 47
https://www.wattpad.com/1124220731-story...lade-burst
Wow, this chapter was just... perfect, I loved everything about it, especially the battle with Lane, Athena you've literally gambled your Brother's life away, (To be fair she didn't really have a choice, the ending was perfection but I;m a bit upset the Lane won (Even though it was obvious) Aiga tried so hard yet failed so hard, again awesome chapter, my fave part was when Aiga explained everything about Phi! Overall: Awesome Chapter A+!
Iam catching up with this fic, Iam on chapter 20 right now.
bruh athena you sussy baka bring back lane and he might just go good with season 3
The full list of DB Beys for Season 3
Shining Ausrine.Lv.Dv-3 -> Venture Ausrine.Aq.Dv'-6 (Audrey Valhalla)
Purge Ares.Nx.Rl-3 -> Rampage Ares.Rs.Rl'-2 (Alexis Valhalla)
Ultimate Adeona.Gg.Vt-10
Blood Nemesis.Gd.Ln-4 (Nyle Leeman)
Genocide Azrael.Tp.MJs-12 (Anna Valhalla)
Dynamite/Devil Belial.Nx.Vn-2
Savior Valkyrie.Sh-7
Astral Spriggan.Ov.Qt-0
Jynx Lucifer.Pt.Bn-8
Guilty Longinus.Kr.MDs-2
Vanish Fafnir.Tp.Kc-3
Cyclone Ragnaruk.Gg.Nv-6
Valor Achilles.Gg.Dm'-2
Roar Bahamut.Gg.Mm-10
Rashad's Bey (Regnar?)
Magma Ifrit.Cq.J-Q-?
Sonic Wyvern.Ov.Js-6
Chapter 48
https://www.wattpad.com/1124778943-story...lade-burst
3 more chapters left of Season 1, big things are coming.
being totally honest i think athena is maybe gonna win
(Sep. 04, 2021 2:56 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]The full list of DB Beys for Season 3
Shining Ausrine.Lv.Dv-3 -> Venture Ausrine.Aq.Dv'-6 (Audrey Valhalla)
Purge Ares.Nx.Rl-3 -> Rampage Ares.Rs.Rl'-2 (Alexis Valhalla)
Ultimate Adeona.Gg.Vt-10
Blood Nemesis.Gd.Ln-4 (Nyle Leeman)
Genocide Azrael.Tp.MJs-12 (Anna Valhalla)
Dynamite/Devil Belial.Nx.Vn-2
Savior Valkyrie.Sh-7
Astral Spriggan.Ov.Qt-0
Jynx Lucifer.Pt.Bn-8
Guilty Longinus.Kr.MDs-2
Vanish Fafnir.Tp.Kc-3
Cyclone Ragnaruk.Gg.Nv-6
Valor Achilles.Gg.Dm'-2
Roar Bahamut.Gg.Mm-10
Rashad's Bey (Regnar?)
Magma Ifrit.Cq.J-Q-?
Sonic Wyvern.Ov.Js-6
Chapter 48
https://www.wattpad.com/1124778943-story...lade-burst
Alexander you sussy baka. This chapter was incredible like usual (It breaks my heart that you don't ping Pinkrose, it reminds the WBO how much we miss him) Anyways I loved the battle with Athena and The Ashi Bros, I'm keeping this short and sweet because I'm not feeling the best (Not Covid! I think...) Anyways I loved how you referenced scenes from God and other seasons. Overall Awesome Chapter, I'm excited for the Finale.
(Sep. 05, 2021 2:50 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ] (Sep. 04, 2021 2:56 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]The full list of DB Beys for Season 3
Shining Ausrine.Lv.Dv-3 -> Venture Ausrine.Aq.Dv'-6 (Audrey Valhalla)
Purge Ares.Nx.Rl-3 -> Rampage Ares.Rs.Rl'-2 (Alexis Valhalla)
Ultimate Adeona.Gg.Vt-10
Blood Nemesis.Gd.Ln-4 (Nyle Leeman)
Genocide Azrael.Tp.MJs-12 (Anna Valhalla)
Dynamite/Devil Belial.Nx.Vn-2
Savior Valkyrie.Sh-7
Astral Spriggan.Ov.Qt-0
Jynx Lucifer.Pt.Bn-8
Guilty Longinus.Kr.MDs-2
Vanish Fafnir.Tp.Kc-3
Cyclone Ragnaruk.Gg.Nv-6
Valor Achilles.Gg.Dm'-2
Roar Bahamut.Gg.Mm-10
Rashad's Bey (Regnar?)
Magma Ifrit.Cq.J-Q-?
Sonic Wyvern.Ov.Js-6
Chapter 48
https://www.wattpad.com/1124778943-story...lade-burst
Alexander you sussy baka. This chapter was incredible like usual (It breaks my heart that you don't ping Pinkrose, it reminds the WBO how much we miss him) Anyways I loved the battle with Athena and The Ashi Bros, I'm keeping this short and sweet because I'm not feeling the best (Not Covid! I think...) Anyways I loved how you referenced scenes from God and other seasons. Overall Awesome Chapter, I'm excited for the Finale.
UB... *sniff* just, please don't mention his name again... *sniff*
anyway, this was an epic episode and athena was being a sussy baka as always... and i sure hope that she defeats lane and teaches him a lesson or two about resonance and flare!
(*sniff* pinkrose would've been proud to see the piticall of such a great fanfic...)
(Sep. 05, 2021 2:53 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote: [ -> ] (Sep. 05, 2021 2:50 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ] Alexander you sussy baka. This chapter was incredible like usual (It breaks my heart that you don't ping Pinkrose, it reminds the WBO how much we miss him) Anyways I loved the battle with Athena and The Ashi Bros, I'm keeping this short and sweet because I'm not feeling the best (Not Covid! I think...) Anyways I loved how you referenced scenes from God and other seasons. Overall Awesome Chapter, I'm excited for the Finale.
UB... *sniff* just, please don't mention his name again... *sniff*
anyway, this was an epic episode and athena was being a sussy baka as always... and i sure hope that she defeats lane and teaches him a lesson or two about resonance and flare!
(*sniff* pinkrose would've been proud to see the piticall of such a great fanfic...)
um, by "his/him" are you referring to Pink? Pink goes by she/her.
(Sep. 05, 2021 5:56 AM)reshiwum Wrote: [ -> ] (Sep. 05, 2021 2:53 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote: [ -> ]UB... *sniff* just, please don't mention his name again... *sniff*
anyway, this was an epic episode and athena was being a sussy baka as always... and i sure hope that she defeats lane and teaches him a lesson or two about resonance and flare!
(*sniff* pinkrose would've been proud to see the piticall of such a great fanfic...)
um, by "his/him" are you referring to Pink? Pink goes by she/her.
oh my bad
Final Chapter will be out tomorrow evening, I am very excited for everyone to read it.
The Final Chapter will be out shortly but I do have some exciting news for Season 2.
- New Legends like Daina and Phi are coming
- There will be 52 Chapters instead of 38
- There will be a new tournament at the end of the season called the Sparking Tour or something along those lines.
Very excited for the things to come and I hope everyone likes it. New Chapter will be out shortly, hopefully within an hour
Season 1 Finale
https://www.wattpad.com/1125985500-story...lade-burst
(Sep. 06, 2021 8:09 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]The Final Chapter will be out shortly but I do have some exciting news for Season 2.
- New Legends like Daina and Phi are coming
- There will be 52 Chapters instead of 38
- There will be a new tournament at the end of the season called the Sparking Tour or something along those lines.
Very excited for the things to come and I hope everyone likes it. New Chapter will be out shortly, hopefully within an hour
Season 1 Finale
https://www.wattpad.com/1125985500-story...lade-burst
THIS CHAPTER WAS THE DEFINITION OF AMAZING!!!
This chapter was basically the final battle between Aiga and Phi but 10 times better! Lane and Athena really gave it their all and it was awesome to watch, this has to be the best season finale I've ever read, and when Adeona finally burst Lucifer I was on the moon with happiness because Athena finally gave Lain the whooping he deserved! But seriously Lane? You literally learned nothing from that battle and go back to the snake pit? *Sighs* I guess it can't be helped, I'm super excited for season 2 and I loved season 1 a lot! This season was amazing and knowing you season 2 will be even better! You deserve a good firm pat on the back!
lol this is kinda like a reference to beyblade burst turbo episode 50, nice! i'll keep reading
WOW! THIS WAS AMAZING! It was so epic, perfectly fits for a finale! great job on this season! (for some reason athena feels like a sussy baka)
(Insert Fan Boy Scream Here)
I loved this, my favorite part was definitely Heaven Symphony!
I again thank you DeltaZakuro for being Athena to all.
My long-overdue thoughts about this fanfic. Ive been reading as a "ghost" here and there, as I was a little afraid to spam your notifs with liked messages, rip. But nevertheless, Ill try to make my thoughts as short and easy-to-understand as possible
This really has to be my favorite OC fic in the Beyblade fandom. On the surface, Athena seems like another "Sibling OC" trope and ready to be ignored. But I kid nonreaders not -- Athena is one of the best sibling OCs in the Beyblade Burst fanfiction community. She has a clear motive and is not like your "energetic, happy-go-lucky protagonist who wants to befriend everyone" idea. She is clearly on a mission and her character grows as the mission progresses. She is one heck of an OC to read about and Delta evidently put in a lot of effort into her. She is a unique character and Im glad to read a story with her in it
Awesome fanfic and character. Athena is amazing
Guardian Adeona.Love.6A
Guardian Ring (Gr) - The ring features a shape very similar to that of the World wing but it's a bit more thicker and jagged as it has 4 wings that can move into different, it can basically awaken like Imperial Dragon. The ring is also Flippable like World too. Right spin looks like Guide and Left looks like Angelic.
Adeona III Chip (Ad3) - A clear Superking chip that has a similar face to Hyperion but the yellow parts are all purple and some stickers are blue. It is also Dual spin.
6A Chassis (6A) - An LR Double Chassis that has 6 blades that look like that of 1A. The chassis also has 2 modes: in one mode, The blades are fixed and can't move and the other mode allows for free spin
Love Driver (Lv) - An attack type driver that has a pretty segmented base similarly to Venture but it's a tad bit shorter and the tip is actually a hole flat instead of simply an Accel tip. It also has the same rubber ring too.
User: Athena Valhalla
Special Moves: Guardian Upper, Guardian Break, Guardian Shoot, Guardian Slash