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This is going to be so awesome. One thing I love is the chapters are normally short and people love it no matter what. Just proves your story is amazing.
Doesnt the name Athena come from a Greece city?
Athena is the Greek goddess of wisdom, arts and war.
Oh wait nvm lol its called Athens
Chapter 8
(Dec. 01, 2020  5:16 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 8

Very good chapter.
Oh no! Not again! Why is Lane so angry your scaring Harry
Chapter 9: Black Sun! Variant Armageddon! Summary

With a new tournament on the horizon, qualifiers are underway! One match being between Lane and Ranjiro! Ranjiro comes up with a solid strategy to take down Lucifer, but will it be enough?...
(Dec. 01, 2020  6:01 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 9: Black Sun! Variant Armageddon! Summary

With a new tournament on the horizon, qualifiers are underway! One match being between Lane and Ranjiro!

Rip Ranjiro
(Dec. 01, 2020  6:04 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]
(Dec. 01, 2020  6:01 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 9: Black Sun! Variant Armageddon! Summary

With a new tournament on the horizon, qualifiers are underway! One match being between Lane and Ranjiro!

Rip Ranjiro
this is the best fan fic I have read on WBO.
(Dec. 01, 2020  6:01 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 9: Black Sun! Variant Armageddon! Summary

With a new tournament on the horizon, qualifiers are underway! One match being between Lane and Ranjiro!

Huh let's see here. Lane is the antagonist.
"Black sun" a big bad thing from metal fury.
"Armageddon" diablo nemesis's (another big bad thing from metal fury) special move.
Not that I'm criticizing you, I think it's cool but just saying.
(Dec. 01, 2020  8:42 PM)Master_chanter0 Wrote: [ -> ]
(Dec. 01, 2020  6:01 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 9: Black Sun! Variant Armageddon! Summary

With a new tournament on the horizon, qualifiers are underway! One match being between Lane and Ranjiro!

Huh let's see here. Lane is the antagonist.
"Black sun" a big bad thing from metal fury.
"Armageddon" diablo nemesis's (another big bad thing from metal fury) special move.
Not that I'm criticizing you, I think it's cool but just saying.

Too much Metal Fury refernce lol
even though Lane vs Ranjiro will be one of the main focuses next chapter, there will be some pretty cool surprises in the chapter, like the return of a certain character.
(Dec. 01, 2020  10:50 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]even though Lane vs Ranjiro will be one of the main focuses next chapter, there will be some pretty cool surprises in the chapter, like the return of a certain character.

This will be very interesting.
(Dec. 01, 2020  10:50 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]even though Lane vs Ranjiro will be one of the main focuses next chapter, there will be some pretty cool surprises in the chapter, like the return of a certain character.

My boy Aiga going to whoop Lucifer with headband Achilles
(Dec. 01, 2020  11:07 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: [ -> ]
(Dec. 01, 2020  10:50 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]even though Lane vs Ranjiro will be one of the main focuses next chapter, there will be some pretty cool surprises in the chapter, like the return of a certain character.

My boy Aiga going to whoop Lucifer with headband Achilles

Aiga flashbacks to when he loses to Lane and Lucifer
(Dec. 01, 2020  11:07 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: [ -> ]
(Dec. 01, 2020  10:50 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]even though Lane vs Ranjiro will be one of the main focuses next chapter, there will be some pretty cool surprises in the chapter, like the return of a certain character.

My boy Aiga going to whoop Lucifer with headband Achilles

yeah not happening
(Dec. 01, 2020  11:12 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]
(Dec. 01, 2020  11:07 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: [ -> ]My boy Aiga going to whoop Lucifer with headband Achilles

yeah not happening

And again.
Sad Aiga noises.
At least he wont be played dirty.
R.I.P 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000 headbands destroyed by Aiga
(Dec. 01, 2020  11:14 PM)TheGolden Blade Wrote: [ -> ]R.I.P 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000 headbands destroyed by Aiga

lol.
Where does he even get those headbands anyway.
He probally has Infinite of them
(Dec. 01, 2020  11:15 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]
(Dec. 01, 2020  11:14 PM)TheGolden Blade Wrote: [ -> ]R.I.P 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000 headbands destroyed by Aiga

lol.
Where does he even get those headbands anyway.
He probally has Infinite of them

He robbed a bank and bought the whole stock. IN THE WORLD
(Dec. 01, 2020  11:16 PM)TheGolden Blade Wrote: [ -> ]
(Dec. 01, 2020  11:15 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]lol.
Where does he even get those headbands anyway.
He probally has Infinite of them

He robbed a bank and bought the whole stock. IN THE WORLD

lol. But thats Shu´s line
Pluto Unknown Ou Universe' Breakdown

Chip: Pluto (Pl) - Features a Pluto motif, a god of the underworld. features a black metal chip core

Ring: Unknown (U) - features 6 spikes with 6 spikes underneath. when the limit break system activates, the 6 bottom spikes extend some.

Disk: Ou

Driver: Universe'

Owner: Pascal Hirogashi (mid-season antagonist)

Special Moves: Limit Break Unknown, Unknown Guard (best used before Limit Break), Unknown Press

First Appearance: New Challenger! Pluto Unknown! (tentative title)
I bet the main antagonist is someone who owns a dragon bey
When is there going to be another contest (what date so that I know when to come back)
(Dec. 01, 2020  11:21 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: [ -> ]When is there going to be another contest (what date so that I know when to come back)

whenever season 2 starts
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