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(Nov. 18, 2020  7:27 PM)EclipseĀ Force Wrote: [ -> ]I was bored so I typed out chapter 6 and some people are asking for it so have this as a little treat I guess

thanks man! saves me from having to go to Edit Part on Wattpad just to copy and paste the chapter. again thanks!
Athena truly cares for Lane while Lane acts like a jerk.
(Nov. 18, 2020  7:27 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]Delta is sad cause no one includes him as a devil blader

Delta is in this story.
(Nov. 18, 2020  8:06 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]
(Nov. 18, 2020  7:27 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]Delta is sad cause no one includes him as a devil blader

Delta is in this story.

I know.
(Nov. 18, 2020  8:06 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]Athena truly cares for Lane while Lane acts like a jerk.

when the Legend League comes, there might be a Tag Team battle where Lane is forced to team up with Athena. but that is a maybe.

(if i go through with this idea, it will definitely be interesting to see)
(Nov. 18, 2020  8:12 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]
(Nov. 18, 2020  8:06 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]Athena truly cares for Lane while Lane acts like a jerk.

when the Legend League comes, there might be a Tag Team battle where Lane is forced to team up with Athena. but that is a maybe.

(if i go through with this idea, it will definitely be interesting to see)

yeah ok
Preview for the coming chapter.

Athena: *in her mind* i love you Lane! I can't stand by and watch your power destroy you! I cannot allow that happen!

Lane: *in his mind* Athena... Once I shatter Adeona, i never want to see your face in my sight again... My goal will not be blocked by the likes of you!
Chapter 7 Reveals

Athena and Lane will both have a new move.
(Nov. 19, 2020  8:39 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 7 Reveals

Athena and Lane will both have a new move.

nice
(Came back to post this)

Chapter 7: The Demons Flare! Lane Valhalla!


Not copy/pasting it so dont ask.
Wait a second!
Delta made a evolution of Lucifer before Lucifer end
TT stole your idea mate!
TT is gonna go to court lol
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:19 PM)kaiĀ edits Wrote: [ -> ]Wait a second!
Delta made a evolution of Lucifer before Lucifer end
TT stole your idea mate!
TT is gonna go to court lol

Im sorry, what?
This is in order of the devils lol:
Lucifer (Too much flare), Satan(Pure devil), Diabolos (The Devil but in spanish lol)
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:20 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:19 PM)kaiĀ edits Wrote: [ -> ]Wait a second!
Delta made a evolution of Lucifer before Lucifer end
TT stole your idea mate!
TT is gonna go to court lol

Im sorry, what?
TT stole your idea.
Shoot TT a email lol
Jk about the email lol
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:24 PM)kaiĀ edits Wrote: [ -> ]
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:20 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]Im sorry, what?
TT stole your idea.
Shoot TT a email lol
Jk about the email lol
I have no idea what your talking about. What idea did they steal. (not that I care anyway, peoples steal my ideas all the time)
Lane needs to chill out like for real.
Or otherwise his flare is going to burn him. And then goes to the beyhospital.
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:27 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:24 PM)kaiĀ edits Wrote: [ -> ]TT stole your idea.
Shoot TT a email lol
Jk about the email lol
I have no idea what your talking about. What idea did they steal. (not that I care anyway, peoples steal my ideas all the time)
[font="Source Sans Pro", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif]Lucifer Destruction WheelĀ² Mobius' is your bey that you made.[/font]
TT is dumb. They can't get away with your idea. TT if your looking at this the sparkingĀ anime is unrealistic and poor so are the beys in general you recycle your designs too much be like make new designs. TT I hope you lose everything.


Don't quote me I am busy
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:30 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:27 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]I have no idea what your talking about. What idea did they steal. (not that I care anyway, peoples steal my ideas all the time)
[font="Source Sans Pro", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif]Lucifer Destruction WheelĀ² Mobius' is your bey that you made.[/font]
TT is dumb. They can't get away with your idea. TT if your looking at this the sparkingĀ anime is unrealistic and poor so are the beys in general you recycle your designs too much be like make new designs. TT I hope you lose everything.


Don't quote me I am busy

Actually its Lucifer Armageddon
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:31 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:30 PM)kaiĀ edits Wrote: [ -> ][font="Source Sans Pro", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif]Lucifer Destruction WheelĀ² Mobius' is your bey that you made.[/font]
TT is dumb. They can't get away with your idea. TT if your looking at this the sparkingĀ anime is unrealistic and poor so are the beys in general you recycle your designs too much be like make new designs. TT I hope you lose everything.


Don't quote me I am busy

Actually its Lucifer Armageddon
TT is garbage at least hasbro tried something new. TT your a failure I am glad I quit beyblade.
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:31 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:30 PM)kaiĀ edits Wrote: [ -> ][font="Source Sans Pro", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif]Lucifer Destruction WheelĀ² Mobius' is your bey that you made.[/font]
TT is dumb. They can't get away with your idea. TT if your looking at this the sparkingĀ anime is unrealistic and poor so are the beys in general you recycle your designs too much be like make new designs. TT I hope you lose everything.


Don't quote me I am busy

Actually its Lucifer Armageddon

Yeah I don't actually understand what was stolen. Im pretty sure i made that after LcT was revealed and the gimmick is entirely different.
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:32 PM)kaiĀ edits Wrote: [ -> ]
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:31 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]Actually its Lucifer Armageddon
TT is garbage at least hasbro tried something new. TT your a failure I am glad I quit beyblade.

Stop making baseless accusations
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:36 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:31 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]Actually its Lucifer Armageddon

Yeah I don't actually understand what was stolen. Im pretty sure i made that after LcT was revealed and the gimmick is entirely different.

This is very confusing. And if your saying Lucifer The End is trash think again
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:37 PM)EclipseĀ Force Wrote: [ -> ]
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:32 PM)kaiĀ edits Wrote: [ -> ]TT is garbage at least hasbro tried something new. TT your a failure I am glad I quit beyblade.

Stop making baseless accusations

Stop quoting me your filling my inbox with spam! And I know what I am talking about lol.
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:37 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:36 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]Yeah I don't actually understand what was stolen. Im pretty sure i made that after LcT was revealed and the gimmick is entirely different.

This is very confusing. And if your saying Lucifer The End is trash think again
Uh never said it was?
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:38 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]
(Nov. 21, 2020  10:37 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]This is very confusing. And if your saying Lucifer The End is trash think again
Uh never said it was?

No Im talking about what Kai Edits said
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