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I decided I would make a Beyblade character so I did!!
Character name : Fang Foliage
Bey he uses: Voltage Vertigo
Evil or good: Good
personality: Primal but nice
Where he lives: In the forest

I decided to make a Beyblade burst character so I did!!
Character name : Fang
Bey he uses: Voltage Vertigo (stamina type)
Evil or good: Good
personality: Primal but nice
Where he lives: In the forest
Name soko lay hoya
Beyblade: burn fafnir
Burn fafnir is a red beyblade it is a BALANCE type and has rubber and metal it has three Sharp red dragon heads on it, it has 12 and ultra ultra is a driver that is like NOTHING but is more FREE spining and has rubber on the out side. It's special move is full burn spin and ultra burn rush
Name: Naomi Blue
Gender: Female
Personality: Stern, caring, patient, reliable.
Beyblade: Killer Deathscyther. 11. Impact.
Age: 14

Bio: Being the only child in her family, Naomi took a liking to beyblade due to how much it could help her socialize. She was popular in her hometown's tournaments and was picked as her towns beyblade team captain. She turned the position down as she wasn't comfortable in a leadership role. She obtains Chouzetsu beyblade in the form of Crypt Deathscyther.6F.Fs

Layer: Crypt Deathscyther, functions identical to kD with the added weight of metal. The uneven distribution of metal gives it more Attack.

Flash(Fa): is an extreme flat rubber infused driver.
NAME : RAY SURIGAMI
BEY : THOR ODIOUS 100 LIGHTNING
SPECIAL MOVE : BRING ME THANOS
ATTACKS WITH STROMEBREAKER AND PEARS THE LAYER VERY HARD
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Name: Zin Demura
Zin is the daughter of a family that has beybladed for generations. She created Zenith to be the strongest bey in her family. She went to tournaments and felt the rush that comes from victory. She keeps winning to feel that rush again and again.
Beyblade: Zenith Dolos 10I.Rt
Layer: Zenith Dolos. This balance type layer has weights made to pull two parts of the layer inwards. When it slows down those parts extend to fill two gaps with strong upper attack. Inspired by Variares. Strong IWD for high revolution speed.
Disk: 10. IWD
Frame: imperial. A smooth frame made for LAD and stopping knockback. Allmost as wide as Garuda.
Driver: Retract. A wider fusion that goes from normal to low height mid battle.

Special moves:
Zenith Slash: Strong attacks early in the battle.
Zenith Shield: Transforms mid battle to a shorter and more defensive state.
Zenith Guard: Uses the Imperial frame to redirect knockback.

Launch styles:
Power Grip: Pulls with all her might and launches Dolos with aggressive intent.

Launcher: Beylauncher Strength. A string launcher with a robust gear system that can take extreme stress. This causes high resistance. This launcher improves strength with each launch and has almost no power cap. The more you launch the harder you can launch.


Note: this character is still being worked on will improve on later.
Name: Mary “Mackel” Finnik

Personality: Arrogant and bossy (mainly due to how she was praised as a kid during childhood which lead her to believe herself as knowledgeable). She is very well-informed about many things due to her fears of appearing ignorant. She is also easily impressed but also likes to defeat said impression. She appears hostile to those she doesn’t know well, but acts somewhat forgiving when knowing against the façade.

Appearance - She has tan-skin overall due to her past living near the equator as she wears a leather jacket that reaches to her belly. She wears khaki jeans with blue and red stripped shoes. At 5 foot 5 inches at the age of 13, she doesn’t like wearing socks. She also has reading glasses tucked under her purple shirt’s breast pocket. She is thinner than most, mainly due to her addiction to sprinting in forests.

Beyblade - Pack Alpha + Gyro + Fusion
Pack Alpha: A wolf themed (light brown and silver) bey that is elliptical in fashion with a smooth perimeter that has rough edges akin to bumps that catch on to the opposing bey. The curve from the bumps lead to two “teeth” on each side of the bey that display a wolf howling black towards the moon.
(Jun. 26, 2017  12:45 PM)Blader ZK7 Wrote: [ -> ]
(Apr. 11, 2017  3:59 AM)Admiral W Wrote: [ -> ]There have been some awesome beys in the burst saga so far. I thought coming up with some characters and beys would be SUPER cool.

My character: Eldric Wilson

Bey: Nova Phoenix. (Balance Type)
The Energy layer shows the face of a Phoenix with two wings on the edge of the layer both going in a different direction, the whole layer is a red and orange color all with a fire look. The head of the Phoenix is fitted with armor

Special Move: Armored Nova

Is it the same Phoenix from MFB? That would be awesome

Akihito Hagane

Son of the legendary Gingka Hagane, Akihito is determined to follow in his father's footsteps when his father gives him his old Pegasus beyblade, which had turned into Supernova Pegasus, which is a Burst bey. Akihito is 12, and has a personality similar to his father's when he was his age. He is a great blader, because his father taught him well.

THIS! good stuff
(Jun. 13, 2018  9:07 AM)Dragunix Wrote: [ -> ]Changing Rykos to Raos since I'm using Rykos as a name somewhere else instead of here

(Oct. 29, 2017  1:14 AM)Dragunix Wrote: [ -> ]Name: Rykos Azuki

- Rykos does use a string launcher when a tournament/format battle requires a "standard launch."

Reborn Beyblade: Nova Dragoon 7I (Inferno) Erupt (Er) 

Rykos also possesses another bey for a short time that he uses as a backup known as Raijin Dragoon 9U. Zn (Zenith)

Launches:
* Stardust Reaver - Raos holds the launcher perpendicular to his body, then flicks it away with his left wrist, allowing the plate of Zenith to catch onto the stadium and roll along the stadium. This gives rD a few extra seconds of spin time, and also lets rD accelerate quickly
* Imperial Dragon's Wrath - Raos curls his wrist around until the launcher prongs face away from him. When launching, he quickly untwists his wrists before flicking the launcher out in a similar manner to Stardust Reaver.

Revamped a few parts, removed Draco entirely, and gave him a string launcher now.

Trinity Raos is also the name of the divine god in my own Beyblade Story (Beyblade Heroes: Metal Baku Origins/Turbo/Beyond) since 2012.
welp this seems cool so i'm gonna do my own spin on it

blader name: Gabe(not to be confused with hasbro's version of the owner of Gia)

beyblade: Venom Scorpios

personality: Hot headed but nice

team afiliacion: Flaming Dragons

Backstory: This young 12 year old kid is looking for an adventure.Being from a really young age A big fan of beyblade he went to a bey school were he met a friend when he was only 9 years old this kid was future team captain of his team as mentioned The Flaming Dragons.overall he was one of the best bladers in his bey school but that wasn't enough him and his team wanted gold to win tournaments.That's the Backstory

Special move:Blood Moon Crescent

Thank you for reading all of this sorry for any spelling errors If you want to see this story finished just say it and maybe I will finish it
Character:Jake Drogo

Beyblade: Toxic deathstalker

The deathstalker is a type of scorpion the Bey blade is a leftspinning semi stationary attack type. It has rubber to steal spin.

Special move: Fatal Jab

Jacob Drogo He is actually a natural at Beyblade. People underestimate him, which pushes him to become the better. He's good at thinking outside the box and really good at observing his opponents battle style and techniques, but times he can be too cocky and let has guard down,and he also at times is afraid to jump into new situations which can lead to his downfall. Overtime as he trains with his friends at their school beyclub he learns how to overcome his weaknesses to help him become Beyblade world champion.
(Jun. 28, 2018  4:47 AM)Velocityblader Wrote: [ -> ]Character:Jake Drogo

Beyblade: Toxic deathstalker

The deathstalker is a type of scorpion the Bey blade is a leftspinning semi stationary attack type. It has rubber to steal spin.

Special move: Fatal Jab

Jacob Drogo He is actually a natural at Beyblade. People underestimate him, which pushes him to become the better. He's good at thinking outside the box and really good at observing his opponents battle style and techniques, but times he can be too cocky and let has guard down,and he also at times is afraid to jump into new situations which can lead to his downfall. Overtime as he trains with his friends at their school beyclub he learns how to overcome his weaknesses to help him become Beyblade world champion.

Two things.
1. Can you give information about the full combo?
2. Is this beyblade a god bey or a chouzetsu bey? If the latter mind if I write a story of Jake vs Vis?
(Jun. 28, 2018  4:52 AM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jun. 28, 2018  4:47 AM)Velocityblader Wrote: [ -> ]Character:Jake Drogo

Beyblade: Toxic deathstalker

The deathstalker is a type of scorpion the Bey blade is a leftspinning semi stationary attack type. It has rubber to steal spin.

Special move: Fatal Jab

Jacob Drogo He is actually a natural at Beyblade. People underestimate him, which pushes him to become the better. He's good at thinking outside the box and really good at observing his opponents battle style and techniques, but times he can be too cocky and let has guard down,and he also at times is afraid to jump into new situations which can lead to his downfall. Overtime as he trains with his friends at their school beyclub he learns how to overcome his weaknesses to help him become Beyblade world champion.

Two things.
1. Can you give information about the full combo?
2. Is this beyblade a god bey or  a chouzetsu bey? If the latter mind if I write a story of Jake vs Vis?

The combo is Toxic Deathstalker 13 and a made up driver called Rigid

It's a chouzetsu bey

I don't mind if you write a story about Jake vs Vis, it would actually be really cool, if you need any information about my character / Beyblade just ask
(Jun. 29, 2018  3:10 AM)Velocityblader Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jun. 28, 2018  4:52 AM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]Two things.
1. Can you give information about the full combo?
2. Is this beyblade a god bey or  a chouzetsu bey? If the latter mind if I write a story of Jake vs Vis?

The combo is Toxic Deathstalker 13 and a made up driver called Rigid

It's a chouzetsu bey

I don't mind if you write a story about Jake vs Vis, it would actually be really cool, if you need any information about my character / Beyblade just ask

On big thing is what is the rigid driver? You need to describe it.

Also the battle would be tD.13.Rg vs (LC)mS.14St.Tr or toxic Deathstalker thirteen rigid vs level chip muted Sonar fourteen Steel True counter.

The story will be on the story thread. Look for it in the latest posts after you respond with more info on the driver.
Character: Busy (I can't think of anything else :\)
Attire: "Busy" has Royal-like attire, with a large robe with Red and gold symbols, Tied with a Gray Belt, He occasionally wears a Mask when angry.
Launcher: Golden L/R String launcher with Red and white grip, Bey logger Turbo (Compatible with Only Blitz Spriggan and other Cho-z Beys) and Knuckle grip.
Personality: Quiet, (when not blading) Competitive, Ruthess, Angry.(When beyblading)
Age: 12 Pre-Cho-Z, 14 Cho-Z
Beyblade: Blitz Spriggan.19.Fb
Backstory: "After Shu Kurenai discarded it, Legend Spriggan sat there for years, Unnoticed for 2 years, A talented blader by the Nickname "Busy" found what was left of lS, And repaired it to become Blitz Spriggan, Retaining most of it's abilities, Such as L/R compatibility, But also giving it brute force at the cost of Stamina, Final Boost was made to counter that problem, Now, Who knows where "Busy" is now..."
 Special Moves: Call of the Reaper (Left Spin) Reversal (L/R) Final Boost ( L/R, activates on last click ) Dragonslayer Axe (Right) Spriggan Smash (L/R)
19: Extreme heavyweight 
Fb (Final Boost): A much better reboot, activates on last click or when hit from beneath, Fully restabilizes the beyblade and returns stamina (Best with left)
(Jun. 29, 2018  4:38 AM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jun. 29, 2018  3:10 AM)Velocityblader Wrote: [ -> ]The combo is Toxic Deathstalker 13 and a made up driver called Rigid

It's a chouzetsu bey

I don't mind if you write a story about Jake vs Vis, it would actually be really cool, if you need any information about my character / Beyblade just ask

On big thing is what is the rigid driver? You need to describe it.

Also the battle would be tD.13.Rg vs (LC)mS.14St.Tr or toxic Deathstalker thirteen rigid vs level chip muted Sonar fourteen Steel True counter.

The story will be on the story thread. Look for it in the latest posts after you respond with more info on the driver.

The rigid drive is a mix of the jaggy drive and needle drive, imagine the needle driver with the jaggy driver around the edge of it, so when it gets hit over, it kind of does what emperor forneus does with its special move Emperor Drift if that makes sense.
(Jun. 30, 2018  5:21 AM)Velocityblader Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jun. 29, 2018  4:38 AM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]On big thing is what is the rigid driver? You need to describe it.

Also the battle would be tD.13.Rg vs (LC)mS.14St.Tr or toxic Deathstalker thirteen rigid vs level chip muted Sonar fourteen Steel True counter.

The story will be on the story thread. Look for it in the latest posts after you respond with more info on the driver.

The rigid drive is a mix of the jaggy drive and needle drive, imagine the needle driver with the jaggy driver around the edge of it, so when it gets hit over, it kind of does what emperor forneus does with its special move Emperor Drift if that makes sense.

OK, keep an eye out for Vis vs Jake
Ok I will
(Jun. 30, 2018  6:27 AM)Velocityblader Wrote: [ -> ]Ok I will

It is up on the story thread.
Character Name: zayde

Bay: Midnight Pantera

The energy layer is a mixture of black, purple and mid- night blue. It also has silver flake sprinkled throughout to be like stars. The metal on the layer is Stylized in the shape of a panther.
Character name: Alex

Appearance: He wears a red leather jacket with a black shirt. He wears brown jeans and black shoes. He has green eyes and has light blonde hair.

Personality: Outside of battle, he is very passionate about beyblade and likes to have fun. In battle, he is very serious about battling.

Beyblade: Axcelior: A left spinning attack type
(Jun. 30, 2018  6:11 PM)BuilderROB Wrote: [ -> ]Character name: Alex

Appearance: He wears a red leather jacket with a black shirt. He wears brown jeans and black shoes. He has green eyes and has light blonde hair.

Personality: Outside of battle, he is very passionate about beyblade and likes to have fun. In battle, he is very serious about battling.

Beyblade: Axcelior: A left spinning attack type

Please give more information. Use this:

Beyblade: give the full combo.
Layer: give the layer name and describe it.
Disk: give the name and describe it if it is a new part.
Frame: give the name and describe if a new part.
Driver: give the name and describe if a new part.
(Jul. 01, 2018  12:05 AM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jun. 30, 2018  6:11 PM)BuilderROB Wrote: [ -> ]Character name: Alex

Appearance: He wears a red leather jacket with a black shirt. He wears brown jeans and black shoes. He has green eyes and has light blonde hair.

Personality: Outside of battle, he is very passionate about beyblade and likes to have fun. In battle, he is very serious about battling.

Beyblade: Axcelior: A left spinning attack type

Please give more information. Use this:

Beyblade: give the full combo.
Layer: give the layer name and describe it.
Disk: give the name and describe it if it is a new part.
Frame: give the name and describe if a new part.
Driver: give the name and describe if a new part.

I have that in the make your own beyblade post, but I will just quote it:

Strike Axcelior 0 Smash

Layer: Strike Axcelior: A left spin attack type with two main contact points that look like spear tips. The other two secondary contact points have A’s that are made out of rubber, allowing it to spin steal against right spin opponents.

Disc: 0

Driver: Smash: A plastic version of xtreme
Name: maki dia

Layer: spike midas

Disk: 14

Frame: crack

Driver: eternal

Mame: mira kyntana

Layer: charge minoboros

Disk: 20

Driver: ring

Name: biy Daka
Layer: moonlight blacknight
Disk: 1
Driver: hunter
My Character: James Thunders.

Bey: Zillion Zeutron. (Stamina)

Special Movement: Volt Tornado.
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