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(Mar. 16, 2018  11:58 AM)The_DarkBlader Wrote: [ -> ]
(Mar. 15, 2018  3:00 AM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]I apologize for being a little too aggressive so let me explain a little better.

1. It would be kind if you ask Dragunix if you can use the Dragoon name. He created four Dragoons already and having more would make things confusing.

2. How does the click gimmick work? It increases attack but how?

3. The beyblade does not give detail on how powerful the layer is (by describing the contact points and weight distribution.) and the speed/movement does not match its description. Jet would have moderate speed due to the spikes being plastic (about the speed of rip fire variable) and the free spinning part would give control but wouldn't allow for sudden drifts and motion changes. Not enough friction.

4. lets focus on Raijin. Raijin Dragoon is left spin and can either have four upper attack blades or two smash attack blades depending on mode. Its driver is a left rubber flat (LRF) and has high speed because of this. It has a free spinning disk that can be used to shift movement patterns because the driver has the grip to do so. Combine this with a launch technique that allows for targeted attacks and Raijin has the upper hand. Nova Dragoon is a right spin bey with extreme weight and is much heavier than Raijin. The Engulf driver makes Nova way faster as well.


Yet again I am sorry for being so aggressive. beyblades with no realistic explanation is just one of my pet peeves.

Read it now

A little better but less friction means greater stamina but longer acceleration times. If you don't mind may I suggest a Change? It is an Assault sized Metal flat with a fixed rubber ring for movement changes and speed boosts, at the cost of stamina. The Flat is slightly rounded for increased stamina.

This jet driver is a lot more efficient with its stamina.

This jet is slightly based of Sonars counter driver. (counter is a bearing drive from the metal saga with a fixed rubber ring.)
Stamina wise Counter can out spin Jet but jet has more movement.

Also good job on describing the click gimmick. Slightly reminds me of endless Ouroboros (it is a stamina type where on its last click the two snakes close the gap reaching "Eternity form".) But with a disk. eO has a built in disk.
Thanks I think I'll add the rubber ring
(Mar. 16, 2018  7:54 PM)The_DarkBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Thanks I think I'll add the rubber ring

metal spikes would ruin the movement. Use the metal flat part as well.
(Mar. 16, 2018  1:19 PM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]
(Mar. 16, 2018  11:58 AM)The_DarkBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Read it now

A little better but less friction means greater stamina but longer acceleration times. If you don't mind may I suggest a Change? It is an Assault sized Metal flat with a fixed rubber ring for movement changes and speed boosts, at the cost of stamina. The Flat is slightly rounded for increased stamina.

This jet driver is a lot more efficient with its stamina.

This jet is slightly based of Sonars counter driver. (counter is a bearing drive from the metal saga with a fixed rubber ring.)
Stamina wise Counter can out spin Jet but jet has more movement.

Also good job on describing the click gimmick. Slightly reminds me of endless Ouroboros (it is a stamina type where on its last click the two snakes close the gap reaching "Eternity form".) But with a disk. eO has a built in disk.
Reminds me of my jaguar line, and the claws uniting
(Mar. 16, 2018  8:12 PM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]
(Mar. 16, 2018  7:54 PM)The_DarkBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Thanks I think I'll add the rubber ring


ids
metal spikes would ruin the movement. Use the metal flat part as well.
i did it
My guys name: Kenta menta
Bey: Juca moose
It's a balence type and its special move it spilt juice it's where it makes the ground chocolate moose and stopes the bey from spinning.
name: Phelux Shirasagi
phelix shirasagi is the brother of lui shirasagi. phelux is a competitive blader and like his brother he competed in tournaments aswell, he and his team won most of them, with his bey sunwarrior pheonix they destroyed everyone in their way.

disciption: phelux is 5/11 ft tall, he wears a red coat like red eye, red boots and black pants, he has hair like lui but red.

story of character: (starts from dual layer system) phelux was very strong in tournaments and he won every battle and with his teammates, until one day a mysterius team from the snake pit came to see their skills in battle, phelux and his teammates lost and the snake pit broke their beys, from that day phelux and his team(flaming justice) swore to get revenge, after 1 year(after burst god) phelix and his team got new super z beys, and then he and his team are gonna get revenge on the snake pit.
 
personality: phelux is very competitive and tries his hardest to win against strong bladers

bey spirit: sunwarrior pheonix is a pheonix with talons as its arms and legs it has fiery golden armor and the color of it is like fire with blue eyes and a golden beak, its weapon is a gold sword with fire

beyblade: sunwarrior Pheonix 12f.se
layer: sunwarrior pheonix is a super-z layer and its simular to bloody longinus except it has three heads and wings and the heads are a pheonix and its the side view of the pheonix
disk: 12
frame: fiery is a frame like flow but more like flames but its the right direction instead of the left
driver: sunrise is a metal r2f or a metal spiral but to the right instead of left, and it looks like the sun a little bit

beys: pheonix wing jaggy
          pentatonux pheonix boost spiral
          sunwarrior pheonix 12f.se

speacial move: burning sword of the sun
Name: Ali Makimo
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Looks: He is a caucasasin male
The Legendary Blader
Name: Ali Makimo
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Looks: He is a White male with red hair(kinda pinkish) thats almost like Shu's hair, but shorter. He has Emerald eyes that glowin the dark(not really,but there nice). He wears a black and red checkers jacket,black pants,a white t, some black gloves, and a neckless that his mother gave him before she pasted.
Personality:Nice,Honest,Cute,Cocky,Helpfully,Friendly,Competitive, and Quiet.

His Partner/Bey: Omega A-Bomb

History: He is the number 1 blader in the world or used to be. He lived in a old town in Europe. His father used to be the worlds number 1 blader,but he retired. His father inspired him to train every single day to get better and better. He qualified for the regionals and won,same with the nationals. In his opinion he thinks the nationals was to easy. Later he joined BC Sol(before Free was there) and was the best blader on the team. With his help Bc Sol won 3 World Leagues in a row. He made his father proud. One day his mother died from a sickness. His mother told him one last thing to never give up on your dreams and gave him her good luck neckless. A few days later Free joined BC Sol and Ali lost his cool .He hated the fact the Free just showed up beating everyone. He even decide to stop blading for a year. When he heard Free left Bc Sol and went to the rageing bulls. That was his chance to show everyone that he was the best, not Free. When he showed up at Bc Sol, everyone knew exactly who he was, well everyone except Valt of course. When Valt found out that he was a Legendary Blader, he wanted to battle him more then anything. In fact everyone did. Ali was a nice guy so he battle everyone to learn there battle techniques and to give them advise. Chris was so excited that Ali had joined the team, she knew she had already one the world leauge.After battling everyone, it was him against Valt. Omega A-bomb is a Balance type of all three types,so he has the advantage over anyone. It can also spin counterclockwise and clockwise. They get ready and 3 2 1 let it rip. A-Bomb goes for the defence and takes the middle ,Valtryek goes for an attack and Valtryek bursted first contact. Ali Says "everyone did a good job,but your not ready for the world leauge, you need to train harder". Silas asked who Ali thinks is the strongest,he says "Its not about strength, its about how decated you are". On the other hand Ashtem wants Ali on his team in america,but Ali wants to face Free, not be his teammate. Ali ends up claiming his place as top and says he will never stop blading again.

Omega A-Bomb
Before Evolution its name was Alpha A-Bomb

A-Bomb Is a Balance type of all three attributes.
Ultra Attack
Ultra Stamina
Ultra Defense

Ali had three different launches

Using his right hand.His first Launch usually spins clockwise and uses Ultra Defense Mode. His left foot is forward and his right foot is backward. He pushes his body forward for Stability. Like Red Eye

Using his Right hand.His second launch also spins clockwise and Uses Ultra Stamina Mode: He does a jump to up its power and spins longer. When he launches he holds on to his launcher as tight as possible and pull the grip with all his might.

Third launch his most powerful launch.Using his left hand. His bey spins counterclockwise and is Ultra Attack mode. He faces his launcher up like Shu does,but upside down and rips it the opposite direction. Nothing can survive The Omega Launch.

Special moves
Power Spin (Defense)
Ultra Power Spin(Defense)
Spike Launch (Stamia)
Ultra Spike Launch (Stamia)
Omega Launch (Attack)

Omega A-Bomb is black and red
It looks like maximum garuda, but the energy layer is not flat it has spikes,alot of them.

Energy Layer: Omega A-Bomb S3
Red and Black
Like Garuda But has Spikes

Forge Disk: D06

Disc Frame: Flow: Color Red

Performance tip: Hunter: Color Black

Ali Info
Rival: Free de la hoya
Father: Alazar Makimo
Mother:Lify Makimo
Bestfriend:Valt Aoi
Girlfriend:None
Wins:200
Loses: 1
Beyblade Champion.

Hoped you liked my character i really put alot of thought into it and i might end up making more in the future.

If you look at my profile picture thats what Ali looks like. That was not made by me it was made by someone else, but it just happend to be the perfect example of Ali.

(Apr. 01, 2018  1:06 AM)Ali Makimo Wrote: [ -> ]The Legendary Blader
Name: Ali Makimo
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Looks: He is a White male with red hair(kinda pinkish) thats almost like Shu's hair, but shorter. He has Emerald eyes that glowin the dark(not really,but there nice). He wears a black and red checkers jacket,black pants,a white t, some black gloves, and a neckless that his mother gave him before she pasted.
Personality:Nice,Honest,Cute,Cocky,Helpfully,Friendly,Competitive, and Quiet.

His Partner/Bey: Omega A-Bomb

History: He is the number 1 blader in the world or used to be. He lived in a old town in Europe. His father used to be the worlds number 1 blader,but he retired. His father inspired him to train every single day to get better and better. He qualified for the regionals and won,same with the nationals. In his opinion he thinks the nationals was to easy. Later he joined BC Sol(before Free was there) and was the best blader on the team. With his help Bc Sol won 3 World Leagues in a row. He made his father proud. One day his mother died from a sickness. His mother told him one last thing to never give up on your dreams and gave him her good luck neckless. A few days later Free joined BC Sol and Ali lost his cool .He hated the fact the Free just showed up beating everyone. He even decide to stop blading for a year. When he heard Free left Bc Sol and went to the rageing bulls. That was his chance to show everyone that he was the best, not Free. When he showed up at Bc Sol, everyone knew exactly who he was, well everyone except Valt of course. When Valt found out that he was a Legendary Blader, he wanted to battle him more then anything. In fact everyone did. Ali was a nice guy so he battle everyone to learn there battle techniques and to give them advise. Chris was so excited that Ali had joined the team, she knew she had already one the world leauge.After battling everyone, it was him against Valt. Omega A-bomb is a Balance type of all three types,so he has the advantage over anyone. It can also spin counterclockwise and clockwise. They get ready and 3 2 1 let it rip. A-Bomb goes for the defence and takes the middle ,Valtryek goes for an attack and Valtryek bursted first contact. Ali Says "everyone did a good job,but your not ready for the world leauge, you need to train harder". Silas asked who Ali thinks is the strongest,he says "Its not about strength, its about how decated you are". On the other hand Ashtem wants Ali on his team in america,but Ali wants to face Free, not be his teammate. Ali ends up claiming his place as top and says he will never stop blading again.

Omega A-Bomb
Before Evolution its name was Alpha A-Bomb

A-Bomb Is a defence type of all three attributes.
Ultra Attack
Ultra Stamina
Ultra Defense

Ali had three different launches

Using his right hand.His first Launch usually spins clockwise and uses Ultra Defense Mode. His left foot is forward and his right foot is backward. He pushes his body forward for Stability. Like Red Eye

Using his Right hand.His second launch also spins clockwise and Uses Ultra Stamina Mode: He does a jump to up its power and spins longer. When he launches he holds on to his launcher as tight as possible and pull the grip with all his might.

Third launch his most powerful launch.Using his left hand. His bey spins counterclockwise and is Ultra Attack mode. He faces his launcher up like Shu does,but upside down and rips it the opposite direction. Nothing can survive The Omega Launch.

Special moves
Power Spin (Defense)
Ultra Power Spin(Defense)
Spike Launch (Stamia)
Ultra Spike Launch (Stamia)
Omega Launch (Attack)

Omega A-Bomb is black and red
It looks like maximum garuda, but the energy layer is not flat it has spikes,alot of them.

Energy Layer: Omega A-Bomb S3
Red and Black
Like Garuda But has Spikes

Forge Disk: D06

Disc Frame: Flow: Color Red

Performance tip: Hunter: Color Black

Ali Info
Rival: Free de la hoya
Father: Alazar Makimo
Mother:Lify Makimo
Bestfriend:Valt Aoi
Girlfriend:None
Wins:200
Loses: 1
Beyblade Champion.
Bey Spirit: Omega A-bomb is a red bull that stands on two legs and wears black armor. Its horns are on fire. It carry two 100 differnts types of swords on its back


Hoped you liked my character i really put alot of thought into it and i might end up making more in the future.

If you look at my profile picture thats what Ali looks like. That was not made by me it was made by someone else, but it just happend to be the perfect example of Ali.
(Apr. 01, 2018  1:06 AM)Ali Makimo Wrote: [ -> ]The Legendary Blader
Name: Ali Makimo
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Looks: He is a White male with red hair(kinda pinkish) thats almost like Shu's hair, but shorter. He has Emerald eyes that glowin the dark(not really,but there nice). He wears a black and red checkers jacket,black pants,a white t, some black gloves, and a neckless that his mother gave him before she pasted.
Personality:Nice,Honest,Cute,Cocky,Helpfully,Friendly,Competitive, and Quiet.

His Partner/Bey: Omega A-Bomb

History: He is the number 1 blader in the world or used to be. He lived in a old town in Europe. His father used to be the worlds number 1 blader,but he retired. His father inspired him to train every single day to get better and better. He qualified for the regionals and won,same with the nationals. In his opinion he thinks the nationals was to easy. Later he joined BC Sol(before Free was there) and was the best blader on the team. With his help Bc Sol won 3 World Leagues in a row. He made his father proud. One day his mother died from a sickness. His mother told him one last thing to never give up on your dreams and gave him her good luck neckless. A few days later Free joined BC Sol and Ali lost his cool .He hated the fact the Free just showed up beating everyone. He even decide to stop blading for a year. When he heard Free left Bc Sol and went to the rageing bulls. That was his chance to show everyone that he was the best, not Free. When he showed up at Bc Sol, everyone knew exactly who he was, well everyone except Valt of course. When Valt found out that he was a Legendary Blader, he wanted to battle him more then anything. In fact everyone did. Ali was a nice guy so he battle everyone to learn there battle techniques and to give them advise. Chris was so excited that Ali had joined the team, she knew she had already one the world leauge.After battling everyone, it was him against Valt. Omega A-bomb is a Balance type of all three types,so he has the advantage over anyone. It can also spin counterclockwise and clockwise. They get ready and 3 2 1 let it rip. A-Bomb goes for the defence and takes the middle ,Valtryek goes for an attack and Valtryek bursted first contact. Ali Says "everyone did a good job,but your not ready for the world leauge, you need to train harder". Silas asked who Ali thinks is the strongest,he says "Its not about strength, its about how decated you are". On the other hand Ashtem wants Ali on his team in america,but Ali wants to face Free, not be his teammate. Ali ends up claiming his place as top and says he will never stop blading again.

Omega A-Bomb
Before Evolution its name was Alpha A-Bomb

A-Bomb Is a defence type of all three attributes.
Ultra Attack
Ultra Stamina
Ultra Defense

Ali had three different launches

Using his right hand.His first Launch usually spins clockwise and uses Ultra Defense Mode. His left foot is forward and his right foot is backward. He pushes his body forward for Stability. Like Red Eye

Using his Right hand.His second launch also spins clockwise and Uses Ultra Stamina Mode: He does a jump to up its power and spins longer. When he launches he holds on to his launcher as tight as possible and pull the grip with all his might.

Third launch his most powerful launch.Using his left hand. His bey spins counterclockwise and is Ultra Attack mode. He faces his launcher up like Shu does,but upside down and rips it the opposite direction. Nothing can survive The Omega Launch.

Special moves
Power Spin (Defense)
Ultra Power Spin(Defense)
Spike Launch (Stamia)
Ultra Spike Launch (Stamia)
Omega Launch (Attack)

Omega A-Bomb is black and red
It looks like maximum garuda, but the energy layer is not flat it has spikes,alot of them.

Energy Layer: Omega A-Bomb S3
Red and Black
Like Garuda But has Spikes

Forge Disk: D06

Disc Frame: Flow: Color Red

Performance tip: Hunter: Color Black

Ali Info
Rival: Free de la hoya
Father: Alazar Makimo
Mother:Lify Makimo
Bestfriend:Valt Aoi
Girlfriend:None
Wins:200
Loses: 1
Beyblade Champion.

Hoped you liked my character i really put alot of thought into it and i might end up making more in the future.

If you look at my profile picture thats what Ali looks like. That was not made by me it was made by someone else, but it just happend to be the perfect example of Ali.

(Apr. 01, 2018  1:06 AM)Ali Makimo Wrote: [ -> ]The Legendary Blader
Name: Ali Makimo
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Looks: He is a White male with red hair(kinda pinkish) thats almost like Shu's hair, but shorter. He has Emerald eyes that glowin the dark(not really,but there nice). He wears a black and red checkers jacket,black pants,a white t, some black gloves, and a neckless that his mother gave him before she pasted.
Personality:Nice,Honest,Cute,Cocky,Helpfully,Friendly,Competitive, and Quiet.

His Partner/Bey: Omega A-Bomb

History: He is the number 1 blader in the world or used to be. He lived in a old town in Europe. His father used to be the worlds number 1 blader,but he retired. His father inspired him to train every single day to get better and better. He qualified for the regionals and won,same with the nationals. In his opinion he thinks the nationals was to easy. Later he joined BC Sol(before Free was there) and was the best blader on the team. With his help Bc Sol won 3 World Leagues in a row. He made his father proud. One day his mother died from a sickness. His mother told him one last thing to never give up on your dreams and gave him her good luck neckless. A few days later Free joined BC Sol and Ali lost his cool .He hated the fact the Free just showed up beating everyone. He even decide to stop blading for a year. When he heard Free left Bc Sol and went to the rageing bulls. That was his chance to show everyone that he was the best, not Free. When he showed up at Bc Sol, everyone knew exactly who he was, well everyone except Valt of course. When Valt found out that he was a Legendary Blader, he wanted to battle him more then anything. In fact everyone did. Ali was a nice guy so he battle everyone to learn there battle techniques and to give them advise. Chris was so excited that Ali had joined the team, she knew she had already one the world leauge.After battling everyone, it was him against Valt. Omega A-bomb is a Balance type of all three types,so he has the advantage over anyone. It can also spin counterclockwise and clockwise. They get ready and 3 2 1 let it rip. A-Bomb goes for the defence and takes the middle ,Valtryek goes for an attack and Valtryek bursted first contact. Ali Says "everyone did a good job,but your not ready for the world leauge, you need to train harder". Silas asked who Ali thinks is the strongest,he says "Its not about strength, its about how decated you are". On the other hand Ashtem wants Ali on his team in america,but Ali wants to face Free, not be his teammate. Ali ends up claiming his place as top and says he will never stop blading again.

Omega A-Bomb
Before Evolution its name was Alpha A-Bomb

A-Bomb Is a defence type of all three attributes.
Ultra Attack
Ultra Stamina
Ultra Defense

Ali had three different launches

Using his right hand.His first Launch usually spins clockwise and uses Ultra Defense Mode. His left foot is forward and his right foot is backward. He pushes his body forward for Stability. Like Red Eye

Using his Right hand.His second launch also spins clockwise and Uses Ultra Stamina Mode: He does a jump to up its power and spins longer. When he launches he holds on to his launcher as tight as possible and pull the grip with all his might.

Third launch his most powerful launch.Using his left hand. His bey spins counterclockwise and is Ultra Attack mode. He faces his launcher up like Shu does,but upside down and rips it the opposite direction. Nothing can survive The Omega Launch.

Special moves
Power Spin (Defense)
Ultra Power Spin(Defense)
Spike Launch (Stamia)
Ultra Spike Launch (Stamia)
Omega Launch (Attack)

Omega A-Bomb is black and red
It looks like maximum garuda, but the energy layer is not flat it has spikes,alot of them.

Energy Layer: Omega A-Bomb S3
Red and Black
Like Garuda But has Spikes

Forge Disk: D06

Disc Frame: Flow: Color Red

Performance tip: Hunter: Color Black

Ali Info
Rival: Free de la hoya
Father: Alazar Makimo
Mother:Lify Makimo
Bestfriend:Valt Aoi
Girlfriend:None
Wins:200
Loses: 1
Beyblade Champion.
Bey Spirit: Omega A-bomb is a red bull that stands on two legs and wears black armor. Its horns are on fire. It carry two 100 differnts types of swords on its back


Hoped you liked my character i really put alot of thought into it and i might end up making more in the future.

If you look at my profile picture thats what Ali looks like. That was not made by me it was made by someone else, but it just happend to be the perfect example of Ali.

um spread cant have a frame on it
Spread i didn't say i had Spread but thank you anyway.Do you like my character

never mind yes i did do you like my character

what should i do remove the frame or change the disk
One punch man he be great at Beyblade
Update:

Evolution: Aether Dragoon 0A. Mo

Aether Dragoon: After Ytrahnr gives Seraph to Rykos, it eventually evolves into Aether Dragoon. The layer's color scheme changes to a pearly indigo dappled with small white dots, with the design remaining largely the same, the only difference being that it now possesses sleeker "arms", much like that of tN, and they also possess rubber lining the sides of the "arms" to add friction and increase the likelihood of an opponent catching on them and bursting. The rubber inside these wings adds some weight to the layer.

0: painted ghostly white, heaviest disk, great for attack

Arc: This frame is silver, and rounded like the Ring disk, allowing for LAD and weight.

Meteor: The driver becomes more of a hardened rubbery RSF tip, able to wear and gradually become more controllable. Loses the weight disc.

Check page 2 for the final version, if it has been changed.
(Apr. 11, 2018  4:11 AM)Dragunix Wrote: [ -> ]Update:

Evolution: Aether Dragoon 0A. Mo

Aether Dragoon: After Ytrahnr gives Seraph to Rykos, it eventually evolves into Aether Dragoon. The layer's color scheme changes to a pearly indigo dappled with small white dots, with the design remaining largely the same, the only difference being that it now possesses sleeker "arms", much like that of tN, and they also possess rubber lining the sides of the "arms" to add friction and increase the likelihood of an opponent catching on them and bursting. The rubber inside these wings adds some weight to the layer.

0: painted ghostly white, heaviest disk, great for attack

Arc: This frame is silver, and rounded like the Ring disk, allowing for LAD and weight.

Meteor: The driver becomes more of a hardened rubbery RSF tip, able to wear and gradually become more controllable. Loses the weight disc.

Is Aether Dragoon Seraph Dragoon's Chouzetsu evolution? Or is a side branch that has gimmicks but has the weight and power to keep up with chouzetsu layers. (Like lyric Aeros and muted Sonar. Having the weight to match chouzetsu but gimmicks.)
hey should i do a Chouzetsu evolution of solor phonix a if yes what should its name be
(Apr. 11, 2018  1:27 PM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]
(Apr. 11, 2018  4:11 AM)Dragunix Wrote: [ -> ]Update:

Evolution: Aether Dragoon 0A. Mo

Aether Dragoon: After Ytrahnr gives Seraph to Rykos, it eventually evolves into Aether Dragoon. The layer's color scheme changes to a pearly indigo dappled with small white dots, with the design remaining largely the same, the only difference being that it now possesses sleeker "arms", much like that of tN, and they also possess rubber lining the sides of the "arms" to add friction and increase the likelihood of an opponent catching on them and bursting. The rubber inside these wings adds some weight to the layer.

0: painted ghostly white, heaviest disk, great for attack

Arc: This frame is silver, and rounded like the Ring disk, allowing for LAD and weight.

Meteor: The driver becomes more of a hardened rubbery RSF tip, able to wear and gradually become more controllable. Loses the weight disc.

Is Aether Dragoon Seraph Dragoon's Chouzetsu evolution? Or is a side branch that has gimmicks but has the weight and power to keep up with chouzetsu layers. (Like lyric Aeros and muted Sonar. Having the weight to match chouzetsu but gimmicks.)
Yeah, like lA and mS, alongside nD.
(Apr. 11, 2018  11:44 PM)Dragunix Wrote: [ -> ]
(Apr. 11, 2018  1:27 PM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]Is Aether Dragoon Seraph Dragoon's Chouzetsu evolution? Or is a side branch that has gimmicks but has the weight and power to keep up with chouzetsu layers. (Like lyric Aeros and muted Sonar. Having the weight to match chouzetsu but gimmicks.)
Yeah, like lA and mS, alongside nD.

Ok good to know. Also if Iris sonar didn't shatter then it would have evolved into a normal chouzetsu bey. Muted Sonar was made in the transition gap between God and chouzetsu and is a blend of the two. High weight with gimmicks. Let's call this deity form.

With sonar it goes
(Single)Sonar.S.S
(Dual)Silent Sonar.G.G
(God)Iris Sonar.8A.Br
(If Iris survived and became chouzetsu) Iridescent Sonar.12R.In
(Deity)Muted Sonar.18St.Cn
Blader to replace David, Mason McCarthy
His bey is agile mercury (mobile stamina)
aM layer
This layer it the size of dC but has no major contact points. It is round with small indents, sharing similarities with the earth wheel. It has a metal winged helmet in the centre of the beyblade, crowning a plastic stickerized head. It has a thin line of metal around the outside.
Disc: 10
The 10 disc is a stamina disc like a bigger, heavier yell. It is the same width as kaiser kerbeus and is heavier than 3 but lighter than 7. It is coloured a nice gold colour.
Frame: under
On bK. I gave it this because why not?
Driver: iron
This driver was first seen on sX
This bey comes in a booster.

Mercury and malicious mercury
Mercury:
This layer is kerbeus with spikes going the other way.
Eternal:
This disc is like outer but with less stamina
Zephyr:
First seen on Neptune
Malicious mercury:
Like a rounded deathscyther
Infinity:
On z2
Klaw:
This is a larger zephyr.
ChoZ Beys:

Heaven Susanoo 7 Clinch

Heaven Susanoo has a very bladed design. The sword is still a major contact point, but each blade now has metal supporting it's weight as well. The layer is incredibly unbalanced and has little to no stamina.

Clinch is a Full Auto Clutch driver, but around it's base are small spikes.

Illusion Tsukiyomi 4 Bearing

Illusion Tsukiyomi still has the previous gimmick with the retracting blades, but now there are metal balls on each blade of the layer to increase OWD.

Radiance Baldur 0 Steady

Radiance Baldur's new gimmick is in a way similar to Screw Trident. It has metal on the outside, in small spots, as well as rubber between each blade on the frame.

Steady is basically Atomic, but surrounding it is a rubber ring with spikes. The driver also has a shallow bowl near the top, somewhat like Yard.

Will continue later.
(this is one of the rare times I have a character that I am making a beyblade for.)
Name: Misuku Shirisaki
Age: 18 (during chouzetsu)
Height: 6'1"
Hair: White, slightly messy.
Eyes: pale red
Clothing: Tail coat over a red shirt with a stylized SD in dark red on the coat. Black pants and shoes.
Beyblade: Sacred Drake.17R.Th
Layer: Sacred Drake. This layer is a left spin attack type where the two contact points are different. One is a wing and has upper attack while the other is a jaggy, ice breath with strong smash attack. The wing and breath are filled with metal to not only increase weight but for focus the power on the contact points. The center depicts a metal dragon head breathing out the ice breath. Has a built in leveling chip. Perfectly balanced. White layer with Pearlescent icy blue metal.
Disk: 17. Balanced disk with moderate weight.
Frame: Reach. In left spin it acts like a barrage of mini V2 attacks. Icy blue.
Driver: Thrive. Circle flat that is slightly higher than normal. It has six steep wings that create strong down force in left spin. The flat is slightly rounded.
Special moves and launches:
Frost shoot: Misuku pulls the ripcord up as he slams the launcher down. This makes the circle ring contact and Drake circles with high speed.
Glacial burst: Drake darts forwards at an angle and the wing knocks the opponent off balance then the ice breath hits the opponent bursting it.
Extra:
-His last name is commonly misspelled and mispronounced. Countless people think he is related to Lui due to this.
-Strong blader, currently the sixth best blader in the world. Just behind Zac Tordaline.
With the characters here the big five would be Vis Zac Rykos ____ ____(two spots are open. not in order) @[Dragunix] any ideas?

Set things:
1. Zac is the 5th best blader
2. Vis and Rykos are first and second (order to be determined later.)
Arashi probably

As for the next spot idk
imy char
(Apr. 16, 2018  7:31 PM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]With the characters here the big five would be Vis Zac Rykos ____ ____(two spots are open. not in order) @[Dragunix] any ideas?

Set things:
1. Zac is the 5th best blader
2. Vis and Rykos are first and second (order to be determined later.)

my character could be the last one his bey

armor phoenix it can spin left and right

the layer has has 2 iron wing the disk is 14(which is great for balance types) and boost the driver is hand made by my character k.j. akiri and after a while the boost driver goes down giving it a extra boos if in attack mode and the driver can be changed into any mode by changing the position of the three talons which makes both its blader and the bey unpredictable

in attack: wing slash
in defence: iron wing wall
in stamina : phoenix grounds

in final drive: not yet discovered
(Apr. 16, 2018  9:49 PM)Dragunix Wrote: [ -> ]Arashi probably

As for the next spot idk

So
1st and 2nd: Vis and Rykos
3rd: Arashi
4th: ??? I would say Piluto but... cN broke.
5th: Zac
Name: Goes by the Nickname "Sion," His real name is Trent.
Age: 17
Height: 5'7
Hair: Dark Brown
Eyes: teal
Personality: Reserved and awkward in most social situations, but outgoing once you get to know him.
Outfit: Can usually be seen wearing a Red flannel, practicing around his neighborhood. He never goes to tournaments, because he isn't interested. He isn't the best, but he isn't the worst either. 

Main enemy: Shu Kurenai; Sion's prior beyblade, Advance Adranus Y S Was destroyed miserably in what was suppost to be a casual battle against Spriggan Requiem. Sion has a somewhat sinister goal to destroy Spriggan Requiem, though he never shows it up front. Even if Shu was reformed, Sion wants Shu to still feel the pain he felt seeing his humble companion decimated. 

Beyblade: Fuse Adranus 5R K

Layer: Fuse Adranus is a ChoZetsu Layer that has a marbelised gold outer plastic frame, with copper plated metal, and the center is a transparent yellow with a red accents and  stickers. It has six low sloped wings aranged in three pairs of two that are designed for outwards weight, down force wind, and a potential to respond with uppercut style attacks to encourage the opponent to burst significantly faster.

Driver: Kilter is a hybrid between Revolve and Orbit. Inside of the center is a small POM sphere about 3mm across. It is meant to improve stamina with a free rotating ball while enhancing defense simultaneously. To differentiate from revolve, it has verticsl stripes leading to the tip, and the free rotating disc has two crescent shaped holes opposite from eachother. The colorisation is a yellow driver with a small red POM pearl.
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