World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

(Dec. 07, 2014  5:31 AM)Shirayuki Wrote: [ -> ]

(Dec. 06, 2014  1:27 AM)Ocean Wrote: [ -> ][Image: 11ie1k2.png]
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[Image: jkugp4.png]

Comments and criticism on these?

There seems to always be reoccurring problems with all of your work.

• The render/focus is always too big and oversaturated/too low of an opacity
  
• It always turns out "hard" to look at.
  
• Where there SHOULD be lighting, there isn't any to be found.
  
• They always seem to be dark, causing the overall quality to worsen.
  

Tl;Dr they aren't bad, just lots of improvement needed.

alright.

thanks for the criticism. I'll work on those things.

thanks again

[Image: BlackBoxSigInori2_zps26167c8d.jpg]

CnC on this?

I think I did a pretty good job IMO

thx
very nice, I like the soft colors and the background

(Dec. 09, 2014  5:52 AM)Ocean Wrote: [ -> ]thx
very nice, I like the soft colors and the background

Haha thanks XD

I made a few works here, any feedback?

WORKS
I will post more when done some more.

(Dec. 11, 2014  1:26 AM)" Kirito Wrote: [ -> ]I made a few works here, any feedback?

WORKS

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[Image: 807KPCX.jpg?1]
[Image: dPwk5px.png?1]
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[Image: dsSLURh.jpg?1]

I will post more when done some more.

What program do u use? In the second one the bow tie doesn't fit right because of the angle. In the third one, it looks blurry and the mist or whatever around it makes it look really LQ and the render looks to grainy (oversharpened) or it could just be the render isn't good. Fourth one is too blurry. First one is best.

(Dec. 12, 2014  9:56 PM)BURGER KING Wrote: [ -> ]

(Dec. 11, 2014  1:26 AM)" Kirito Wrote: [ -> ]I made a few works here, any feedback?

WORKS

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[Image: 807KPCX.jpg?1]
[Image: dPwk5px.png?1]
[Image: 6nnr9hj.png?1]
[Image: dsSLURh.jpg?1]

I will post more when done some more.

What program do u use? In the second one the bow tie doesn't fit right because of the angle. In the third one, it looks blurry and the most or whatever around it makes it look really LQ and the render looks to grainy (oversharpened) or it could just be the render isn't good. Fourth one is too blurry. First one is best.

I use imgur, why?

(Dec. 12, 2014  9:57 PM)" Kirito Wrote: [ -> ]

(Dec. 12, 2014  9:56 PM)BURGER KING Wrote: [ -> ]

(Dec. 11, 2014  1:26 AM)" Kirito Wrote: [ -> ]I made a few works here, any feedback?

WORKS

Spoiler (Click to View)

[Image: 807KPCX.jpg?1]
[Image: dPwk5px.png?1]
[Image: 6nnr9hj.png?1]
[Image: dsSLURh.jpg?1]

I will post more when done some more.

What program do u use? In the second one the bow tie doesn't fit right because of the angle. In the third one, it looks blurry and the most or whatever around it makes it look really LQ and the render looks to grainy (oversharpened) or it could just be the render isn't good. Fourth one is too blurry. First one is best.

I use imgur, why?

No, what editing program? Imgur is an image hosting site.

(Dec. 12, 2014  9:58 PM)BURGER KING Wrote: [ -> ]

(Dec. 12, 2014  9:57 PM)" Kirito Wrote: [ -> ]

(Dec. 12, 2014  9:56 PM)BURGER KING Wrote: [ -> ]What program do u use? In the second one the bow tie doesn't fit right because of the angle. In the third one, it looks blurry and the most or whatever around it makes it look really LQ and the render looks to grainy (oversharpened) or it could just be the render isn't good. Fourth one is too blurry. First one is best.

I use imgur, why?

No, what editing program? Imgur is an image hosting site.

I use imgur to edit.

(Dec. 12, 2014  10:01 PM)" Kirito Wrote: [ -> ]

(Dec. 12, 2014  9:58 PM)BURGER KING Wrote: [ -> ]

(Dec. 12, 2014  9:57 PM)" Kirito Wrote: [ -> ]I use imgur, why?

No, what editing program? Imgur is an image hosting site.

I use imgur to edit.

Try pixlr,its better

(Dec. 12, 2014  10:05 PM)Spectral Wrote: [ -> ]

(Dec. 12, 2014  10:01 PM)" Kirito Wrote: [ -> ]

(Dec. 12, 2014  9:58 PM)BURGER KING Wrote: [ -> ]No, what editing program? Imgur is an image hosting site.

I use imgur to edit.

Try pixlr,its better

Don't even go to pixlr. Go straight into a REAL editing program. Try gimp instead, or go to Photoshop cs2 if that is still free

(Dec. 12, 2014  10:10 PM)Shirayuki Wrote: [ -> ]

(Dec. 12, 2014  10:05 PM)Spectral Wrote: [ -> ]

(Dec. 12, 2014  10:01 PM)" Kirito Wrote: [ -> ]I use imgur to edit.

Try pixlr,its better

Don't even go to pixlr. Go straight into a REAL editing program. Try gimp instead, or go to Photoshop cs2 if that is still free

Pixlr is an option,Photoshop cs2 costs money,gimp is pretty good I guess

(Dec. 12, 2014  10:12 PM)Spectral Wrote: [ -> ]

(Dec. 12, 2014  10:10 PM)Shirayuki Wrote: [ -> ]

(Dec. 12, 2014  10:05 PM)Spectral Wrote: [ -> ]Try pixlr,its better

Don't even go to pixlr. Go straight into a REAL editing program. Try gimp instead, or go to Photoshop cs2 if that is still free

Pixlr is an option,Photoshop cs2 costs money,gimp is pretty good I guess

I'll try gimp

Is GIMP an app? I don't see it...

(Dec. 12, 2014  10:15 PM)BURGER KING Wrote: [ -> ]Is GIMP an app? I don't see it...

gimp.org

[Image: nxo02h.jpg]

Anyone wanna resize that to the size of my sig? I'm having trouble doing it (I've resized images before). Then could you tell me how big I should resize it to next time. Thanks.

(Dec. 12, 2014  10:28 PM)BURGER KING Wrote: [ -> ][Image: nxo02h.jpg]

Anyone wanna resize that to the size of my sig? I'm having trouble doing it (I've resized images before). Then could you tell me how big I should resize it to next time. Thanks.

I'll save ur images to my computer and check the sig size. I'll resize the other one if u have no problem with me saving them?

(Dec. 12, 2014  10:17 PM)Shirayuki Wrote: [ -> ]

(Dec. 12, 2014  10:15 PM)BURGER KING Wrote: [ -> ]Is GIMP an app? I don't see it...

gimp.org

You need to download it.

(Dec. 12, 2014  11:29 PM)" Kirito Wrote: [ -> ]

(Dec. 12, 2014  10:28 PM)BURGER KING Wrote: [ -> ][Image: nxo02h.jpg]

Anyone wanna resize that to the size of my sig? I'm having trouble doing it (I've resized images before). Then could you tell me how big I should resize it to next time. Thanks.

I'll save ur images to my computer and check the sig size. I'll resize the other one if u have no problem with me saving them?

(Dec. 12, 2014  10:17 PM)Shirayuki Wrote: [ -> ]

(Dec. 12, 2014  10:15 PM)BURGER KING Wrote: [ -> ]Is GIMP an app? I don't see it...

gimp.org

You need to download it.

Yo don't have a prob with you saving it

(Dec. 12, 2014  10:17 PM)Shirayuki Wrote: [ -> ]

(Dec. 12, 2014  10:15 PM)BURGER KING Wrote: [ -> ]Is GIMP an app? I don't see it...

gimp.org

I tried to download it, but whenever I try and launch it, it crashes.

Stats:

• 30 minutes of work on Photoshop
  
• 10 minutes finding renders
  
• 5 minutes finding background
  
• Total : 45 minutes
  

Any Cnc on this ??

(Dec. 13, 2014  9:04 AM)Cup Wrote: [ -> ]

[Image: 111.png]

Stats:

• 30 minutes of work on Photoshop
  
• 10 minutes finding renders
  
• 5 minutes finding background
  
• Total : 45 minutes
  

Any Cnc on this ??

The text is big and distracting and the border is way too thick. I also see that the text is on a layer of it's own(?) causing inconsistencies with the lightning.

Nice job, Cup.

http://photoshop.atspace.co.uk/index.php...+signature

You added your name and a black border to the seventh step's example image.

[Image: strokeresult.jpg]

(Dec. 13, 2014  9:04 AM)Cup Wrote: [ -> ]

[Image: 111.png]

Stats:

• 30 minutes of work on Photoshop
  
• 10 minutes finding renders
  
• 5 minutes finding background
  
• Total : 45 minutes
  
  

Any Cnc on this ??

More like, two seconds to download and re-upload with minor edits.

Nice catch Angry F!

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Also, Cup, you should know that the image is not forum - appropriate anyway.

Any CnC on these?