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(Nov. 22, 2012  4:25 AM)Tri Wrote: [ -> ]Sticking to one style for a while is okay. For instance, Focus did smudge tags for a log time.

XD! I was Addicted to Smudge ! Now I came out of it! I may go into Smudge Again XD!(Prabably when i get my Tablet as my bday gift yay!)

(Nov. 21, 2012  11:02 PM)Tri Wrote: [ -> ]Cnc this, i messed up the lighting. I'll fix that, but I'll go ahead and post

[Image: XK0Yr.png]

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I'm on the third book of this series!

Need to work on Flow and Blending, Lighting seems Okay....Depth and Composition are needed!

[Image: Naruto.png]
CnC?

Speaking of tablet, I did some extra research, the Intuos 5 Touch Small is better for us.

SO yeah, I need renders, any sources?

(Nov. 22, 2012  3:20 PM)Death! Wrote: [ -> ][Image: Naruto.png]
CnC?

The render looks squished, and the text is a boring white that I can't even tell says 'Naruto'. It also has too many colors in the BG, and blending is severely needed! It's okay overall.

Ahh!!! Too bright towards the right. Can't read the text ery well, and duplication of the render is VERY obvious. In the corner, heck, I don't even know what that is. KIU.

(Nov. 22, 2012  5:56 AM)MexaMaster Wrote: [ -> ]

(Nov. 22, 2012  4:25 AM)Tri Wrote: [ -> ]Sticking to one style for a while is okay. For instance, Focus did smudge tags for a log time.

Thanks!

Also,I can't upload the file type any where.How do I fix that?

CnC?

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you go to file export and export it as a png

Your attempt at Mino's tut is just... nothing like the original artwork.. still, KIU

Haven't done one in a while because I have no computer at my dad's, so, yeah.
[Image: Nightfury.png]

CnC?

I really like it. There's not much to improve except maybe a little blending here and there.

Rendering could be better, I can clearly see the white outline.

Focal is a bit off, as well as the text.
Blending and a bit more powerful depth would help.
Better compo is achievable, but nice work.

Now that you point it out, I see the render as well.

CnC please?
[Image: Neku%20Signature%20GIMP.png]
I used photoshop for this.It's sorta messed up

Blend could be a bit better, but overall pretty good. I don't like the text much.

CnC?

No depth bad lighting but your best so far. KIU!

New tag, same render since the old one:
[Image: exWOx.png]

And this time, There's a tutorial for it:
if that doesn't work:
http://synthasion.deviantart.com/art/Gen...1353633125

CnC?

(Nov. 22, 2012  1:30 PM)SilverChronos Wrote: [ -> ]Could someone please CnC my new style? Here it is (only gave the BG)
[Image: 8207526525_365e8e9dca.jpg]
Here's my vein style. I'll probably be using this more than the other one.
[Image: 8207546457_b5fe24e197.jpg]

Was I forgotten about? I need some CnC now~

Dude, seriously?

YC Forum Rules Wrote:20. General GFX Thread
Its not the mandatory CnC thread. It is completely optional for people to provide critique. And if your post is "ignored" do not repeatedly spam the thread asking for CnC. Repeat offenders will be confronted.

(Nov. 23, 2012  2:21 AM)SilverChronos Wrote: [ -> ]

(Nov. 22, 2012  1:30 PM)SilverChronos Wrote: [ -> ]Could someone please CnC my new style? Here it is (only gave the BG)
[Image: 8207526525_365e8e9dca.jpg]
Here's my vein style. I'll probably be using this more than the other one.
[Image: 8207546457_b5fe24e197.jpg]

Was I forgotten about? I need some CnC now~

plain LQ and no flow or lighting but KIU and KT

My bad, I forgot~
Thanks BB4ever!

[Image: ironman.png]
CnC?

It is too passive. The background is childish, and the beam in front of Ironman is essentially transparent and does not look like energy/fire at all.

I tried using only one color instead of using two colors in my signatures....
[Image: GreenLantern.png]
CnC?

Could use a little more blending on the right side of the render, and it's nearly impossible for me to read the text. It also seems kinda empty in the top left corner, like it was forgotten about. I like it though, KIU!