The Blader's spirit

Poll: what did you think

great
38.46%
20
ammusing
32.69%
17
ok
13.46%
7
bad
15.38%
8
Total: 100% 52 vote(s)
(Feb. 26, 2012  9:31 PM)nationsbeyblade Wrote: also does anyone have an idea for a new bey for this?
Basalt Horogium GR125 (Grind 125) FB
GR125 grinds on foe when attacked below the metal wheel.Made up GR125 myself!

The problem is your wrong grammar and it should be in a proper format of a paragraph but anyway good story
yeah im trying to sort it out also thanks
yeah, but DONT GIVE UP! Grin i wanna know what happens, your doing great! Smile
i will post u when chapter 14 is edited
(Feb. 22, 2012  10:53 PM)CrownClown Wrote: I think it would be fun if i was in it.
My bey would be screw fox 90MF.
I like the story by the way. Just because their are not trying to be mean, many mistakes, you can still rewrite and edit until it is the perfect story. Keep working at it !!!
i will use ur character

(Feb. 28, 2012  8:22 AM)nationsbeyblade Wrote: thanks
No problem

what about me? Crying (lol jk) this story is REALLY succesful...
Thanks! Grin lol! (so do you!) Gasp
no problem! Grin lol... this is getting really of subject now :L
(Feb. 29, 2012  8:53 PM)nationsbeyblade Wrote: crax you rule
I'm just trying to help out,thats all.


(Feb. 29, 2012  8:58 PM)nationsbeyblade Wrote: you rule too luck
I agree.

chapter 14 will be finshed edited soon! (hopefully)
(Feb. 29, 2012  9:08 PM)Crax686 Wrote:
(Feb. 29, 2012  8:53 PM)nationsbeyblade Wrote: crax you rule
I'm just trying to help out,thats all.


(Feb. 29, 2012  8:58 PM)nationsbeyblade Wrote: you rule too luck
I agree.

thanks man! Grin (so do you)
Good story nationsbeyblade's! Keep working on stories Smile
lol, MFB Mad Master, its not crax's story, its nationsbeyblade's