(Feb. 21, 2011 9:04 PM)raffy614 Wrote:(Feb. 21, 2011 4:53 AM)HellKerbex14 Wrote:(Feb. 20, 2011 9:37 PM)raffy614 Wrote: could he be one of the good guys????????????
Name:Tsuyoshi ( su-yo-shi)
Gender: male
Age:19
Personality:
Beyblade: Electrode Watersnake WPCH65 (Water Producer Change Height 65-1000 ) EMFWD (Eternal Metal Floating Wide Defense)
Special move:Flooding Fury
Bottom feature: Best Balance Bottom when the wpch65 activates, emfwd changes into float mode, then the bottom's metal goes to the metal wheel and the bottom is left plastic while it has epic balance 0 percent recoil. when the other bey is beaten, the metal wheel transfers the metal to the bottom.
P.S ur story is eppic!!!
thank you But i only accept beys under real constellations so when posting a character with a made-up bey please specify its constellation for instance all of the spirit beys (with the exeption of kitsune who is under the constellation vulpecula) are under former constellations Ill put your bey under the constellation Eridanus the river
i forgot 2 mention this is under the constellation of hydra
Can you simplify this a little bit the bey is alittle......over fantasized as far as parts go but its a good Idea please re submit your bey with some dif parts I like the water producer but can its change hieght be a little less dramatic
chapter 11
I woke up in what seemed to be a metal room, but I quickly realized that I was in a prison cell. There was a faint glow coming from a light above. I ran over to the bars and grabbed them but they released an electric charge so powerful that I fell back. "I wouldn't try that again" said Cynthia in a teasing voice. "what do you want" I replied. "Oh nothing it's master Gen who wants you" she said back. "Where's Hotaru and Christian!" I shouted. "I don't like your tone of voice" she said in a mean tone. "I don't care where are my friends!" I yelled. "Ok if thats how you wanna be." Then she reached over to the wall and grabbed a silver rod with a black rubber handle and jabbed me with it, it released an electric charge into my body and I felt pain throughout my entire body. I wanted to scream but I clenched my jaw shut, I didn't want to give Cynthia the satisfaction. "If you must know your friends ran off, but we sent some guards after them but seeing as they are of no use to us their probably dead" she said casually. "Why didn't you just kill me" I asked. I wanted to throw up at the thought that my friends might be dead. "Because if we kill you then your bey will disappear and we want to experiment with it a little bit first." She said. "Its a shame your gonna die soon you had such a cute face" she said. I reached for kitsune only to find that it wasn't there. "We wouldn't want you escaping would we now" she said holding a glass case containing Rage Kitsune UW145CS. With that she set the case on the table she was sitting on and walked off leaving me alone. I sat in my prison cell waiting for the worst, the strange thing was, I wasn't even afraid of dying in fact I was accepting my death. I sat there for what felt like hours. Then I heard a noise coming from my cell door I looked up to see a red headed girl and two other people.
"who are you" I asked. "Were the resistance and were here to break you out." she replied. She then reached for the silver rod and jabbed it onto the bars before me they released a flash of electricity and then they suddenly died. "Oh yeah my name is Kotori and this is Nii and Akiko." she said pointing to a neon blue haired boy and a blond girl with glasses. "Akiko try to open up his cell." commanded Kotori. Akiko ran over to a computer and began to to tap away at the keyboard mumbling to herself." I got it!" she yelled, and after pressing the enter key my cell doors opened. As soon as my cell had opened I ran over to my bey and broke open the glass case. "Lets get out of here" said Kotori. As we ran we passed a room that had a holographic display of a map with 4 dots on it. "These are the spirit bladers we haven't found yet." muttered Gen staring at the map. I saw that there was one person in Australia, France, America, and Canada. These were some of the worlds major bey blading countries.
I continued to run along with Kotori and her gang. We managed to leave the building but we set off an alarm. The guards instantly began running after us but we quicly lost them in an alley. "Who are you guys!?" I shouted. "Quiet and we'll answer your questions later." she replied. Then she seemed to be searching around the bricks. "Ah there it is" she said then she pressed a brick and the bricks opened up into a high-tech elevator I stepped inside and we began our decent.
End of chapter 11 part 1