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(Jan. 31, 2011 11:08 PM)Sparta Wrote:(Jan. 31, 2011 4:35 AM)C-Dub Wrote: k sounds gooda!!!
ROTFL!!! I get it!!! Like the cheese? Gooda??!! Hhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha lolololololololololololololololol!!!!!!!!!!!!
yeah
any way i'm going to make my newest chapter soon!!!!(P.S. This is not going to be my only story!!!)
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-Tnx KingCepheusIII and Omega12!!(Jan. 31, 2011 11:44 PM)C-Dub Wrote:Drop the hammer, will yah?! Well I'm game! Next chapter coming soon!(Jan. 31, 2011 11:08 PM)Sparta Wrote:(Jan. 31, 2011 4:35 AM)C-Dub Wrote: k sounds gooda!!!
ROTFL!!! I get it!!! Like the cheese? Gooda??!! Hhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha lolololololololololololololololol!!!!!!!!!!!!
yeah
(P.S. This is not going to be my only story!!!)
what's that supposed 2 mean??==
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C-Dub, who is going to be in the next part? and am i going to be a main character?
I'll try to squeeze urs in as a main.he's definately in the nxt chaptah!!
lololol jkjkjk
yaah yah just look at my NEW story!!!
Chapter 14:Who,What,Where,Why,How?!?!?!?!?!Part 2 of 3
"Get ready Jeff!!You're about to get schooled!!"The guy next to the person who made the deal."Th-Three"I said weakly."TWOOOOO!"The kid said confidently."1!!!"The man said evily."LET IT RIP!!!"We all said.All four beys went in the stadium flying."GOOOO!!Warrior Orion!!"The kid said.I was guessing that was his bey.Orion fiercily attacked the evil man's bey."Is that all you got little boy?!?!?Then prepare to lose!"The man said."APOLLOO help Orion!!"I commanded.Apollo obeyed and helped."That's quite some power!!But it's not enough to defeat MY Speed Demon!!!"The man said.His bey pushed both my and the kids bey.Then,suddenly another bey came soaring to help Demon!"Don't forget me!!"The servant of the mean man shouted."Go...Hyper Griffin!!!"He said."NOOOOO come on apolloooo!!Don't fail!Push against them!!Kid help me do so!!"I said with new found power."Nick...the name is Nick!"He said."And I will help you!!!GO.....ORION 4 SWORD STRIKE!!"He shouted.Then Nick's bey's fusion wheel had 4 swords that popped out and continuesly hit Griffin."I'll take care of Griffin!!You take care of Speed!!!"He said.Griffin was being slowly pushed back until Orion tossed it out!!"Now it's MY turn!!!SPECIAL MOVEE!!!SUN BLAZER!!!"I said.Apollo pushed Demon five feet away and jumped in the air and got covered in fire and attacked Speed Demon from the top!!!Demon soared out of the stadium and hit it's master in the head but it didn't kill him or anything."I-I lost?Im-impossible!!!!!"
Ya know what 2 do!!
"Get ready Jeff!!You're about to get schooled!!"The guy next to the person who made the deal."Th-Three"I said weakly."TWOOOOO!"The kid said confidently."1!!!"The man said evily."LET IT RIP!!!"We all said.All four beys went in the stadium flying."GOOOO!!Warrior Orion!!"The kid said.I was guessing that was his bey.Orion fiercily attacked the evil man's bey."Is that all you got little boy?!?!?Then prepare to lose!"The man said."APOLLOO help Orion!!"I commanded.Apollo obeyed and helped."That's quite some power!!But it's not enough to defeat MY Speed Demon!!!"The man said.His bey pushed both my and the kids bey.Then,suddenly another bey came soaring to help Demon!"Don't forget me!!"The servant of the mean man shouted."Go...Hyper Griffin!!!"He said."NOOOOO come on apolloooo!!Don't fail!Push against them!!Kid help me do so!!"I said with new found power."Nick...the name is Nick!"He said."And I will help you!!!GO.....ORION 4 SWORD STRIKE!!"He shouted.Then Nick's bey's fusion wheel had 4 swords that popped out and continuesly hit Griffin."I'll take care of Griffin!!You take care of Speed!!!"He said.Griffin was being slowly pushed back until Orion tossed it out!!"Now it's MY turn!!!SPECIAL MOVEE!!!SUN BLAZER!!!"I said.Apollo pushed Demon five feet away and jumped in the air and got covered in fire and attacked Speed Demon from the top!!!Demon soared out of the stadium and hit it's master in the head but it didn't kill him or anything."I-I lost?Im-impossible!!!!!"
Ya know what 2 do!!
yay go jeff
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that chapter was awesome
wow so good heres my charicter
name sato
good
bey storm dragoon
bio was given dragoon by tyson himself and idolises him
acts cind but when it comes to bateling hes brutal
specal move dragoon kamikazi attack he moves al around in random movements then dragoon apperes and smashes them
go 11 year olds
name sato
good
bey storm dragoon
bio was given dragoon by tyson himself and idolises him
acts cind but when it comes to bateling hes brutal
specal move dragoon kamikazi attack he moves al around in random movements then dragoon apperes and smashes them
go 11 year olds
tnx guys!!Chapter 14:Who,What,where,why,how?!?!!?!?!?Part 3 of 3
"Fine.I'll confess."He said."Wait I need you to do something before you confess."I said walking to get the safe and put it before him."The code!Unlock it!!"I commanded him.He did so."Now fess up you kidnapper!Who are you and this other guy,why am i here,do you have a boss over you,where am i,and how the H*** do i get outta here?"I asked."I'm Drew and this is my servant Max Daun.You are here because we wanted to gather info on you whick we did well you're battling info,yes i have a boss and i just sent you're info to him,and you're in a base under the hotel you were staying at,and i'm not telling you how to get outta here!"He awnsered."Fine..."I said taking Burn Fireblaze out of the safe.I got my launcher and put Apollo in it."Where's Pheonix?"I asked."Uggghh must I tell you everything?Fine...he's in the next room."He said."Good...Let it Riiippp!!!!"I yelled."Wha.....AAAHHHHHHHH!!!"He yelled in agony.He fell to his knees with a fatal wound on his shoulder.Apollo came back in my hand with no blood on it luckily."That's what you get."I murmered under my breath kicking the cell door down and going into the next room."PHEONIX!!!!"i yelled."Wha-a let's battle."He said.I threw him his bey and we got ready to launch."THREEEEE!!!"I said with Nick on the side of me."TWOOOOO!!!"Pheonix said confidently."OOONNNEEEEEEE!!!"We both shouted"LET IT RIIIPPP!!!!"the beys were circiling fastly."I can't believe i'm battling with the bombatious PHEONIX!!!!"I said ecstaticly.The beys were looking as if they were talking smack and smacking each other.The battle lasted a really long time!!"Let's end this Fireblaze!!BURN FIREBLAAAAZZZEEEE!!!!"He shouted.As expected there was a HUGE fire!!!"Hey Pheonix, if i win i get 3 parts of Fireblaze!!!"I suggested"Sure!"He awnsered.Suddenly it got really hot.I remembered his move was still happening!"NOOOOO!!!Gooooooo APOLLOOOO SPECIAL MOVEEE!!!SUN BLAZEEEERRRR!!!!"I screeeched.Then Apollo got covered in just as much fire as fireblaze!!!"Your strong but i'm stronger!!Go Fireblaze!!"Pheonix said.Apollo and Fireblaze clashed together!Fireblaze threw Apollo up."Well PHEONIX this is my power!!"I said.Apollo came soaring down landing directly on fireblaze!!!Fireblaze hit the wall and stopped!!!"I WIINNNNNNNN!!"I said exitedly.Apollo suddenly made a huge fire hurrican that covered it!"WHOOOAAA!!!"I shouted while being slammed into the wall.I stood up and it stopped and Apollo came to me!"Now let's get the f*** out of here...Jeff and Nick.!!"Pheonix said and we went upstairs and saw the rest of the gang.
*Somewhere else*
"Damn it!! he failed. but the cigars are really good..any how time to take matters into my own hands!!!"
End of chapter!!!Ya know what 2 do!!!!
"Fine.I'll confess."He said."Wait I need you to do something before you confess."I said walking to get the safe and put it before him."The code!Unlock it!!"I commanded him.He did so."Now fess up you kidnapper!Who are you and this other guy,why am i here,do you have a boss over you,where am i,and how the H*** do i get outta here?"I asked."I'm Drew and this is my servant Max Daun.You are here because we wanted to gather info on you whick we did well you're battling info,yes i have a boss and i just sent you're info to him,and you're in a base under the hotel you were staying at,and i'm not telling you how to get outta here!"He awnsered."Fine..."I said taking Burn Fireblaze out of the safe.I got my launcher and put Apollo in it."Where's Pheonix?"I asked."Uggghh must I tell you everything?Fine...he's in the next room."He said."Good...Let it Riiippp!!!!"I yelled."Wha.....AAAHHHHHHHH!!!"He yelled in agony.He fell to his knees with a fatal wound on his shoulder.Apollo came back in my hand with no blood on it luckily."That's what you get."I murmered under my breath kicking the cell door down and going into the next room."PHEONIX!!!!"i yelled."Wha-a let's battle."He said.I threw him his bey and we got ready to launch."THREEEEE!!!"I said with Nick on the side of me."TWOOOOO!!!"Pheonix said confidently."OOONNNEEEEEEE!!!"We both shouted"LET IT RIIIPPP!!!!"the beys were circiling fastly."I can't believe i'm battling with the bombatious PHEONIX!!!!"I said ecstaticly.The beys were looking as if they were talking smack and smacking each other.The battle lasted a really long time!!"Let's end this Fireblaze!!BURN FIREBLAAAAZZZEEEE!!!!"He shouted.As expected there was a HUGE fire!!!"Hey Pheonix, if i win i get 3 parts of Fireblaze!!!"I suggested"Sure!"He awnsered.Suddenly it got really hot.I remembered his move was still happening!"NOOOOO!!!Gooooooo APOLLOOOO SPECIAL MOVEEE!!!SUN BLAZEEEERRRR!!!!"I screeeched.Then Apollo got covered in just as much fire as fireblaze!!!"Your strong but i'm stronger!!Go Fireblaze!!"Pheonix said.Apollo and Fireblaze clashed together!Fireblaze threw Apollo up."Well PHEONIX this is my power!!"I said.Apollo came soaring down landing directly on fireblaze!!!Fireblaze hit the wall and stopped!!!"I WIINNNNNNNN!!"I said exitedly.Apollo suddenly made a huge fire hurrican that covered it!"WHOOOAAA!!!"I shouted while being slammed into the wall.I stood up and it stopped and Apollo came to me!"Now let's get the f*** out of here...Jeff and Nick.!!"Pheonix said and we went upstairs and saw the rest of the gang.
*Somewhere else*
"Damn it!! he failed. but the cigars are really good..any how time to take matters into my own hands!!!"
End of chapter!!!Ya know what 2 do!!!!
awesome go jeff woot
Aww... I suck... But awesome chapters though!!
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sry and tnx!!
Chapter 15:Family Reunion!!For now..*From Jeff's eyes*
Me,Nick,and Pheonix dashed up the stairs to see our team.But we ended up in the bathroom and then we walked to see them.When Pheonix knocked on the door it opened and all of them had their beys pointed at the door!So now they were pointing at us."3 2 1 LET IITTT RI-"the all stopped."Guys its' me!!and i brought 2 friends with me!!Meet Nick and Pheonix!"I said introducing."I know who i want to travel with!...Pheonix and Nick.If you wanna travel.."I said timidly."Sure i'll travel with you!!Pheonix?"Nick said."Yes i will help you.. on one condition."He said."What?"I asked."You have to bring me to Ginga...my son."He awnsered."Ok that'll be easy!!"I said with a smile on my face."Great...now let's go."He said.So we hugged and we convinced Pheonix to stay for a night before we go for Ginga."Kevin.. May i speak to you in private?"Pheonix suddenly asked."Sure Kevin said.*Kevin's eyes for now*I walked over to Pheonix in my jammies and said,"Was up?What do you want to talk about?" "I want to talk about your ancestry.Let me examine your bey."He said."Ok here"I said handing him Pegasis."Yes,yes..fine indeed.This is Pegasis's other evolution."He said."Huh?!?!"I said with fear and exitement."Yes there are 4 evolution's of Pegasis...well,basic evolutins.There is Cyber which is held by Sora and Galaxy by Ginga and Eclipse...by you.So you must battle them to determine the strongest in the universe!But there is another one...Thunder Pegasis W105 R3F!It will be controled by one of your friends!You must tame them to be good or evil..they will be taken by Meteo or Galaxy..It's in your hands to protect them from Meteo!!!So train hard and become strong.now go and get a good night's rest young one."He said.I was shocked and i went to bed..dumbstruck by what i just heard.Any way i drifted into sleep.
Yall know what to do!!
Me,Nick,and Pheonix dashed up the stairs to see our team.But we ended up in the bathroom and then we walked to see them.When Pheonix knocked on the door it opened and all of them had their beys pointed at the door!So now they were pointing at us."3 2 1 LET IITTT RI-"the all stopped."Guys its' me!!and i brought 2 friends with me!!Meet Nick and Pheonix!"I said introducing."I know who i want to travel with!...Pheonix and Nick.If you wanna travel.."I said timidly."Sure i'll travel with you!!Pheonix?"Nick said."Yes i will help you.. on one condition."He said."What?"I asked."You have to bring me to Ginga...my son."He awnsered."Ok that'll be easy!!"I said with a smile on my face."Great...now let's go."He said.So we hugged and we convinced Pheonix to stay for a night before we go for Ginga."Kevin.. May i speak to you in private?"Pheonix suddenly asked."Sure Kevin said.*Kevin's eyes for now*I walked over to Pheonix in my jammies and said,"Was up?What do you want to talk about?" "I want to talk about your ancestry.Let me examine your bey."He said."Ok here"I said handing him Pegasis."Yes,yes..fine indeed.This is Pegasis's other evolution."He said."Huh?!?!"I said with fear and exitement."Yes there are 4 evolution's of Pegasis...well,basic evolutins.There is Cyber which is held by Sora and Galaxy by Ginga and Eclipse...by you.So you must battle them to determine the strongest in the universe!But there is another one...Thunder Pegasis W105 R3F!It will be controled by one of your friends!You must tame them to be good or evil..they will be taken by Meteo or Galaxy..It's in your hands to protect them from Meteo!!!So train hard and become strong.now go and get a good night's rest young one."He said.I was shocked and i went to bed..dumbstruck by what i just heard.Any way i drifted into sleep.
Yall know what to do!!
will drew and speed demon ever be in the story again
what about my charicter
awesome!!!!!!!!!!! Luckily, I read ur post in another story thread and came to this story just becoz of your sig!!!
Keep it up!! The 1st chap. resembles my life. Though I am not at all out of Pokemon!!!!
PROOF ABOUT WHAT I SAID: READ MY SIG!! I HAVENT CHANGED IT FROM THE DAY I CAME TO WBO!!!
Keep it up!! The 1st chap. resembles my life. Though I am not at all out of Pokemon!!!!
PROOF ABOUT WHAT I SAID: READ MY SIG!! I HAVENT CHANGED IT FROM THE DAY I CAME TO WBO!!!
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Great story C-Dub and Thx for commenting on mine!
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when is my character going to be in?!
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Credit to MBX for the awesome siggie