Samuel's Revenge!(A beyblade story)Accepting character requests!

Poll: Is my story

Horrible-1
10.84%
9
Really Bad-2
0%
0
Bad-3
6.02%
5
not worst-4
4.82%
4
Ok-5
6.02%
5
Average-6
2.41%
2
Good-7
15.66%
13
Fantastic!-8
8.43%
7
Xtreamly good!
7.23%
6
Definition of Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!
38.55%
32
Total: 100% 83 vote(s)
love your story man
and that was an awesome chapter
thanks and super thanks
your welcome.so did you read the pm i sent you it contains iportant stuff about my story that you must read.and i also posted something on my story that you must read
Epic story, P.S. I am 11 too!
love the story!whens next 1?
Chapter 12 Part 4 of 4:Block D Ethan with Comet Dranzer vs. Will with Destruction Centipede
*Ethan's point of view*

"Nice win man that was beast!"Said Jeff and Kevin when JP walked to us."Thanks guys.Now it's Ethans turn!"JP said."I still can't believe that JC is your brother man!That's just WEIRD!!"Samuel said."Well, it looks like it's my time to battle."I said standing up slowly."Hey Ethan can I do maintanence on your bey?"Nagato asked."Yeah sure whateve's."I said to him giving him my bey.I just waited patiently until he finished."Ok all done Ethan!Dranzer's 100% ready to battle!"He said to me giving Dranzer back."Yeah thanks alot Nagato."I said to him walking to the locker room.The first couple of rounds were easy.Then when I got to the finals things started to heat up."Are you ready beyblade fans?!?!?!?!The next and FINAL match is between Ethan Nightly and Will!"Blader MC announced."Who the fuzz is Will? Is he a B-Killer member?"I thought to myself.We walked into our position.The crowd went mad crazy for me.I just ignored them and got set up to launch.Then I saw him.He was obsessed with red!The only thing that wasn't red was his skin and his Bey!"Are you ready to battle?!?!?I'm going to take you down with my Destruction Centipede!"He said."3 2 1 LET IT RIIPP!!!"We shouted.Our beys soared in the stadium.They punched each other like in boxing.One hit at a time our beys were getting weaker."It's time to end this!SPECIAL MOVE POISON SLASH!!!"He shouted."GRRRRR"I thought.Centipede made a HUGE crack in the middle of the stadium.Then Centipede dragged Dranzer in the crack and Dranzer was stuck."DDDRRRAAANNNZZZEERRR!!NOOOO!"I shouted with tears of rage.Then Centipede attacked fiercily at Dranzer and it lost little fragments in seconds."GRRR NOOOOO I WON'T ALLOW IT!!!SPECIAL MOVE!!!!BLAZING COMET RAINSTORM!!!!GO DRANZEERRR!!"I shouted with all my beyspirit.Dranzer weirdly got out of the crack and went into the sky and I saw his emblem flash and knew i had won!Comet's stormed down like hail!Every single one hit centipede too and Dranzer attacked on top of centipede and won!"YEEESSSSS!!!!We got 5,000 more points Dranzer!"I said loudly after Blader MC congradulated me and stuff.Me and our team all won our blocks so now we could seperate and gather points for battlebladers!!"1..2..3!Your time is Up B-Killas!!"We all shouted."Wait who is Jeff and Nagato going to travel with?"Kevin asked."Hmmm well Nagato can go and help my dad in Myrtle Beach at the B-Pit!"I said."That's fine for me but what about Jeff?"Nagato said...

Ya know what to do guys!!
man i got OWNED...

TOO BAD I LOST BUT STILL GOOD TO BE IN!
awesome chapter
thanks guys really appreciate it and who do you guys and other people
Who do you think Jeff should travel with?:
A:Kevin
BConfusedamuel
C:JP
DEeethan
E:Himself
Give me your honest opinion plz!!
A:kevin
a:kevin because i created him plus he's my brother in the story
I need more votes!!!
hey c-dub can you put the bey in my story, Warrior Orion in yours?
Sure just tell me these:
1.Is he good or evil
2.what's his spin track and perf.tip
3.who's his master?
4.what's his special move?
5.awnser to the question on post 186
(Jan. 27, 2011  2:18 PM)C-Dub Wrote: Sure just tell me these:
1.Is he good or evil
2.what's his spin track and perf.tip
3.who's his master?
4.what's his special move?
5.awnser to the question on post 186

1. good
2.ED145 AND WB
3. Doesn't really matter because i usually use the name Will.....
4. 4 sword strike
5. himself
good,good, there's alredy a will,what does 4 sword strike do?,and alright tnx
(Jan. 23, 2011  8:49 PM)C-Dub Wrote: thanks guys really appreciate it and who do you guys and other people
Who do you think Jeff should travel with?:
A:Kevin
BConfusedamuel
C:JP
DEeethan
E:Himself
Give me your honest opinion plz!!

ME!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I BEG YOU!!!!!!!!! GOD PLEASE PICK ME!!!!
Here's info on my character:
NameConfusedamuel Higanu
BeyUnhappyEvolved)Infinity Libra F100 MES(F100 has 10 little bat-like fangs that go downward and MES is metal eternal sharp and Infinity is like Rock and Flame and is navy blue and his energy ring is clear pearl white)
Clothing:African-American skin tone,black spikey hair and wears a layered tee and the colors are Green and blue and he wears bage cargo shorts and wears blue jordans.
Age:13
(Jan. 29, 2011  8:47 PM)Sparta Wrote:
(Jan. 23, 2011  8:49 PM)C-Dub Wrote: thanks guys really appreciate it and who do you guys and other people
Who do you think Jeff should travel with?:
A:Kevin
BConfusedamuel
C:JP
DEeethan
E:Himself
Give me your honest opinion plz!!

ME!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I BEG YOU!!!!!!!!! GOD PLEASE PICK ME!!!!
Plz?? Me?? Plz!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I absolutely beg you with all of my beyheart please!!!!
so you vote for D right?
YES!!!!!! GOD YES!!!!! It wud b sooo cool 4 ethan the lone wolf 2 actually go with him!!! Nt just bcuz hes my character bt bcuz it wud b a surprising twist of events: the lone wolf travels with someone!!!!!!!!
Can my vote count 4 1000?? Please??!!

So far including tht other guy who said mayb ethan he has 2 votes...tied with kevin i think...