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Can someone rate my recent chapters please
Also, there are only 2 MORE SPOTS so if you wanna be in Dynachi then you better hurry it up
Chapter 15 is out!! Also Lights!! Camera!! Action!! just became chapter the 16th chapter hope your happy @Jjustice
The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.
Also, there are only 2 MORE SPOTS so if you wanna be in Dynachi then you better hurry it up
Chapter 15 is out!! Also Lights!! Camera!! Action!! just became chapter the 16th chapter hope your happy @Jjustice
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Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 15
ThunderBringer!! Nexus Zeutron
Me/Ryuji: Let it rip!!
(Roktavor lands but starts wobbling)
Ryuji: *Gasps*
(Valtryek unleashes a flurry of blows)
Me: Rush! Rush! Rush!
(Roktavor is sent flying out of the ring)
Ryuji: Grr!!
Brooke: Did you notice that?
Adam: Notice what?
Brooke: Ryuji completely messed up his launch.
Ryuji: Why don’t you come here and say that!!
Me: She is right though.
Ryuji: And how do I fix it, Mr. Smart Guy!! And why has it never been a problem before!!
Me: Well you just got used to Roktavor so that means you can launch harder. But Roktavor is super heavy so strong launches won’t work.
Ryuji: My point still stands!! How do I fix it!!
Adam: First you gotta get outta Jerkville then we can help you!
Me: Valt told me that Honcho was--
Ryuji: Do not mention that name!! He’s a disappointment!!
Adam: Yo, what’s up?
Ryuji: What do you mean by “What’s up”
Adam: You're being jerkier than normal.
Ryuji: *Sighs* Sorry I just--
Adam: Vlad call the doctor he just apologized!!! He’s broken!!
Ryuji: After you rudely interrupted me--
Adam: Nope, he’s back to normal!!
Ryuji: WILL YOU LET ME TALK!!
Brooke: Jeez man.
Ryuji: I’m just frustrated after my embarrassing loss yesterday.
Adam: If I’m being honest none of us thought you were going to win.
Ryuji: WHAT KIND OF FRIEND ARE YOU!!!
Adam: An honest one.
Ryuji: Why you!!
Me: Time for me to talk!! Anyways, what I was saying is Honcho had a super heavy grip which made Roktavor spin longer and raised it’s defenses!!
Ryuji: Like one of us has==
Adam: This what you're talking about?
(Adam holds up the heavy grip)
Me: Exactly!!
Ryuji: How did you find one?
Adam: My dad gave me one a while ago, I didn’t know how to use it but I bring it everywhere I go because you never know when you’ll need it!!
(Ryuji snatches it out of Adam’s hands and attaches it to his launcher)
Adam: I think thanks is in order?
Ryuji: Nope!!
(Adam falls over)
Ryuji: Brooke will be my test subject!!
Brooke: Oh, you're gonna regret saying that!!
(Ryuji puts Roktavor’s weight from the bottom to the top)
(My Thoughts): He made Roktavor higher so even if he messes up his launch he should be able to stabilize in the center!! He actually has some brain behind that talk!!
Adam: First battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(A mysterious fellow jumps in the air)
Brooke/Ryuji/???: Let it rip!!
(All beys hit the ground)
Me/Adam/Ryuji/Brooke: *Gasps*
???: Go Zeutron!!
(Zeutron and Belarix start hitting Roktavor from everywhere)
Ryuji: How rude, let me teach you a lesson!! Berserker Wing Storm!!
(Roktavor blows Zeutron and Belarix away)
Brooke: Belarix!!
(Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up)
(Belarix catches onto the rim)
Brooke: Venture Flash!!
(Belarix comes in full speed and breaks through the wind barrier)
Ryuji: *Gasps in fear*
???: Fear not!! I will save you!!
(Belarix and Zeutron start clashing)
Brooke: Detonate Bomb!!
???: Zeutron!!
(??? Resonance Aura flares up)
(The metal balls on Zeutron come out)
???: You’ve got this my light!!
(Huge Explosion occurs)
(Zeutron Roktavor and Belarix are sent flying)
Adam: Simultaneous Ring Out finish!! No points!!
Ryuji: We were battling!!
???: Oh please it was barely a battle till I got there!!
Ryuji: We didn’t even start battling!!
Me: Well, at least we got to test the new grip!!
Ryuji: Who even are you!!
Zafary: I’m Zafary Kaneguro!! But you can call my Zafary the Star!!
Adam: Welcome aboard Zafary!!
Ryuji: Yeah, thanks for interrupting our battle!!
Zafary: No problem!!
Me: That’s a cool Dynachi bey you’ve got!!
Zafary: Built it from scratch and with help from my Dad!!
Adam: Isn’t your Dad Zac the Sunrise?
Zafary: You're correct!!
Adam: Awesome!!
Zafary: I came to this ship to battle Vlad Aoi!! Have you seen him?
(Everybody points at me)
Zafary: Ah, you were right in front of me this whole time!!
Me: I’m ready to take you on!!
Zafary: Blondie, judge the match!!
Ryuji: I have a name you know!!
Adam: Just start the battle!! I’m excited to see who will win!!
Ryuji: Inspect your opponent's bey.
(My Thoughts): Nexus Zeutron a clockwise spinning stamina type it looks like when it starts running low on spin two big heavy balls will come on the outside part of the layer it will give the bey way more stamina!!
(Zafary takes back Zeutron, Zafary puts Zeutron’s weight from the bottom to the top)
Me: Two can play that game!!
(I put Valtryek’s weight from the bottom to the top)
Adam: They both adjusted their heights. This is going to be amazing!!
Ryuji: First battle. Ready set.
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Zafary: Let it rip!!
(The reboot tip stick comes out)
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Zeutron with a flurry of attacks, Zeutron doesn't move an inch)
Zafary: Is this really all you got?
Me: We’ve got way more!!
(Valtryek hits Zeutron at full power, Zeutron comes crashing back down)
Zafary: Nexus Crash!!
Me: Valiant Spring Attack!!
(Valtryek and Zeutron get sent flying but hit the wall)
Zafary: And it’s over!
(Valtryek starts wobbling)
Me: It’s not done yet!!
Valtryek: You tell them!!
Me: Let’s go Valtryek!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
(The reboot tip stick goes in)
Me: Heroic Reboot!!
(Valtryek gains a huge amount of speed)
Zafary: I’m not going to be outdone by you!!
(Zafary’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Go faster!!
(Valtryek catches onto the stadium rim and speeds around like a rocket and crashes into the wall)
Me: Valient Spring Winged Launch!!
(Valtryek and Zeutron are flung into the air, Zeutron bursts)
Ryuji: That’s Valiant Valtryek with a burst finish!! Vlad wins!!
Me: Woo hoo!!
Brooke: That was a decent match.
Me: Aw come on you’ve got to admit it was awesome!!
Brooke: Fine, I guess it was.
Zafary: Well Vlad looks like I’m staying on this boat till I defeat you!!
Me: Bring it on!!
(At the Arena)
Announcer: Ok bladers, this is where the tournament really gets serious. Since we have 12 members on the ship we will be starting one on one and you’ve only got two chances so give it your all or you're going to be going home!!
Me: I’m so ready for this!!
Chapter 15
ThunderBringer!! Nexus Zeutron
Me/Ryuji: Let it rip!!
(Roktavor lands but starts wobbling)
Ryuji: *Gasps*
(Valtryek unleashes a flurry of blows)
Me: Rush! Rush! Rush!
(Roktavor is sent flying out of the ring)
Ryuji: Grr!!
Brooke: Did you notice that?
Adam: Notice what?
Brooke: Ryuji completely messed up his launch.
Ryuji: Why don’t you come here and say that!!
Me: She is right though.
Ryuji: And how do I fix it, Mr. Smart Guy!! And why has it never been a problem before!!
Me: Well you just got used to Roktavor so that means you can launch harder. But Roktavor is super heavy so strong launches won’t work.
Ryuji: My point still stands!! How do I fix it!!
Adam: First you gotta get outta Jerkville then we can help you!
Me: Valt told me that Honcho was--
Ryuji: Do not mention that name!! He’s a disappointment!!
Adam: Yo, what’s up?
Ryuji: What do you mean by “What’s up”
Adam: You're being jerkier than normal.
Ryuji: *Sighs* Sorry I just--
Adam: Vlad call the doctor he just apologized!!! He’s broken!!
Ryuji: After you rudely interrupted me--
Adam: Nope, he’s back to normal!!
Ryuji: WILL YOU LET ME TALK!!
Brooke: Jeez man.
Ryuji: I’m just frustrated after my embarrassing loss yesterday.
Adam: If I’m being honest none of us thought you were going to win.
Ryuji: WHAT KIND OF FRIEND ARE YOU!!!
Adam: An honest one.
Ryuji: Why you!!
Me: Time for me to talk!! Anyways, what I was saying is Honcho had a super heavy grip which made Roktavor spin longer and raised it’s defenses!!
Ryuji: Like one of us has==
Adam: This what you're talking about?
(Adam holds up the heavy grip)
Me: Exactly!!
Ryuji: How did you find one?
Adam: My dad gave me one a while ago, I didn’t know how to use it but I bring it everywhere I go because you never know when you’ll need it!!
(Ryuji snatches it out of Adam’s hands and attaches it to his launcher)
Adam: I think thanks is in order?
Ryuji: Nope!!
(Adam falls over)
Ryuji: Brooke will be my test subject!!
Brooke: Oh, you're gonna regret saying that!!
(Ryuji puts Roktavor’s weight from the bottom to the top)
(My Thoughts): He made Roktavor higher so even if he messes up his launch he should be able to stabilize in the center!! He actually has some brain behind that talk!!
Adam: First battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(A mysterious fellow jumps in the air)
Brooke/Ryuji/???: Let it rip!!
(All beys hit the ground)
Me/Adam/Ryuji/Brooke: *Gasps*
???: Go Zeutron!!
(Zeutron and Belarix start hitting Roktavor from everywhere)
Ryuji: How rude, let me teach you a lesson!! Berserker Wing Storm!!
(Roktavor blows Zeutron and Belarix away)
Brooke: Belarix!!
(Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up)
(Belarix catches onto the rim)
Brooke: Venture Flash!!
(Belarix comes in full speed and breaks through the wind barrier)
Ryuji: *Gasps in fear*
???: Fear not!! I will save you!!
(Belarix and Zeutron start clashing)
Brooke: Detonate Bomb!!
???: Zeutron!!
(??? Resonance Aura flares up)
(The metal balls on Zeutron come out)
???: You’ve got this my light!!
(Huge Explosion occurs)
(Zeutron Roktavor and Belarix are sent flying)
Adam: Simultaneous Ring Out finish!! No points!!
Ryuji: We were battling!!
???: Oh please it was barely a battle till I got there!!
Ryuji: We didn’t even start battling!!
Me: Well, at least we got to test the new grip!!
Ryuji: Who even are you!!
Zafary: I’m Zafary Kaneguro!! But you can call my Zafary the Star!!
Adam: Welcome aboard Zafary!!
Ryuji: Yeah, thanks for interrupting our battle!!
Zafary: No problem!!
Me: That’s a cool Dynachi bey you’ve got!!
Zafary: Built it from scratch and with help from my Dad!!
Adam: Isn’t your Dad Zac the Sunrise?
Zafary: You're correct!!
Adam: Awesome!!
Zafary: I came to this ship to battle Vlad Aoi!! Have you seen him?
(Everybody points at me)
Zafary: Ah, you were right in front of me this whole time!!
Me: I’m ready to take you on!!
Zafary: Blondie, judge the match!!
Ryuji: I have a name you know!!
Adam: Just start the battle!! I’m excited to see who will win!!
Ryuji: Inspect your opponent's bey.
(My Thoughts): Nexus Zeutron a clockwise spinning stamina type it looks like when it starts running low on spin two big heavy balls will come on the outside part of the layer it will give the bey way more stamina!!
(Zafary takes back Zeutron, Zafary puts Zeutron’s weight from the bottom to the top)
Me: Two can play that game!!
(I put Valtryek’s weight from the bottom to the top)
Adam: They both adjusted their heights. This is going to be amazing!!
Ryuji: First battle. Ready set.
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Zafary: Let it rip!!
(The reboot tip stick comes out)
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Zeutron with a flurry of attacks, Zeutron doesn't move an inch)
Zafary: Is this really all you got?
Me: We’ve got way more!!
(Valtryek hits Zeutron at full power, Zeutron comes crashing back down)
Zafary: Nexus Crash!!
Me: Valiant Spring Attack!!
(Valtryek and Zeutron get sent flying but hit the wall)
Zafary: And it’s over!
(Valtryek starts wobbling)
Me: It’s not done yet!!
Valtryek: You tell them!!
Me: Let’s go Valtryek!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
(The reboot tip stick goes in)
Me: Heroic Reboot!!
(Valtryek gains a huge amount of speed)
Zafary: I’m not going to be outdone by you!!
(Zafary’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Go faster!!
(Valtryek catches onto the stadium rim and speeds around like a rocket and crashes into the wall)
Me: Valient Spring Winged Launch!!
(Valtryek and Zeutron are flung into the air, Zeutron bursts)
Ryuji: That’s Valiant Valtryek with a burst finish!! Vlad wins!!
Me: Woo hoo!!
Brooke: That was a decent match.
Me: Aw come on you’ve got to admit it was awesome!!
Brooke: Fine, I guess it was.
Zafary: Well Vlad looks like I’m staying on this boat till I defeat you!!
Me: Bring it on!!
(At the Arena)
Announcer: Ok bladers, this is where the tournament really gets serious. Since we have 12 members on the ship we will be starting one on one and you’ve only got two chances so give it your all or you're going to be going home!!
Me: I’m so ready for this!!
The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.