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Cyber Pegasis 105F Draft

Nov. 26, 2011  8:29 PM
 
Ok. Here it goes:

Aura Wrote:Face: Pegasis

The Face depicts Pegasus, one of the 88 constellations in space. The Metal Masters version is tatooed. The Metal Fusion version has a sticker.

Clear Wheel: Pegasis
Weight: 2.9 grams

The original release of Pegasis is a blue transparent plastic wheel. In this release, it is a metallic blue color, with an identical shape to the Pegasis Clear Wheel in Cyber Pegasis 100HF.

Metal Wheel: Cyber
Weight: 29.46 grams

Cyber is styled like a HWS version of the Metal System Pegasis with a three "winged" design. Its original release is painted a crimson red.
Like the original Pegasis wheel, it was meant for Attack. However, it lacks Smash Attack due to its bad design with no spikes or protrusions and it is too thin and light to have any competitive use for Attack or Defense. Having no use in Stamina because of its recoil, Cyber is outclassed in all fields.
Overall, Lightning, Gravity, Blitz and Vulcan are better choices for Attack.

Use in Attack Customization

If you somehow don't have access to competitive wheels, MF Cyber ____ 145RF is a viable Attack combo.

Track: 105
Weight: 1 gram

This track is currently the fourth lowest track available, but is outclassed in terms of Attack and Stamina by the 85, 90, and 100 Tracks. 105 has no problem with floor scrapes, but still is an outclassed part and should only be chosen when none of the aforementioned Tracks are available.

Bottom: F
Weight: 1 gram

Flat, as its name suggests, is a flat plastic Performance Tip and the pre-HWS equivalent of Flat Core (HMS) and SG Flat. (Plastic) The flat tip, gives it an offensive movement pattern but has a hard time retaining a flower pattern, due to being made of plastic, whereas Tips made of rubber like Rubber Flat have more grip to the Stadium floor. It is the most basic of the attack tips. It has no use in Attack-Type customizations due to being outclassed by Performance Tips like Rubber Flat, Metal Flat, Right Rubber Flat, and Extreme Flat. It is a dark blue in colour.

Overall

Overall, Cyber Pegasis is a highly outclassed BeyBlade and has no competitive parts. It is a Hasbro Legend. It is probably the best Hasbro Legend there is, but still doesn't tie into today's metagame.
This should only be bought for collection purposes.

Please tell me what you think.
Nov. 26, 2011  8:33 PM
 
Nice and detailed good job dude!
Nov. 26, 2011  8:34 PM
 
Thank you! Most of it isn't mine. I just copied and pasted but edited stuff here and there.
Nov. 26, 2011  8:34 PM
 
Some grammar errors, an absent 'overall' section, and some other faults, but other than that I'd say it's okay for a first draft.

Oh, also, it's Extreme Flat, not Xtreme Flat.
Nov. 26, 2011  8:37 PM
 
Don't forget to add in MF, metal flat. Smile it's a really good draft too.
Nov. 26, 2011  8:38 PM
 
I added it in now. Where are the grammar mistakes?

Edit: Thank you, J O N! I added it in now.
Nov. 26, 2011  8:38 PM
 
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Horogium...ight=cyber
And there's a rule only one draft per beyblade.
Nov. 26, 2011  8:40 PM
 
Thats the video game version. This is the legend version by Hasbro. They are different BeyBlades. BTW, pictures will be coming soon.
Nov. 26, 2011  8:46 PM
 
'Flat, as it's name suggests,'

Should be its.

'The flat tip, gives it'

No comma.

And articles use TT names, so use Bottom instead of Performance Tip.
Nov. 26, 2011  8:47 PM
 
Well you could just say hasbro realsed the Legend version with F with another color scheme or something.
Nov. 26, 2011  8:49 PM
 
No it shouldn't. Because it's name belongs to it. And I changed it to Bottom.
Nov. 26, 2011  8:52 PM
 
It's is a contraction of it and is. Its shows possession.
Nov. 26, 2011  8:54 PM
 
The name, Flat, is the bottom's possession. Lets not go off-topic. Is there any thing else that needs to be changed? Is the overall part OK?
Nov. 26, 2011  8:58 PM
 
Yo, captain grammar: Contraction "it's" = "it is". Contraction "its" = "belonging to it".
Nov. 26, 2011  8:59 PM
 
Yes! Captain Grammar here! Oh wait...

Oh, you're right. Sorry Kaiba.
Nov. 26, 2011  9:05 PM
 
Under Clear WheelTongue_outegasus you say the shape between Legend blue Pegasus and the Clear Pegasis from the Video Game release have a similar shape, but they are same wheels. It should say they have an identical shape or take out that part altogether.
Nov. 26, 2011  9:12 PM
 
I changed that. ^^
Nov. 28, 2011  10:15 PM
 
Do you think its ready yet?
Nov. 29, 2011  6:26 AM
 
Cyber ____ 145RF is not viable at all. Plus, Cyber isn't the best Legend series bey, they would be Night and Inferno.
Nov. 29, 2011  6:31 AM
 
I'm not sure of what to make of this.Cyber Pegasis was already released making this a Legend version similar to Cunter Leone 145D to Counter Leone D125B.
I Suggest you make the original Cyber Pegasis 100 HF you can get HF and 100 and some pegasis parts of beywiki.So I suggest you rename or something this article for the original what we actually need a draft of not the other version of it.