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(Mar. 29, 2021  10:59 PM)TheRogueBlader Wrote: [ -> ]wassa Kirby game?

Bro, you don't know what Kirby is?
(Mar. 30, 2021  1:23 AM)Longinox Wrote: [ -> ]
(Mar. 29, 2021  10:59 PM)TheRogueBlader Wrote: [ -> ]wassa Kirby game?

Bro, you don't know what Kirby is?

no, unless its a typo for Kerbeus
(Mar. 30, 2021  1:24 AM)TheRogueBlader Wrote: [ -> ]
(Mar. 30, 2021  1:23 AM)Longinox Wrote: [ -> ]Bro, you don't know what Kirby is?

no, unless its a typo for Kerbeus

Nah, it's this dude right here:
[Image: Masthead_Kirby.17345b1513ac044897cfc2435...fde10b.png]
(Mar. 30, 2021  1:40 AM)Longinox Wrote: [ -> ]
(Mar. 30, 2021  1:24 AM)TheRogueBlader Wrote: [ -> ]no, unless its a typo for Kerbeus

Nah, it's this dude right here:
[Image: Masthead_Kirby.17345b1513ac044897cfc2435...fde10b.png]
Ah. So it’s giant pink marshmallow with shoes. Ok. Lol.
(Mar. 30, 2021  1:42 AM)TheRogueBlader Wrote: [ -> ]
(Mar. 30, 2021  1:40 AM)Longinox Wrote: [ -> ]Nah, it's this dude right here:
[Image: Masthead_Kirby.17345b1513ac044897cfc2435...fde10b.png]
Ah. So it’s giant pink marshmallow with shoes. Ok. Lol.

That can gain the abilities of the opponent when he eats it. And also he can eat anything basically.
(Mar. 29, 2021  8:40 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: [ -> ]
(Mar. 29, 2021  8:18 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote: [ -> ]Should I type it here, or pm?

Whatever you want

Pm rn

(Mar. 29, 2021  8:36 PM)PinkRose Wrote: [ -> ]
(Mar. 29, 2021  2:11 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: [ -> ]maybe you can cooperate with someone who has writing skills. You have plot-building skills, world-building skills, and I think u'll be able to write a good fan fic, or more, but maybe you should team up with someone to write your first fan fic, then you'll get the idea on how to do them, then you can carry on writing your other fan fic ideas.

Sounds like an idea, thx bud.

Welcome
Wanted to post this in the actual thread, but here’s something my 3 viewers are interested in reading:

Profile of Cloud Strife (who happens to be a video game character):
Appearance: wears a white robe with a black inside shirt and red jeans. Has spiky black hair
Bey: Karmic Yaksha Omni limit 1O-59
Karmic: Shaped like Helios Volcano
Omni: A disk with a asymmetrical shape (kind of like a better 1’)
Limit: a driver with a awakening
1: stores a limit
O: on Yaksha it will cause Karmic to be free spin and will replace metal contact points with rubber. Spin direction changes.
59: high burst resistance high weight
So people, after several months I've finally released episode 6b of beyblade burst legends
Best Fan fics in My Opinion:

1. The Story of Lane's Sister-
2. Beyblade Burst Demonic-
3. Beyblade Burst Stardust-
4. Beyblade Burst Omni-Limit-
5. Beyblade Burst Thunder-
(Apr. 13, 2021  5:32 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote: [ -> ]Best Fan fics in My Opinion:

1. The Story of Lane's Sister-
2. Beyblade Burst Demonic-
3. Beyblade Burst Stardust-
4. Beyblade Burst Omni-Limit-
5. Beyblade Burst Thunder-

I wouldn’t quite put my fan fiction up there yet. It’s only 2 chapters in.
(Apr. 13, 2021  5:33 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: [ -> ]
(Apr. 13, 2021  5:32 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote: [ -> ]Best Fan fics in My Opinion:

1. The Story of Lane's Sister-
2. Beyblade Burst Demonic-
3. Beyblade Burst Stardust-
4. Beyblade Burst Omni-Limit-
5. Beyblade Burst Thunder-

I wouldn’t quite put my fan fiction up there yet. It’s only 2 chapters in.

Yes, but the thing is that I the reason I did this is because I believe the fan fics I put have the most potential to become the best.
(Apr. 13, 2021  5:32 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: [ -> ]Best Fan fics in My Opinion:

1. The Story of Lane's Sister-
2. Beyblade Burst Demonic-
3. Beyblade Burst Stardust-
4. Beyblade Burst Omni-Limit-
5. Beyblade Burst Thunder-

Thanks! I hope to do better after the last chapter. Note don’t write a chapter late at night after a long daySmile
I was hoping my fanfic was on the list
(Apr. 13, 2021  5:32 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: [ -> ]Best Fan fics in My Opinion:

1. The Story of Lane's Sister-
2. Beyblade Burst Demonic-
3. Beyblade Burst Stardust-
4. Beyblade Burst Omni-Limit-
5. Beyblade Burst Thunder-

poggers
(Apr. 14, 2021  7:08 AM)Longinox Wrote: [ -> ]
(Apr. 13, 2021  5:32 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: [ -> ]Best Fan fics in My Opinion:

1. The Story of Lane's Sister-
2. Beyblade Burst Demonic-
3. Beyblade Burst Stardust-
4. Beyblade Burst Omni-Limit-
5. Beyblade Burst Thunder-

poggers

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(Apr. 13, 2021  5:32 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: [ -> ]Best Fan fics in My Opinion:

1. The Story of Lane's Sister-
2. Beyblade Burst Demonic-
3. Beyblade Burst Stardust-
4. Beyblade Burst Omni-Limit-
5. Beyblade Burst Thunder-

Appreciate it even when I'm at 5th! But imma notch up my Fanfic
(Apr. 13, 2021  5:32 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: [ -> ]Best Fan fics in My Opinion:

1. The Story of Lane's Sister- DeltaZakuro
2. Beyblade Burst Demonic- "LJ-Blader"
3. Beyblade Burst Stardust- Longinox
4. Beyblade Burst Omni-Limit- 6Jupiter5
5. Beyblade Burst Thunder- 'THunderACE4'

My feelings have been hurt and my disappointment is immense.

But also then again I only have 1 chapter and I’m too lazy to write more in the school year so y’know, life is life
(Apr. 14, 2021  3:06 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]
(Apr. 13, 2021  5:32 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: [ -> ]Best Fan fics in My Opinion:

1. The Story of Lane's Sister- DeltaZakuro
2. Beyblade Burst Demonic- "LJ-Blader"
3. Beyblade Burst Stardust- Longinox
4. Beyblade Burst Omni-Limit- 6Jupiter5
5. Beyblade Burst Thunder- 'THunderACE4'

My feelings have been hurt and my disappointment is immense.

But also then again I only have 1 chapter and I’m too lazy to write more in the school year so y’know, life is life

sorry but I don't remember reading your fanf ic
(Apr. 14, 2021  3:26 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: [ -> ]
(Apr. 14, 2021  3:06 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]My feelings have been hurt and my disappointment is immense.

But also then again I only have 1 chapter and I’m too lazy to write more in the school year so y’know, life is life

sorry but I don't remember reading your fanf ic
Beyblade Burst Spirit, might wanna give it a read  Andrew
Might want to read beyblade burst apocalypse
(Apr. 14, 2021  4:10 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Might want to read beyblade burst apocalypse

That’s a big might right there

Also why would we read that if you had the remake of it to be better?
(Apr. 14, 2021  4:20 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]
(Apr. 14, 2021  4:10 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Might want to read beyblade burst apocalypse

That’s a big might right there

Also why would we read that if you had the remake of it to be better?

You don't have to be toxic chetto

(Apr. 14, 2021  4:10 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Might want to read beyblade burst apocalypse

I will
I am gonna delete the fanfic then. Since nobody understands how much time and effort I put in it

(Apr. 14, 2021  4:20 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]
(Apr. 14, 2021  4:10 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Might want to read beyblade burst apocalypse

That’s a big might right there

Also why would we read that if you had the remake of it to be better?
Only reason why asked Jupiter for his help so I can get better as a fanfic writer. Beyblade fanfics really lost my interest a while ago only fanfics is fanfic of Lanes sister and beyblade burst legends. I am actually less active on my fanfic after like part 5 and plus I am publishing a book. A horror romance one.
I have a lot of fan fic ideas, but I already have 2 fan fics and I have so little time to finish them. Wondering if somebody would like to cooperate with me to write a fan fic. Please pm me if you are interested.

(Hope somebody is)

Whoever pms me I'll share them the summary/plot of the fan fic, can change, and can also be amended.
Any writing advice when it comes to beybattles?

The Beybattles on my fanfic in my perspective seems kinda fast, bland and soulless.
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