(Oct. 15, 2020 6:38 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Oooo, Sacred, could you rate my story? The first chapter is in one of the two newest pages of it :3
Beyblade Burst Spirit
Grammar:5/5 I didn't notice any errors and the formatting was great too!
Plot: 4/5: Great plot but it could use a little bit of improvement.
Characters: 5/5 they're all likable!
Dialogue: 4/5 its not bad but maybe you should working on making it sound a little more natural.
Length: 5/5 all the chapters are long which is really good!
Total: 23/25
Overall great fanfic!
(Oct. 15, 2020 7:35 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: [ -> ] (Oct. 15, 2020 6:38 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Oooo, Sacred, could you rate my story? The first chapter is in one of the two newest pages of it :3
Beyblade Burst Spirit
Grammar:5/5 I didn't notice any errors and the formatting was great too!
Plot: 4/5: Great plot but it could use a little bit of improvement.
Characters: 5/5 they're all likable!
Dialogue: 4/5 its not bad but maybe you should working on making it sound a little more natural.
Length: 5/5 all the chapters are long which is really good!
Total: 23/25
Overall great fanfic!
I understand with the plot, as it’s chapter one, and just a general introduction. I can assure you that I have a plan for it though.
(Oct. 15, 2020 7:41 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ] (Oct. 15, 2020 7:35 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: [ -> ]Beyblade Burst Spirit
Grammar:5/5 I didn't notice any errors and the formatting was great too!
Plot: 4/5: Great plot but it could use a little bit of improvement.
Characters: 5/5 they're all likable!
Dialogue: 4/5 its not bad but maybe you should working on making it sound a little more natural.
Length: 5/5 all the chapters are long which is really good!
Total: 23/25
Overall great fanfic!
I understand with the plot, as it’s chapter one, and just a general introduction. I can assure you that I have a plan for it though.
can you rate the latest episode of my fanfic?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qXZN...sp=sharing
Shun was so close to beating Dimitri. Gwynn messed up shun big time
(Oct. 15, 2020 9:04 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Shun was so close to beating Dimitri. Gwynn messed up shun big time
oof
Can someone rate the two new chapters of beyblade burst apocalypse
(Oct. 16, 2020 4:42 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Can someone rate the two new chapters of beyblade burst apocalypse
Chapter 12 preview suggests Shun is cheating on Dimitri with Free yet no previous romantic relationships have ever been established and Im confused, can you explain?
(Oct. 16, 2020 4:45 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote: [ -> ] (Oct. 16, 2020 4:42 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Can someone rate the two new chapters of beyblade burst apocalypse
Chapter 12 preview suggests Shun is cheating on Dimitri with Free yet no previous romantic relationships have ever been established and Im confused, can you explain?
It's in chapter 12 of apocalypse . it's in a flashback
(Oct. 16, 2020 4:50 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ] (Oct. 16, 2020 4:45 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 12 preview suggests Shun is cheating on Dimitri with Free yet no previous romantic relationships have ever been established and Im confused, can you explain?
It's in chapter 12 of apocalypse . it's in a flashback
So they were previously in a love triangle?
(Oct. 16, 2020 5:32 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote: [ -> ] (Oct. 16, 2020 4:50 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]It's in chapter 12 of apocalypse . it's in a flashback
So they were previously in a love triangle?
Yes pretty much
(Oct. 16, 2020 6:03 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ] (Oct. 16, 2020 5:32 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote: [ -> ]So they were previously in a love triangle?
Yes pretty much
How old is everyone in the triangle now, and how old are they in the flashback
(Oct. 16, 2020 6:07 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote: [ -> ] (Oct. 16, 2020 6:03 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Yes pretty much
How old is everyone in the triangle now, and how old are they in the flashback
Flashback
Shun(17)
Free(18)
Now
Shun(21)
Free(22)
(Oct. 16, 2020 6:17 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ] (Oct. 16, 2020 6:07 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote: [ -> ]How old is everyone in the triangle now, and how old are they in the flashback
Flashback
Shun(17)
Free(18)
Now
Shun(21)
Free(22)
Dimitri age?
(Oct. 16, 2020 6:21 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote: [ -> ] (Oct. 16, 2020 6:17 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Flashback
Shun(17)
Free(18)
Now
Shun(21)
Free(22)
Dimitri age?
Flashback back 16
Current 20
I posted a teaser for the next episode
Can someone rate the newest episode of Beyblade Burst Legends?
Can someone rate the new chapters of beyblade burst apocalypse
Can some rate my fanfic beyblade burst apocalypse?
Beyblade Burst Combo Prologue
In the Burst world there are Powerful Bladers On Example is of Dean Ren and his Bey Rage Diabolos Ds' 3A he is Currently the World Champion till Some on named Sunny Temner with his Tempest Solomon Xtend+ 2A Challenges him!
Rankings
1.Dean Ren Bey:RDb Ds' 3A
2.Loki Brone Bey:BLu Ev' 2A
3. Helmer Welk WHy Ul' 1A
4.Drene Moken MDb Wl Mb
5.Aizen Propel JA.Bl.X'.Gk
What do you guys think of the new chapter of beyblade burst apocalypse?
Can we get a moment of silence for shun kurenai.
(Oct. 20, 2020 12:04 AM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Can we get a moment of silence for shun kurenai.
No, can we get a moment of silence for Kobe Bryant
(Oct. 20, 2020 12:04 AM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Can we get a moment of silence for shun kurenai.
Okay but wait Shun Shun Shun or Pun!
(Oct. 20, 2020 12:16 AM)SunBlader98 Wrote: [ -> ] (Oct. 20, 2020 12:04 AM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Can we get a moment of silence for shun kurenai.
Okay but wait Shun Shun Shun or Pun!
Shun died in the latest chapter of beyblade burst apocalypse.
(Oct. 20, 2020 12:47 AM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ] (Oct. 20, 2020 12:16 AM)SunBlader98 Wrote: [ -> ]Okay but wait Shun Shun Shun or Pun!
Shun died in the latest chapter of beyblade burst apocalypse.
Soooooooooooo, does that mean your WBO account died?
(Oct. 20, 2020 12:52 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote: [ -> ] (Oct. 20, 2020 12:47 AM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Shun died in the latest chapter of beyblade burst apocalypse.
Soooooooooooo, does that mean your WBO account died?
Nah she is the main character it's just temporarily. She will always come back.