World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

(Jun. 07, 2020  9:10 PM)Nitrogenic Wrote: [ -> ]Wait I can post my antagonist bio here?

Since you asked, sure

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Hello guys, you are free to criticize and post reactions towards others’ characters such as “cool!” or anything that constitutes as constructive criticism (and not bashing). By posting your character bios here, you are giving permission for the WBO users to judge your creation since you choose to put it into the public. This is considered the same as posting stories for criticism

Though character bios are technically “on topic,” Id like that in order to keep me allowing them here, you guys are to not spam character bios repeatedly. In example, posting too many without someone critiquing your character or posting a nice compliment. This is not a “Post Your Character Here” thread, this is a discussion thread. If I notice a lack of discussion but a huge spam of character bios, I might have to say something

Thanks

(Jun. 08, 2020  2:59 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ]

(Jun. 07, 2020  9:10 PM)Nitrogenic Wrote: [ -> ]Wait I can post my antagonist bio here?

Since you asked, sure

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Hello guys, you are free to criticize and post reactions towards others’ characters such as “cool!” or anything that constitutes as constructive criticism (and not bashing). By posting your character bios here, you are giving permission for the WBO users to judge your creation since you choose to put it into the public. This is considered the same as posting stories for criticism

Though character bios are technically “on topic,” Id like that in order to keep me allowing them here, you guys are to not spam character bios repeatedly. In example, posting too many without someone critiquing your character or posting a nice compliment. This is not a “Post Your Character Here” thread, this is a discussion thread. If I notice a lack of discussion but a huge spam of character bios, I might have to say something

Thanks

Thats a nice rule to add, i only planned on putting the main cast here and put everyone else in my actual story thread, B U T if I receive enough feedback ill post Character Bio in both threads but ill limit it to 1 or 2 a week.

Alright this is subject to change:
Matthew Galysth.
Age: 16
Beyblade: Greed Midas 6D Glory Exile, Corrupt Midas 7D Exile Gold (YES ANOTHER RIGHT SPIN DEFENSE TYPE)
Special moves: Exile shoot, Midas Touch, Glory Trophy, Bloodlust Aura, Mercy Counter, Corrupt Purge, Pyrite (fool's gold) shield.
Personality: Somewhat wise, but tends to talk good amounts if needed. Likes to taunt and insult opponents, but shows respect for improvement. Hates losing obviously. Commonly uses the Dark Side to gain more power, without getting corrupt but struggles. A bit like Hearts you know. Also succumbs to darkness eventually by fusing his bey with his previous, darker bey after losing to #####.
Midas references, from what I know Greek Spartan King and champion, gladiator, likes gold.

(Jun. 08, 2020  5:30 PM)Nitrogenic Wrote: [ -> ]Alright this is subject to change:
Matthew Galysth.
Age: 16
Beyblade: Greed Midas 6D Glory Exile, Corrupt Midas 7D Exile (YES ANOTHER RIGHT SPIN DEFENSE TYPE)
Special moves: Exile shoot, Midas Touch, Glory Counter,  Bloodlust Aura, G , Corrupt Touch

Really good man, i really like the idea of a Midas themed beyblade (Takara Tomy im looking at you)

(Jun. 08, 2020  5:39 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]

(Jun. 08, 2020  5:30 PM)Nitrogenic Wrote: [ -> ]Alright this is subject to change:
Matthew Galysth.
Age: 16
Beyblade: Greed Midas 6D Glory Exile, Corrupt Midas 7D Exile (YES ANOTHER RIGHT SPIN DEFENSE TYPE)
Special moves: Exile shoot, Midas Touch, Glory Counter,  Bloodlust Aura, G , Corrupt Touch

Really good man, i really like the idea of a Midas themed beyblade (Takara Tomy im looking at you)

Thanks my friend, there is just so little of deities and legends that TT can make as beyblades.

1 out of 2 character bios for this week

(Jun. 08, 2020  8:23 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]1 out of 2 character bios for this week

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Name - Lucerian Samagishi

Lucerian Samagishi is a blader in Beyblade Burst: Diamond, he fights with his bey; Flash Lacerta 0Reach Crimson

Age: 16

Birthday: September 23rd

Hair Color: White

Eye Color: Blood Red

Moves: Crimson Strike, Burning Hell Smash, Ember Wind Blaze

Relationships

Reimi Harla - Lucerian and Reimi have been friends since preschool, until Lucerian found out that his father had alzheimers disease and had to go back home to Canada to take care of him, until Lucerian goes back to Japan to compete in the Bey Alley and win the prize money, regardless of his goals.... Lucerian and Reimi have remained good friends

Canada baby!

Mine too It's one of my 4th Main characters in the ultra Epsilon series.... (note:episode 19 is very hard to make because im always disturbed by my brothe for somethings but im not insulting.... im doing an announcement)

Voltaro Hiroshima

Age:13

Eye color:Ocean Blue

Hair color:Red/Gold,Blue And Red(resonance)

Bey:Obsidian Valefar 4A Drake Hollow' (balance type)

Personality-Tactical,Scatter brained,Brawny,confident,Lazy

Special moves:
theif counter:
Valefar's Contact points Becomes a living claw and manipulate the bey while slowly damaging itself

manipulation Break:
When Valefar goes to Higher Stamina mode... it will try to jump to the stadium wall and go to lower attack mode after losing some stamina.

Supreme Duke Fire:
Just like Reverse heal, Valefar retains stamina and strength after recieving 3 Clicks while the layer aligns
to the drake Forge disc for Big attacks

Demon Headbutt:
Valefar Hits the stadium walls like samurai scorpio's Blitz Uppercut

Armour resonance:
once Voltaro and Valefar becomes synchronized enough to optimize their mental abilities, he will have an Armour clad to his body with the same features as the avatar

Friends:

TBBSSV(Takarawa,beigoma,bombers,Sonic Screams,victories) ,The Old Beigoma Bois, WBBO,Lane(tried to help him how to find the Universal realm)

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(Jun. 08, 2020  8:23 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]1 out of 2 character bios for this week

Spoiler (Click to View)

Name - Lucerian Samagishi

Lucerian Samagishi is a blader in Beyblade Burst: Diamond, he fights with his bey; Flash Lacerta 0Reach Crimson

Age: 16

Birthday: September 23rd

Hair Color: White

Eye Color: Blood Red

Moves: Crimson Strike, Burning Hell Smash, Ember Wind Blaze

Relationships

Reimi Harla - Lucerian and Reimi have been friends since preschool, until Lucerian found out that his father had alzheimers disease and had to go back home to Canada to take care of him, until Lucerian goes back to Japan to compete in the Bey Alley and win the prize money, regardless of his goals.... Lucerian and Reimi have remained good friends

So They were friends since preschool huh? interesting....

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You realized........ that their is 3 Jojo References and 1 MFB References in my fanfiction 

Okay after i done my final assessment I'll do some animation but do you guys have a suggestion for a beyblade animation maybe from a fanfic but currently i am working on valt vs aiga

(Jun. 09, 2020  4:42 PM)daheavydl3 Wrote: [ -> ]Mine too It's one of my 4th Main characters in the ultra Epsilon series.... (note:episode 19 is very hard to make because im always disturbed by my brothe for somethings but im not insulting.... im doing an announcement)

Voltaro Hiroshima

Age:13

Eye colorcean Blue

Hair color:Red/Gold,Blue And Red(resonance)

Beybsidian Valefar 4A Drake Hollow' (balance type)

Personality-Tactical,Scatter brained,Brawny,confident,Lazy

Special moves:
theif counter:
Valefar's Contact points Becomes a living claw and manipulate the bey while slowly damaging itself

manipulation Break:
When Valefar goes to Higher Stamina mode... it will try to jump to the stadium wall and go to lower attack mode after losing some stamina.

Supreme Duke Fire:
Just like Reverse heal, Valefar retains stamina and strength after recieving 3 Clicks while the layer aligns
to the drake Forge disc for Big attacks

Demon Headbutt:
Valefar Hits the stadium walls like samurai scorpio's Blitz Uppercut

Armour resonance:
once Voltaro and Valefar becomes synchronized enough to optimize their mental abilities, he will have an Armour clad to his body with the same features as the avatar

Friends:

TBBSSV(Takarawa,beigoma,bombers,Sonic Screams,victories) ,The Old Beigoma Bois, WBBO,Lane(tried to help him how to find the Universal realm)

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(Jun. 08, 2020  8:23 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]1 out of 2 character bios for this week

Spoiler (Click to View)

Name - Lucerian Samagishi

Lucerian Samagishi is a blader in Beyblade Burst: Diamond, he fights with his bey; Flash Lacerta 0Reach Crimson

Age: 16

Birthday: September 23rd

Hair Color: White

Eye Color: Blood Red

Moves: Crimson Strike, Burning Hell Smash, Ember Wind Blaze

Relationships

Reimi Harla - Lucerian and Reimi have been friends since preschool, until Lucerian found out that his father had alzheimers disease and had to go back home to Canada to take care of him, until Lucerian goes back to Japan to compete in the Bey Alley and win the prize money, regardless of his goals.... Lucerian and Reimi have remained good friends

So They were friends since preschool huh? interesting....

Hey there! Though I dont think your post is super duper long, I do advise that you should use the spoiler tag for your character bios. Also, try to put a space between : and O or else you end up with an emoticon (or disable emoticons instead). As well as that, great balancing of personality traits! Though, I feel like there should be elaboration to explain how all of these traits so that they could be more complex or understanding. Right now, scatter-brained and tactical seems to be contradicting one another

Alright. Ive been messaged by a user concerned about some of my works. Ive been told that my content mightve inspired users to add blood and other mild elements to their stories, or make it 13+/“children beware” type of thing

Disclaimer: Regardless of whether or not this trend is due to me (I am highly guessing it isnt), Ill say that Im not the first person to put action and such elements into my works. Heck, stuff like this is as old as time. Ive been given a green light to go post my content, but if some of what you write ends up beyond what the WBO allows and you get in trouble, dont point fingers at me

there seems to be loose proof of the possibility that I have to do something about it, but this is what ill say. Go wild and have fun writing, guys!

(Jun. 14, 2020  4:14 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ]Alright. Ive been messaged by a user concerned about some of my works. Ive been told that my content mightve inspired users to add blood and other mild elements to their stories, or make it 13+/“children beware” type of thing

Disclaimer: Regardless of whether or not this trend is due to me (I am highly guessing it isnt), Ill say that Im not the first person to put action and such elements into my works. Heck, stuff like this is as old as time. Ive been given a green light to go post my content, but if some of what you write ends up beyond what the WBO allows and you get in trouble, dont point fingers at me

there seems to be loose proof of the possibility that I have to do something about it, but this is what ill say. Go wild and have fun writing, guys!

I wonder what you told him lol.

(Jun. 14, 2020  4:27 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]

(Jun. 14, 2020  4:14 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ]Alright. Ive been messaged by a user concerned about some of my works. Ive been told that my content mightve inspired users to add blood and other mild elements to their stories, or make it 13+/“children beware” type of thing

Disclaimer: Regardless of whether or not this trend is due to me (I am highly guessing it isnt), Ill say that Im not the first person to put action and such elements into my works. Heck, stuff like this is as old as time. Ive been given a green light to go post my content, but if some of what you write ends up beyond what the WBO allows and you get in trouble, dont point fingers at me

there seems to be loose proof of the possibility that I have to do something about it, but this is what ill say. Go wild and have fun writing, guys!

I wonder what you told him lol.

I said that I dont really care what users write about, unless its catching the mods’ attention and resulting in warnings (which can then lead back to me). Either way, I protected my stories with warnings and asking mods if I could post, etc. so in the end, if someone gets in trouble for overdoing something, thats on them

what do u thak of beyblade comic but undertale

(Jun. 14, 2020  5:22 AM)sans the man Wrote: [ -> ]what do u thak of beyblade comic but undertale

I wonder if you would perhaps be happier finding an Undertale forum to post on.

nono just an ask i want to ask just to see what wood happing

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and it say at the top Random Thoughts

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so ya bruh

(Jun. 14, 2020  5:44 AM)sans the man Wrote: [ -> ]nono just an ask i want to ask just to see what wood happing

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and it say at the top Random Thoughts

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so ya bruh

It means ->FANFICTION<- Random Thoughts not beyblade x Undertale random thoughts.

but has a /

(Jun. 14, 2020  6:02 AM)sans the man Wrote: [ -> ]but has a /

Well, that means the title of the thread is "Beyblade Fanfics Club, Beyblade Fanfics Discussions, and Beyblade Fanfics Random Thoughts. Also, you keep saying "bruh" and I'm fairly certain I've told you to stop posting that by itself.

I don't want you to keep junking up threads like this. And hopefully, in a week when you inevitably come back, you won't. Heck you've even got the word "bruh" in your profile picture. That's got to go. This is sad. Just stop, you're not funny.

This is one of my most favorite comments and feedback I ever received from one of my readers, honestly. And no, this is not sarcastic. I appreciate the honesty that I could even manage to do this. It was one heck of a ride for me to write, and even moreso when I know how it impacted people

People notice that Im increasingly getting bad at writing Beyblade Burst horror stories but still

Hey guys. I've been thinking about making my own beyblade story, but at this point it seems like there aren't any original plotlines any more. I will probably eventually put one up, but it will be a while before I do. I might pm people to see if I can use their characters in a story, some of you can expect that.

(Jun. 16, 2020  6:28 PM)Suoh sadboii Wrote: [ -> ]Hey guys. I've been thinking about making my own beyblade story, but at this point it seems like there aren't any original plotlines any more. I will probably eventually put one up, but it will be a while before I do. I might pm people to see if I can use their characters in a story, some of you can expect that.

feel free to use a character from my previous stories

(Jun. 16, 2020  7:26 PM)snoc Wrote: [ -> ]

(Jun. 16, 2020  6:28 PM)Suoh sadboii Wrote: [ -> ]Hey guys. I've been thinking about making my own beyblade story, but at this point it seems like there aren't any original plotlines any more. I will probably eventually put one up, but it will be a while before I do. I might pm people to see if I can use their characters in a story, some of you can expect that.

feel free to use a character from my previous stories

I'll try, I honestly haven't read many stories, so I'm not familiar with your characters, but I'll look into it.

for one of my works, im considering using an OC but Im not quite sure. Im not sure if its a good idea to mix one OC into a cast full of Canon characters. I dont know how interested people will be with the story if theres one non-Canon character in a cast full of canon characters they like

(Jun. 16, 2020  7:45 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ]for one of my works, im considering using an OC but Im not quite sure. Im not sure if its a good idea to mix one OC into a cast full of Canon characters. I dont know how interested people will be with the story if theres one non-Canon character in a cast full of canon characters they like

I think it's an interesting idea. This kind of story might work in a setting in between two seasons, like in between god and Cho z, or Cho z or Gachi. If you have a cast of non-canon characters(maybe a few canon ones), it lets you expand upon how a story can go. A story full of canon characters with one or two non-canons limits how much someone can expand on the universe.

Basically, I'm trying to say that a cast of canon characters can be good(like your horror stories and such), because it gives more insight. When you mix in one or two non-canon characters, it doesn't make sense to have a massive adventure unless most of the cast is non-canon.