(Jun. 16, 2020 7:54 PM)Suoh sadboii Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 16, 2020 7:45 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ]for one of my works, im considering using an OC but Im not quite sure. Im not sure if its a good idea to mix one OC into a cast full of Canon characters. I dont know how interested people will be with the story if theres one non-Canon character in a cast full of canon characters they like
I think it's an interesting idea. This kind of story might work in a setting in between two seasons, like in between god and Cho z, or Cho z or Gachi. If you have a cast of non-canon characters(maybe a few canon ones), it lets you expand upon how a story can go. A story full of canon characters with one or two non-canons limits how much someone can expand on the universe.
Basically, I'm trying to say that a cast of canon characters can be good(like your horror stories and such), because it gives more insight. When you mix in one or two non-canon characters, it doesn't make sense to have a massive adventure unless most of the cast is non-canon.
Yep, that seems reasonable. I love expanding on the universe as well as trying to develop supporting characters more. Your advice is really great, so thanks for that
Honestly, though, Im just here to balance out the genders lol. My Beyblade Demigods story notably has a huge cast of male demigods (which could give the bad implication that mostly males can be more powerful than normal humans, whereas females cant). Still, fanfictions arent meant to teach a lesson but I feel like some bad lessons can come off. Also an excuse to use my Beyblade OC for once, since she mostly appears in stories no one would read
(Jun. 16, 2020 8:18 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 16, 2020 7:54 PM)Suoh sadboii Wrote: [ -> ]I think it's an interesting idea. This kind of story might work in a setting in between two seasons, like in between god and Cho z, or Cho z or Gachi. If you have a cast of non-canon characters(maybe a few canon ones), it lets you expand upon how a story can go. A story full of canon characters with one or two non-canons limits how much someone can expand on the universe.
Basically, I'm trying to say that a cast of canon characters can be good(like your horror stories and such), because it gives more insight. When you mix in one or two non-canon characters, it doesn't make sense to have a massive adventure unless most of the cast is non-canon.
Yep, that seems reasonable. I love expanding on the universe as well as trying to develop supporting characters more. Your advice is really great, so thanks for that
Honestly, though, Im just here to balance out the genders lol. My Beyblade Demigods story notably has a huge cast of male demigods (which could give the bad implication that mostly males can be more powerful than normal humans, whereas females cant). Still, fanfictions arent meant to teach a lesson but I feel like some bad lessons can come off. Also an excuse to use my Beyblade OC for once, since she mostly appears in stories no one would read
I'm glad my advice has some worth. You should definitely add your character in your story(ies?), but just make sure to do what feels right, or it will feel forced not only for you, but for the reader as well.
The rest are on my story thread
Episode 51 - Sacrifice! Part 1 and 2 (Finale) Summary
Part 1: After Lance turns into a full demon, Sabarinth knows what he has to do to put an end to Lance's tyranny....
Part 2: Ignoring his sister's crying pleas, Sabarinth makes his last stand.....
I bet ill be getting a lot of: OMG SABARINTH DIES (
he doesn't actually) comments lol
Uh… I have a
writing contest if any of y’all want to join. Not sure if this is allowed in this thread though because it’s sort of advertising, so sorry if it isn’t.
Also, I’m glad that we have the little FanFic group here, because in the old FanFic threads, people were pretty harsh on people who didn’t really have the best story. But, they did give feedback, so that’s something good out of that lol
(Jun. 17, 2020 2:54 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Uh… I have a writing contest if any of y’all want to join. Not sure if this is allowed in this thread though because it’s sort of advertising, so sorry if it isn’t.
Also, I’m glad that we have the little FanFic group here, because in the old FanFic threads, people were pretty harsh on people who didn’t really have the best story. But, they did give feedback, so that’s something good out of that lol
Advertising is definitely allowed
Where is the old one?
(Jun. 17, 2020 3:11 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 17, 2020 2:54 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Uh… I have a writing contest if any of y’all want to join. Not sure if this is allowed in this thread though because it’s sort of advertising, so sorry if it isn’t.
Also, I’m glad that we have the little FanFic group here, because in the old FanFic threads, people were pretty harsh on people who didn’t really have the best story. But, they did give feedback, so that’s something good out of that lol
Advertising is definitely allowed
Where is the old one?
Oh, okay. Good.
I mean old FanFic threads in general. There wasn’t a thread like this.
Here is a character i think a lot of people will enjoy
Name: Luna Shirosagi
Luna Shirosagi is a blader in Beyblade Burst: Diamond and is the introverted younger sister of Lui Shirosagi, she fights with her bey Spiral Luinor 13 Destroy' 1L
Age: 14 (Diamond), 17 (Diamond Hearts), 19 (Dual Diamond)
Eye color: Purple
Hair Color: Light Blue
Birthday: December 29th
Moves: Dragon Spiral, Spiral Upper
Relationships
Lui Shirosagi - Lui passed down his old Lost Luinor to Luna and trained her in the basics of blading. After Lui left and became one of the WBBA's staff members, Luna created a new Luinor just from the materials she had at home and strives to be as good as her brother.
Sabarinth Yuya - Luna bumps into Sabarinth in Japan and is offered help and politely accepts. Soon realizing Sabarinth is a blader, she quickly beats him but not before witnessing a shadow with yellow eyes emerging from behind him, this leaves her concerned for her newfound friend.
Also yes Luna has the signature fire hair that Lui has (ya know, like brother like sister)
I remember awhile ago, there was a mini-meme within a BeyBurst writing community I was apart of. A bunch of people started accepting this fan-made personality trait of Silver Eye: He is a goofy guy who likes McDonalds
Idk why its meme-y between some other Burst people. Its honestly just a writing headcanon, though others joke about how McDonalds empower Silver Eye (both his Blading and physical skills). Im just frankly surprised my writing could create a mini-meme
in case you did not know,i did a little interview for S2 of Unbreakable Chains or S1 of the New Generation Saga,Visit it there
(Jun. 23, 2020 5:46 AM)daheavydl3 Wrote: [ -> ]in case you did not know,i did a little interview for S2 of Unbreakable Chains or S1 of the New Generation Saga,Visit it there
Where was the interview at?
(Jun. 23, 2020 11:23 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 23, 2020 5:46 AM)daheavydl3 Wrote: [ -> ]in case you did not know,i did a little interview for S2 of Unbreakable Chains or S1 of the New Generation Saga,Visit it there
Where was the interview at?
keep looking down at my fan fic Beyburst Unbreakable Chains and scroll down a few more then you could see it
The best feeling ever: To escape a writers block
(Jun. 25, 2020 9:08 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: [ -> ]The best feeling ever: To escape a writers block
Even better feeling: finishing a chapter.
(Jun. 25, 2020 9:08 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: [ -> ]The best feeling ever: To escape a writers block
I still have yet to escape writers block.
(Jun. 25, 2020 9:34 PM)UltimateMaster Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 25, 2020 9:08 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: [ -> ]The best feeling ever: To escape a writers block
I still have yet to escape writers block.
Hmmmmmmm... Well, what I did was just not think about writing???
(Jun. 25, 2020 9:23 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 25, 2020 9:08 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: [ -> ]The best feeling ever: To escape a writers block
Even better feeling: finishing a chapter.
Mega best feeling ever: When your story gets recognized and suddenly everyone is tuning in on it, making fanart for it, reading it, etc
(Jun. 25, 2020 11:28 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 25, 2020 9:23 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Even better feeling: finishing a chapter.
Mega best feeling ever: When your story gets recognized and suddenly everyone is tuning in on it, making fanart for it, reading it, etc
Even better: you make a living off of it
(Jun. 25, 2020 11:36 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 25, 2020 11:28 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ]Mega best feeling ever: When your story gets recognized and suddenly everyone is tuning in on it, making fanart for it, reading it, etc
Even better: you make a living off of it
Even better: it gets licensed by beyblade and turned into an anime/manga
(Jun. 25, 2020 11:50 PM)UltimateMaster Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 25, 2020 11:36 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Even better: you make a living off of it
Even better: it gets licensed by beyblade and turned into an anime/manga
Eh, not as good. They’d censor stuff out
(Jun. 25, 2020 11:50 PM)UltimateMaster Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 25, 2020 11:36 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Even better: you make a living off of it
Even better: it gets licensed by beyblade and turned into an anime/manga
Even better better: you’re only famous on the WBO, but still make money out of it. That way you don’t get swarmed by billions of fans every time you walk out.
(Jun. 26, 2020 12:08 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 25, 2020 11:50 PM)UltimateMaster Wrote: [ -> ]Even better: it gets licensed by beyblade and turned into an anime/manga
Even better better: you’re only famous on the WBO, but still make money out of it. That way you don’t get swarmed by billions of fans every time you walk out.
That’s happened to me before.
(Jun. 26, 2020 12:00 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 25, 2020 11:50 PM)UltimateMaster Wrote: [ -> ]Even better: it gets licensed by beyblade and turned into an anime/manga
Eh, not as good. They’d censor stuff out
True.
(Jun. 26, 2020 12:13 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 26, 2020 12:12 AM)UltimateMaster Wrote: [ -> ]That’s happened to me before.
True.
How?
A few kids at tournaments are like “OMG RoadStrider I watch your channel! Take a picture with me!”
My face has never been on my channel, but somehow they know it’s me. Although once I had a kid think I was JoJo.
(Jun. 26, 2020 12:14 AM)UltimateMaster Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 26, 2020 12:13 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]How?
A few kids at tournaments are like “OMG RoadStrider I watch your channel! Take a picture with me!”
My face has never been on my channel, but somehow they know it’s me. Although once I had a kid think I was JoJo.
Lol nice. When I’m at tournaments sometimes people come up to me asking if I’m Cheeto and if so, they want to challenge me lol. It feels nice to be wanted lol
(Jun. 26, 2020 12:17 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 26, 2020 12:14 AM)UltimateMaster Wrote: [ -> ]A few kids at tournaments are like “OMG RoadStrider I watch your channel! Take a picture with me!”
My face has never been on my channel, but somehow they know it’s me. Although once I had a kid think I was JoJo.
Lol nice. When I’m at tournaments sometimes people come up to me asking if I’m Cheeto and if so, they want to challenge me lol. It feels nice to be wanted lol
Lol.
Kid: Are you Cheeto? I want to destroy you in a battle!
Cheeto: (in his mind). Lol