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I hate when people leave good reviews on "BruhBlade Burst"

(Oct. 14, 2020  6:38 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: [ -> ]I hate when people leave good reviews on "BruhBlade Burst"

That’s what you have me for, to give you bad ratings

(Oct. 14, 2020  6:38 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 14, 2020  6:38 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: [ -> ]I hate when people leave good reviews on "BruhBlade Burst"

That’s what you have me for, to give you bad ratings

GIVE ME MOREE

can I post my episode link here?

(Oct. 14, 2020  6:46 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: [ -> ]can I post my episode link here?

I believe so as there is nothing saying you can’t

ok so here's the link to the first episode of my fanfic
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l7ij...sp=sharing

if any of you decides to read it please rate it on a scale of 1-25 i'll accept all criticism as long as it's constructive criticism.

(Oct. 14, 2020  6:50 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: [ -> ]ok so here's the link to the first episode of my fanfic
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l7ij...sp=sharing

if any of you decides to read it please rate it on a scale of 1-25 i'll accept all criticism as long as it's constructive criticism.

Grammar: 5/5 as far as a screenplay is concerned

Dialogue: 2/5 seems kind of unnatural

Length: 5/5 good length

Plot: NC

Characters: NC

12/15

(Oct. 14, 2020  7:17 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 14, 2020  6:50 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: [ -> ]ok so here's the link to the first episode of my fanfic
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l7ij...sp=sharing

if any of you decides to read it please rate it on a scale of 1-25 i'll accept all criticism as long as it's constructive criticism.

Grammar: 5/5 as far as a screenplay is concerned

Dialogue: 2/5 seems kind of unnatural

Length: 5/5 good length

Plot: NC

Characters: NC

12/15

Thanks for the feedback

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Beyblade Burst Legends episode 1b: Unrivaled, Warrior Ares! is coming later today and its almost done.

hey, can yall rate mah fanfiction?
https://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Fan-Fic...-13-Fanfic

(Oct. 15, 2020  4:18 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: [ -> ]hey, can yall rate mah fanfiction?
https://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Fan-Fic...-13-Fanfic

grammar: 5/5 no noticeable errors
plot: 2/5: not that interesting
characters:3/5 not easy to get invested
Length:5/5
Dialogue: 2/5 seems kind of unnatural
Total: 17/25

(Oct. 15, 2020  4:30 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 15, 2020  4:18 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: [ -> ]hey, can yall rate mah fanfiction?
https://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Fan-Fic...-13-Fanfic

grammar: 5/5 no noticeable errors
plot: 2/5: not that interesting
characters:3/5 not easy to get invested
Length:5/5
Dialogue: 2/5 seems kind of unnatural
Total: 17/25

okay, thanks. I'll try to work on it!

Can someone rate chapter 10 of beyblade burst apocalypse?

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:14 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Can someone rate chapter 10 of beyblade burst apocalypse?

rating time


Plot:4/5 it's actually a pretty good plot
Dialogue: 2/5 kinda bland and cringe
Characters: 2/5 they're all one sided
Length: 5/5 good length
Grammar: 2/5: still understandable but very noticeable errors.

Total: 15/25
overall it could use a ton of improvement but it's not bad.

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:24 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:14 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Can someone rate chapter 10 of beyblade burst apocalypse?

rating time


Plot:4/5 it's actually a pretty good plot
Dialogue: 2/5 kinda bland and cringe
Characters: 2/5 they're all one sided
Length: 5/5 good length
Grammar: 2/5: still understandable but very noticeable errors.

Total: 15/25
overall it could use a ton of improvement but it's not bad.

Aye but I put in some JoJo memes tho. Shun got a huge buff tho

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:25 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:24 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: [ -> ]rating time


Plot:4/5 it's actually a pretty good plot
Dialogue: 2/5 kinda bland and cringe
Characters: 2/5 they're all one sided
Length: 5/5 good length
Grammar: 2/5: still understandable but very noticeable errors.

Total: 15/25
overall it could use a ton of improvement but it's not bad.

Aye but I put in some JoJo memes tho. Shun got a huge buff tho

Honestly Nerfing Shun would probably get you a higher rating but it's your fanfic .

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:26 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:25 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Aye but I put in some JoJo memes tho. Shun got a huge buff tho

Honestly Nerfing Shun would probably get you a higher rating but it's your fanfic .

Shun only won really only once that was again drum since now she has to face valt and aiga again. The others were flashbacks

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:28 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:26 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: [ -> ]Honestly Nerfing Shun would probably get you a higher rating but it's your fanfic .

Shun only won really only once that was again drum since now she has to face valt and aiga again. The others were flashbacks

ok that's better

Oooo, Sacred, could you rate my story? The first chapter is in one of the two newest pages of it :3

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:38 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Oooo, Sacred, could you rate my story? The first chapter is in one of the two newest pages of it :3

19/20

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:43 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:38 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Oooo, Sacred, could you rate my story? The first chapter is in one of the two newest pages of it :3

19/20

Please add context or content to your post. You just wrote a 19/20, and nothing else. That’s considered spam.

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:44 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:43 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]19/20

Please add context or content to your post. You just wrote a 19/20, and nothing else. That’s considered spam.

Went into the point I was being nice

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:50 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:44 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Please add context or content to your post. You just wrote a 19/20, and nothing else. That’s considered spam.

Went into the point I was being nice

??? Please speak clearly. I have no idea what you just said.

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:51 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:50 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Went into the point I was being nice

??? Please speak clearly. I have no idea what you just said.

He’s claiming he was being nice and giving you a good rating I think?

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:53 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:51 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]??? Please speak clearly. I have no idea what you just said.

He’s claiming he was being nice and giving you a good rating I think?

yah, but the point is to constructively criticize, not give him what he wants. If that's what he meant.

(Oct. 15, 2020  7:01 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:53 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: [ -> ]He’s claiming he was being nice and giving you a good rating I think?

yah, but the point is to constructively criticize, not give him what he wants. If that's what he meant.

That is true. Shouldnt lie on a rating