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(Oct. 11, 2020  2:50 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]thinking about doing a story that is a continuation of Cho-Z after Aiga becomes champion.

im currently working on a GT Continuation on Wattpad so id estimate that a Cho-Z Continuation would probably come out later in 2021
Yes but no it sounds interesting, but Delta, ya got school to deal with, and a lot of other fanfics. Maybe wait to finish at least two other fanfics for less stress? Being stressed out is no good
(Oct. 11, 2020  2:50 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]thinking about doing a story that is a continuation of Cho-Z after Aiga becomes champion.

im currently working on a GT Continuation on Wattpad so id estimate that a Cho-Z Continuation would probably come out later in 2021

Can you give me a link to the Rise continuation?
(Oct. 11, 2020  3:32 AM)Eclipse Force Wrote: [ -> ]
(Oct. 11, 2020  2:50 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]thinking about doing a story that is a continuation of Cho-Z after Aiga becomes champion.

im currently working on a GT Continuation on Wattpad so id estimate that a Cho-Z Continuation would probably come out later in 2021

Can you give me a link to the Rise continuation?

i haven't written it yet, it's still in development right now.


will probably begin with a prologue after the Victories victory over HELL.
a spoiler for beyblade burst legends

Either Valt, Shu or Xander will die, i'll leave you guys guessing


tell me your guesses by sending me a pm
Here are the bloopers of my new fanfic
Valt:me and valkryie won't lose
Shun:you and how? Oh **** I mess up my line start over.
Shun:I am the maiden of destruction
Akira:yo sis where are you
Shun:in a meeting mom I mean sister god dang it.
Drum:my name is drum
Shun:so your a drum
Shun bursts into tears and laugher
Shun:sorry sorry again from the top
Drum:where is the top
Shun dies of laughter
Shun:where is the top
im working on episode titles for Beyblade Burst GT: Flame (i may end up changing "Flame" to "Rising Stars")


ive got 37/52 Episodes worked on.

if you want to see them, PM me.
(Oct. 12, 2020  3:36 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]im working on episode titles for Beyblade Burst GT: Flame (i may end up changing "Flame" to "Rising Stars")


ive got 37/52 Episodes worked on.

if you want to see them, PM me.
Nice bro I can't wait to see more beyblade fanfics you got in the making
Beyblade Burst Legends episode 1 all Major characters
Ejirou Takahashi ( Alive)
Tsukiya Aizawa (Alive)
Akihito Suzuki (Alive)
Shu Kurenai (Alive)
Valt Aoi (Alive)
Xander Shakadera (Alive)
Mr. Takahashi ( Flashback) (Deceased)
Mrs. Takahashi (Alive)
(Oct. 12, 2020  4:06 AM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: [ -> ]Beyblade Burst Legends episode 1 all Major characters
Ejirou Takahashi ( Alive)
Tsukiya Aizawa (Alive)
Akihito Suzuki (Alive)
Shu Kurenai (Alive)
Valt Aoi (Alive)
Xander Shakadera (Alive)
Mr. Takahashi ( Flashback) (Deceased)
Mrs. Takahashi  (Alive)
I like your fanfic very much! Smile
thanks dude i really appreciate the support. btw your fanfic sounds really cool as well.
(p.s. ep 1 coming sunday)

(Oct. 12, 2020  2:45 PM)SunBlader98 Wrote: [ -> ]
(Oct. 12, 2020  4:06 AM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: [ -> ]Beyblade Burst Legends episode 1 all Major characters
Ejirou Takahashi ( Alive)
Tsukiya Aizawa (Alive)
Akihito Suzuki (Alive)
Shu Kurenai (Alive)
Valt Aoi (Alive)
Xander Shakadera (Alive)
Mr. Takahashi ( Flashback) (Deceased)
Mrs. Takahashi  (Alive)
I like your fanfic very much! Smile
I have a pretty strange fic idea. The title would be “Justice Bladers” and the premise is “What if the children of the Justice League were bladers?”
Thoughts?
(Oct. 13, 2020  5:10 PM)Elreed Wrote: [ -> ]I have a pretty strange fic idea. The title would be “Justice Bladers” and the premise is “What if the children of the Justice League were bladers?”
Thoughts?

That would be super cool
(Oct. 13, 2020  5:24 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]
(Oct. 13, 2020  5:10 PM)Elreed Wrote: [ -> ]I have a pretty strange fic idea. The title would be “Justice Bladers” and the premise is “What if the children of the Justice League were bladers?”
Thoughts?

That would be super cool

Thanks!
Your welcome
(Oct. 13, 2020  5:10 PM)Elreed Wrote: [ -> ]I have a pretty strange fic idea. The title would be “Justice Bladers” and the premise is “What if the children of the Justice League were bladers?”
Thoughts?

i really liked justice league so this will definitely be fun to read.
some episodes in my fan fiction

alright here are all the episodes in arc 1 ( district tournament) keep in mind there are 4 arcs and this only the first

Ep 1a Fresh start, Beigoma Academy!
Ep 1b Unrivaled! Warrior Ares!

Ep 2a Titanus's Wrath
Ep 2b Athena's Shield

Ep 3a Epic Battles! District Tournament!
Ep 3b Eros vs Midas

Ep 4a Life and Death Underworld osiris!
Ep 4b Power through! To the Semi-Finals!

Ep 5a Living Nightmare, Lee Yamamoto.
Ep 5b King of The Seas, Strider Leviathan!

Ep 6a Titanus vs Ares
Ep 6b To The Finals.


Ep 7a Longtime Rivals, Ejirou vs Tsukiya
Ep 7b Heated Battle, New Champion*

Thoughts?




* district champion*
Hey guys, what do you think of a rule Im considering to add (Im not sure if I mentioned this before): No posting over others’ work. However, if the previous post is at least 3-6 hours old (still deciding), you may post over

Im not sure if you guys heard of the term before, so Ill explain it in case some might not know:

Posting over means to post something (usually about or trying to benefit yourself) and ending up ignoring the previous person. Itll take me awhile to consider, potentially, because I want to make this easy to understand.

Examples of posting over include (but not limited to):

* User 1 shares their character bio/form but User 2 posted something they made without reacting to User 1’s post. That led to people ignoring User 1 and looking at what User 2 made
* User 1 shares a story idea/short chapter they had and would like someone to read it. However, no one reads it and then a new conversation pops up. User 1 ends up getting no feedback



Note that I am not implementing this rule yet! Its only a consideration. There might not be a chance that this will be added because I know that a majority of the WBO users tend to be helpful and supportive of one another. So I doubt that ignoring each others’ posts would happen a lot for this to be added. There might be a lot of confusion and “oh no I have to be careful of what I post” anxiety so I dont want to add it just yet. You guys always respond to one another, on time or a little late, so keep on doing a good job with that. If anyone feels like theyre being ignored or not getting feedback, please speak up and Ill check out what you wrote
I finished some chapters of beyblade burst apocalypse can you guys rate them
(Oct. 14, 2020  12:38 AM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]I finished some chapters of beyblade burst apocalypse can you guys rate them

Aiger being able to defeat Maiden but not Valt is bad writing. Shun is getting development, which is kinda nice I guess. Aiger seems really cold compared to his usual self though. Dimitri seems interesting I guess. Overall I'd say your story is now a solid 5.5/10
(Oct. 14, 2020  2:44 AM)Eclipse Force Wrote: [ -> ]
(Oct. 14, 2020  12:38 AM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]I finished some chapters of beyblade burst apocalypse can you guys rate them

Aiger being able to defeat Maiden but not Valt is bad writing. Shun is getting development, which is kinda nice I guess. Aiger seems really cold compared to his usual self though. Dimitri seems interesting I guess. Overall I'd say your story is now a solid 5.5/10

Valt does not lose that part is a joke write
(Oct. 14, 2020  2:47 AM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]
(Oct. 14, 2020  2:44 AM)Eclipse Force Wrote: [ -> ]Aiger being able to defeat Maiden but not Valt is bad writing. Shun is getting development, which is kinda nice I guess. Aiger seems really cold compared to his usual self though. Dimitri seems interesting I guess. Overall I'd say your story is now a solid 5.5/10

Valt does not lose that part is a joke write

He lost in an early chapter.
(Oct. 14, 2020  2:51 AM)Eclipse Force Wrote: [ -> ]
(Oct. 14, 2020  2:47 AM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Valt does not lose that part is a joke write

He lost in an early chapter.

What chapter. The teasers are not chapters
(Oct. 14, 2020  2:51 AM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]
(Oct. 14, 2020  2:51 AM)Eclipse Force Wrote: [ -> ]He lost in an early chapter.

What chapter. The teasers are not chapters

(Oct. 09, 2020  3:38 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 2 darkness awakens
In shuns dream
Shun:Akira where are you.
Akira:I am right here
Akira random appears on the floor.
Shun wakes up 
Shun:it was that dream again.
Maiden:shun let's battle against shu again.
Shun:maiden we will. Uh my head is hurts.
Maiden:we must become one. We are one join me shun. If we join we will be number 1.
Shun:arghhhhhhhhh
Shun grabs maiden
Shun:maiden let's fuse
During the tournament
Next battle shun vs valt
Shun:tch your a waste of my time valt.
Valt:you seem like a fun blader try to have fun.
In the battle 
Valt:go valkyrie victory slash
Shun:muda barrier scream
Maiden blocks valkyrie attack.
Shun and maiden:darkness overdrive
Maiden speeds up and hits valkyrie 
Shun:die valkyrie maiden time.
*time stops*
Shun:maiden rose overburst
Maiden hits valkyrie 
Shun:time will now resume.
Valkyrie bursts in midair.
Chapter end
(Oct. 14, 2020  2:53 AM)Eclipse Force Wrote: [ -> ]
(Oct. 14, 2020  2:51 AM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]What chapter. The teasers are not chapters

(Oct. 09, 2020  3:38 PM)kai edits Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 2 darkness awakens
In shuns dream
Shun:Akira where are you.
Akira:I am right here
Akira random appears on the floor.
Shun wakes up 
Shun:it was that dream again.
Maiden:shun let's battle against shu again.
Shun:maiden we will. Uh my head is hurts.
Maiden:we must become one. We are one join me shun. If we join we will be number 1.
Shun:arghhhhhhhhh
Shun grabs maiden
Shun:maiden let's fuse
During the tournament
Next battle shun vs valt
Shun:tch your a waste of my time valt.
Valt:you seem like a fun blader try to have fun.
In the battle 
Valt:go valkyrie victory slash
Shun:muda barrier scream
Maiden blocks valkyrie attack.
Shun and maiden:darkness overdrive
Maiden speeds up and hits valkyrie 
Shun:die valkyrie maiden time.
*time stops*
Shun:maiden rose overburst
Maiden hits valkyrie 
Shun:time will now resume.
Valkyrie bursts in midair.
Chapter end

Valt lost because maiden was controlling shun
(Oct. 13, 2020  10:44 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ]Hey guys, what do you think of a rule Im considering to add (Im not sure if I mentioned this before): No posting over others’ work. However, if the previous post is at least 3-6 hours old (still deciding), you may post over

Im not sure if you guys heard of the term before, so Ill explain it in case some might not know:

Posting over means to post something (usually about or trying to benefit yourself) and ending up ignoring the previous person. Itll take me awhile to consider, potentially, because I want to make this easy to understand.

Examples of posting over include (but not limited to):

* User 1 shares their character bio/form but User 2 posted something they made without reacting to User 1’s post. That led to people ignoring User 1 and looking at what User 2 made
* User 1 shares a story idea/short chapter they had and would like someone to read it. However, no one reads it and then a new conversation pops up. User 1 ends up getting no feedback



Note that I am not implementing this rule yet! Its only a consideration. There might not be a chance that this will be added because I know that a majority of the WBO users tend to be helpful and supportive of one another. So I doubt that ignoring each others’ posts would happen a lot for this to be added. There might be a lot of confusion and “oh no I have to be careful of what I post” anxiety so I dont want to add it just yet. You guys always respond to one another, on time or a little late, so keep on doing a good job with that. If anyone feels like theyre being ignored or not getting feedback, please speak up and Ill check out what you wrote
i actually really like this rule. i have a lot of stuff planned that i would like feedback on when that stuff gets posted
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