World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

(Aug. 01, 2021  10:51 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: [ -> ]I changed my writing style… the later episodes are spaced.

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And I try to do grammar checks, but I am not perfect.

Try using Grammerly.

Feel board so I'll review (or rate) your fanfic!

Like everyone else, I'm Bored. So anyone who needs bey names, gimmick ideas, system ideas, ETC. For there fanfic I can help(or try to)

(Aug. 01, 2021  11:09 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: [ -> ]Like everyone else, I'm Bored. So anyone who needs bey names, gimmick ideas, system ideas, ETC. For there fanfic I can help(or try to)

can please help me?

(Aug. 01, 2021  11:13 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]

(Aug. 01, 2021  11:09 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: [ -> ]Like everyone else, I'm Bored. So anyone who needs bey names, gimmick ideas, system ideas, ETC. For there fanfic I can help(or try to)

can please help me?

I can try my best to

Idea for a character name: Bashar or Balter

(Aug. 01, 2021  11:16 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]Idea for a character name: Bashar or Balter

holy moley i'll add that to my list of names

thanks for the help!

(Aug. 01, 2021  11:17 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]

(Aug. 01, 2021  11:16 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]Idea for a character name: Bashar or Balter

holy moley i'll add that to my list of names

thanks for the help!

Np! Make for a fan fic: Beyblade Burst Legacy!

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Idea* sorry I mean idea

(Aug. 01, 2021  11:13 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]

(Aug. 01, 2021  11:09 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: [ -> ]Like everyone else, I'm Bored. So anyone who needs bey names, gimmick ideas, system ideas, ETC. For there fanfic I can help(or try to)

can please help me?

Ok, prepare yourself for some Bey names:

• Hazbin Angel
  
• Redemption Asriel
  
• Aqous Poseidon
  
• Pirate Ridley
  
• Soaring Griffin
  
• Destruction Thanatos
  
• Lunatic Cthulhu
  
• Shipwreck Kraken
  
• Roar Ogre
  
• Queen Wasp
  

Hope I was of some help!

(Aug. 02, 2021  2:44 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: [ -> ]

(Aug. 01, 2021  11:13 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]can please help me?

Ok, prepare yourself for some Bey names:

• Hazbin Angel
  
• Redemption Asriel
  
• Aqous Poseidon
  
• Pirate Ridley
  
• Soaring Griffin
  
• Destruction Thanatos
  
• Lunatic Cthulhu
  
• Shipwreck Kraken
  
• Roar Ogre
  
• Queen Wasp
  

Hope I was of some help!

Can I call dibs on Asriel?

(Aug. 02, 2021  2:54 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ]

(Aug. 02, 2021  2:44 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: [ -> ]Ok, prepare yourself for some Bey names:

• Hazbin Angel
  
• Redemption Asriel
  
• Aqous Poseidon
  
• Pirate Ridley
  
• Soaring Griffin
  
• Destruction Thanatos
  
• Lunatic Cthulhu
  
• Shipwreck Kraken
  
• Roar Ogre
  
• Queen Wasp
  

Hope I was of some help!

Can I call dibs on Asriel?

Okay, you just have to credit me as original creator of the name.

(Aug. 02, 2021  2:55 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: [ -> ]

(Aug. 02, 2021  2:54 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ]Can I call dibs on Asriel?

Okay, you just have to credit me as original creator of the name.

My good fellow, we've got a deal (Shakes hand wildly)

(Aug. 02, 2021  2:44 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: [ -> ]

(Aug. 01, 2021  11:13 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]can please help me?

Ok, prepare yourself for some Bey names:

• Hazbin Angel
  
• Redemption Asriel
  
• Aqous Poseidon
  
• Pirate Ridley
  
• Soaring Griffin
  
• Destruction Thanatos
  
• Lunatic Cthulhu
  
• Shipwreck Kraken
  
• Roar Ogre
  
• Queen Wasp
  

Hope I was of some help!

i call dibs on shipwreck kraken!

(Aug. 02, 2021  2:44 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: [ -> ]

(Aug. 01, 2021  11:13 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]can please help me?

Ok, prepare yourself for some Bey names:

• Hazbin Angel
  
• Redemption Asriel
  
• Aqous Poseidon
  
• Pirate Ridley
  
• Soaring Griffin
  
• Destruction Thanatos
  
• Lunatic Cthulhu
  
• Shipwreck Kraken
  
• Roar Ogre
  
• Queen Wasp
  

Hope I was of some help!

Can I take Soaring Griffin? I'll ping you as the original creator!

(Aug. 02, 2021  2:56 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]

(Aug. 02, 2021  2:44 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: [ -> ]Ok, prepare yourself for some Bey names:

• Hazbin Angel
  
• Redemption Asriel
  
• Aqous Poseidon
  
• Pirate Ridley
  
• Soaring Griffin
  
• Destruction Thanatos
  
• Lunatic Cthulhu
  
• Shipwreck Kraken
  
• Roar Ogre
  
• Queen Wasp
  

Hope I was of some help!

i call dibs on shipwreck kraken!

Sure, and like I said to , you have to credit me as creator of the name.

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(Aug. 02, 2021  3:01 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]

(Aug. 02, 2021  2:44 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: [ -> ]Ok, prepare yourself for some Bey names:

• Hazbin Angel
  
• Redemption Asriel
  
• Aqous Poseidon
  
• Pirate Ridley
  
• Soaring Griffin
  
• Destruction Thanatos
  
• Lunatic Cthulhu
  
• Shipwreck Kraken
  
• Roar Ogre
  
• Queen Wasp
  

Hope I was of some help!

Can I take Soaring Griffin? I'll ping you as the original creator!

Ok, sure!

My list feel free to use them

• Beyblade Burst Legacy

• Version Fafnir

• Version Valtryek

• Time Spryzen

• Celeste Jaxel

• Robotic Eagle

• Car Noir (credits to MLB)

• Guardian Angel

* Justice Xerox

• Agent Atlas

(Aug. 02, 2021  2:56 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ]

(Aug. 02, 2021  2:55 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: [ -> ]Okay, you just have to credit me as original creator of the name.

My good fellow, we've got a deal (Shakes hand wildly)

(Shakes hand in return while this song starts up - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GimrxP2U0ZE)

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Was bored and wanted to stretch my creativity muscle, so I made some names for Beys based on the 9 Egyptian Glory Gods:

• Liquid Geb
  
• Immortal Anubis
  
• Gamble Osiris
  
• Creation Khnum
  
• Scholar Thoth
  
• Magnetic Bast
  
• Chaotic Seth
  
• Frostbite Horus
  
• Gamble Atum
  

Anyone can use these, you just have o credit me as the original creator of the name.

Here's my new system
Gear Core: An emblem with a logo of the Beyblade
Gear Switch: A Wide ring with various types of blades and the gimmick of the Beyblade.
Gear Drive: The majority of the Bottom of the Beyblade, helps weight distribution.
Gear Tip: The Tip at the very bottom. Different materials make the Beyblade move differently.

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Example: Radiant Horus Spiral Scepter
Gear Core Horus: An emblem of Horus.
Gear Switch Radiant: A bulky and rounded ring. When all of the switches get pressed in, is suddenly does a 180 rotation.
Gear Drive Spiral: A spiral shaped half sphere. If this hits the ground, it makes the Beyblade accelerate.
Gear Tip Scepter: The Tip of the Bey. When it shifts of Balance support Beams will come out of the Drive for stabilization.

(Aug. 02, 2021  2:44 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: [ -> ]

(Aug. 01, 2021  11:13 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]can please help me?

Ok, prepare yourself for some Bey names:

• Hazbin Angel
  
• Redemption Asriel
  
• Aqous Poseidon
  
• Pirate Ridley
  
• Soaring Griffin
  
• Destruction Thanatos
  
• Lunatic Cthulhu
  
• Shipwreck Kraken
  
• Roar Ogre
  
• Queen Wasp
  

Hope I was of some help!

Funnily enough you used names like "Destruction", "Kraken" and "Ogre", which are already used names by Hasbro. "Roar" is also already used (DB Bahamut). Maybe try out "Dire Ogre" or "Wreck Ogre" as new names. I know they don't sound that good, but these are just suggestions. So, they may be decent substitutes. I still like the names "Pirate Ridley" and "Lunatic Cthulhu", especialy "Queen Wasp". They sound pretty dope and creative!

(Aug. 02, 2021  5:48 PM)BeySkozo Raky Wrote: [ -> ]

(Aug. 02, 2021  2:44 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: [ -> ]Ok, prepare yourself for some Bey names:

• Hazbin Angel
  
• Redemption Asriel
  
• Aqous Poseidon
  
• Pirate Ridley
  
• Soaring Griffin
  
• Destruction Thanatos
  
• Lunatic Cthulhu
  
• Shipwreck Kraken
  
• Roar Ogre
  
• Queen Wasp
  

Hope I was of some help!

Funnily enough you used names like "Destruction", "Kraken" and "Ogre", which are already used names by Hasbro. "Roar" is also already used (DB Bahamut). Maybe try out "Dire Ogre" or "Wreck Ogre" as new names. I know they don't sound that good, but these are just suggestions. So, they may be decent substitutes. I still like the names "Pirate Ridley" and "Lunatic Cthulhu", especialy "Queen Wasp". They sound pretty dope and creative!

if she's using them as sub names its fine

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i extremely like Shipwreck Kraken

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(Aug. 02, 2021  6:05 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]

(Aug. 02, 2021  5:48 PM)BeySkozo Raky Wrote: [ -> ]Funnily enough you used names like "Destruction", "Kraken" and "Ogre", which are already used names by Hasbro. "Roar" is also already used (DB Bahamut). Maybe try out "Dire Ogre" or "Wreck Ogre" as new names. I know they don't sound that good, but these are just suggestions. So, they may be decent substitutes. I still like the names "Pirate Ridley" and "Lunatic Cthulhu", especialy "Queen Wasp". They sound pretty dope and creative!

if she's using them as sub names its fine

take Tempest Dragon as an example it's sub and Tempest Wyvron they both have Tempest but they are from different creators (and all tat)

(Aug. 02, 2021  6:05 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]

(Aug. 02, 2021  5:48 PM)BeySkozo Raky Wrote: [ -> ]Funnily enough you used names like "Destruction", "Kraken" and "Ogre", which are already used names by Hasbro. "Roar" is also already used (DB Bahamut). Maybe try out "Dire Ogre" or "Wreck Ogre" as new names. I know they don't sound that good, but these are just suggestions. So, they may be decent substitutes. I still like the names "Pirate Ridley" and "Lunatic Cthulhu", especialy "Queen Wasp". They sound pretty dope and creative!

if she's using them as sub names its fine

If it's that case, then it's fine I guess. Just wanted to do some suggestions and give some good ideas.

(Aug. 02, 2021  6:13 PM)BeySkozo Raky Wrote: [ -> ]

(Aug. 02, 2021  6:05 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]if she's using them as sub names its fine

If it's that case, then it's fine I guess. Just wanted to do some suggestions and give some good ideas.

oh my bad

(Aug. 02, 2021  6:36 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]

(Aug. 02, 2021  6:13 PM)BeySkozo Raky Wrote: [ -> ]If it's that case, then it's fine I guess. Just wanted to do some suggestions and give some good ideas.

oh my bad

Nothing wrong. It's all good (of course)!

I have heard Cluthulu in Athena's story.

(Aug. 02, 2021  5:48 PM)BeySkozo Raky Wrote: [ -> ]

(Aug. 02, 2021  2:44 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: [ -> ]Ok, prepare yourself for some Bey names:

• Hazbin Angel
  
• Redemption Asriel
  
• Aqous Poseidon
  
• Pirate Ridley
  
• Soaring Griffin
  
• Destruction Thanatos
  
• Lunatic Cthulhu
  
• Shipwreck Kraken
  
• Roar Ogre
  
• Queen Wasp
  

Hope I was of some help!

Funnily enough you used names like "Destruction", "Kraken" and "Ogre", which are already used names by Hasbro. "Roar" is also already used (DB Bahamut). Maybe try out "Dire Ogre" or "Wreck Ogre" as new names. I know they don't sound that good, but these are just suggestions. So, they may be decent substitutes. I still like the names "Pirate Ridley" and "Lunatic Cthulhu", especialy "Queen Wasp". They sound pretty dope and creative!

I know about the Hasbro names, It's just that I reckon they sound pretty good for TT Beys. I'm not sure if you noticed, but there's a reason I used "Roar" with "Ogre"...
And originally "Queen Wasp" was going to be "Queen Bee", but it sounded too much like a high-school drama stereotype.

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(Aug. 02, 2021  6:05 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]

(Aug. 02, 2021  5:48 PM)BeySkozo Raky Wrote: [ -> ]Funnily enough you used names like "Destruction", "Kraken" and "Ogre", which are already used names by Hasbro. "Roar" is also already used (DB Bahamut). Maybe try out "Dire Ogre" or "Wreck Ogre" as new names. I know they don't sound that good, but these are just suggestions. So, they may be decent substitutes. I still like the names "Pirate Ridley" and "Lunatic Cthulhu", especialy "Queen Wasp". They sound pretty dope and creative!

if she's using them as sub names its fine

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i extremely like Shipwreck Kraken

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(Aug. 02, 2021  6:05 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]if she's using them as sub names its fine

take Tempest Dragon as an example it's sub and Tempest Wyvron they both have Tempest but they are from different creators (and all tat)

...I'm not a girl. I understand if you thought that from my pfp.