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TALE OF THE PROTAGONISTS


This story will be the origin of the protagonists of all generations...
(completely fictional )

Tyson granger had a daughter,...
She sets on a training journey and becomes strong and she decides to continue to train....
And then she was training too hard and continued to travel .After traveling a long time she was exhausted and didnt have food ,..finally she saw a village and had the name of the village carved on the stone.. she tried to read it but her eyes were blurry due to ,she gathered up her whole strength and tried to read it,..finally she read it as "KOMA VILLAGE " and fainted...
After when she woke up she saw a tall handsome man with brown hair he said " My name is Ryo...Ryo hagane ..you were knocked out when i found you " .after that tyson ' s daughter and ryo fell in love and married each other....
After 12 years....
Tyson 's daughter :i hope he will be all right
Ryo : dont worry he is stronger than ever ...

Back in japan
A 12 year old boy with a dense brown hair ,and a blue headband was walking along the streets...

He met a boy named kenta who was bullied by some rogue bladers
The 12 year old boy defeated the rogue bladers and saved kenta

Kenta asked : Thank you for saving me ...Who are you ?

12 yr old boy : my name is Ginga hagane from Koma village,.and here is my partner ..STORM PEGASUS



TIME SKIP ......
WE KNOW WHAT HAPPENED AFTER THAT....

AFTER NEMESIS CRISIS AND SHOGUN STEEL ERA...


Ginka's sister was travelling on a plane...
Ginka ' s sis thinks ' i wonder where ginga went to training '

at the airport the ginka 's sis meets a person
" hello my name us kento Aoi ..nice to meet you "

And then their son was very much into beyblade
Just like his forefather and uncle..

The announcer says " Valt Aoi wins by the score of 3 to 1 "

Kento says " im very proud of him the blood of the great weilder of dragoon runs through him..what more can you expect.. " he said to himself


Time skip ...
After valt wins the world championship


Kento : Valt is too busy to come to home
Valts mom : well he is the nephew of the legendary pegasus owner...

Kento has a conversation with valt on the phone..
" Valt have i ever mentioned you abt my cousin Taiga akaba ...."
Valt : "no "

Kento : " well his son Aiga Akaba is also into beyblade now "....

And thats how it continues


Sorry if its lame
Vis vs Lui

No introduction needed, both bladers walk up and get ready to launch. The countdown starts and they launch. Sonar stays in the center as Longinus attacks over and over until Sonar bursts. Lui grins. "I have never really listened to any of your battles and I have to say. Longinus is a powerhouse," Vis says with a grin, "Now mind if I tie the score?"
"Like that will happen," Yells Lui as he launches, "tear it apart!" Lui's grin fades as he sees Sonar speed around the stadium, bursting Longinus. "Now that introductions are out of the way," Vis says with a grin that catches Lui off guard, "Shall we begin?"
The two launch and Sonar uses its weight to push Longinus out of its pattern and hits it down, making it scrape. "There are many benefits to having a lower bey. Going under defenses, uppercutting attacks, lower center or mass. But," Vis goes on, picking Lui and his bey apart, "It also poses a dire risk." Sonar hits Longinus again causing it to scrape again, the thirteen disk digging into the stadium. "Answer me this," Vis tells Lui with an unnerving glare with no target, "What happens when a small object hits a heavier one?" Sonar hits Longinus one last time and this time the leftspinning dragon stops dead. Gashes are found in the stadium, they almost make a picture. Vis walks off and says, "I hope you learned something." He stops, "and welcome to America."

-end of battle-

Lui was shocked, not only did he get defeated by a blind kid. A spin emperor, one of the original top five bladers in the world, got beaten by a kid that can't see. He stares at the stadium, Longinus still in the center off a mass of gashes that almost look like wings. "Welcome to America." The words echo through his head, the way they were said still leaves him shaking. There was a cold and powerful impact to them but no true malice. And the grin before the second round, he has never been on the receiving end of a face like that. Lui suddenly puts two and two together and says, "I just battled one of the best bladers in the world," Lui looks back at the stadium, Longinus staring back, "I challenged the champion like he was just some little kid."

"You know Icarus?"Said a voice. Lui turns around to see Vis, "the kid who flew too close to the sun with wax wings." Lui is truly set off guard by Vis being behind him. He looks back at Longinus and then snaps at Vis saying, "So, what about it?"
"You put yourself on a pedestal and disregard who you are going against." Vis says with a strong tone, "Now that I knocked you off that pillar and back into the real world, maybe you should get some training in." Vis walks away as he chimes in one last thing, "Try shu, he seems to know how you work."

-end of story-

Note: I did this one a little different, feedback would be appreciated
Ok, headcannon time: Each country has a champion. There is no one world champion. This is due to the constant change in champions that occurred from their being so many amazing bladers. This group of Champions are known as the elite and are marked by a gold level chip. If not on their bey then connected to their launcher. There is a ranking within the elite though...

Elite ranking battle: America vs Japan

Valt and Vis both walk up to the stadium and get ready. They launch and both beys rocket around the stadium. Sonar starts to gain on Valkyrie and hits the bey. The superior weight of Sonar allows it to push Valkyrie to the wall. Valkyrie knocks Sonar back then dives down and glances Sonar only to bounce off the wall to hit Sonar head on, sending Sonar out of the stadium right past Vis. Sonar bursts when it hits the ground.
"Amazing," Vis says as he grabs Sonar, "Such power." Vis holds the launcher in his left and gets ready. Vis swings his launcher and the movement makes Sonar catch Valkyrie head on and flinging it into the wall making it click twice. Sonar spins in the center as Valkyrie hits Sonar over and over. Sonar gets knocked onto the metal ring and hits Valkyrie with a counter, bursting it. "Shame the burst resistance is a little lacking."
The other elites are are shocked by Vis' actions. One of them says, "Japan is currently ranked first but he is acting like he has the upper hand." Free responds by saying, "He has nothing to lose," Free points to the leader board, "America is currently in fifth place. If he loses he stays in that placement and if he wins he goes into first and Valt goes into fifth."
"Got any tricks up your sleeve Valt?" Vis asks with confidence. They launch and Valt jumps up and launches aiming for where Sonar will land but an ever slight tilt causes Sonar to slow and reach that spot after Valkyrie. The two impact as Sonar pushes on the top side of Valkyrie, forcing it to scrape, and preventing Valkyrie to bounce up and correct itself. Valkyrie finally breaks away but a quick barrage from Sonar seals the deal, stopping Valkyrie. Sonar continues to circle and bursts, showing how close the battle was.

America now tops the leader board.

Note: at the current moment the only elites that are confirmed in this story are
Vis: America
Free: Spain
Valt: Japan

If anyone has a character that they think would be an elite give the name and the country they are the champion of.

@[Dragunix] Raos would be the champion of where?
(Sep. 17, 2018  3:27 AM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]Ok, headcannon time: Each country has a champion. There is no one world champion. This is due to the constant change in champions that occurred from their being so many amazing bladers. This group of Champions are known as the elite and are marked by a gold level chip. If not on their bey then connected to their launcher. There is a ranking within the elite though...

Elite ranking battle: America vs Japan

Valt and Vis both walk up to the stadium and get ready. They launch and both beys rocket around the stadium. Sonar starts to gain on Valkyrie and hits the bey. The superior weight of Sonar allows it to push Valkyrie to the wall. Valkyrie knocks Sonar back then dives down and glances Sonar only to bounce off the wall to hit Sonar head on, sending Sonar out of the stadium right past Vis. Sonar bursts when it hits the ground.
"Amazing," Vis says as he grabs Sonar, "Such power." Vis holds the launcher in his left and gets ready. Vis swings his launcher and the movement makes Sonar catch Valkyrie head on and flinging it into the wall making it click twice. Sonar spins in the center as Valkyrie hits Sonar over and over. Sonar gets knocked onto the metal ring and hits Valkyrie with a counter, bursting it. "Shame the burst resistance is a little lacking."
The other elites are are shocked by Vis' actions. One of them says, "Japan is currently ranked first but he is acting like he has the upper hand." Free responds by saying, "He has nothing to lose," Free points to the leader board, "America is currently in fifth place. If he loses he stays in that placement and if he wins he goes into first and Valt goes into fifth."
"Got any tricks up your sleeve Valt?" Vis asks with confidence. They launch and Valt jumps up and launches aiming for where Sonar will land but an ever slight tilt causes Sonar to slow and reach that spot after Valkyrie. The two impact as Sonar pushes on the top side of Valkyrie, forcing it to scrape, and preventing Valkyrie to bounce up and correct itself. Valkyrie finally breaks away but a quick barrage from Sonar seals the deal, stopping Valkyrie. Sonar continues to circle and bursts, showing how close the battle was.

America now tops the leader board.

Note: at the current moment the only elites that are confirmed in this story are
Vis: America
Free: Spain
Valt: Japan

If anyone has a character that they think would be an elite give the name and the country they are the champion of.

@[Dragunix] Raos would be the champion of where?

I guess,and freezelers for Antarctica and flashy For africa.
Raos is the name of the most powerful Dragon-Deity of light in Beyblade: Metal Burst that I'm working on since January of 2012. It combines all existing BitBeasts into one and can turn into a Bey itself.
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(Sep. 17, 2018  1:45 PM)Dragunix Wrote: [ -> ]
(Sep. 17, 2018  3:27 AM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]Ok, headcannon time: Each country has a champion. There is no one world champion. This is due to the constant change in champions that occurred from their being so many amazing bladers. This group of Champions are known as the elite and are marked by a gold level chip. If not on their bey then connected to their launcher. There is a ranking within the elite though...

Elite ranking battle: America vs Japan

Valt and Vis both walk up to the stadium and get ready. They launch and both beys rocket around the stadium. Sonar starts to gain on Valkyrie and hits the bey. The superior weight of Sonar allows it to push Valkyrie to the wall. Valkyrie knocks Sonar back then dives down and glances Sonar only to bounce off the wall to hit Sonar head on, sending Sonar out of the stadium right past Vis. Sonar bursts when it hits the ground.
"Amazing," Vis says as he grabs Sonar, "Such power." Vis holds the launcher in his left and gets ready. Vis swings his launcher and the movement makes Sonar catch Valkyrie head on and flinging it into the wall making it click twice. Sonar spins in the center as Valkyrie hits Sonar over and over. Sonar gets knocked onto the metal ring and hits Valkyrie with a counter, bursting it. "Shame the burst resistance is a little lacking."
The other elites are are shocked by Vis' actions. One of them says, "Japan is currently ranked first but he is acting like he has the upper hand." Free responds by saying, "He has nothing to lose," Free points to the leader board, "America is currently in fifth place. If he loses he stays in that placement and if he wins he goes into first and Valt goes into fifth."
"Got any tricks up your sleeve Valt?" Vis asks with confidence. They launch and Valt jumps up and launches aiming for where Sonar will land but an ever slight tilt causes Sonar to slow and reach that spot after Valkyrie. The two impact as Sonar pushes on the top side of Valkyrie, forcing it to scrape, and preventing Valkyrie to bounce up and correct itself. Valkyrie finally breaks away but a quick barrage from Sonar seals the deal, stopping Valkyrie. Sonar continues to circle and bursts, showing how close the battle was.

America now tops the leader board.

Note: at the current moment the only elites that are confirmed in this story are
Vis: America
Free: Spain
Valt: Japan

If anyone has a character that they think would be an elite give the name and the country they are the champion of.

@[Dragunix] Raos would be the champion of where?

Korea probably. As for ranking/placement has that changed dramatically from what was in place up until now?

Current top 5 are
1: America - Vis
2: Korea - Raos
3: Spain - Free
4: England - ???
5: Japan - Valt

The rankings are determined by battles. Any elite can challenge any elite. If the one with the lower ranking wins the two Bladers switch ranks. If the one with the higher ranking wins then knotting happens. And if there is a change of elites in a country then the new Blader starts with the ranking of the old one. Shu was the old America elite and at the time that Vis beat Shu and became the elite Shu was ranked fifth.
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(Sep. 18, 2018  12:26 AM)Dragunix Wrote: [ -> ]@[MWF] Who exactly is in england?
Zela Myr

Sixth place is Egypt with Eta
Valt vs Zela

The two Bladers get ready to launch. The countdown starts and Zela puts angular momentum in her launch by spinning and crouching right before launching. That makes Delphi circle down to the center and wait for attacks. Valkyrie dives down and hits Delphi. Delphi takes the hit and bounces Valkyrie away. The attacks continue until Delphi clicks and the strong attack sends both beys to the edge of the stadium. Delphi uses the stadium to build up speed as she dives to intercept Valkyrie. The two beys collide and Delphi clicks once more and hits Valkyrie again, this time hitting it down with a lot of force. This makes Valkyrie wobble as it struggles to get back it's momentum which Delphi uses to hit again but this time both beys burst.

The two Bladers launch again and Valkyrie lands on Delphi, bursting it. Zela twists the frame and goes to launch again. This time Delphi is wobbling as it rolls down to Valkyrie. The constantly changing angle makes Valkyrie hit the wall of the contact point and get countered with a strong uppercut which makes Delphi click to further strengthen the hit. Valkyrie scrapes on the stadium as Delphi continues to attack and wither away at the attack types stamina. Valkyrie stops spinning from the scraping.

Zela switches her launcher to her left and takes a step back. She darts forwards and swings the launcher. She yells, "Trilogy impact!" And Delphi smashes into Valkyrie hitting it with three rapid attacks, clicking with each impact. The first one was an upper attack, second one was a smash attack, and the third one slammed Valkyrie into the ground. Valkyrie bursts as it bounces off the stadium floor. Zela looks into the stands where a few of the other elites watch and sees Vis, interested in that final round.

-end of story-
Current rankings
America: Vis
Korea: Raos
Spain: Free
England: Zela
Japan: Valt
Egypt: Eta

Raos vs Eta
The two bladers get ready to launch. The countdown happens and the two launch. Dragoon dives down and hits Heptet. Heptet takes the hit and continues to spin, Dragoon hits again and again only to have near to no effect. Dragoon hits Heptet and gets bumped back, then stops.
Raos puts momentum into the launch and knocks Heptet out of the stadium.
The two launch and Heptet goes into its lower mode and takes the attacks. Dragoon speeds up and slams into Heptet, breaking through the gimmick and clicking the bey. Dragoon continues to attack and eventually bursts Heptet.
Zela vs Eta

The two Bladers launch and Heptet clashes with Delphi. Delphi uses its upper attack to knock Heptet away but Heptet blocks the attack and takes the center. Delphi clicks, switching to direct impact, and gets a solid hit on Heptet but it seems to do nothing. Delphi attacks again and clicks once more to change to force smash. The next hit causes Delphi to bounce up and thenjoy stop spinning due to stamina drain.

The bladers launch again but this time Zela uses her inertia launch to hit Heptet from above, causing both beys to click three times. On the second impact both beys burst.

They launch but Zela uses the rewind launch to hit Heptet with the trilogy impact but Heptet is at a lower height than normal. The first hit is a direct impact and the second one pushed Heptet down far enough to activate the driver and Heptet bounces up, uppercutting Delphi. Delphi hits Heptet again which makes it click once more. Heptet spins in the center as Delphi crashes into it once more. The impact causes Delphi to burst.

Note: not the most proud of this one but I think I will change the combo of Delphi to be more attack based. Stationary attack isn't working.

New driver: from stable to stride

The three bladers get ready to launch. They launch and it is clear that they are teaming up against Vis. Sonar circles, chasing Valkyrie, as Delphi spins in the center. Sonar catches up to Valkyrie and hits it. Sonar dives down and hits Delphi which tries to knock Sonar off balance, to no prevail, and clicks to change to direct attack. Delphi goes to attack again but clicks once more. Valkyrie collides with Delphi as Sonar is attacking and both Valkyrie and Delphi burst.
"The stable driver was meant for stamina and defense." Vis says as he picks up the volcanic driver. "A better driver would be something like this, one sec." Vis grabs Zac and tells him the idea. Zac creates a digital model of the driver and it is a volcanic sized driver at normal height with a release clutch that activates mid battle. The driver is created and given to Zela. "Let's test it." Zela says as she gets ready to launch.

Zela does an inertia launch and sends Delphi rocketing around the stadium, hitting Sonar with a direct impact after bouncing off the wall. The attack sends Sonar out of the center and on the metal ring. Sonar chases Delphi but the release clutch activates and Delphi dives down to a lower circle, outspinning Sonar due to the stamina loss from Rolling on the metal ring. Zela looks amazed and thanks Vis and Zac.
Zela vs Vis

She finally was able to get a time bracket set aside for this battle. The two Bladers walk up to the stadium and get ready. Zela uses her inertia launch to make Delphi circle and the noise grabs the attention of Vis. "You are using a different driver," He says, listening, "Hold, loose mold, worn." Delphi hits Sonar and the attack makes Sonar tilt but doesn't make it spin on the metal ring. Delphi hits again, this time clicking and goes into direct hit mode. Sonar gets knocked out of the center and starts to circle. Delphi catches up to Sonar hitting it with another strong attack and clicking. The third attack hits Sonar downwards and makes it dive into the center. Delphi dives down to catch it and both beys burst.

Vis holds his launcher in his left and crouches. "You seem to have taken a liking to my reverb launch," Vis says, a grin apearing on his face, "and I have to say, you do a good job at it. But mind if I show you what I based that launch on?" They launch, Vis swinging his launcher in a way that Sonar rolls to the left on the metal ring to hit Delphi head on. The impact sends Delphi near the wall of the stadium and Sonar dives down, still on the ring, to do a follow up attack. The attack lands and Dephi clicks. "I haven't used the retro launch in a while," Vis says, smiling, "but man, it sure works well with this driver." Sonar takes the center as Delphi dives down and attacks Sonar with a double attack, the first one a smash attack while the second one was force smash, but the parry makes Delphi burst.

Zela switches the frame to unbalanced mode and gets ready. Vis goes for another retro launch as Zela swings her launcher to the right. The vibration of the off balance disk and frame causes the three attacks to have more impact. Zela calls out, "Wild trinity!" As Sonar bursts, evening the score. Vis laughs and says, "So you were holding back," Vis grins and gets ready to launch, "Let's make this fun."

They launch, Zela doing the inertia launch while Vis swings his launcher at an angle that makes Sonar dart through the center and catch Delphi on the other side of the stadium. Delphi fights back and hits Sonar with an upper attack which was followed with a strong attack, sending Sonar away to take the center. Delphi dives down to attack Sonar again, hitting it with an attack that sends it out of the center, then switches to force smash. The next hit causes Sonar to tilt downwards but Sonar counters and hits Delphi to the edge of the stadium. Both bladers are smiling as the two beys collide and get knocked into the air, Sonar bursting slightly later than Delphi.
Bio.. matt sucks at beyblade and is about to give up at beyblade for ever when zero stop him from giving up and train him to be the best in town. He even beat zero, Ginga and Tsubasa at one time. Okay now for the beyblade his beyblade reverse minbros it is a left spining beyblade it has a metal face bolt that has a m on it. The metal wheel on it is super round no bump at all and has five points of contact made out of rubber. The spin track w105.  the Performance tip is call z19 it is a tip like tower from the burst format at.  Special moves are spin counter it when the z19  go to it lower height and spin steal. The last one is call minbros stampede while the tip is in it higher mode it start to tip over some and bey speed in too it's the other beyblade. His personality is like kind of like Valt.Character description black, brown,eyes and a box hair cut. Name matt Smith.
ill think i also better get writing stories
Vis vs Phi Battle boat finals.
The two Bladers launch. Sonar darts at Phoenix and hits it out of the center. The second hit sends it to the edge and the third sends Phoenix out. "To be expected from the best." Says Phi as he picks up Phoenix.
The two get ready to launch and Phoenix slams into Sonar causing the revival armor to fly at Vis. Vis catches it as Sonar bursts. 'The armor acts as a false burst,' Thinks Vis as he gets ready to launch, 'If I hit it hard enough I can get it to false burst before the actual attack.'
Vis crouches and holds his launcher at an angle behind his head. They launch with Vis swinging his launcher so Sonar slams into Phoenix at an angle. The angle causes the armor to fly off, Sonar then attacks with its Parry to send Phoenix out of the center. Phoenix glows with dark power as it rockets at Sonar. As the two beys collide Sonar starts to glow a slight gold as it bursts Phoenix. Phi laughs as the revival armor falls onto The top of Sonar, Causing a Crack that makes the layer split, only held together by the outer ring.


Note: This is not the bey queen. It was a bracket tournament that the finals were to three points.
Second note: This will lead into a new Sonar.
Third note: Yes Sonar as light power. With the fact that not only Phi but Agia has dark power why not?
Fourth note: @[Dragunix] your syncro thing will fit right in to the current situation of Burst ChouZ.
New beys: Vis vs Raos

Vis is practicing with Zac as Raos walks up. "That's new." Says Raos as he watches Sonar deflect attacks. "It's called Lucid Sonar." Points out Vis as he picks up his bey," And I heard you have a new ace to test out too." Raos grins and puts his new bey, sovereign Dragoon, on his launcher and get ready to launch.

Zac watches as they get ready to launch. Sonar spins in the center as Dragoon dives down to attack. The attack knocks Sonar away and surprises Vis, "A lot stronger than Nova Dragoon," Says Vis as Sonar circles back to the center, "But Sonar changed as well." Dragoon continues to attack until suddenly Dragoon gets thrown back and Sonar starts to circle at high speeds at dragoon, bursting it.

Raos switches Dragoon to left spin and they get ready to launch. Sonar reaches the center and Dragoon hits it. "Left spin," Said Vis as Sonar gets hit again and again. "Interesting." Dragoon continues to attack until Dragoon gets knocked away and stops spinning.

"Mind if I see Sonar for a sec?" Asks Raos. Vis agrees and hands Sonar to him. Raos notices the second set of teeth on the layer and understands the sudden attack increase mid battle.


not the best story but oh well, I think I will revise the combo for Lucid Sonar and the next story will be a placement challenge between Vis and Raos. Lets see what happens when neither of them hold back.
This one should do Dragoon and Sonar more justice.

Placement battle: Raos vs Vis

The two Bladers get ready to launch. The two beys enter the stadium and Sonar takes the center. Dragoon dives down and flings Sonar to the edge of the stadium after a long clash. Sonar collides with Dragoon and gets flung out. Raos grins and gets ready for the second round.

Vis twists the ring all the way to the right and gets ready. They launch and dragoon attacks Sonar. Sonar stands it's ground thanks to the rubber dish on its driver and braces for another attack. Dragoon follows up with a barrage of attacks until it eventually stops.

"That was defense mode," Said Vis, twisting the ring all the way to the left, "guess what's next." Vis tilts his launcher and the rubber disk catches the stopper, causing Sonar to dash at Dragoon. Both beys burst on contact.

"I sure hope you aren't holding back Raos," Said Vis, hearing the click of Dragoon's spin change, "Because I won't." Vis swings his launcher and catches Dragoon. The two clash as the ring on Sonar starts to click. Dragoon bounces off Sonar and Sonar dives to the center. Raos yells, "Now, Dragoon." And dragoon dives down to hit Sonar with a finishing blow. Sonar glows slightly as Dragoon impacts and both beys get sent into the air and bursts, Sonar ever so slightly after Dragoon.

Both bladers discuss the battle afterwards, "So let me get this straight," Says Raos, twisting the ring on Sonar, "So defense mode actively changes to attack move in battle. And you can set it into attack mode from the start?" Vis nods and says, "Yes, and which mode is which depends on the opponents spin direction. Speaking of spin direction," Vis holds Dragoon and asks, "How does the mechanism in the this layer work? It changes the spin while turning the contact points." Raos just responds that he doesn't know and hands back Sonar while Vis gives back Dragoon.


A little better of a story.
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(Oct. 14, 2018  6:23 AM)Dragunix Wrote: [ -> ]
(Oct. 14, 2018  5:28 AM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]This one should do Dragoon and Sonar more justice.

Placement battle: Raos vs Vis

The two Bladers get ready to launch. The two beys enter the stadium and Sonar takes the center. Dragoon dives down and flings Sonar to the edge of the stadium after a long clash. Sonar collides with Dragoon and gets flung out. Raos grins and gets ready for the second round.

Vis twists the ring all the way to the right and gets ready. They launch and dragoon attacks Sonar. Sonar stands it's ground thanks to the rubber dish on its driver and braces for another attack. Dragoon follows up with a barrage of attacks until it eventually stops.

"That was defense mode," Said Vis, twisting the ring all the way to the left, "guess what's next." Vis tilts his launcher and the rubber disk catches the stopper, causing Sonar to dash at Dragoon. Both beys burst on contact.

"I sure hope you aren't holding back Raos," Said Vis, hearing the click of Dragoon's spin change, "Because I won't." Vis swings his launcher and catches Dragoon. The two clash as the ring on Sonar starts to click. Dragoon bounces off Sonar and Sonar dives to the center. Raos yells, "Now, Dragoon." And dragoon dives down to hit Sonar with a finishing blow. Sonar glows slightly as Dragoon impacts and both beys get sent into the air and bursts, Sonar ever so slightly after Dragoon.

Both bladers discuss the battle afterwards, "So let me get this straight," Says Raos, twisting the ring on Sonar, "So defense mode actively changes to attack move in battle. And you can set it into attack mode from the start?" Vis nods and says, "Yes, and which mode is which depends on the opponents spin direction. Speaking of spin direction," Vis holds Dragoon and asks, "How does the mechanism in the this layer work? It changes the spin while turning the contact points." Raos just responds that he doesn't know and hands back Sonar while Vis gives back Dragoon.


A little better of a story.

The teeth don't twist to change the direction of the blades. It's more like two sets of tN's layer system that lock and unlock by pulling/pushing. Then the teeth can be clicked into the layer and taken out by using a tool to remove the teeth and place in the other set.

Ok good to know. Lucid Sonar has a set of six teeth that the outer ring moves on. They are comparable to the Phoenix armor. This means that the outer ring clicks before the layer does. Defense mode is when the ring is twisted so the opponent would have to move the ring before it can have a chance of bursting Sonar. Attack mode is when the ring is already at the fixed point. Depending on the opponents spin direction the positions of the modes switch.

Attack mode right is defense mode left and vise versa.
Aiga vs Vis.

The two Bladers get ready to launch. They launch and Achilles slams into Sonar. Sonar takes the attack and continues to spin in the center. Achilles attacks again and again. "Sonar, final counter."Says Vis as Achilles hits Sonar. Achilles bursts from the powerful counter attack. Vis glares at Aiga as they picked up their beys.

"I expected more," Says Vis with venom in his voice. They launch and Sonar takes a strong hit from Achilles, only for Achilles to get sent away. "I guess this is what happens when you win on a technicality." Aiga's shadow starts to flicker as Achilles starts to glow dark purple. "Z slash." Says Aiga as Achilles dives down and knocks Sonar out.

Aiga starts to glow dark purple as well. "Did I strike a nerve?" Vis says, as he sets Sonar into attack mode and gets ready to launch. They launch and Sonar rockets around the stadium and collides with Achilles, taking a click from Achilles as it is sent flying. When Achilles lands it loses another click as it gets hit again. "Get used to this," Says Vis as Sonar glows gold, charging towards Achilles, "Sonar, silent retribution." Achilles clashes with Sonar as its dark power fades. Suddenly, Achilles bursts and says, "Next time earn it."

Note: This battle takes place directly after Aiga becomes Japan's champion. The first thing he does is challenge Vis to get to the top. Of course Vis thinks that underhanded strategies like breaking the opponents bey are despicable and uses this battle to show him what a true champion battles like.

This battle takes place before he battles Phi.
(Oct. 18, 2018  3:32 AM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]Aiga vs Vis.

The two Bladers get ready to launch. They launch and Achilles slams into Sonar. Sonar takes the attack and continues to spin in the center. Achilles attacks again and again. "Sonar, final counter."Says Vis as Achilles hits Sonar. Achilles bursts from the powerful counter attack. Vis glares at Aiga as they picked up their beys.

"I expected more," Says Vis with venom in his voice. They launch and Sonar takes a strong hit from Achilles, only for Achilles to get sent away. "I guess this is what happens when you win on a technicality." Aiga's shadow starts to flicker as Achilles starts to glow dark purple. "Z slash." Says Aiga as Achilles dives down and knocks Sonar out.

Aiga starts to glow dark purple as well. "Did I strike a nerve?" Vis says, as he sets Sonar into attack mode and gets ready to launch. They launch and Sonar rockets around the stadium and collides with Achilles, taking a click from Achilles as it is sent flying. When Achilles lands it loses another click as it gets hit again. "Get used to this," Says Vis as Sonar glows gold, charging towards Achilles, "Sonar, silent retribution." Achilles clashes with Sonar as its dark power fades. Suddenly, Achilles bursts and says, "Next time earn it."

Note: This battle takes place directly after Aiga becomes Japan's champion. The first thing he does is challenge Vis to get to the top. Of course Vis thinks that underhanded strategies like breaking the opponents bey are despicable and uses this battle to show him what a true champion battles like.

This battle takes place before he battles Phi.

I like it and um can vis battle shu next.
(Oct. 18, 2018  3:44 AM)Jman jman Wrote: [ -> ]
(Oct. 18, 2018  3:32 AM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]Aiga vs Vis.

The two Bladers get ready to launch. They launch and Achilles slams into Sonar. Sonar takes the attack and continues to spin in the center. Achilles attacks again and again. "Sonar, final counter."Says Vis as Achilles hits Sonar. Achilles bursts from the powerful counter attack. Vis glares at Aiga as they picked up their beys.

"I expected more," Says Vis with venom in his voice. They launch and Sonar takes a strong hit from Achilles, only for Achilles to get sent away. "I guess this is what happens when you win on a technicality." Aiga's shadow starts to flicker as Achilles starts to glow dark purple. "Z slash." Says Aiga as Achilles dives down and knocks Sonar out.

Aiga starts to glow dark purple as well. "Did I strike a nerve?" Vis says, as he sets Sonar into attack mode and gets ready to launch. They launch and Sonar rockets around the stadium and collides with Achilles, taking a click from Achilles as it is sent flying. When Achilles lands it loses another click as it gets hit again. "Get used to this," Says Vis as Sonar glows gold, charging towards Achilles, "Sonar, silent retribution." Achilles clashes with Sonar as its dark power fades. Suddenly, Achilles bursts and says, "Next time earn it."

Note: This battle takes place directly after Aiga becomes Japan's champion. The first thing he does is challenge Vis to get to the top. Of course Vis thinks that underhanded strategies like breaking the opponents bey are despicable and uses this battle to show him what a true champion battles like.

This battle takes place before he battles Phi.

I like it and um can vis battle shu next.

Once chouZ Spriggan makes its premier in the anime. I need to know how he would battle with that bey.

Ok a little reasoning on why Vis was so angry and merciless against Aiga.

Somehow he gained the ability to see after being blind from birth. He was finally able to put a picture to the sounds he heard and in the first battle he sees Aiga breaks Winning Valkyrie and becomes Japan's champion. Wouldn't you be angry?

The first battle you are able to see with your own two eyes is won by the lowest of underhanded tactics.

Vis vs Vincent

The two bladers get ready to launch. Vincent jumps up and launches. Vulcan hits Sonar from above, clashing with the outer ring of the Sonar. Vulcan gets knocked away and attacks again, leaving one click on the ring. Vulcan gets knocked away and switches to it's defense mode and dives down to Sonar. When they collide Vulcan gets sent out of the stadium.

"Quite the interesting bey you got there," Says Vis with a smile, Vincent smiles and says, "I could say the same to you." They get ready to launch and they both say, "Now lets see if you can take this." They launch and Vulcan gets engulfed in flames as it dives at Sonar which is rocketing around the stadium. They collide and Sonar bursts.

Vincent laughs and says, "This is fun." and gets his Launcher ready. Vis sets Sonar in defense mode and gets ready. They launch and Vulcan engulfs itself in flames again as Sonar glows gold. "Sonar," Yells Vis, as Vulcan collides with Sonar," Negation counter." The ring on Sonar takes the attack, instantly going from defense mode to attack mode, then Sonar hits Vulcan which sends it into the wall. Sonar continues to circle at high speeds as Vulcan switches to defense mode. "Furnace Lockdown!" Yells Vincent, pulling his arms close to his chest in a defensive stance. "Silent retribution." says Vis as Sonar charges into Vulcan. The impact shakes the stadium and as the dust clears only Sonar is left spinning with Vulcan bursted on the stadium floor.

Vis laughs and says, "You got talent." He picks up Vulcan, assembles it, and hands it to Vincent, "Keep trying. One day You might be the one on top."



note: @[Dt20000] here it is. Vincent knows how powerful Vis is so each attack was a white hot saber and he didn't hold back.
(Oct. 18, 2018  3:46 AM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]
(Oct. 18, 2018  3:44 AM)Jman jman Wrote: [ -> ]I like it and um can vis battle shu next.

Once chouZ Spriggan makes its premier in the anime. I need to know how he would battle with that bey.

Ok a little reasoning on why Vis was so angry and merciless against Aiga.

Somehow he gained the ability to see after being blind from birth. He was finally able to put a picture to the sounds he heard and in the first battle he sees Aiga breaks Winning Valkyrie and becomes Japan's champion. Wouldn't you be angry?

The first battle you are able to see with your own two eyes is won by the lowest of underhanded tactics.

Vis vs Vincent

The two bladers get ready to launch. Vincent jumps up and launches. Vulcan hits Sonar from above, clashing with the outer ring of the Sonar. Vulcan gets knocked away and attacks again, leaving one click on the ring. Vulcan gets knocked away and switches to it's defense mode and dives down to Sonar. When they collide Vulcan gets sent out of the stadium.

"Quite the interesting bey you got there," Says Vis with a smile, Vincent smiles and says, "I could say the same to you." They get ready to launch and they both say, "Now lets see if you can take this." They launch and Vulcan gets engulfed in flames as it dives at Sonar which is rocketing around the stadium. They collide and Sonar bursts.

Vincent laughs and says, "This is fun." and gets his Launcher ready. Vis sets Sonar in defense mode and gets ready. They launch and Vulcan engulfs itself in flames again as Sonar glows gold. "Sonar," Yells Vis, as Vulcan collides with Sonar," Negation counter." The ring on Sonar takes the attack, instantly going from defense mode to attack mode, then Sonar hits Vulcan which sends it into the wall. Sonar continues to circle at high speeds as Vulcan switches to defense mode. "Furnace Lockdown!" Yells Vincent, pulling his arms close to his chest in a defensive stance. "Silent retribution." says Vis as Sonar charges into Vulcan. The impact shakes the stadium and as the dust clears only Sonar is left spinning with Vulcan bursted on the stadium floor.

Vis laughs and says, "You got talent." He picks up Vulcan, assembles it, and hands it to Vincent, "Keep trying. One day You might be the one on top."



note: @[Dt20000] here it is. Vincent knows how powerful Vis is so each attack was a white hot saber and he didn't hold back.

I’m so happy that my character did so well.
Kody vs Aiga

Kody Takeo watched the match between Valt and Aiga and wasn't at all happy with the way Aiga won. When Aiga was walking through the halls, He met Kody talking to Valt. "Hey, Kody! I won the match! Said the redhead excitedly. Kody turned and glared at him angrily. "Yeah, I saw that. I also saw that you broke Valtryek." Kody replied, with a growl in his voice. Aiga scoffed. "No, I didn't. If I did, I'd have noticed. Then, it was Valt's turn to be angry. "Really, Then you surely must've noticed this, RIGHT!?" Valt yelled, showing the Split winning Valkyrie in his hand. Aiga was surprised. " Did I really do that? I'm sorry, I guess I blanked out during the battle and forgot." Aiga said nervously.

Valt seethed, while Kody facepalmed. "Something happened to you during that battle. I don't know what it was, but I don't like it. It changed you, made you become someone else. You may be a champion, but you sure don't battle like one. Kody said, turning and walking away from Aiga, with Valt following him. "Wait!" Aiga chimed, running in front of the boys. "Battle me, Kody. Let me prove that I'm a real champion." Kody didn't want to battle him, but he knew that Aiga would just keep bugging him if he didn't. "Ugh, fine, but only one round. Winner take all, understand?" he replied, rather irate. Aiga accepted and ran to the cruise ship.

When the boys met up, Kody got ready to launch Champion Karven and Aiga set up Z Achilles. Valt was judging the battle for them. "3, 2, 1, LET IT RIIIP!" The bladers shouted as they battled on the ship. Karven and Achilles were  clashing and bounding against each other for a while, when Aiga's dark power arised. As soon as Karven hit Achilles, It broke into many pieces. Kody was absolutely shocked and furious. Aiga snapped out of his trance and looked less than happy, once he saw the damage he did. "Oh no! I did it again! Uh, Maybe we can fix it? if i just- Kody?" Aiga said, looking up at Kody, who was so angry, he seemed as though he wanted to kill Aiga. "Just. Go." He fumed. Aiga stuttered nervously about trying to fix Karven, but Kody didn't care. "I  help you learn how to play the game, I give you the things you needed from me. I was your friend and out of all that, You just do this to us? I hope you're happy, Aiga." Kody spoke in a very ticked off tone as he picked up his broken bey and walked to the pier.

"Kody, don't you think you're taking this too far?" Valt asked nervously. "HE DESTROYED MY PARTNER! OF COURSE, NOT! Kody snapped, making Valt flinch in response to his outburst. Aiga felt lost inside his heart. He may have won all his matches today, but somehow, he didn't feel like a champion.

This is how I felt when Aiga broke  Valkyrie like that in episode 28. This will be in my beyblade story in the future and Kody will eventually get his new bey after that.
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