(Mar. 01, 2018 10:05 PM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ] (Mar. 01, 2018 8:41 PM)Beatlynx27 Wrote: [ -> ]True, but it still would've made it more intese
I made Chimera survive the afterimage barrage. The only other beyblade to do that was E-A and that was because of a click gimmick knocking Sonar off balance on impact.
didnt notice, thx!
(Mar. 02, 2018 5:26 AM)Beatlynx27 Wrote: [ -> ] (Mar. 01, 2018 10:05 PM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]I made Chimera survive the afterimage barrage. The only other beyblade to do that was E-A and that was because of a click gimmick knocking Sonar off balance on impact.
didnt notice, thx!
No problem. Though it was to set up the finishing blow. Chimera is the second beyblade to not losses before the afterimage barrage ended. And M-S is a chouzetsu bey. Chimera is the only god bey to survive the attack.
The two brothers are battling as one of the scientists walk up to Zac and tells him something. Zac nods and ends the battle knocking Sonar out. Zac says, “Vis it seems like we have a challenger or two.” Vis responds and the two are brought to a Stadium in a forested area. They are greeted by a pair of girls waiting to battle. The two introduce themselves as Nagisa and Diana and reveal their beys. Zac is interested by how similar they look and He gets ready to launch along with Vis. They launch and dreaded Zelus sweeps left and hits Aeros with the spring attack making Aeros click once. Zelus circles close to the center as Sonar spins. Zelus hits Sonar and clicks with the parry. Zelus is flung up to Aeros and it clicks again triggering the gimmick turning Zelus into a five sided attacker. Zelus dives down and knocks Sonar out of the center then the driver releases a burst of spin making Zelus impact Sonar once more clicking it. Dreaded Zelus goes for an attack but the parry causes it to reach its last click, which is easily taken by Aeros. Aeros goes for Zelus and clicks ones more activating its gimmick and goes for one more attack. Zac says, “Crossburst!” as Aeros hits Zelus trapping it between the frame and layer, bursting it. Zac goes to pick up Aeros but it bursts and he realized that he only survived because it stuck. The twins just grin as they get out of the way as a familiar blader walks up to the stadium. This blader says, “Out of the way,” He grins, “I am only here to battle that one.” He points to Vis. Vis is startled by the voice but then gets his launcher ready.
-end of part 5-
(Mar. 05, 2018 11:10 PM)Dragunix Wrote: [ -> ] (Mar. 05, 2018 4:17 PM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]
The two brothers are battling as one of the scientists walk up to Zac and tells him something. Zac nods and ends the battle knocking Sonar out. Zac says, “Vis it seems like we have a challenger or two.” Vis responds and the two are brought to a Stadium in a forested area. They are greeted by a pair of girls waiting to battle. The two introduce themselves as Nagisa and Diana and reveal their beys. Zac is interested by how similar they look and He gets ready to launch along with Vis. They launch and dreaded Zelus sweeps left and hits Aeros with the spring attack making Aeros click once. Zelus circles close to the center as Sonar spins. Zelus hits Sonar and clicks with the parry. Zelus is flung up to Aeros and it clicks again triggering the gimmick turning Zelus into a five sided attacker. Zelus dives down and knocks Sonar out of the center then the driver releases a burst of spin making Zelus impact Sonar once more clicking it. Dreaded Zelus goes for an attack but the parry causes it to reach its last click, which is easily taken by Aeros. Aeros goes for Zelus and clicks ones more activating its gimmick and goes for one more attack. Zac says, “Crossburst!” as Aeros hits Zelus trapping it between the frame and layer, bursting it. Zac goes to pick up Aeros but it bursts and he realized that he only survived because it stuck. The twins just grin as they get out of the way as a familiar blader walks up to the stadium. This blader says, “Out of the way,” He grins, “I am only here to battle that one.” He points to Vis. Vis is startled by the voice but then gets his launcher ready.
-end of part 5-
My main assumption is Piluto but I guess I'll wait. Interesting as always.
you are good a guessing. Though it is obvious and I could have just made this a challenge from him but I wanted to write something with Diana and Nagisa. part 6 may or may not be the last part.
(Feb. 28, 2018 1:39 AM)beymaster35 Wrote: [ -> ]Hi I was hoping someone would do a story for my character
If you need any information tell me
I'd love to add your character to my story! i just need to know his age, personality, appearance and dual layer beyblade
Before I post part 6 can anyone notice some things in part 5 that add to the realism of the gimmicks? (if the wording of the question works)
Vis stands still and holds his launcher in his left. “This is new,” says the blader, “but new tricks won’t save you.” Vis stays silent. The two bladers launch and Sonar rolls left then as Nemesis circles to meet it Sonar dives down then rises up to push its opponent into the wall. Sonar bounces off and goes into the center. Nemesis dives down and Piluto says, “Triple Impact.” But Sonar parries the attack and then hits Nemesis. Nemesis goes for another attack and gets countered each time. Piluto gets angry and yells, “End it! End it now! Nemesis, armageddon!” Nemesis speeds up and goes for an attack but Vis just says, “Not this time,” he grins, “Sonar, do it.” Sonar tilts and hits Nemesis as an angle then circles to trap the beyblade. Nemesis gets hit again and again. Piluto yells, “Shield Shoot!” Sonar tightens the circle, “Final Guard.” Piluto says as the circle gets smaller and smaller. Piluto starts to panic and yell out special moves each one more shaky than the last. Vis hears the faint sound of Nemesis cracking and lets Nemesis out of the attack. Piluto, now shaking, says,”Counter Bre…” As he says this Sonar speeds up and smashes into Nemesis flinging it into the wall. Vis interrupts Piluto and says with an unnerving laugh, “Break.” Nemesis hits the wall and its layer breaks into two. Vis tilts his head and glares straight at Piluto with unseeing eyes and says, “Perfect” then grabs Sonar and walks away.
-End of Story-
@[dt1000] that second bey for piluto could be made into a chouzetsu bey with a little revising.
Draconic Spectrum: Vis vs Draco
Vis and Zac are walking to the park to practice. The two brothers battle and the clashes are heard across the park. Suddenly a third beyblade interrupts the battle, Knocking out both Sonar and Aeros. Zac asks what is wrong with the blader but this blader just gets a launch ready and points to Vis. The blader says something, The voice reminds Vis of someone but he couldn’t understand what the blader said. Vis gets a launch ready and they launch. Vis is startled because of left spin, the beyblade lifts Sonar into the air and then knocks it into the wall. Sonar takes the center. The beyblade dives down and hits Sonar, flinging it out of the center. “Go on the offensive,” Says Vis, “Amplified strike.” Sonar uses the rubber to speed up and attack the beyblade head on. Right before impact Sonar speeds up again and both beys burst.
Vis gets his launch ready, a flat launch this time, and mentally analyzes the first battle. Vis hears a small click. They launch and Sonar goes to the center. “Counters won’t work.” says Vis, “Dodge and wait for an opening. Sonar, indirect sound.” The beyblade dives down but Sonar changes its movements and dodges. The beyblade’s driver catches the movement and it goes for a tight barrage, barely missing each attack. Zac tells Vis, “The beyblade your battling, it reminds me of neo Dragoon.” Vis hears this and then uses its rubber ring to start circling. Dragoon starts to wobble, Sonar dives down for the attack. The blader says, “Show your power,” Dragoon intercepts the attack, draining a bit of spin and uses the spinning disk on it’s driver. “Draconic burst.” Dragoon starts attacking draining spin each attack. Sonar gets knocked out. Dragoon then stops spinning. Vis picks up Sonar and it bursts in his hand.
Vis thinks then grins. He noticed that it changed modes and knew what to do. He gets a mirage shoot ready and the blader holds his launcher in an odd way. They launch and Sonar rolls left and Dragoon spins on its disk then rockets at Sonar. Sonar dives down then rises up using the rubber ring to hit dragoon from below. As Sonar circles Vis says, “Strong bey Rykos.” Dragoon clashes with Sonar as the blader just says, "I am Draco." Dragoon knocks Sonar away. Sonar uses the rubber ring to dash at Dragoon this time slamming it down. It then catches Dragoon, flinging it into another attack. Draco says, “Raijin Dragoon,” Dragoon spins on its disk, “Draco counter” Dragoon dashes at Sonar. Sonar moves out of the way and Dragoon attacks again this time a glancing blow that triggers an echo parry and Sonar capitalizes on this, Sonar speeds up and slams into Dragoon. Dragoon flies into the wall and both beyblades burst, Sonar only slightly after Dragoon.
-End of Story?-
Hey @[Dragunix], any feedback?
*note* this battle takes place after project Spectrum and project Draco.
(Mar. 13, 2018 5:45 PM)Dragunix Wrote: [ -> ] (Mar. 13, 2018 4:35 PM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]Draconic Spectrum: Vis vs Draco
Vis and Zac are walking to the park to practice. The two brothers battle and the clashes are heard across the park. Suddenly a third beyblade interrupts the battle, Knocking out both Sonar and Aeros. Zac asks what is wrong with the blader but this blader just gets a launch ready and points to Vis. The blader says something, The voice reminds Vis of someone but he couldn’t understand what the blader said. Vis gets a launch ready and they launch. Vis is startled because of left spin, the beyblade lifts Sonar into the air and then knocks it into the wall. Sonar takes the center. The beyblade dives down and hits Sonar, flinging it out of the center. “Go on the offensive,” Says Vis, “Amplified strike.” Sonar uses the rubber to speed up and attack the beyblade head on. Right before impact Sonar speeds up again and both beys burst.
Vis gets his launch ready, a flat launch this time, and mentally analyzes the first battle. Vis hears a small click. They launch and Sonar goes to the center. “Counters won’t work.” says Vis, “Dodge and wait for an opening. Sonar, indirect sound.” The beyblade dives down but Sonar changes its movements and dodges. The beyblade’s driver catches the movement and it goes for a tight barrage, barely missing each attack. Zac tells Vis, “The beyblade your battling, it reminds me of neo Dragoon.” Vis hears this and then uses its rubber ring to start circling. Dragoon starts to wobble, Sonar dives down for the attack. The blader says, “Show your power,” Dragoon intercepts the attack, draining a bit of spin and uses the spinning disk on it’s driver. “Draconic burst.” Dragoon starts attacking draining spin each attack. Sonar gets knocked out. Dragoon then stops spinning. Vis picks up Sonar and it bursts in his hand.
Vis thinks then grins. He noticed that it changed modes and knew what to do. He gets a mirage shoot ready and the blader holds his launcher in an odd way. They launch and Sonar rolls left and Dragoon spins on its disk then rockets at Sonar. Sonar dives down then rises up using the rubber ring to hit dragoon from below. As Sonar circles Vis says, “Strong bey Rykos.” Dragoon clashes with Sonar as the blader says, “Rykos is gone,” Dragoon knocks Sonar away, “I am Draco.” Sonar uses the rubber ring to dash at Dragoon this time slamming it down. It then catches Dragoon, flinging it into another attack. Draco says, “Raijin Dragoon,” Dragoon spins on its disk, “Draco counter” Dragoon dashes at Sonar. Sonar moves out of the way and Dragoon attacks again this time a glancing blow that triggers an echo parry and Sonar capitalizes on this, Sonar speeds up and slams into Dragoon. Dragoon flies into the wall and both beyblades burst, Sonar only slightly after Dragoon.
-End of Story?-
Hey @[Dragunix], any feedback?
Draco is pretty open about what he is, and doesn't really do the whole "Rykos is gone thing."
Also, I'll do Iris' battle along with the other ones later.
I'll be off for a while again until I can actually handle myself.
Ok thanks for the feedback.
...........Kai and Kaira have same beyblade.....
One day Kai sleep under the tree?..Suddenly his eyes open due to loud voice,which is coming from the forest.He was angry because loud voice make him incomfortable,he stand,throw one leave from his mouth,and close our eyes because he want to listen someting.When Tyson and Hillary see him.They both come close to Kai and said-
HILLARY-What happen kai,why u stand and close our eyes,tell me kai,there was any problem... kai.
TYSON-Hey Hillary,why u ask so many question in one time.
HILLARY-Ah.. me,Because i care my team so much than you.
TYSON-......Ah..you
They both were fighting eachother.
KAI-stop it,i trying to listen something..
Tyson and Hillary stop fighting and see kai.
Suddenly Kai opened his eyes.He pull the Hillary and Tyson and runaway in Forest.Hillary fall on Tyson's leg.
TYSON-Aaaa Hillary.......
HILLARY-Oops sorry.
She stand and ask to Tyson
HILLARY-Where is Kai go..?
Tyson-I don't know...let's follow the kai
They both were finding kai.
Kai runing fastly..suddenly he stop and see one girl who beat animals with her beyblade.Kai-Grr....hey!girl what are u doing?why u harm this animals?but Girl not answer his question,she beat all animals one by one.
Kai-Grr.....
Kai-hey girl let's fight with me and show our power.
Girl said to kai-hey stop! But kai not stop,he launch is beyblade suddenly 2 small childrens come close to kai and said-no...please.. this girl is like my sis and she always help me.She is so kind girl.
Kai-huh?what?You don't see that she harmed these animals.
Children said-yes i see because these animals are very dangerous. All animals are come in night time from nighbour forest and eat all small animals,and also eat some humans,and destroy our hut.
Kai-huh!
Suddenly girl fall on ground and some animals cover her..kai runing and come close to girl.
But he see that all animals love her.All animals kiss her and eating some food which is given by girl.Girl look all animals very kindly.KAI-Hey!...Girl see kai and stand up.She come close to Kai and said-Hola,i'm Kaira and you .............Kai??
KAI-Yeah!am kai.
KAIRA-Nice to meet you?
KAI-hey! When i come and see you......you fight with this animals but this time..........
Kaira smile and said-i live in forest and i know very well to control animals.HEY!when i'm fighting with animals ..you said......suddenly Tyson and Hillary runing amd come close to Kai..
TYSON-Hey!kai what happen?Who is this girl?
HILLARY-huh!hey Tyson why you ask so many questions.
TYSON-huh?me...you....
KAI-Stop it guys!
KAIRA-oh!this is Tyson and Hillary.I'm Kaira and nice to meet you.
HILLARY-Nice to meet you too?.You are old friend of Kai?
Kaira smile and said-no,i'm not old friend of kai.
TYSON-Anyways..kai,why you runing in this forest.
Kai look animals and said-Ah...when i'm sleep,i suddenly listen human crying voice after than animals voice.which is so loud voice. I want to sleep ,but this voices are so loud.I love animals.I think some one hurt many animals.When i come i see Kaira,,,i thought that she hurt animals,which make me angry.But....she helped humans from this dangerous animals.
HILLARY-what! This animals are dangerous?
Kai-grr...Hillary listen my complete words after than said something ...she fight with animals and control it..
TYSON-you are beyblader?
KAIRA-yeah!i'm beyblader....
TYSON-can you fight with me??
KAIRA-Okay.... but later ...i wanna to battle with Kai ...
She turn her face to kai and said-if you are fear with me than...
KAI-agh....I don't want to battle with.. you...i don't want to waste our time.
KAIRA-huh?i know when u see me with fighting this animals than i think you fear with me ..?
KAI-Ah...okay so let's start the battle..i'm not fear with you...Kaira..
HILLARY-KAI wait!
Hillary take Dranzor and said-Kai! This is your Dranzor.
Kai shocked and keep our and in his pocket and take our Dranzor.
KAI-This is my Dranzor,and this....
KAIRA-This is mine.
TYSON-what?you both have same,......
KAI look Kaira ...
...........Kai and Kaira have same beyblade.....
One day Kai sleep under the tree?..Suddenly his eyes open due to loud voice,which is coming from the forest.He was angry because loud voice make him incomfortable,he stand,throw one leave from his mouth,and close our eyes because he want to listen someting.When Tyson and Hillary see him.They both come close to Kai and said-
HILLARY-What happen kai,why u stand and close our eyes,tell me kai,there was any problem... kai.
TYSON-Hey Hillary,why u ask so many question in one time.
HILLARY-Ah.. me,Because i care my team so much than you.
TYSON-......Ah..you
They both were fighting eachother.
KAI-stop it,i trying to listen something..
Tyson and Hillary stop fighting and see kai.
Suddenly Kai opened his eyes.He pull the Hillary and Tyson and runaway in Forest.Hillary fall on Tyson's leg.
TYSON-Aaaa Hillary.......
HILLARY-Oops sorry.
She stand and ask to Tyson
HILLARY-Where is Kai go..?
Tyson-I don't know...let's follow the kai
They both were finding kai.
Kai runing fastly..suddenly he stop and see one girl who beat animals with her beyblade.Kai-Grr....hey!girl what are u doing?why u harm this animals?but Girl not answer his question,she beat all animals one by one.
Kai-Grr.....
Kai-hey girl let's fight with me and show our power.
Girl said to kai-hey stop! But kai not stop,he launch is beyblade suddenly 2 small childrens come close to kai and said-no...please.. this girl is like my sis and she always help me.She is so kind girl.
Kai-huh?what?You don't see that she harmed these animals.
Children said-yes i see because these animals are very dangerous. All animals are come in night time from nighbour forest and eat all small animals,and also eat some humans,and destroy our hut.
Kai-huh!
Suddenly girl fall on ground and some animals cover her..kai runing and come close to girl.
But he see that all animals love her.All animals kiss her and eating some food which is given by girl.Girl look all animals very kindly.KAI-Hey!...Girl see kai and stand up.She come close to Kai and said-Hola,i'm Kaira and you .............Kai??
KAI-Yeah!am kai.
KAIRA-Nice to meet you?
KAI-hey! When i come and see you......you fight with this animals but this time..........
Kaira smile and said-i live in forest and i know very well to control animals.HEY!when i'm fighting with animals ..you said......suddenly Tyson and Hillary runing amd come close to Kai..
TYSON-Hey!kai what happen?Who is this girl?
HILLARY-huh!hey Tyson why you ask so many questions.
TYSON-huh?me...you....
KAI-Stop it guys!
KAIRA-oh!this is Tyson and Hillary.I'm Kaira and nice to meet you.
HILLARY-Nice to meet you too?.You are old friend of Kai?
Kaira smile and said-no,i'm not old friend of kai.
TYSON-Anyways..kai,why you runing in this forest.
Kai look animals and said-Ah...when i'm sleep,i suddenly listen human crying voice after than animals voice.which is so loud voice. I want to sleep ,but this voices are so loud.I love animals.I think some one hurt many animals.When i come i see Kaira,,,i thought that she hurt animals,which make me angry.But....she helped humans from this dangerous animals.
HILLARY-what! This animals are dangerous?
Kai-grr...Hillary listen my complete words after than said something ...she fight with animals and control it..
TYSON-you are beyblader?
KAIRA-yeah!i'm beyblader....
TYSON-can you fight with me??
KAIRA-Okay.... but later ...i wanna to battle with Kai ...
She turn her face to kai and said-if you are fear with me than...
KAI-agh....I don't want to battle with.. you...i don't want to waste our time.
KAIRA-huh?i know when u see me with fighting this animals than i think you fear with me ..?
KAI-Ah...okay so let's start the battle..i'm not fear with you...Kaira..
HILLARY-KAI wait!
Hillary take Dranzor and said-Kai! This is your Dranzor.
Kai shocked and keep our and in his pocket and take our Dranzor.
KAI-This is my Dranzor,and this....
KAIRA-This is mine.
TYSON-what?you both have same,......
KAI look Kaira ...
If anyone wants to have a story written out just tell me which of my beyblades you want your beyblade to battle.
Title Defense: Rykos vs Vis
The two bladers walk up to the stadium. Rykos, the champion, and Vis, the runner up. The two get ready to launch and the count starts. Vis does a flat launch and Sonar spins in the center while Dragoon comes darting down and slams into Sonar, bursting it. The announcer says, “Just as we expected from the champ everybody,” the scoreboard says two to zero, “Rykos is one point away from keeping his title.” Vis processes what happened in that battle then grins.
The two get ready to launch. Vis swings his launcher to the right making Sonar quickly circle its speed only bolstered by the rubber ring. The impact bursts Dragoon and leaves Rykos startled. He wonders how Sonar could hit that hard then he remembers seeing a level chip on the layer when dragoon bursted it. He realized that the level chip locked the parry. Vis grabs Sonar and puts it back on the launcher. The announcer yells with amazement, “And just like that the challenger ties up the score, It’s anyone's game at this point."
The two launch again this time both beys bursting, a tie. They launch again with even more power, they tie again. And again, and again. “Round twenty,” Says the announcer, “These two are matching impact to impact, burst to burst. When will one come out on top?” They launch and the impact of the launch snaps the bearing out of its case causing it to fly off leaving only the rubber ring. This makes Sonar dart at unbelievable speeds before bursting on impact with the stadium wall, leaving a large crack in said wall. Vis is shocked and Rykos is just as shocked. The announcer, trying to make heads or tails of the situation, says, “Sonar suddenly went out of control and slammed into the wall. Rykos is victorious, he continues to be the champion!” Vis picks up the parts of Sonar and holds the broken Counter Driver.
Title defense: Rematch
Zac hands Vis a driver. Vis notices the size and weight of the driver. "It has a motor inside," states Zac, "it will activate half way to bursting giving unrivaled stamina." Vis puts the driver on Sonar and tests it against a mugen combo. On the second click the motor activates and sonar spins faster and knocks the bey from the center and out spins it. "True Counter." Said Vis as he holds the driver.
"Alright folks it looks like Rykos is being challenged again." Said the announcer, the lights blaring, "Will Vis take the title this time?" The two Bladers walk up to the stadium and ready their launchers. Vis does a flat launch and Sonar takes the center. Dragoon dives down and attacks Sonar. Sonar gets flung out of the center and gets hit again and again clicking once. Dragoon attacks once more and clicks Sonar again but Sonar changes patterns as the motor starts. Sonar takes the center and spins and insane speeds. Dragoon goes for an attack but gets deflected by Sonar. Dragoon tries to topple Sonar but eventually stops spinning. The referee states the score as one to zero.
The two launch again but Dragoon catches Sonar and hits it with a one hit burst. This shocks Vis for a second then the two go to launch again. This time Vis tilts the launcher and swings right. This makes Sonar roll the the center quickly and dodge the powerful attack from dragoon. Dragoon bounces off the wall and lands on Sonar, knocking it off balance, and makes it click once. Sonar continues to spin at the angle and gets hit again. This causes it to click and the edge of the driver surface makes it rise to the edge of the stadium then dart down to intercept Dragoon. The impact causes both beys to burst but Dragoon bursts first by a fraction of a second. The ref states the score as three to two and states that Vis is the champion. Rykos is amazed by the power Sonar had in that battle and tries to shake hands with Vis. Eventually they end up shaking hands and leave the stadium.
Not my best story but hey.
(May. 27, 2018 3:30 AM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]Title defense: Rematch
Zac hands Vis a driver. Vis notices the size and weight of the driver. "It has a motor inside," states Zac, "it will activate half way to bursting giving unrivaled stamina." Vis puts the driver on Sonar and tests it against a mugen combo. On the second click the motor activates and sonar spins faster and knocks the bey from the center and out spins it. "True Counter." Said Vis as he holds the driver.
"Alright folks it looks like Rykos is being challenged again." Said the announcer, the lights blaring, "Will Vis take the title this time?" The two Bladers walk up to the stadium and ready their launchers. Vis does a flat launch and Sonar takes the center. Dragoon dives down and attacks Sonar. Sonar gets flung out of the center and gets hit again and again clicking once. Dragoon attacks once more and clicks Sonar again but Sonar changes patterns as the motor starts. Sonar takes the center and spins and insane speeds. Dragoon goes for an attack but gets deflected by Sonar. Dragoon tries to topple Sonar but eventually stops spinning. The referee states the score as one to zero.
The two launch again but Dragoon catches Sonar and hits it with a one hit burst. This shocks Vis for a second then the two go to launch again. This time Vis tilts the launcher and swings right. This makes Sonar roll the the center quickly and dodge the powerful attack from dragoon. Dragoon bounces off the wall and lands on Sonar, knocking it off balance, and makes it click once. Sonar continues to spin at the angle and gets hit again. This causes it to click and the edge of the driver surface makes it rise to the edge of the stadium then dart down to intercept Dragoon. The impact causes both beys to burst but Dragoon bursts first by a fraction of a second. The ref states the score as three to two and states that Vis is the champion. Rykos is amazed by the power Sonar had in that battle and tries to shake hands with Vis. Eventually they end up shaking hands and leave the stadium.
Not my best story but hey.
its preety good could you do my character just asking
(Jun. 30, 2018 3:20 AM)beymaster35 Wrote: [ -> ] (May. 27, 2018 3:30 AM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]Title defense: Rematch
Zac hands Vis a driver. Vis notices the size and weight of the driver. "It has a motor inside," states Zac, "it will activate half way to bursting giving unrivaled stamina." Vis puts the driver on Sonar and tests it against a mugen combo. On the second click the motor activates and sonar spins faster and knocks the bey from the center and out spins it. "True Counter." Said Vis as he holds the driver.
"Alright folks it looks like Rykos is being challenged again." Said the announcer, the lights blaring, "Will Vis take the title this time?" The two Bladers walk up to the stadium and ready their launchers. Vis does a flat launch and Sonar takes the center. Dragoon dives down and attacks Sonar. Sonar gets flung out of the center and gets hit again and again clicking once. Dragoon attacks once more and clicks Sonar again but Sonar changes patterns as the motor starts. Sonar takes the center and spins and insane speeds. Dragoon goes for an attack but gets deflected by Sonar. Dragoon tries to topple Sonar but eventually stops spinning. The referee states the score as one to zero.
The two launch again but Dragoon catches Sonar and hits it with a one hit burst. This shocks Vis for a second then the two go to launch again. This time Vis tilts the launcher and swings right. This makes Sonar roll the the center quickly and dodge the powerful attack from dragoon. Dragoon bounces off the wall and lands on Sonar, knocking it off balance, and makes it click once. Sonar continues to spin at the angle and gets hit again. This causes it to click and the edge of the driver surface makes it rise to the edge of the stadium then dart down to intercept Dragoon. The impact causes both beys to burst but Dragoon bursts first by a fraction of a second. The ref states the score as three to two and states that Vis is the champion. Rykos is amazed by the power Sonar had in that battle and tries to shake hands with Vis. Eventually they end up shaking hands and leave the stadium.
Not my best story but hey.
its preety good could you do my character just asking
Give a description of the Blader and bey and this character will battle against Vis.
K.J. akri, nice,calm,traines alot,is veary sieurious in a battle
age 12
bey: solor phonix, the layer has two long wings and two short wings. the driver can switch from defence,attack,and stamina, can spin left and right dose different launches depending on the mode
(Jun. 30, 2018 5:26 AM)beymaster35 Wrote: [ -> ]K.J. akri, nice,calm,traines alot,is veary sieurious in a battle
age 12
bey: solor phonix, the layer has two long wings and two short wings. the driver can switch from defence,attack,and stamina, can spin left and right dose different launches depending on the mode
So sP.?.Zt what is the disk?
Vis vs Jake
Vis and his brother Zac were training at a beypark when a kid walked up and challenges Vis. "The names Jake," says the kid getting his launcher ready , "and I am here to battle!" Vis grins and says, "Why not?" The two beys are launched into the stadium and Sonar takes the center. The noise of the rigid driver points out where Deathstalker is. "Left spin. Bank shoot. Hard launch." Says Vis, "rubber." Continues Vis as Deathstalker attacks Sonar. Sonar clicks once as the rubber of the slower Deathstalker grips Sonar but to no prevail. Sonar out spins Deathstalker. Zac points out that the score is one to zero and the two Bladers get ready for another round.
The two Bladers launch. This time Vis launches slower and with a bit of sideways movement making roll into the center intercepting a stationary Deathstalker. "Strike now Deathstalker!" Said Jake as Deathstalker uses the jaggy edge of its driver to rise up and attack Sonar, clicking it once, and knocks it out of the stadium. Zac says that is is one to one and they get ready for the final round.
Vis holds his launcher in his left hand and launches with full power. The swing of the launch makes Sonar circle quickly hitting Deathstalker. Sonar clicks once and dives to the center. Deathstalker goes for another dive attack but is met with a counter attack that sends Deathstalker to the edge only being savedone by the walls. A hum can be heard as Sonar starts to speed up. Deathstalker attacks again and the spin steal lets it speed up as well. Vis smiles and asks, "Having fun?" Jake nods as the battle continues. Vis hears Deathstalker click three times throughout this stalemate. "Keeping count?" Asks Vis, confusing Jake, "Something's got to give. Sonar, Infinite Spiral." Deathstalker bursts on impact as Sonar continues to spin. Zac states the score is three to one and states that Vis wins. Vis grins as he says, "you have potential. Keep going. You scored a point on the champion. Next time I may have to defend my title from you."
-end of story-
the disk is called im not sure if this is god so 4 wind which gives it more spin time and speed
(Jun. 30, 2018 6:01 AM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 30, 2018 5:26 AM)beymaster35 Wrote: [ -> ]K.J. akri, nice,calm,traines alot,is veary sieurious in a battle
age 12
bey: solor phonix, the layer has two long wings and two short wings. the driver can switch from defence,attack,and stamina, can spin left and right dose different launches depending on the mode
So sP.?.Zt what is the disk?
Vis vs Jake
Vis and his brother Zac were training at a beypark when a kid walked up and challenges Vis. "The names Jake," says the kid getting his launcher ready , "and I am here to battle!" Vis grins and says, "Why not?" The two beys are launched into the stadium and Sonar takes the center. The noise of the rigid driver points out where Deathstalker is. "Left spin. Bank shoot. Hard launch." Says Vis, "rubber." Continues Vis as Deathstalker attacks Sonar. Sonar clicks once as the rubber of the slower Deathstalker grips Sonar but to no prevail. Sonar out spins Deathstalker. Zac points out that the score is one to zero and the two Bladers get ready for another round.
The two Bladers launch. This time Vis launches slower and with a bit of sideways movement making roll into the center intercepting a stationary Deathstalker. "Strike now Deathstalker!" Said Jake as Deathstalker uses the jaggy edge of its driver to rise up and attack Sonar, clicking it once, and knocks it out of the stadium. Zac says that is is one to one and they get ready for the final round.
Vis holds his launcher in his left hand and launches with full power. The swing of the launch makes Sonar circle quickly hitting Deathstalker. Sonar clicks once and dives to the center. Deathstalker goes for another dive attack but is met with a counter attack that sends Deathstalker to the edge only being savedone by the walls. A hum can be heard as Sonar starts to speed up. Deathstalker attacks again and the spin steal lets it speed up as well. Vis smiles and asks, "Having fun?" Jake nods as the battle continues. Vis hears Deathstalker click three times throughout this stalemate. "Keeping count?" Asks Vis, confusing Jake, "Something's got to give. Sonar, Infinite Spiral." Deathstalker bursts on impact as Sonar continues to spin. Zac states the score is three to one and states that Vis wins. Vis grins as he says, "you have potential. Keep going. You scored a point on the champion. Next time I may have to defend my title from you."
-end of story-
Can you do my character?
(Jun. 30, 2018 3:15 PM)BuilderROB Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 30, 2018 6:01 AM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]So sP.?.Zt what is the disk?
Vis vs Jake
Vis and his brother Zac were training at a beypark when a kid walked up and challenges Vis. "The names Jake," says the kid getting his launcher ready , "and I am here to battle!" Vis grins and says, "Why not?" The two beys are launched into the stadium and Sonar takes the center. The noise of the rigid driver points out where Deathstalker is. "Left spin. Bank shoot. Hard launch." Says Vis, "rubber." Continues Vis as Deathstalker attacks Sonar. Sonar clicks once as the rubber of the slower Deathstalker grips Sonar but to no prevail. Sonar out spins Deathstalker. Zac points out that the score is one to zero and the two Bladers get ready for another round.
The two Bladers launch. This time Vis launches slower and with a bit of sideways movement making roll into the center intercepting a stationary Deathstalker. "Strike now Deathstalker!" Said Jake as Deathstalker uses the jaggy edge of its driver to rise up and attack Sonar, clicking it once, and knocks it out of the stadium. Zac says that is is one to one and they get ready for the final round.
Vis holds his launcher in his left hand and launches with full power. The swing of the launch makes Sonar circle quickly hitting Deathstalker. Sonar clicks once and dives to the center. Deathstalker goes for another dive attack but is met with a counter attack that sends Deathstalker to the edge only being savedone by the walls. A hum can be heard as Sonar starts to speed up. Deathstalker attacks again and the spin steal lets it speed up as well. Vis smiles and asks, "Having fun?" Jake nods as the battle continues. Vis hears Deathstalker click three times throughout this stalemate. "Keeping count?" Asks Vis, confusing Jake, "Something's got to give. Sonar, Infinite Spiral." Deathstalker bursts on impact as Sonar continues to spin. Zac states the score is three to one and states that Vis wins. Vis grins as he says, "you have potential. Keep going. You scored a point on the champion. Next time I may have to defend my title from you."
-end of story-
Can you do my character?
Can you give me a bio of the character on the make your own character thread if it isnt there already.
(Jun. 30, 2018 5:41 PM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 30, 2018 3:15 PM)BuilderROB Wrote: [ -> ]Can you do my character?
Can you give me a bio of the character on the make your own character thread if it isnt there already.
(Jun. 30, 2018 5:41 PM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 30, 2018 3:15 PM)BuilderROB Wrote: [ -> ]Can you do my character?
Can you give me a bio of the character on the make your own character thread if it isnt there already.
Let me do that
Character name: Alex
Appearance: He wears a red leather jacket with a black shirt. He wears brown jeans and black shoes. He has green eyes and has light blonde hair.
Personality: Outside of battle, he is very passionate about beyblade and likes to have fun. In battle, he is very serious about battling.
Beyblade: Axcelior: A left spinning attack type
Layer: Axcelior: a left spin attack type with two main contact points that look like spear tips. The other two secondary contact points have A’s that are made out of rubber, allowing it to spin steal against right spin opponents.
Disc: 0
Driver: Smash: a plastic version of xtreme
(Jun. 30, 2018 6:01 AM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 30, 2018 5:26 AM)beymaster35 Wrote: [ -> ]K.J. akri, nice,calm,traines alot,is veary sieurious in a battle
age 12
bey: solor phonix, the layer has two long wings and two short wings. the driver can switch from defence,attack,and stamina, can spin left and right dose different launches depending on the mode
So sP.?.Zt what is the disk?
Vis vs Jake
Vis and his brother Zac were training at a beypark when a kid walked up and challenges Vis. "The names Jake," says the kid getting his launcher ready , "and I am here to battle!" Vis grins and says, "Why not?" The two beys are launched into the stadium and Sonar takes the center. The noise of the rigid driver points out where Deathstalker is. "Left spin. Bank shoot. Hard launch." Says Vis, "rubber." Continues Vis as Deathstalker attacks Sonar. Sonar clicks once as the rubber of the slower Deathstalker grips Sonar but to no prevail. Sonar out spins Deathstalker. Zac points out that the score is one to zero and the two Bladers get ready for another round.
The two Bladers launch. This time Vis launches slower and with a bit of sideways movement making roll into the center intercepting a stationary Deathstalker. "Strike now Deathstalker!" Said Jake as Deathstalker uses the jaggy edge of its driver to rise up and attack Sonar, clicking it once, and knocks it out of the stadium. Zac says that is is one to one and they get ready for the final round.
Vis holds his launcher in his left hand and launches with full power. The swing of the launch makes Sonar circle quickly hitting Deathstalker. Sonar clicks once and dives to the center. Deathstalker goes for another dive attack but is met with a counter attack that sends Deathstalker to the edge only being savedone by the walls. A hum can be heard as Sonar starts to speed up. Deathstalker attacks again and the spin steal lets it speed up as well. Vis smiles and asks, "Having fun?" Jake nods as the battle continues. Vis hears Deathstalker click three times throughout this stalemate. "Keeping count?" Asks Vis, confusing Jake, "Something's got to give. Sonar, Infinite Spiral." Deathstalker bursts on impact as Sonar continues to spin. Zac states the score is three to one and states that Vis wins. Vis grins as he says, "you have potential. Keep going. You scored a point on the champion. Next time I may have to defend my title from you."
-end of story-
This is awesome thank you for making my character a reality I would really appreciate it if you can do another story about Vis vs Jake and it doesn't have to be right now it could be whatever you want but good job
Vis vs Alex
"OK folks," Said the announcer, "this match states the start of the tournament." The two Bladers walk up to the stadium and ready their launchers. They launch and Sonar takes the center. Axcelior dives down to hit Sonar and gets parried when the rubber grips the moving layer. This knocks Axcelior pit of its attack pattern and causes it to circle. When it reaches the center it spin steals off Sonar but Sonar ends up winning due to better LAD. The referee states that Vis has one point.
The two get ready to launch when Vis says, "A bey like that is being launched wrong." The two launch again this time Sonar is launched slowly and wobbles in the center. Alex sees this as an opportunity and says, "Strike him, go Axcelior." "A bey with rubber against an opponent that spins in the opposite spin should be launched slowly," Vis says as Axcelior dives down to attack clicking on impact, "My bey is slower so it sped up in the impact. Yours slowed down and clicked once" Axcelior continues to attack clicking Sonar twice during the barrage while clicking twice itself. Sonar hums as it speeds up. Axcelior continues to spin steal until it is spinning too fast to stay in the center and it hits the wall and bursts. "This is named low velocity burst." Said Vis picking up Sonar, "You should know that." The announcer says, "And as to expected Vis wins and starts off the tournament with one win and no losses."