World Beyblade Organization

(Oct. 28, 2018  6:14 AM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]Team battle training: Matt and Fin vs Mysuku and Tsuku

"Ok," says Vis, as the four bladers get ready to launch, "This is to show your progess and to test your teamwork. You will be up against Mysuku and Tsuku."

The four bladers launch and both Jinnus and Kulkulkan take the center. Minoboros and dragoon dive down. Minoboros clashes with Kulkulkan, knocking it out of the center as Dragoon fights for the center with Jinnus. The shield on Jinnus raises and then slams down, trapping dragoon as it gets swung around.  "Mysuku,"  Yells Tsuku, "Now!" Kulkulkan clashes with Minoboros as Dragoon gets flung at it. The bey hits and Mysuku says, "Trigger Impact!" Kulkulkan clicks and the two contact points extend to hit both beys again, bursting dragoon and sending Minoboros into defense mode. The timer driver switches to defence mode and Minoboros dives down at Kulkulkan. "Diving guard!" Yells Matt as Minoboros bursts Jinnus. Both Minoboros and Kulkulkan burst on impact.

Vis claps his hands together and says, "Wonderful! Minoboros is quite powerful but your teamwork is Lacking. Shall we try again?"

Tsuku flips the frame and nods to his sister, who nods in return. Matt notices their auras mixing and looks over to Fin, her aura shaking as she switches to left spin. The four get ready to launch, Matt tilts his launcher and they launch. Minoboros clashes with Jinnus, sending it up the stadium. Kulkulkan clashes with Dragoon as Jinnus dives down. "Gale impact." Yells Tsuku as Kulkulkan hits dragoon into the path of Jinnus. The collision causes Dragoon to burst. "Jinnus guard." Says Tsuku as strong down force is created locking the two shields together. Kulkulkan attacks Jinnus and clicks, activating trigger attack and sending Jinnus up the stadium. As Jinnus dives down both siblings yell, "Twin apex!" And Jinnus slams into Kulkulkan the moment Kulkulkan hits Minoboros. The attack bursts Minoboros and sends the parts flying.

"Good job everyone," Says Vis as Fin and Matt pick up their beys, "Fin, a word please."

Vis walks up to Fin and tells her, "I can't help but notice you were a little off your game," Vis smiles and continues, "no need to worry, cheer up!"

"I lost," Fin tells Vis, her misty eyes starting to tear up, "I failed and left Matt to take both of them on at once. How can I get better if I can't even help in a team battle?"

Vis' smile fades as he tells her, "This was not a test but a lesson," Vis smiles and says, "Mysuku and Tsuku are two of my protégé students, even I would have problems in a one v two situation against them." Vis and Fin both laugh and Vis says, "When you fall you pick your self back up. Keep trying I see great potential for you."

Fin smiles and says thanks as she walks over to Matt to train. Vis smiles as he sees the two battling.


-end of part 3-

Fin and Matt belong to @[Jman jman]
Vis, Mysuku, and Tsuku belong to me.

Note: Vis runs a bey dojo where he teaches bladers to become better. Both Fin and Matt are part of it.

Also I apologize if Fin was a bit out of character.

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Cheaters lesson

Vis watches as two Bladers battle. Fin launches but the other Blader waits and then aims for Dragoon, bursting it. "Ha!" Laughs the blader, "No one can beat me!" Vis shakes his head and walks away.

When the Blader walks to his dorm room there is a note on the door. It reads, "You have been chosen to battle me. See you at sunrise." The blader reads that it is signed by Vis. As other bladers walk by they see the note and word spreads.

The next day as the sky still glows orange the Blader stands at the other end of the stadium as Vis readys his launcher. He launches and the Blader pulls his normal trick and aims for Sonar. Sonar takes the attack then circles and hits the bey with an all out attack, bursting it and sending the parts flying. The frame shatters as the disk embeds itself into the stadium wall, creating a Web of cracks. "This is a reminder that cheating will not be tolerated. All of you are dismissed to train." Vis turns to the Blader trying to pull the disk out of the stadium, " As for you, you will help fix the stadium. Only then will you be free to battle. Zac will make you a new frame once you prove that you will battle fairly." Vis pulls the disk out of the stadium and picks up the rest of the beyblade and walks away, "I hope you learned your lesson."

-end of story-
Fin belongs to @[Jman jman]

Note: this is a little side story that fits in to the mentor arc story.
Vis will not tolerate cheating in any form.
The combo was wV.10B.X'

Good story I like how you showed how much power Vis has.

(Oct. 28, 2018  2:30 PM)Jman jman Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 28, 2018  6:14 AM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]Team battle training: Matt and Fin vs Mysuku and Tsuku

"Ok," says Vis, as the four bladers get ready to launch, "This is to show your progess and to test your teamwork. You will be up against Mysuku and Tsuku."

The four bladers launch and both Jinnus and Kulkulkan take the center. Minoboros and dragoon dive down. Minoboros clashes with Kulkulkan, knocking it out of the center as Dragoon fights for the center with Jinnus. The shield on Jinnus raises and then slams down, trapping dragoon as it gets swung around.  "Mysuku,"  Yells Tsuku, "Now!" Kulkulkan clashes with Minoboros as Dragoon gets flung at it. The bey hits and Mysuku says, "Trigger Impact!" Kulkulkan clicks and the two contact points extend to hit both beys again, bursting dragoon and sending Minoboros into defense mode. The timer driver switches to defence mode and Minoboros dives down at Kulkulkan. "Diving guard!" Yells Matt as Minoboros bursts Jinnus. Both Minoboros and Kulkulkan burst on impact.

Vis claps his hands together and says, "Wonderful! Minoboros is quite powerful but your teamwork is Lacking. Shall we try again?"

Tsuku flips the frame and nods to his sister, who nods in return. Matt notices their auras mixing and looks over to Fin, her aura shaking as she switches to left spin. The four get ready to launch, Matt tilts his launcher and they launch. Minoboros clashes with Jinnus, sending it up the stadium. Kulkulkan clashes with Dragoon as Jinnus dives down. "Gale impact." Yells Tsuku as Kulkulkan hits dragoon into the path of Jinnus. The collision causes Dragoon to burst. "Jinnus guard." Says Tsuku as strong down force is created locking the two shields together. Kulkulkan attacks Jinnus and clicks, activating trigger attack and sending Jinnus up the stadium. As Jinnus dives down both siblings yell, "Twin apex!" And Jinnus slams into Kulkulkan the moment Kulkulkan hits Minoboros. The attack bursts Minoboros and sends the parts flying.

"Good job everyone," Says Vis as Fin and Matt pick up their beys, "Fin, a word please."

Vis walks up to Fin and tells her, "I can't help but notice you were a little off your game," Vis smiles and continues, "no need to worry, cheer up!"

"I lost," Fin tells Vis, her misty eyes starting to tear up, "I failed and left Matt to take both of them on at once. How can I get better if I can't even help in a team battle?"

Vis' smile fades as he tells her, "This was not a test but a lesson," Vis smiles and says, "Mysuku and Tsuku are two of my protégé students, even I would have problems in a one v two situation against them." Vis and Fin both laugh and Vis says, "When you fall you pick your self back up. Keep trying I see great potential for you."

Fin smiles and says thanks as she walks over to Matt to train. Vis smiles as he sees the two battling.


-end of part 3-

Fin and Matt belong to @[Jman jman]
Vis, Mysuku, and Tsuku belong to me.

Note: Vis runs a bey dojo where he teaches bladers to become better. Both Fin and Matt are part of it.

Also I apologize if Fin was a bit out of character.

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Cheaters lesson

Vis watches as two Bladers battle. Fin launches but the other Blader waits and then aims for Dragoon, bursting it. "Ha!" Laughs the blader, "No one can beat me!" Vis shakes his head and walks away.

When the Blader walks to his dorm room there is a note on the door. It reads, "You have been chosen to battle me. See you at sunrise." The blader reads that it is signed by Vis. As other bladers walk by they see the note and word spreads.

The next day as the sky still glows orange the Blader stands at the other end of the stadium as Vis readys his launcher. He launches and the Blader pulls his normal trick and aims for Sonar. Sonar takes the attack then circles and hits the bey with an all out attack, bursting it and sending the parts flying. The frame shatters as the disk embeds itself into the stadium wall, creating a Web of cracks. "This is a reminder that cheating will not be tolerated. All of you are dismissed to train." Vis turns to the Blader trying to pull the disk out of the stadium, " As for you, you will help fix the stadium. Only then will you be free to battle. Zac will make you a new frame once you prove that you will battle fairly." Vis pulls the disk out of the stadium and picks up the rest of the beyblade and walks away, "I hope you learned your lesson."

-end of story-
Fin belongs to @[Jman jman]

Note: this is a little side story that fits in to the mentor arc story.
Vis will not tolerate cheating in any form.
The combo was wV.10B.X'

Good story I like how you showed how much power Vis has.

Thanks, Lucid Sonar is made to hit hard when it needs to. It has to when opponents are beys like sovereign Dragoon. But it does have a weakness, its burst resistance. If an attacker can withstand attack mode for long enoough Sonar will end up bursting due to recoil. Sonar does not have a prime driver.

(Oct. 28, 2018  3:15 PM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 28, 2018  2:30 PM)Jman jman Wrote: [ -> ]Good story I like how you showed how much power Vis has.

Thanks, Lucid Sonar is made to hit hard when it needs to. It has to when opponents are beys like sovereign Dragoon. But it does have a weakness, its burst resistance. If an attacker can withstand attack mode for long enoough Sonar will end up bursting due to recoil. Sonar does not have a prime driver.

Later today I plan on making part 2 of the storyline umm what is Zach beyblade?

(Oct. 28, 2018  3:23 PM)Jman jman Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 28, 2018  3:15 PM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]Thanks, Lucid Sonar is made to hit hard when it needs to. It has to when opponents are beys like sovereign Dragoon. But it does have a weakness, its burst resistance. If an attacker can withstand attack mode for long enoough Sonar will end up bursting due to recoil. Sonar does not have a prime driver.

Later today I plan on making part 2 of the storyline umm what is Zach beyblade?

Echo Aeros. It is on page 25 of the character thread. And story wise this would be after the team battle. Zac helps run the dojo.

Matt vs Fin : Vis vs Zac

"Go shoot!" Yells both bladers as Dragoon takes the center. Minoboros dives down and clashes. Dragoon gets knocked back and bounces up. "Dragoon!" Yells fin as Dragoon hits Minoboros from above. Minoboros hits the wall and switches to defense mode. The timer driver switched to the ball and Minoboros dives down. The collision causes both beys to burst. Both bladers laugh as Fin switches to left spin.

They launch and Dragoon Takes the center. Minoboros dives down to attack but gets knocked away, again and again. The battle draws out to stamina but before a winner is shown Misuku runs up to them and says, "Vis and Zac are testing out new parts. We get to see them battle."

Zac and Vis walk up to the stadium and get ready to launch. They launch and They clash in the center.  Aeros gets knocked back and starts to circle. It dives down and clashes with Sonar which gets sent into attack mode and dives back down into the center, bursting Aeros. Students cheer for both brothers as they get ready for next round.

Vis switches his driver to attack mode and Zac switches to attack mode as well, flipping the frame to create down force. They launch and both beys rocket around the stadium, each clash echos throughout the dojo. Sonar hits the wall and switches to attack mode, the impact causes Sonar to rocket directly at Aeros. The two beys clash and burst.

-end of part 4-
Fin and Matt belong to @[Jman jman]
Vis, Zac, and Misuku belong to me

note: Misuku is not Mysuku. Misuku is the blader that owns Sacred Drake. One of the older bladers at the dojo.

Egor vs Truth
It was a crisp November in the city. In all the bustle of the city, nobody noticed a lone man sitting on a bench, the wind threatening to blow away his backpack. He checked his watch. Rush hour was ending, the bustle would be gone soon. And then, his opponent would come. He waited the hour, observing the people passing. The crowds began to die down, opening up a large path to the park. He watched as leaves fluttered in front of him.

Suddenly, someone stepped from behind a leaf that had obscured his view. The man grinned. This was who he wanted to battle. He walked up to the center of the park and set out his Beystadium. Egor’s eyes sparkled. “Three! Two! One! Let it...

Rip!” Valkyrie quickly blasted around the stadium ridge. Meanwhile, Dimension took the center. It glowed black as the Nothing driver sprung down. “Hypersonic Warp!" Dimension hit the stadium ridge and blasted out a wave of black energy. A wave of nausea hit Egor, but when he returned stable he was in a barren black desert with only a stadium and Truth. His eyes glowed as he transformed. Long jagged black wings extended outward from its back. His skin became black and covered in star patterns and galaxies. He roared. “We control this world!” Egor realized what was off about this world; it was colorless. He looked at his normally purple shoes which were now grey. “Are you c-“

“It doesn’t matter!” He roared, his Beyblade slashing down onto Valkyrie, which shattered.

In a blast of black energy, the world returned. Truth was gone. Egor grinned as he pulled out a notebook and pencil. He began to write. Little did he know, Truth was still watching, slightly smiling.

(Oct. 31, 2018  3:06 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: [ -> ]Egor vs Truth
It was a crisp November in the city. In all the bustle of the city, nobody noticed a lone man sitting on a bench, the wind threatening to blow away his backpack. He checked his watch. Rush hour was ending, the bustle would be gone soon. And then, his opponent would come. He waited the hour, observing the people passing. The crowds began to die down, opening up a large path to the park. He watched as leaves fluttered in front of him.

Suddenly, someone stepped from behind a leaf that had obscured his view. The man grinned. This was who he wanted to battle. He walked up to the center of the park and set out his Beystadium. Egor’s eyes sparkled. “Three! Two! One! Let it...

Rip!” Valkyrie quickly blasted around the stadium ridge. Meanwhile, Dimension took the center. It glowed black as the Nothing driver sprung down. “Hypersonic Warp!" Dimension hit the stadium ridge and blasted out a wave of black energy. A wave of nausea hit Egor, but when he returned stable he was in a barren black desert with only a stadium and Truth. His eyes glowed as he transformed. Long jagged black wings extended outward from its back. His skin became black and covered in star patterns and galaxies. He roared. “We control this world!” Egor realized what was off about this world; it was colorless. He looked at his normally purple shoes which were now grey. “Are you c-“

“It doesn’t matter!” He roared, his Beyblade slashing down onto Valkyrie, which shattered.

In a blast of black energy, the world returned. Truth was gone. Egor grinned as  he pulled out a notebook and pencil. He began to write. Little did he know, Truth was still watching, slightly smiling.

This is entertainment...

(Oct. 31, 2018  3:36 AM)Infinite.Zero Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 31, 2018  3:06 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: [ -> ]Egor vs Truth
It was a crisp November in the city. In all the bustle of the city, nobody noticed a lone man sitting on a bench, the wind threatening to blow away his backpack. He checked his watch. Rush hour was ending, the bustle would be gone soon. And then, his opponent would come. He waited the hour, observing the people passing. The crowds began to die down, opening up a large path to the park. He watched as leaves fluttered in front of him.

Suddenly, someone stepped from behind a leaf that had obscured his view. The man grinned. This was who he wanted to battle. He walked up to the center of the park and set out his Beystadium. Egor’s eyes sparkled. “Three! Two! One! Let it...

Rip!” Valkyrie quickly blasted around the stadium ridge. Meanwhile, Dimension took the center. It glowed black as the Nothing driver sprung down. “Hypersonic Warp!" Dimension hit the stadium ridge and blasted out a wave of black energy. A wave of nausea hit Egor, but when he returned stable he was in a barren black desert with only a stadium and Truth. His eyes glowed as he transformed. Long jagged black wings extended outward from its back. His skin became black and covered in star patterns and galaxies. He roared. “We control this world!” Egor realized what was off about this world; it was colorless. He looked at his normally purple shoes which were now grey. “Are you c-“

“It doesn’t matter!” He roared, his Beyblade slashing down onto Valkyrie, which shattered.

In a blast of black energy, the world returned. Truth was gone. Egor grinned as  he pulled out a notebook and pencil. He began to write. Little did he know, Truth was still watching, slightly smiling.

This is entertainment...

You like the story?

I lost an entire story with one click of a button.

(Oct. 31, 2018  10:58 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: [ -> ]I lost an entire story with one click of a button.

Nani...I feel your pain

(Oct. 31, 2018  11:04 PM)Infinite.Zero Wrote: [ -> ]

(Oct. 31, 2018  10:58 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: [ -> ]I lost an entire story with one click of a button.

Nani...I feel your pain

I managed to recover it!

Part 2 of Egor vs Truth
Egor sat on a bench, wind curling around him like an intricate ribbon. He was nearly asleep, the sound of the wind like a lullaby to him. He struggled to remain awake and keep writing in his notebook.

He had recently battled a mysterious blader who went by Truth. The battle had been rather quick, and yet he felt has if it hadn’t ended. But he knew to continue the battle he would need to fix Valkyrie.

He found himself back in Truth’s dimension. “Ugh, why?” He thought out loud. He could feel Truth’s presence. “I know you’re in my dream, Truth. Come out.”

He saw a movement out of the corner of his eye and glanced over to see Valkyrie’s beast form. It wore golden armor and rode an armored horse. In its hand was a Beyblade. He looked closer. Snap. It was locked in his memory.

He woke up and began doodling down the new Beyblade: Totem Valkyrie. He took it to Taiga Akabane’s new shop; Beyblade Burst Totems. “Welcome to Beyblade Burst Totems, the Beyblade shop that has everything you need!” Taiga called from the counter.

Egor smiled. “Do you think you could make this?” He held up his notebook. Taiga’s eyes seemed to scan it as he picked out each detail. He held out a Valkyrie layer. “Like this?”

Egor glanced at it. “Yes, but with this.” He held out the parts. Valkyrie was in small pieces that had lost their color and turned clear, Wing was fully intact, and Accel had lost the bottom part and the spring.

Taiga took the parts and looked at them. “That’ll be 23 dollars.”

Egor’s eyes widened but he realized he could afford that. He handed over the money.

“I’ll see what I can do.”

Egor saw something out the corner of his eye. He glanced sideways and for a brief second saw Truth smiling kindly towards him. He blinked and Truth was gone. Egor dismisses it. “Follow me.” Taiga said and walked behind the counter into a room.

“Welcome to the BeyBuilding Room!” Along the walls were large tanks of plastic, metal, a light pink material, and rubber. At the back of the room was a desk with a thick silver machine over it. The machine also had a glowing blue screen.

Taiga walked up to it and quickly, using a stylus held next to it, began to sketch the Beyblade. Egor watched as he finished. Suddenly, the screen transformed it into a 3D model. “Is this what you wanted?”

Egor studied it. “Perfect!”

Taiga hit a button. “Watch this.” Egor eagerly watched as lasers beamed out and overlapped, eventually forming a hologram of his Beyblade. Taiga hit another button and tubes extended from each of the tanks except the rubber one. Taiga set the pieces of the Beyblade on the hologram, and they took their places and floated in the hologram.

Then Taiga stepped back and the tubes sprang to life. The tubes looped around and eventually linked up around the hologram. Each tube lit up and Taiga grinned.

“This is the new BeyBuilder 23.”

“May I have your number so I can tell you when it’s ready?”

Egor handed over his number and left happily. The next day he returned, having been alerted by Taiga. Taiga handed him his Beyblade. “Meet Totem Valkyrie! As part of the Totem series, it features a super lightweight disc, a heavyweight layer, and a specialized driver.”

Egor gasped when he saw it. “Thank you Mr. Akabane!” He took the Beyblade and grinned.

His eyes glowed bright for a second and he vanished. Taiga was confused, but he returned to the counter.

Egor found himself in Truth’s dimension again. “Truth! Come out!” In a flash of light, Truth appeared. He floated down from above. “Hello, Egor.”

Spectrum vs BC Sol

The crowd roared as the announcer announced the teams. Matt gets sent out for the first match and goes up against Cuza. They launch and Cronos stays in the center as Minoboros dives down. The impact causes both beys to click, Minoboros attacks again and goes into defense mode. Minoboros speeds up and then as it is diving the timer drive switches and both beys burst.

"Sorry." Says Matt. Vis responds by saying, "Don't worry, It is first to three." He turns to Misuku and says, "You're up."
"On it." Says Misuku as he walks up to the stadium. He is greeted by Sisco, holding his launcher in his left, ready to battle. They launch and Drake dives down to attack Satan. Satan blocks the attack and Drake dives again. The attack sends Satan away and Drake circles to catch it. "Roller drift." Yells Sisco as Satan changes direction to attack Drake. Drakes driver reaches it's lowest point and Misuku says, "glacial crush!" As Drake hits Satan up then hits it with a strong attack as it lands, bursting it. "And Spectrum leads with two points thanks to that burst finish!"

"Bring it home Tsuku." Says Vis. Tsuku walks up to the stadium and sees he is up against Free. He flips the frame to the up position and gets ready. The bladers launch and they clash in the center. After a long and powerful clash Fafnir bounces away and the rubber wings extend out. "Cyclone guard!" Yells Tsuku as Fafnir dives down and in one powerful attack, bursts Jinnus. "And BC Sol returns the favor." Yells the announcer.

"I'll go up." Says Vis as he walks up to the stadium. He puts his driver in attack mode and crouches. He launches and Sonar rockets at Fafnir and both beys get sent flying. Sonar hits the wall and switches to attack mode. The recoil sends Sonar off the wall and right into Fafnir. Both beys go flying again and go in for a final attack. Sonar goes for silent retribution as Fafnir does absorb breaker to counter. The two beys clash until both beys burst, Sonar only slightly later than Fafnir. "And with that photo finish Spectrum is ready to go to the finals."

-end of part 5-
Matt belongs to @[Jman jman]

Note: Cuza and Sisco have unnamed, upgraded versions of their beys. Same gimmicks just with metal.

Bey warriors vs Raging bulls 

"Welcome to todays team battle where shu and the raging bulls vs Louise and the bey warriors will be battling it out" the announcer said. "Danny your up".Louise said.

Danny walks to the stadium he meets Joshua Burns. Danny says "what up ready to get beat". "Beat ha I am the star here. the only one that is going to get beat is you". Joshua says. They get ready and says 3 2 1 LET IT RIP!
Both beyblades clash in the middle then Doomscizor gose to the outside jinnius keep spining in the middle.
Danny yells fear ripper Doomscizor spins super fast around the stadium and then shoots right in to jinnius bursting it. Winner by burst score is now 1-0. 

"Great job Danny Jason your up". Said Louise. Shu was there waiting at the stadium they got ready and said 3 2 1 LET IT RIP!  Spryzen spining in right spin attack mode.
Spryzen knocks Odin around the stadium like odin is a piece of trash and then Odin burst. Winner by burst score is 1-1" you did your best but next time do better". Louise said.

"Sunshine your turn" said Louise. When she got to the stadium she easily beats Dylan Summers. "Great job sunshine now it is my turn". Said Louise. He got to the stadium and meets shu and says"Hey red eye". Shu says "don't call me that"." If I don't what are you going to due break my beyblade". I said DON'T CALL ME THAT! Shu said. "Okay okay I will stop. red eye". They get ready and yell 3 2 1 LET IT RIP! 
Both beyblades clash in the middle spryzen is in attack mode in right spin. Both beyblades goes to the outside tiger starts to slow down spryzen is about to hit it and then Louise yells "inferno claw" the claws get super hot spryzen hits the claws and burst. Winner by burst score is now 3-1 Bey warriors win.

Side notes; the only way shu lost is because he was mad if he was not he would have put spryzen in left spin defense mode and won. 

(Nov. 01, 2018  5:42 AM)Jman jman Wrote: [ -> ]Bey warriors vs Raging bulls 

"Welcome to todays team battle where shu and the raging bulls vs Louise and the bey warriors will be battling it out" the announcer said. "Danny your up".Louise said.

Danny walks to the stadium he meets Joshua Burns. Danny says "what up ready to get beat". "Beat ha I am the star here. the only one that is going to get beat is you". Joshua says. They get ready and says 3 2 1 LET IT RIP!
Both beyblades clash in the middle then Doomscizor gose to the outside jinnius keep spining in the middle.
Danny yells fear ripper Doomscizor spins super fast around the stadium and then shoots right in to jinnius bursting it. Winner by burst score is now 1-0. 

"Great job Danny Jason your up". Said Louise. Shu was there waiting at the stadium they got ready and said 3 2 1 LET IT RIP!  Spryzen spining in right spin attack mode.
Spryzen knocks Odin around the stadium like odin is a piece of trash and then Odin burst. Winner by burst score is 1-1" you did your best but next time do better". Louise said.

"Sunshine your turn" said Louise. When she got to the stadium she easily beats Dylan Summers. "Great job sunshine now it is my turn". Said Louise. He got to the stadium and meets shu and says"Hey red eye". Shu says "don't call me that"." If I don't what are you going to due break my beyblade". I said DON'T CALL ME THAT! Shu said. "Okay okay I will stop. red eye". They get ready and yell 3 2 1 LET IT RIP! 
Both beyblades clash in the middle spryzen is in attack mode in right spin. Both beyblades goes to the outside tiger starts to slow down spryzen is about to hit it and then Louise yells "inferno claw" the claws get super hot spryzen hits the claws and burst. Winner by burst score is now 3-1 Bey warriors win.

Side notes; the only way shu lost is because he was mad if he was not he would have put spryzen in left spin defense mode and won. 

Wasn’t shu okay with being called red eye? Even after his mask broke, he only became shu after valt beat him and he stopped using Spriggan Requiem

(Nov. 01, 2018  1:10 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: [ -> ]

(Nov. 01, 2018  5:42 AM)Jman jman Wrote: [ -> ]Bey warriors vs Raging bulls 

"Welcome to todays team battle where shu and the raging bulls vs Louise and the bey warriors will be battling it out" the announcer said. "Danny your up".Louise said.

Danny walks to the stadium he meets Joshua Burns. Danny says "what up ready to get beat". "Beat ha I am the star here. the only one that is going to get beat is you". Joshua says. They get ready and says 3 2 1 LET IT RIP!
Both beyblades clash in the middle then Doomscizor gose to the outside jinnius keep spining in the middle.
Danny yells fear ripper Doomscizor spins super fast around the stadium and then shoots right in to jinnius bursting it. Winner by burst score is now 1-0. 

"Great job Danny Jason your up". Said Louise. Shu was there waiting at the stadium they got ready and said 3 2 1 LET IT RIP!  Spryzen spining in right spin attack mode.
Spryzen knocks Odin around the stadium like odin is a piece of trash and then Odin burst. Winner by burst score is 1-1" you did your best but next time do better". Louise said.

"Sunshine your turn" said Louise. When she got to the stadium she easily beats Dylan Summers. "Great job sunshine now it is my turn". Said Louise. He got to the stadium and meets shu and says"Hey red eye". Shu says "don't call me that"." If I don't what are you going to due break my beyblade". I said DON'T CALL ME THAT! Shu said. "Okay okay I will stop. red eye". They get ready and yell 3 2 1 LET IT RIP! 
Both beyblades clash in the middle spryzen is in attack mode in right spin. Both beyblades goes to the outside tiger starts to slow down spryzen is about to hit it and then Louise yells "inferno claw" the claws get super hot spryzen hits the claws and burst. Winner by burst score is now 3-1 Bey warriors win.

Side notes; the only way shu lost is because he was mad if he was not he would have put spryzen in left spin defense mode and won. 

Wasn’t shu okay with being called red eye? Even after his mask broke, he only became shu after valt beat him and he stopped using Spriggan Requiem

Yes but this is in super z. And what else he going to battle with.

(Nov. 01, 2018  3:38 PM)Jman jman Wrote: [ -> ]

(Nov. 01, 2018  1:10 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: [ -> ]Wasn’t shu okay with being called red eye? Even after his mask broke, he only became shu after valt beat him and he stopped using Spriggan Requiem

Yes but this is in super z. And what else he going to battle with.

Cho-Z Spriggan, and I’ve never seen Shu mad

(Nov. 01, 2018  7:27 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: [ -> ]

(Nov. 01, 2018  3:38 PM)Jman jman Wrote: [ -> ]Yes but this is in super z. And what else he going to battle with.

Cho-Z Spriggan, and I’ve never seen Shu mad
Your right.?

Your right?

(Nov. 01, 2018  7:41 PM)Jman jman Wrote: [ -> ]

(Nov. 01, 2018  7:27 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: [ -> ]Cho-Z Spriggan, and I’ve never seen Shu mad
Your right.?

Your right?

Shu probably would’ve won if he was mad either way too, he would just use left attack mode and Requiem Whip/Requiem Slash.

(Nov. 01, 2018  9:19 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: [ -> ]

(Nov. 01, 2018  7:41 PM)Jman jman Wrote: [ -> ]Your right?

Shu probably would’ve won if he was mad either way too, he would just use left attack mode and Requiem Whip/Requiem Slash.

Yep yep. I didn't think about it.

(Nov. 01, 2018  9:36 PM)Jman jman Wrote: [ -> ]

(Nov. 01, 2018  9:19 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: [ -> ]Shu probably would’ve won if he was mad either way too, he would just use left attack mode and Requiem Whip/Requiem Slash.

Yep yep. I didn't think about it.

It’s fine, we all make mistakes.

um... i made this with friend, durring school, this is my first time

Epsiode 1
Crash And Burn!
Our first battle!

K.J was walking to the bey designer that made valt’s bey. “This is the place?” he asked himself. A few hours later after talking and molding his bey, he had finally done it. armored phoenix shined in the light the sun gave off. K.J herd someone launching their bey and ran in that direction. He found a girl practicing her launch.”hi!” K.J said he had his hands in his sweater pocket as he walks towards her with a kind smile. “Sup friend,” said the girl “ my name is Brax Niome, what's yours?” she said with her purple launcher in her right hand and her bey in the other. “I'm K.J Akri, by any chance, did my cousins come here before me? They said that they got here before so did they battle you?” he asked Brax. “Umm, I think so was one of them wearing a green jacket?” she said, “yes, did you beat all three of them?” K.J asked her. “Yeah, they need to be a little better if they want to beat me.” she gloated. “ well then, let’s see if you can beat me and Phoenix, ” he said calmly. “Well I and thrasher can take down anyone,” she said confidently. K.J went to the other side of the stadium and Brax stayed on the side she was on. As they got ready, K.J only had the side where his red hair was as he had his hand on the launcher. He wanted to test Brax so he put Phoenix in defense mode on both the driver and layer. Brax got into her zone and was ready to rip. “3...2...1...GO SHOOT!” the two said as they launched their beys in the stadium. Phoenix quickly took the center as thrasher went for its first hit. Thrasher started of trying to trick him and it sorta worked. Was a little easy to trick but then thrasher did crash and hit Phoenix got back fast enough to get out of the way but got a little scratched. “ go phoenix, outlast them!” phoenix clashed with thrasher and made itself stamina And thrasher used crash again and knocked Pheonix out of the ring. “Ok, the score is 1-0, time for my , ” K.J said as he put Phoenix in attack mode, only one talon protruded as the driver was set to attack, it was a rubber tip with a spring-like mechanism if launched high enough. “3...2...1...GOOO SHOOT!!” Phoenix went into a cross pattern as thrasher did the same. of the rubber, Phoenix was able to dodge most of the attacks and deliver some of his own. Thrashe knocked phoenix in to the wall, making him clike once, then it hit him again makeing burn line up with the talon. “Let’s go phoenix, burning talon” K.J yelled as phoenix’s avatar appered. A golden bird with its wings on fire. With one hit, thrasher flew into the air and bursted. “Yes!” K.J said as he walked up to pick up his bey and give Brax her’s. “You’re pretty strong, want to join our team?” he asked. “ Ummm sure I guess I will,” she said. “Ok then come on!...” K.J said as he leads her to where the others are…

To be contuinued……

Spectrum vs Warriors

The announcer introduces the teams and the first bladers get ready. Matt looks and sees that it is Danny. He gets angry remembering reverse Minoboros and leans down for a more aggressive launch. They launch and both beys clash. "Minoboros!" Yells Matt as his bey slams into Deathscyther. The impact causes Deathscyther to hit the wall. "Fear ripper." Says Danny with a smug grin as Deathscyther bounces of the wall and bursts Minoboros.

"Misuku," Says Vis," ready." Misuku nods and gets ready. Sunshine greats him at the stadium and they launch. Drake dashes at kunoichi but gets knocked back. Drake attacks again and again. "You will never get past my defenses." Laughs Sunshine as Drake continues to attack. Drake's driver reaches it's lowest point and Drake dives down for a powerful attack. "Drake!" Yells Misuku as Drake collides with Kunoichi, sending both beys out of the stadium.

"We are a point away from winning," says Louise, his annoyance starting to show, "Why didn't you get the point? Jason get out there." Jason scrambles to the stadium as Misuku waits. They get ready and launch. Both beys clash and Odin bursts when it gets sent flying into the wall."

"Good job," Said Vis, "I will take care of this." Vis walks up to the stadium.
Meanwhile Louise yells at Jason, "What was that? All you needed to do is out spin." He gets up and grabs his launcher, "Looks like I will have to do it myself."

The two Bladers get ready to launch. Vis puts his driver into attack mode and crouches. They launch and Sonar rockets around and hits tiger from behind sending it into the wall. "Little slow out of the gate are we?" Asks Vis as Sonar hits Tiger again. Louise gets angry and yells, "End It! Inferno Claw!" The claws on tiger start to glow. Vis just says, "negation counter." And Sonar takes the attack, switching to attack mode and then speeds up. "Silent Retribution." Says Vis as Sonar slams into tiger, bursting it.

-End of part 6-
Matt and team warriors belongs to @[Jman jman]

Any feedback.

(Nov. 02, 2018  3:15 AM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]Spectrum vs Warriors

The announcer introduces the teams and the first bladers get ready. Matt looks and sees that it is Danny. He gets angry remembering reverse Minoboros and leans down for a more aggressive launch. They launch and both beys clash. "Minoboros!" Yells Matt as his bey slams into Deathscyther. The impact causes Deathscyther to hit the wall. "Fear ripper." Says Danny with a smug grin as Deathscyther bounces of the wall and bursts Minoboros.

"Misuku," Says Vis," ready." Misuku nods and gets ready. Sunshine greats him at the stadium and they launch. Drake dashes at kunoichi but gets knocked back. Drake attacks again and again. "You will never get past my defenses." Laughs Sunshine as Drake continues to attack. Drake's driver reaches it's lowest point and Drake dives down for a powerful attack. "Drake!" Yells Misuku as Drake collides with Kunoichi, sending both beys out of the stadium.

"We are a point away from winning," says Louise, his annoyance starting to show, "Why didn't you get the point? Jason get out there." Jason scrambles to the stadium as Misuku waits. They get ready and launch. Both beys clash and Odin bursts when it gets sent flying into the wall."

"Good job," Said Vis, "I will take care of this." Vis walks up to the stadium.
Meanwhile Louise yells at Jason, "What was that? All you needed to do is out spin." He gets up and grabs his launcher, "Looks like I will have to do it myself."

The two Bladers get ready to launch. Vis puts his driver into attack mode and crouches. They launch and Sonar rockets around and hits tiger from behind sending it into the wall. "Little slow out of the gate are we?" Asks Vis as Sonar hits Tiger again. Louise gets angry and yells, "End It! Inferno Claw!" The claws on tiger start to glow. Vis just says, "negation counter." And Sonar takes the attack, switching to attack mode and then speeds up. "Silent Retribution." Says Vis as Sonar slams into tiger, bursting it.

-End of part 6-
Matt and team warriors belongs to @[Jman jman]

Any feedback.

Epic story it was better then mine you did perfect with Louise. I have a thought for part 7 I will send you a pm  about the idea.

Anger management

"Vis," Says Matt says, "Could yoy help me with something."
"Sure," Responds Vis, "What?"
"My anger caused me to lose against Danny," Matt looks down at Minoboros then back at Vis, "I want you to help me control this anger."
Vis thinks then says, "Ok, meet me at the hilltop stadium tomorrow."

The next day they get ready to battle and Vis says, "I apologize for what I am about to do." Vis sets both the layer and driver to attack mode, crouches down, and brings his launcher back. They launch and the attack splits Minoboros in half. Matt is in shock as Vis tosses hem a new guard Minoboros layer. "Get ready." Commands Vis as he gets his launcher ready.
"Why," Asks Matt his voice trembling, "Why did you do that with so little remorse?" He notices that Vis' aura is dark as he gets ready. They launch, Minoboros being too agressive and gets bursted as it slams recklessly into Sonar. "Do better." Says Vis with an agressive tone as he gets,his launcher ready.
They launch again this time Minoboros is a little more in control and gets a couple hits in before bursting. "Do better." Repeats Vis, his voice raising as he gets ready again.
They launch and Minoboros hits Sonar with a quick barrage of attacks then goes into Defense mode, only to get bursted by Sonar. "I said do better!" Yells Vis as he gets his launcher ready.
They launch and Matt swings his launcher and the collision sends Sonar out of the stadium. Matt notices that Vis' aura changes back to its normal vibrant iridescence as he says, "Now that's better."
"Wha-what?" Says Matt, still comprehending Vis' complete 180.
"You were able to hone your anger into a powerful attack capable of taking a point from one of the world's best blader." Says Vis with a smile, "I see that as a successful training session."

-end of part 7-
Matt belongs to @[Jman jman]

Note: Vis' actions were all an act, he planned it because he knows about the anger you would have towards someone when they break your bey.

(Nov. 03, 2018  12:11 AM)MWF Wrote: [ -> ]Anger management

"Vis," Says Matt says, "Could yoy help me with something."
"Sure," Responds Vis, "What?"
"My anger caused me to lose against Danny," Matt looks down at Minoboros then back at Vis, "I want you to help me control this anger."
Vis thinks then says, "Ok, meet me at the hilltop stadium tomorrow."

The next day they get ready to battle and Vis says, "I apologize for what I am about to do." Vis sets both the layer and driver to attack mode, crouches down, and brings his launcher back. They launch and the attack splits Minoboros in half. Matt is in shock as Vis tosses hem a new guard Minoboros layer. "Get ready." Commands Vis as he gets his launcher ready.
"Why," Asks Matt his voice trembling, "Why did you do that with so little remorse?" He notices that Vis' aura is dark as he gets ready. They launch, Minoboros being too agressive and gets bursted as it slams recklessly into Sonar. "Do better." Says Vis with an agressive tone as he gets,his launcher ready.
They launch again this time Minoboros is a little more in control and gets a couple hits in before bursting. "Do better." Repeats Vis, his voice raising as he gets ready again.
They launch and Minoboros hits Sonar with a quick barrage of attacks then goes into Defense mode, only to get bursted by Sonar. "I said do better!" Yells Vis as he gets his launcher ready.
They launch and Matt swings his launcher and the collision sends Sonar out of the stadium. Matt notices that Vis' aura changes back to its normal vibrant iridescence as he says, "Now that's better."
"Wha-what?" Says Matt, still comprehending Vis' complete 180.
"You were able to hone your anger into a powerful attack capable of taking a point from one of the world's best blader." Says Vis with a smile, "I see that as a successful training session."

-end of part 7-
Matt belongs to @[Jman jman]

Note: Vis' actions were all an act, he planned it because he knows about the anger you would have towards someone when  they break your bey.

Epic story it was awesome.