Tournament and Technique. Still needs a bit of improvement.

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

i fiished chapter 5!

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In chap 5 who will Ally face up with?

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In chap 5 who will Ally face up with?

Sokka Stewart.

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I don't get it. In chap 4 the sheet said Ally and now on Chap 5 it say Sokka. Whats up with that?

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I don't get it. In chap 4 the sheet said Ally and now on Chap 5 it say Sokka. Whats up with that?

Ally and Sokka are mentioned in bolth chapters. i don't know what you're trying to say.

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Chapter 6 is complete!

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You need to make your chapters longer. And is that all that happenned in the fights? They end to quickly.

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You need to make your chapters longer. And is that all that happenned in the fights? They end to quickly.

That was basicly a bonus chapter. I couldnt think of anything so I just wrote that Gingka is better than Tyson.

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Chapter 8 is done! after 8 chapter's this one is DEFINATELY in the top 10. and things get a little romantic between a couple characters too.

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Yeagh! CHAPTER 9 IS UP! great story bro.

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neal armstrong's rocket was powered by plastic generation beyblades using the spin gear system.

if you say "let it rip" than you're more likely to fart. 84% of people who say "let it rip" are guys.

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Facebolt: regular, MF, MF-H, MF-F
Energy ring: tempo, zarafa, leone, byxis, lybra, befall, pegasus, pegasusII, pegasusIII, l-drago, ldragoII, kerbeks, capricorn, virgo, eagle, destroyer, fireblaze, cetus, striker, serpent, susanow, lacerta, kronos
Metal wheels: twisted, rock, counter, flame, dark, storm, cyber, galaxy, cosmic, lightning, meteo, hades, spiral, earth, gravity, burn, grand, ray, poison, bakushin, thermal, scythe
spin tracks: 145, R145, 230, ED145, UW145, 105, W105, 100, LW105, BD145, 90, GB145, AD145, 135, WD145, T125, D125, SW145, WA130, T125
Preformance tips: WD, WB, D, EWD, RF, R2F, HF, LF, DS, MF, BS, ES, MS, RS, CS, SD, WF, EDS

Awesome story!I just can't believe they kissed...and you should write more details in your chapters because we don't know how ally and mike met...

chapter two.

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chapter two.

I know how they met-__- I meant to say is why did alley just joined the battle out if nowhere...

she heard a battle from the woods, wanted to be a random person, and jumped in!

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are you just gonna cut it short at chapter 9, bro?

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neal armstrong's rocket was powered by plastic generation beyblades using the spin gear system.

if you say "let it rip" than you're more likely to fart. 84% of people who say "let it rip" are guys.

my part's

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Facebolt: regular, MF, MF-H, MF-F
Energy ring: tempo, zarafa, leone, byxis, lybra, befall, pegasus, pegasusII, pegasusIII, l-drago, ldragoII, kerbeks, capricorn, virgo, eagle, destroyer, fireblaze, cetus, striker, serpent, susanow, lacerta, kronos
Metal wheels: twisted, rock, counter, flame, dark, storm, cyber, galaxy, cosmic, lightning, meteo, hades, spiral, earth, gravity, burn, grand, ray, poison, bakushin, thermal, scythe
spin tracks: 145, R145, 230, ED145, UW145, 105, W105, 100, LW105, BD145, 90, GB145, AD145, 135, WD145, T125, D125, SW145, WA130, T125
Preformance tips: WD, WB, D, EWD, RF, R2F, HF, LF, DS, MF, BS, ES, MS, RS, CS, SD, WF, EDS

well, with school and stuff and also work... i have very little time to write the rest of this.

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:0 awsome story it was the best can u make another one put me in it my name is zeronie my bey is dark fireblaze i dont know the track but its the same as dark wolfes spin track and a sf perfomance tip

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p.s.im the leader of team lightning launchers

so.. dark fireblaze df145sf? cool. is it ok if i just shorten it to zero?

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Seems as if chapter 10 is up. nice work E.

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neal armstrong's rocket was powered by plastic generation beyblades using the spin gear system.

if you say "let it rip" than you're more likely to fart. 84% of people who say "let it rip" are guys.

my part's

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Facebolt: regular, MF, MF-H, MF-F
Energy ring: tempo, zarafa, leone, byxis, lybra, befall, pegasus, pegasusII, pegasusIII, l-drago, ldragoII, kerbeks, capricorn, virgo, eagle, destroyer, fireblaze, cetus, striker, serpent, susanow, lacerta, kronos
Metal wheels: twisted, rock, counter, flame, dark, storm, cyber, galaxy, cosmic, lightning, meteo, hades, spiral, earth, gravity, burn, grand, ray, poison, bakushin, thermal, scythe
spin tracks: 145, R145, 230, ED145, UW145, 105, W105, 100, LW105, BD145, 90, GB145, AD145, 135, WD145, T125, D125, SW145, WA130, T125
Preformance tips: WD, WB, D, EWD, RF, R2F, HF, LF, DS, MF, BS, ES, MS, RS, CS, SD, WF, EDS

That is exactly what's up. Working on chapter 11 after number 10 of my other story.

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