(Feb. 03, 2018 3:15 PM)Eleanor Wrote: (Feb. 03, 2018 3:06 PM)DraconicArt Wrote: This is the first time I write my own story, anyway I look forward to your posts and comments refering to it.
Lui Shirasagi vs. Yuri Schmidt - The Semi Finals
The time has come to find out who will be able to qualify for the big finals. More than 200 bladers from all around the world have come
to demonstrate their skills and moves and become the new Beyblade champion.
The red corner's door opens and Lui Shirasagi steps out to face his next opponent and the huge crowd cheering loudly for both of them.
It was obvious that he hates such loud noises and wild voices, the look in his eyes was rough, cold and furious.
He has trained very hard for this and he never has been so exhausted like that before. No wonder, his new Beyblade is made of heavy material
and he hasn't even got used to it completely yet.
Forgotten Longinus, the next step of the lance dragon's evolution, made of little but strong single pieces, born to crush every
opponent standing in it's way. The layer includes two solide wings fixed at the edge with upper attack because of the wings' diagonal form
and the claws at the front. By using a simple mechanism the wings can become free spinning and raise the Beyblade's defense.
"Forgotten Longinus," he says," your name and strength will never be forgotten anymore, after I crushed this guy into the ground."
Right in time the blue corner's door opens and Yuri Schmidt, the "Russian Fist", enters the battlefield and goes straight on to the arena, just like
Lui does. They stand in front of each other, look into each other's eyes to test each opponent's selfcontrol.
Lui: This must be a bad joke. And anyway I could almost laugh. I always thought that a rough guy like you wouldn't even be smart enough
to win the first three rounds. ( Laughs loudly)
Yuri: Tell me something, boy... do you even care the slightest bit about your fans?
Lui: What do you mean? I don't force anyone to like me. I just care abou winning, that's all that matters!
Yuri: Be grateful for everyone who stands behind you and supports you. You stand in front of a true fighter who lost his loved one and
fought his way up to the top on his own anyway. I won't give up till I find the missing gear that keeps running my soul!
Lui: Are you kidding me?? Just because of an unimportant person..... that's weakness! You aren't even worth it to battle against that amatures
taking part in this stupid tournament!!
Yuri: That's enough! It's time for you to learn the true meaning of fear!
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If you want me to write more, just write your comments
nice story...Do continue writing...
the story going on: Lui Shirasagi vs. Yuri Schmidt
This is the beginning of the first battle and Lui and Yuri already know that there is no time for analysing the opponent's strategy anymore, they even have had enough
opportunity for that when they have been able to watch each opponent's former battles.
Lui ( in thoughts):... It's weird... why does it feel so weird? Should I have watched his battles more? No!! My mind is no place for worries! I am the champion,
that's what I've always been!
Yuri ( in thoughts):... He's focused. At least he tries to be it, but there is no thing I have to worry about. I've done my homework, boy. I watched all of your
battles, and there is no doubt that you try to hide something. Guess what.... I can tell you....it's your inner emptyness, caused by
your pride, your need to win every single time. But boy, we all lose something during our life time. Unlike other people, I will get back what I have lost,
and you, you will learn, that a defeat is more important than a victory!
The judge raised his arms to start the first battle: "Ready...set!!"
"Three...Two...One...Let It RIIP!!!"
Lui starts with one of his most powerful Nightmare Boosts he ever did, Yuri does one step to the right by bounding off with his left leg, then a turn to power up
Akalon's speed. He knows that an imbalanced Beyblade like his one loses stamina very quickly.
Both Beys enter the arena with incredible speed and prepare for a heavy collision. Lui has fixed Longinu's wings before the battle to go for the attack.
These wings, screaming like a chainsaw and carrying the pair of dangerous claws for the upper attack, hit the defensive side of Akalon.
Lui hasn't expected that his attack would be deflected by the free spinning metal balls inside the carapace.
Countered by that Longinus was forced to move closer to the arena's center because it has already lost some stamina.
This was the chance for Akalon to strike back. Using its weight to move more quickly into the centre the driver still seems to pick up speed.
The second contact: but instead of a soft metal balls's touch, Longinus has to feel a deadly kiss of Akalon's Metal sting hitting the unprotected part of the layer.
Yuri: This is it, kid! Go Akalon, rip it apart!!
That is too much, even for a big metal monster like Forgotten Longinus. Even the strongest dragon is covered with flesh somewhere. And this flesh starts to bleed now,
because Akalon just needs this strike to burst Longinus into pieces. A Burst Finish: two points for Yuri. And the semi final hasn't even started.
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Thanks for reading, guys. I hope you enjoyed the little story, because in that case I will continue it.
I will devour your souls... I'm your worst nightmare... I'm NIGHTMARE LONGINUS! GO SHOOOOT!