Lol ok XD Bro.

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I dont want to end a story unfinished but, I have to say chapter 5 is done. I will finish the battle on chapter 6

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Why not? It adds suspense!

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6 God is watching and I hope you're prepared to face him

Why not? It adds suspense!

Because it feels like I am being lazy :I

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In the first chapter when the flashback hits: tournament is spelled like this: tournament. Sorry if that came out a little rude.

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6 God is watching and I hope you're prepared to face him

Awesome what great suspense.

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In the first chapter when the flashback hits: tournament is spelled like this: tournament. Sorry if that came out a little rude.

It's not rude. I am glad to be corrected for anything you find- because I am only 13 so my spelling is not perfect.

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Yeah correction helps a writer.

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Actually you can use him as well. Sorry for the trouble.

It's okay. I just want to know his track and performance tip so I can include him to the story

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Ok but good so far

This battle is going to get heated. I am basing it off of one of the greatest battles of movie entertainment history, not a real beybattle but still :I

The performance tip
and the spin track is WD145RDF

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Natsu smiles at his opponent, ready for combat. His reawakened spirit shines through his body, as he lights his fists. He jumps, as he breathes in the flames of hell itself, his lungs expanding rapidly... His 2 opponents stare in fear of their ferocious enemy and ready themselves...


Members I wish to battle:

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1. Switchblad3r
   
2. XKai_DranzerX
   
3. Bularieleone
   
4. Kyler_the best
   
5. Luck
   
6. Blitz
   
7. Manicben
   
8. Akio314
   
9. Rnold201
   
10. Kai-v
    
11. Shining God MS
    
12. Ryukiba
    
13. Hakumen
    
14. SoulNinja
    
15. AZL
    
16. UltimiteOrion
    
17. Ingulit
    
18. Ga'Hooleone
    

I try and help the WBO, so here's some important threads, and some important posts. I haven't been on for a while, so pm me on updates please!! [spoiler]

1. BEYWIKI
   
2. The beywiki project
   
3. Difference between duo and phantom
   
4. WBO community rules
   
5. Comprtitive MFB discussions
   
6. Build me a combo
   
7. Competitive Heavy Metal System Combos
   
8. Misconception of R vs R2F and possibility of LRF
   
9. Bey Marketplace
   
10. Beginner's guide to custom MFB construction
    
11. A new, Experimental RuleSet?!
    
12. RS vs RDF vs RB vs CS vs RSF
    

Everyone, don't be afraid to comment on the story or pm me things you would like to see in the story. I may not get to work on a chapter today due to sleeping issues, but I am using time to write down tons of ideas and characters to add to my story.

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Can we have an a little of story away from the tournament like chasing after Austin ot ace s back story the ninja clan of elite beyblade ninja seeks revenge so they take his sister XD and Austin Was The One who s behind it What a twist XD and I have to battle my master and you have to battle Austin And they challenge us to a tag team battle. Oh so much action.

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Can we have an a little of story away from the tournament like chasing after Austin ot ace s back story the ninja clan of elite beyblade ninja seeks revenge so they take his sister XD and Austin Was The One who s behind it What a twist XD and I have to battle my master and you have to battle Austin And they challenge us to a tag team battle. Oh so much action.

I don't want to give any spoilers, but I will say there will be a bit of the story away from the tournament for sure. Btw, that seems a little bit too revolved on you :I Your a important character, but not a main character Dont get upset though, I am planning like adding stories like that for everyone anyways :I

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Ok Well lets have an opponent like nemsis the whole team has to battle

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hey um is my character going to be used?

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Natsu smiles at his opponent, ready for combat. His reawakened spirit shines through his body, as he lights his fists. He jumps, as he breathes in the flames of hell itself, his lungs expanding rapidly... His 2 opponents stare in fear of their ferocious enemy and ready themselves...


Members I wish to battle:

Spoiler (Click to View)

1. Switchblad3r
   
2. XKai_DranzerX
   
3. Bularieleone
   
4. Kyler_the best
   
5. Luck
   
6. Blitz
   
7. Manicben
   
8. Akio314
   
9. Rnold201
   
10. Kai-v
    
11. Shining God MS
    
12. Ryukiba
    
13. Hakumen
    
14. SoulNinja
    
15. AZL
    
16. UltimiteOrion
    
17. Ingulit
    
18. Ga'Hooleone
    

I try and help the WBO, so here's some important threads, and some important posts. I haven't been on for a while, so pm me on updates please!! [spoiler]

1. BEYWIKI
   
2. The beywiki project
   
3. Difference between duo and phantom
   
4. WBO community rules
   
5. Comprtitive MFB discussions
   
6. Build me a combo
   
7. Competitive Heavy Metal System Combos
   
8. Misconception of R vs R2F and possibility of LRF
   
9. Bey Marketplace
   
10. Beginner's guide to custom MFB construction
    
11. A new, Experimental RuleSet?!
    
12. RS vs RDF vs RB vs CS vs RSF
    

hey um is my character going to be used?

Oh yes it will. I already had my ideas down for chapter 5 which I wrote while you requested and I don't like to change my ideas when I already confirmed how I want them to be. Chapter 5 is finished now, so You'll be in chapter 6, however!

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hey um is my character going to be used?

Oh yes it will. I already had my ideas down for chapter 5 which I wrote while you requested and I don't like to change my ideas when I already confirmed how I want them to be. Chapter 5 is finished now, so You'll be in chapter 6, however!

Thanks very much for including my character, if possible, can he battle ace?

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Important Stuff (Click to View)

Natsu smiles at his opponent, ready for combat. His reawakened spirit shines through his body, as he lights his fists. He jumps, as he breathes in the flames of hell itself, his lungs expanding rapidly... His 2 opponents stare in fear of their ferocious enemy and ready themselves...


Members I wish to battle:

Spoiler (Click to View)

1. Switchblad3r
   
2. XKai_DranzerX
   
3. Bularieleone
   
4. Kyler_the best
   
5. Luck
   
6. Blitz
   
7. Manicben
   
8. Akio314
   
9. Rnold201
   
10. Kai-v
    
11. Shining God MS
    
12. Ryukiba
    
13. Hakumen
    
14. SoulNinja
    
15. AZL
    
16. UltimiteOrion
    
17. Ingulit
    
18. Ga'Hooleone
    

I try and help the WBO, so here's some important threads, and some important posts. I haven't been on for a while, so pm me on updates please!! [spoiler]

1. BEYWIKI
   
2. The beywiki project
   
3. Difference between duo and phantom
   
4. WBO community rules
   
5. Comprtitive MFB discussions
   
6. Build me a combo
   
7. Competitive Heavy Metal System Combos
   
8. Misconception of R vs R2F and possibility of LRF
   
9. Bey Marketplace
   
10. Beginner's guide to custom MFB construction
    
11. A new, Experimental RuleSet?!
    
12. RS vs RDF vs RB vs CS vs RSF
    

hey um is my character going to be used?

Oh yes it will. I already had my ideas down for chapter 5 which I wrote while you requested and I don't like to change my ideas when I already confirmed how I want them to be. Chapter 5 is finished now, so You'll be in chapter 6, however!

Thanks very much for including my character, if possible, can he battle ace?

Yeah he can. Ive been very busy latley so I wasnt able to write today. i will try tommorow, but will make no promises

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I'm going to write chapter 6 today I'll start now, maybe not finish now because a friends coming over.

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Sorry to be impatient but are you going to put up chapter 6?

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Wolf's Rain Quotes

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Dying or getting killed isn’t something unnatural. Living aimlessly without a purpose is.
Kiba
That's not your true form. Why do you hide yourself?
Kiba
Everyone's gonna die. It's a natural part of life. But if life has no purpose, you're dead already.
Kiba

My rap by earthwolf1404

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Her attacks are like diamond to the flesh
She's already seen all the HTTYD movies
And Ryukiba is her address,
In a Texas town, no bey part envy

But every blader's like Synchrome, Metal Face, Stallin' on Tornado Ridge,
Giga Flats, Spin Steal , trashin' the whole stadium,
She don't care, She's chillin' with Ryuga in her dreams.
But Blader's like Cristal Wheel, Tall Track, Wear Tempo like a timepiece.
4-D, Zero-G, Byakkus and Garudas.
She don't care, She's made a different Top Tier.

And You'll never beat Ryukiba (-kiba).
She's got Ryuga's Dragon Blood,
That kind of Power just ain't for us.
Her Beyblade style's all the buzz.
She will be your ruler (ruler),
You can call her Fishy
And baby She rules, She rules, She rules, She rules.
To beat her is a fantasy.


My friends and I—we've cracked the code.
We count our dollars on the train to the party.
And everyone who knows us knows that we're fine with this,
We didn't come for money.

But every blader's like Synchrome, Metal Face, Stallin' on Tornado Ridge,
Giga Flats, Spin Steal , trashin' the whole stadium,
She don't care, She's chillin' with Ryuga in her dreams.
But Blader's like Cristal Wheel, Tall Track, Wear Tempo like a timepiece.
4-D, Zero-G, Byakkus and Garudas.
She don't care, She's made a different Top Tier.


And we'll never beat Ryukiba (-kiba).
She's got Ryuga's Dragon Blood,
That kind of power just ain't for us.
Her Beyblade style's all the buzz.
She will be your ruler (ruler),
You can call her Fishy
And baby She rules, She rules, She rules, She rules.
To beat her is a fantasy.

Ooh ooh oh, Ooh ooh oh
She's stonger than you'll ever be,
The one and only Dragon queen.
Ooh ooh oh, Ooh ooh oh
Was born L-drago's lair
To be the best is her affair.

And we'll never beat Ryukiba (-kiba).
She's got Ryuga's Dragon Blood,
That kind of power just ain't for us.
Her Beyblade style's all the buzz
She will be your ruler (ruler),
You can call her Fishy
And baby She rules, She rules, She rules, She rules.
To beat her is a fantasy.

It's not rude. I am glad to be corrected for anything you find- because I am only 13 so my spelling is not perfect.

Being 13 is not a reason for spelling a word wrong. I'm 13 as well, and I'd never use that as an excuse. :p
Be sure to use spell check when typing the story. Either use your in-browser spell check or type it in Microsoft Word or something to get a combination of both Spell and Grammar Check.

1. Press the Enter Key. Putting everything into one block of text isn't very appeling and causes it to be a bit harder for some to read. For example:

________________________

The chilly air ran down my spine, as I thought about the incident.
"Hey! We need to go back home now!" Shane said as he ran towards me.
I nodded at him and began jogging in his direction. I could still feel the anxiety in my heart. I could hear the pumping in my head. I could feel the sweat drip down from my head. But, there was an obscure chill in the air.

Something was wrong.
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2. Improve your grammar. When writing / telling a story, its best to keep the story in one tense; past or present. This allows for the reader to understand what is going on in the story more easily/ isn't as confusing. It could be a mistake sometimes because when writing you can accidentally say "shined" instead of "shone."

3. Be careful with the space bar. Don't put spaces after quotations.

This: "Come over here! " He yelled.

Doesn't look at clear and good as this: "Come over here!" He yelled.

Good luck on your story!


-- By the way, if you could go back to the first few chapters and clean them up/ correctt them, that'd be great!

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HEY EVERYONE, DUE TO FREQUENT REQUEST MEENY IS BACK AND SO IS CHRISTIAN IN THE LAST KING SERIES. I AM NOT FINISHED WITH CHAPTER 6, BUT A HALF OF IT HAS BEEN POSTED AND I WILL TRY HARD TO DO IT.

edit: QUICK CHANGE OF PLANS! I AM GOING TO END CHAPTER 6 WHERE IT IS, THE BOOK IS LONG WELL THOUGHT OUT AND HAS ALOT OF VIEWERS, NOW I WILL DO THE SQUEAL INSTEAD. FIRST IMA CATCH UP ON THE SURVIVAL SERIES THOUGH/.

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I'm so happy this story is back! I have to read chapters 1-6 again because I forgot what happens-.-

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Credit for sig goes to "L"!
Wolf's Rain Quotes

Spoiler (Click to View)

Dying or getting killed isn’t something unnatural. Living aimlessly without a purpose is.
Kiba
That's not your true form. Why do you hide yourself?
Kiba
Everyone's gonna die. It's a natural part of life. But if life has no purpose, you're dead already.
Kiba

My rap by earthwolf1404

Spoiler (Click to View)

Her attacks are like diamond to the flesh
She's already seen all the HTTYD movies
And Ryukiba is her address,
In a Texas town, no bey part envy

But every blader's like Synchrome, Metal Face, Stallin' on Tornado Ridge,
Giga Flats, Spin Steal , trashin' the whole stadium,
She don't care, She's chillin' with Ryuga in her dreams.
But Blader's like Cristal Wheel, Tall Track, Wear Tempo like a timepiece.
4-D, Zero-G, Byakkus and Garudas.
She don't care, She's made a different Top Tier.

And You'll never beat Ryukiba (-kiba).
She's got Ryuga's Dragon Blood,
That kind of Power just ain't for us.
Her Beyblade style's all the buzz.
She will be your ruler (ruler),
You can call her Fishy
And baby She rules, She rules, She rules, She rules.
To beat her is a fantasy.


My friends and I—we've cracked the code.
We count our dollars on the train to the party.
And everyone who knows us knows that we're fine with this,
We didn't come for money.

But every blader's like Synchrome, Metal Face, Stallin' on Tornado Ridge,
Giga Flats, Spin Steal , trashin' the whole stadium,
She don't care, She's chillin' with Ryuga in her dreams.
But Blader's like Cristal Wheel, Tall Track, Wear Tempo like a timepiece.
4-D, Zero-G, Byakkus and Garudas.
She don't care, She's made a different Top Tier.


And we'll never beat Ryukiba (-kiba).
She's got Ryuga's Dragon Blood,
That kind of power just ain't for us.
Her Beyblade style's all the buzz.
She will be your ruler (ruler),
You can call her Fishy
And baby She rules, She rules, She rules, She rules.
To beat her is a fantasy.

Ooh ooh oh, Ooh ooh oh
She's stonger than you'll ever be,
The one and only Dragon queen.
Ooh ooh oh, Ooh ooh oh
Was born L-drago's lair
To be the best is her affair.

And we'll never beat Ryukiba (-kiba).
She's got Ryuga's Dragon Blood,
That kind of power just ain't for us.
Her Beyblade style's all the buzz
She will be your ruler (ruler),
You can call her Fishy
And baby She rules, She rules, She rules, She rules.
To beat her is a fantasy.

I'm so happy this story is back! I have to read chapters 1-6 again because I forgot what happens-.-

Lol same with chu. I'm glad you are excited for my return, I worried that no one would care after all this time...

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Very good!