The Last King- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - Themeeny7 - Aug. 07, 2013
Hey! This is my first beyblade story. I accept character requests, and I will try to add every character in as much as I can. I will also try to upload a new chapter every 1-3 days or less because I don't like anyone who likes this story to have to wait soooooo long for newer results. You can also expect each chapter to be fairly long so it is worth the wait( Because most other stories make it a paragraph per story. Pf lazy writers. ) This is a MFB beyblade story, so no Zero-G beyblades. This story takes place inbetween the events of Metal Fury and Zero-G, but before Zero-g battles or zero-g beyblades were invented.
HEY GUYS I'M BACK! I apologize for the very long wait, but wait no longer, the awesome Leone guy is back to kick some bey-butt and you can surely expect more writing from me baby! Beleive it or not, the story is actually already finished with a kicker cliffhanger, but dont fret, I will start book 2 instantly!
Chapter 1: Each and every step I took became faster than the last, my breath became faster at the same rate as my steps. Although my energy was low, the effort I used to run faster only grew and extended instead of running out. I could feel the sweat gently and quietly quiver down my skin down my skin, it crawled down carefully but in stealth like a spider looking for a place to make its web, yet even with the stealth of a rogue, I couldn't deny the fact that at the same time covered me as if I had been holding my breath in a 8 foot pool for 30 minutes. As I ran down the city sidewalks, people I ran past would get upset at me and yell rude things like “Hey watch where you’re going punk! ". Even so, I had no regrets for what I had done, still I said “Sorry! Excuse me sir!†Regardless of if I cared or not because it was the polite thing to do.
My emotions had balled up inside of my soul like a fist that needs to punch but has been handcuffed its entire life. I sped up on my way into a door, turned to my side, and started running again through a hallway . “Am I going to do it this time? ... “I paused in the middle of the hallway say that. The question I had asked was burning in my soul hard... I had felt this feeling my entire life, though because of the embarrassment and shame that would be put on me if I had asked anyone out loud, because of the dignity I had worked up to earn my entire life, I had never told anyone my true feelings about this question, no one but myself have I told that I even had this question. To even have the ability to think about this question wasn't to ever exist. Yet I am here in the hallway saying these words, which makes me wonder if they are the last ones I will ever speak.
I took out my partner Beyblade, Twisted Leone B , and stared at it. The green energy ring shined in the light above, the yellow bars on its side were fading out every day from the intense battles I do, yet I still admire it like a beauty. The way the energy ring fit onto Leone
's fusion wheel, Twisted was just perfect... it was as if it was meant to lay right there for the entire time the world has ever existed. The feeling about the track and tip was the same in a way... " Leone... should we just go back now? If I go ahead and put you in this battle against Austin Pritt then... I might never be able to fix you. Do you remember what Austin did to Nexus, your tag team partner? " The flash back hit me just then. You may be wondering what this battle this.
This is the final battle of a BTCT tournament. BBTC( Bey blade trainer camp ) is a summer program for noob bladers to battle other beginning bladers who are starting off aswell, to get stronger, train together, and travel the world together with in order to raise them out of that noobie stage. At the last week of the summer camp however, the bladers have a tournament that is officially hosted and sponsered by the WBBO. All of the bladers compete to win an automatic spot in the beyblade world tournament in either of these two teams: Japanese, or American, which will then be battled to see which spot that exactly is. I made it to the finals, of the tournament... but I don't think I will win. I am against Austin Pritt. Austin is said to be the best blader to not become professional in this entire state. Me and Austin started together, trained, battled, even had our own little team together. But then this tournament started. When I thought we couldnt become any friendlier, he betrayed me. He left my tag team, formed a new one, and told me that I was his only enemy that is actually worthy of his time. Even so, he was a enemy... and my biggest one sense. We have been rivals sense then. And not just in beyblade, but in everything ever imaginable! But beyblade... that fueled the rivalry. I was still his frenimy though for a while... but yesterday, he broke the line. That stupid Austin! My new tag team partner Lucas was just about to beat him... but that sneaky guy brought out his tag team partner to even the score. He didn't cheat, because it was a no disqualification match, but he still played unfair! It was wrong! How could Austin do that?! And to make it even worse... he told the entire crowd that he didn't want to be unfair, he just wanted to do whatever he could to make me, Christian Johanese angry.
" I... can't beat him. He's evil... a bully... and he's undefeated! I'll never defeat Austin. " I groaned and was about to head out but was scared to death by the sight of someone standing in front of me when I turned around. " Oh my god! Is that... Kyoya?! No way! Mr Kyoya I am a huge fan! I- " " Christian. No, just no. I heard what you said. About how you can't beat Austin. Let me tell you why I'm here.... I wanted to see my favorite beginner win this battle in person. You may not believe it, but your battles have been great... better then I could ever do in the time you have been battling. But to hear someone that strong say that about that punk out there Austin, or any blader at all is just a embarrassment. It makes ME feel weak. Now look. I wont be upset if you lose, but damn it go try with all you got that thing do you hear? If you don't, that will only be the reason I am upset." Kyoya told me. " Uh... Yes! I will! Thanks Kyo-! " I looked to see that he was gone already... was it just a illusion? It didn't matter. I barged into the doors of the stadium, appearing for the battle at just the last minute.
The announcer shouted. " And look right there! The other blader right at the second we were going to call Austin winner by forfeit, Christian Johanese and his beyblade Twisted Leone B ! On the other side of the stadium, the leader of the unofficial team Death Star, with a remaining undefeated streak of 99-0, Austin Pritt, with Death Jupiter 125 RB, claims that the only worthy oponent will become scrap as he adds him to his streak of 100! Streak or not, both are nearly equally powerful bladers, and this fight is gauraunteed to be a fight epic enough for the record books! Well without further ado, let the battle begin! " He told everyone. Austin smirked. " You think you can defeat me? Ha. Don't worry... you may get close, but I have a little surprise for you just for this ocasion Christian. Prepare to lose!." Someone with a black mask over his head stood by his side. " 3! 2! 1!..." I prepared myself to battle, knowing losing this could end my life dreams of becoming one of the best bladers and winner of the 2nd world tournament of beyblade.
" Let it rip!!!" Both Leone and Jupiter shot off like a missle. At first contact, a huge explosion filled the entire stadium, causing both bladers and everyone one watching to be pushed back a little bit, and the stadium couldn't be seen because of the dust. As the dust faded away, the two beyblades were grinding at eachothers fusion wheels in the middle of the stadium, neither moving a inch. " Wow! Talk about Defencive power, both beyblades are still up and 100 percent by that amazing clash, it looks like a battle of strength to make one or another fall backwards! " The announcer was filled with excitment, as well as the crowd. Death Jupiter pushed the Leone twords the edge of the stadium. " Oh no! With a smash, Leone has been shot twords the edge! Will this be a stadium out already? " I threw out my hand. " Not on my watch! Leone, do what we practiced! " Leone shot off of the edge of the stadium, and then was plunged twords the sky. " Oh no. We've all seen this before! This could be it for Jupiter! " I chuckled at the fact that the announcer said that. " Special move! Gravity Excallivasion! " Leone was surrounded by a light blue aura. He was shot straight down at Jupiters energy ring like a lightning bolt would strike a tree. A half of Jupiters energy ring flew off, and his facebolt was shot all the way into the sky, out of the stadium. " What the hell kerbecs?! How did he do that?! I guess the time for my surprise! " The masked man revealed his face, and before we could notice who it was he launched his beyblade into the stadium. " Huh?!? Is that?! " The man threw a facebolt at Jade Jupiter which luckily landed straight on Austins bey and screwed back in before Leone could break Jupiter into 5 peices. " It's Ryuga everyone! Can you beleive it, the legendary blader Ryuga has come for backup and seems to be the surprise and backup he has called for the match! Oh no, Christian is in trouble. He's got to come up with some sort of plan, because the great defence type combo Death Jupiter and the attack type Gaurdian L-Drago may just be enough to put him out for good! Chapter 2( Warning fairly short.): " What?! Ryuga... Ryuga is dead.... how is he here?! That's not fair! That's not fair!!! Austin! You cheater!" I yelled to the sky in absolute anger. My bey spirit started to burn brighter and brighter, until I just exploded! Both Jupiter and L-Drago were sent flying into the air, but quickly fell back on the ground. " Leone: Finish Gravity Excallion now!!!" The light blue aura surrounded Leone once again. Leone pushed Jupiter and L-drago up on the edge. He started pushing them both around the ring... it started slow... gradually, Leone's spin rotation grew to super sonic speed. A blue trail of light followed the entire ring- wearing the other beys out to the point that they are wobbling. Leone then went back to normal speed, but the recoil from that attack was equal to the damage delt, causing Leone to wobble too. L-drago started to scrape the sides with it's fusion wheel, it's spin rotation got lower and lower... until the point that it stopped spinning completely. It seemed to not have much damage done from the match. Austin started yelling at Ryuga, " You just couldn't do it could you?! You suck! Your nothing but a big fat loser are you?! Get out of my sight! " As he was yelling at Ryuga, I scanned his beyblade for the perfect position to attack.
" Leone: Special Move! Hurricando Sliate!!!" Leone started moving twords Jupiter. He then turned into a cyclone, accept the cyclone was on it's side facing the same direction Leone was moving. Around the cyclone was a swarm of boulders that circled the cyclone, as well as a blast of lightning surrounding it's outline. Inside of the cyclone was Leone, attempting to grind down Jupiter. " Come on Leone!!! We got to attack harder! Keep using Hurricando! This is the last thing we can do, when it's done, we are done! " Austin turned around to see Jupiter being destroyed. " Jade Jupiter! Astromic Meteor!!!" A purple atomic explosion filled the arena. At the same time, lightning bolts struck Leone one at a time. Leone's Hurricando Sliate grew in size, till the point where the entire stadium including the crowds was soaked in water, the same with Jupiters Astromic Meteor. A giant ball of light soaked the entire city as if it was a sun growing out of the earth for a quick second. As the light went away, the entire stadium was destroyed to the point that it was nothing but dirt, the two beys were still spinning for a second... but then suddenly, they both stopped spinning. The entire crowd, announcers, and bladers stood in shock. Before anyone could say a word, both beyblades made a huge " Pop! " sound, and they were equally tworn to shreds. The only parts that remained were the energy rings. " Leone! " I screamed and ran up to it. Austin did the same for Jupiter. The crowd started whispering worried things to each other, many wondering who would be the one to go to the beyblade World Tournament. After a couple minutes passed, Tsubasa, the CEO of WBBO stepped out into the stadium. He grabbed a microphone and started speaking automatically. " I can understand that you may be disappointed that this battle has ended in a tie... so I Tsubasa Otori, have decided that... Austin Pritt will be the one going to the Japanese team, Energy Drainers! " The crowd bood and was getting upset of the result. " Please let me finish." He stared at the crowd annoyed. " And Christian Johanese will be going to the American team, The Flame Universe!!!" The crowd started cheering. Ryuga walked up to Austin, whose beyblade was already damaged enough. " Ryuga! This isn't fair! Hurt him! Launch your bey at his face! " Ryuga ignored Austin and stepped on Death Jupiter which was already messed up enough. He then shot his L-Drago bey at his face instead, causing him to fall face first on the ground. " I'm just a big fat loser huh? You think I'm weak? Ya know what, I'm done working for you. I'm going to enter that tournament myself if it is the last thing I do. And I am also going to show everyone the thing you wanted me to keep a secret! " Ryuga took a head band out of his hair and wiped his face off with the T-Shirt he got wet during the battle. Everyone stood in equal shock to the result of the battle itself. " Ryuga is... a girl? Huh? " The announcer said. She threw the L-Drago Gaurdian beyblade on the floor along with the launcher, for Austin to have for a replacement beyblade. " Yeah, I'm a girl. And quite the actress aswell, because I'm not Ryuga. My name is Yuki, and I am the soon to become winner of the World Beyblade tournament. Know the name of Yuki, for it may be the last name you hear. " Yuki disapeared into the darkness of the light, as Christian and Austin too upset about their beys to be happy to go to the tournament, are moveless and like everyone else, speachless about this battle that we witnessed today. One question is still there however... who is this mysterious Yuki and why did she say she was working for Austin, and who is the other members of team Flame Universe and energy drainers? ( P.S. they will be whoever makes the next character requests. )
Chapter 3 : I was on a plane, heading straight towards USA. I had grabbed the pieces to my beyblade and left, hoping I could run into a mechanic on the way, but no luck. I was happy, I made it into the WBBT, but I was so upset because I might not be able to make it there with my partner beyblade.... Sigh. Atleast I still have the energy ring however. A girl that looked exactly my age came over to my seat and sat down. I sat there, just looking bored however. " Pst. " She whispered. I was too deep into thinking about all the memories I've been through with Leone. " I said PST! " She said again but louder. I ignored her again. Her eyes, hair, and clothes turned on fire. " I SAID PSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" If Antlantis was under us, I am pretty sure the entire city and whatever country was closest to us could hear it like she was right next to them. " What what what?! I'm listening just calm down please! " The flames vanished and she had a nice friendly smile on her face. " I saw your battle on TV. It was crazy awesome!!! You were all like bang boom and they were like oh nuh uh you won't and you were like oh yuh huh I will, and then they were all like casploshin!" I smiled softly trying to pretend like I understood that anything past 'crazy awesome'... " I'm glad you liked it! I've never pushed my bey spirit that far... though... I guess what I did was too much... and now. " She interupted me quickly. " Speak no further! I know about your bey blade getting destroyed, and your going to have to go to the World tournament soon. I know just how to fix your bey however! " I shot up to the edge of my seat in surprise. " Oh my god, your a mechanic! " She shook her head yes, and I grabbed the scraps of beyblade from my pocket and gave it to her. " Woah woah woah I'm not that type of mechanic. I create beyblade parts not fix them. I usually make weak overused beyblade parts like the posion or dark fusion wheels and the same with the rest but... Your a important person... so I made you this! " She hands me a beyblade the world has never seen before, which I put my energy ring on immeidiently.
" First... my name is Enzio Rosoni. That bey is called Sonic Leone BA145 (BoostAmp145) XWD. I made it from scratch, just to fit your bey blade battling style. " I studied the beyblade. " Battling style? What do you mean? " She smacked her face and giggled. " Look. Your bey was a defence type... and it does its job very well but, you always use it and controll it if it was a attack type beyblade. When you use a beyblade different than it is made to be used, it can be put in danger when up against strong oponents. See the fusion wheel sonic? That's a great wheel for Anti-Attack. As you can see, it is sort of like a Duo fusion wheel with a blitz stuck in the middle, so you can deal high damage and absorb them at the same time. That spin track is great for defence because it is fairly wide, it even has a mode, by turning it just a little bit you can put it in speed mode, which makes your bey move alot faster and violent but at the same time has less defence, the original mode causes your bey to move slower but have more defence. That track is XWD, it is like wide defence, except it is modified to move agressivley while defending itself against beyblades. It also allows your bey spirit to go over the max without you destroying your own beyblade." " Wow that is awesome! Thanks so much... But why did you make this for me? " She looked confused. " Don't you know? I'm on team Flame Universe aswell. I have to be there for my team at all times. " I was shocked and happy at the same time when I heard that. I stared at her, too happy to even know what to say. I heard the sound of flames being ignited and crackling before I could reply.
" Emma, holy carp I thought I already started listening to you! Calm down woman! " Emma looked down to check for any fire. " Thats not me... " Suddenly, I could feel a warm vibration take over the seats. I grabbed Emma And ran over to the other side of the plane while holding her in my arms. " DAMN IT CHRISTIAN LET GO OF ME! " She turned into a fire woman again and was getting angry. I dropped her and kissed my burnt finger softly. " Ow... hot... hot. HOT!!! " Suddenly, the wall next to the chair we were sitting in collapsed and flew out of the plane. Passengers screamed and held onto seats in order to not fall out. The plane crashed straight into a mountain nearby and got the nose stuck in there. " Emma, please stay calm, follow me, and RUN LIKE HELL!!!!" I jumped out of the whole put in the plane and climbed on the mountain. I stood there and waited for Emma to come out. " Emma no! Get out of there! " The plane exploded with Emma in it, and I stood there- feeling like the world ended. Emma was still on the mountain in mint condition though, probably because of that flame woman thing she does.
Emma started to complain " YOU SON OF A FLAME BYXIS! YOU LEFT ME IN THAT PLANE THAT WAS GOING TO EXPLODE! I COULD'VE DIED BUT NO YOU JUST HAD TO GO RUN OFF AND LIVE BY YOURSELF. AREN'T YOU SAPOSE TO BE A GENTLE MAN?! " Emma started complaining about a thousand meaningless things. I looked down on the ground to notice a bey, with plane peices on it, and on covered in ash from a fire that looked like it just set off. I walked over to it carefully, then put my hand out to touch it. As my hand extended further towards it, Emma watched in awe but still complaining at the same time. I grabbed the bey and put it up on my face to look at it. " Wow... this beyblade is awesome. " I was about to turn it to see the sides but suddenly the bey shot up to the top of the mountain, hitting me in the face. " What the Hell Kerbecs was that?! " Chapter 4 : A woman in black emo clothing dropped down to this point of the mountain, holding the bey that just hit me in the face. " So your the new member of the American team huh? Ha. You'll come in nicely. The European team will have good use of your former fusion wheel, hehe. " I took out my launcher and aimed it at her. " Your that girl Yuki from the BBTT finals! What do you want?! If it's a battle that you want come get it! " I stood nice and firm. Emma hid behind me, admiring how I look. " Oh no no no. You won't be fighting me. My beyblade, Seaking Percy needs its beauty sleep. " She chuckled mechanically. " You'll have to fight the second member of the european team, me being the leader of course. My friend Kobe will have to finish the tide. A man behind her suddenly appeared. His bey, Bassault Xuan BD145 R2F was a anti-attack too, just like my bey. His fusion wheel however, was restored from the exact fusion wheel my beyblade used to have. " You... How did you get that from me? " Kobes appearance was intimidating. He seemed to be happy and mocking, just by his eyes I could tell this. His hair was silver as a night star, it covered most of his eyes in a way that made him look mysterious but adventurous. He wore a biker jacket that looked like it had not been worn sense 1976 where that stuff was still in style. The snow on the ground burried into the bottom of my shoes as if the snow was a shovel itself, but not any further. His launcher was a Light Launcher l/r... I wondered why he needed that, theres no beyblades that can spin left besides l-drago, destroyer, and variares. Kobe was about to just launch the beyblade, but instead he took it off of his launcher and put his launcher up. I didn't hesitate to launch anyways, and that I did, causing my bey to send a avalanch down the mountain but I break it with my bey and command it to come back up next to me. We stared each other in the eyes. His white eyes were as soulless as a dead man, yet had more soul than every living man combined. I exclaimed with the might of a barbarians voice " ARE YOU GOING TO FIGHT, PUNK?!" He chuckled, though with a irritated face. He threw his beyblade on the ground, and somehow it started to spin for a couple seconds. " I DON'T HAVE TIME FOR THIS! LEONE! CHARGE NOW! " Leone threw his self at Xuan at full speed using all of it's attack power. Xuan didn't move a inch, and without even trying to attack Leone, Leone was flunged into the air. It was as if the bey was being catipulted off of the mountain, where it slowly fell. I could only watch as it was falling to it's doom. With a huge splash, the beyblade fell underwater where it would float for a few seconds. A army of European bladers stepped forward, Yuki came back applauding the effort I gave. " Look. Your stronger than any other blader on your pathetic team. So I'll give you a deal. You either quit the American team before you can even meet the other members and join our team,doing so would let us get your bey back before it is destroyed by the tides or we launch our beyblades at you and that girl following you so you can drown in the water with your bey. And trust me, not even Hurricando Sliate can save you. So just join our forces now and you won't get hurt and your precious partner will be saved. " Okay, deal. I'm part of your team now give me my bey. " Yuki smiled, and used a strange telekinesis power to make the bey float to her, and gave it to me. " Just one last thing Yuki... " I looked sad for leaving Emma and Emma was about to start crying. " What is that, pathetic weakling er I mean member of our team? " I laughed hard enough to cause a earthquake. I then held onto Emma and jumped into the ocean. " WHY WOULD YOU JUMP WHEN WE ARE THIS HIGH UP YOU IDIOT?! WE'RE GONNA DIE!!! " She turned into flames of anger again. I launched my beyblade into the sea in midair and called on my move, Hurricando Sliate. Leons hurricando sliate surrounded us and was heading straight for America, the cyclone working as a super fast surf board for us. Emma screamed of anger, the flames erupting like a volcano all the way up to the clouds, which eventually hit the mountain and cut it in half, putting all of the European Team into the ocean as we zoom away. I could feel the wind and water flowing through my scalp. " Christian! Your gonna run out of bey spirit, we can't make it much further! Stop now while we're ahead! " Emma looked worried and wrapped her arms around my shoulders. I put my bey into my pocket and tried to tread water but nearly drowned. " Christian, go find someone to rescue us!" I sighed. " we're in the middle of the antlantic ocean and nobody knows we're here... We just have to give up " 😪She sat on my back, and closed her eyes knowing we would probobally die right here. " Whose saying that, Christian?" Her voice was high pitched and full of hope like a happy baby. " I don't hear anything... " A mans voice shouted " Hey! Get on this ladder!" . I looked to my right to notice a giant cruise ship titled WBBO on the side just next to us. I climbed the ladder not even knowing what I was claiming up to. As I entered, a swarm of people were there watching me and Emma. Emma turned to flames again. " AW MAN I KNOW THIS PLACE. WE WERE SAPOSE TO TAKE A TRIP TO AMERICA ON THIS NOT THE PLANE!" Emmastarted to get really upset and hyprovniate. I went up to Yuki and hugged her to say its alright.I grunted and then fell on the ground in pain. " Uh... Are you okay Christian? " Christian could barley speak " I'm ok.., just burned me in a really bad spot z_z " Christian got back up to look around the boat. A boy a year younger than me and a girl a year older than me stood in front of me. " Hi Christian. I'm Ace, and this is my big sister Shonen. We are the other two members of team flame universe. I would introduce you to Emma but it seems you already have met her... " Emma was still grabbing my shoulders and was staring at me for awhile awkwardly. " Right... Well just so you know this is a WBBO tour boat. Any blader can ride it to go other places. Bladers can hang out, watch TV, party, battle, and just have a good time here on their way to certain places across the word. And the best part, FREE ALL YOU CAN EAT DONUTS Y'ALL! But anyways Christian would you like to battle us? We need to figure out our leader 2nd 3rd and substitute before the ship stops at USA. Oh that reminds me! Here you go Emma, your Flash Blaze TR145RDF. Now follow me guys, ill take you to the stadiums." I wondered why Shonen didn't say anything. Ace took me to a giant room in the back of the boat where there were at least 100 bey stadiums. “Alright o first up is me versus Emma! Lets do this! " Shonen said the count down. " 3, 2,1, LET IT RIP!"
Chapter 5(Warning fairly short):
Soaring Phoenix was being destroyed by Flash Blaze. Soaring Phoenix fusion wheel had a piece chipped off already in the fusion wheel. Ace shouted “Ah! How are you doing this?! “Emma just giggled. " SPECIAL MOVE: Sol Emerald Blast! “As she spit those words out of her mouth, it was then that the sun set and the moon rose. Ace was starting to grunt and hyperventilate. His bey stopped right at the edge of the stadium where it would’ve gotten a stadium out. “YOU TRIED TO HURT MY BEY!!!" His bey soared into the sky inside of a ball of fire. “I will burn you to death! Feel the wrath of Soaring Phoenix T125 CS. Watch it burn you, burn you to oblivion! “Ace started to freak out. Emma started to get angry. “You’re not the only one who can burn others you freak! "She and her beys turned into flames them self in anger and used the stadium wall as a ramp to get up next to Phoenix in midair. “Special move: Soaring Cumbustion!" Phoenix exploded into a sphere of conflagration that elevated to the size of a boulder; it then went straight into Flash Blaze TR145 RDF in a beam of death and destruction. The sound of a swarm of bees repeated in our ears from the attack. Emma was destroyed already; Ace still focused on the battle like it was still going on. Emma was furious with rage at the result of the battle, and dashed straight to me to complain about it to me. “CHRISTIAN DO SOMETHING! HE CAN'T JUST WIN LIKE THAT! HELP ME DEFEAT HIM NOW! “She tugged on my shirt, almost ripping it with the Flame Woman thing once again. “I’m sorry Emma, but I have to go battle Shonen now... I'll deal with that later. I must say though, your blader skills are still impressive. You just need to practice more to defeat Ace, okay? “She calmed down a little bit but was still complaining about her loss. I whipped out my light launcher 2 and aimed it at Shonen, ready to launch before she could even move. Shonen spoke for the second time I've ever seen her speak in front of me, “Christian. Hold up one second. I will battle you... but I have a special rule you must follow do you understand? It was only meant to be used in the final round, however you’re a strong opponent so I would like to use it against you do you understand?"
Although I wanted to make a rude comeback, he's my partner in this team, so I just kept my mouth shut and hummed "Mhm.†Emma had to speak for Shonen because she was too shy to say anything else. “This is going to be a anywhere counts match. It doesn't matter where you’re knocked out, because your bey being knocked out in any way anywhere would automatically be a loss. Well, if you’re ready, 3! 2! 1!" I didn't let her finish because of how ready I was to fight and launched my bey already, not caring that I did an early launch. Luckily for me, Shonen launched at the same time as I did. Her bey was aiming for an attack on mine, yet somehow I was able to dodge it before it could hit my bey. Her bey started to circle around the arena like I knew an attack type would. Being a defense type, I used this as an advantage. Leone took its precious time to spin into the middle of the stadium, where Claw Drago had no way to fight back. With a smirk, I looked up from the stadium to make eye contact with Shonen. Shonen spoke out. " That's how you're going to battle?... Running to cover while your oponent runs out of stamina? " She asked. Those words brought images of the many battles I have had with and against Austin.
A flash back from 2 years ago sprung into my head. It was hard to, but I figured I had no choice but force myself to fight it out. Shonen continued. " You're brain is too set on destroying Austin, Christian... You hate people who don't play fair, however, it seems your anger and lust towards Austin has made you become the exact person you always wanted to never exist. I understand you hate him, but your team is more important than your Rival! " While she talked, her beyblade came down towards me. I started to become enraged at what he said, yet somehow still keeping my cool. " Don't lecture me Shonen! I can see through the lies of a blader... You are just trying to break my cool! How dare you try to toy with my emotions!!!" I screamed at the top of my lungs, making my beyspirit shoot out balls of flames like firecrackers. Leone started to spin rapidly, feeling out of my control. A blast of water came from Leone that easily turned into a Tsunami that filled the stadium like the stadium was shot by Posidens trident. Leon still spun on the bottom, yet Drago started to sink into the water. " Your acting like my your are not a team mate, Shonen... if you're not with me, than you are against me!" Shonen looked upset at what I had said... " Hmph. I will end this battle this instant. " She informed me. " You will try, Shonen! " Claw Drago flipped off of the edge of the arena and called out the special move: Lightning Claw, which caused her bey to attemp to slice Leone with many streaks with her claws full of electricity as she fell back downwards. Leone easily blocked the arial attack, but without a second to realize what had happened Drago had started hitting my bey from left to right at high speed.
Leone was able to counter tons of Dragos attacks, yet every counter attack was countered by the other bey. The beys took turns pushing each other across the ring like they were a wagon. Leone was nearing the edge off the stadium, Drago facing it's fusion wheel downwards to try and break the performance tip, although there is no stadium outs in this match- I still didn't want to get a stadium out due to the damage of the fall. With a quick dodge, Leone caused Drago to be facing toward the door. " You call that lightning carp a claw? Watch what my Leon can do. Leon: Special Move: True undead novavoid!"
Chapter 6(Short cliff-hanger)
Leon leaped into the air, landing onto Claw Dragos face bolt. Shoren started to grunt in frustration, raising a fist to her nose in anger. " Huh?Why can't Drago move?! " She did her best to make her bey escape from the wrath of Leons facebolt, but she was stumbled by the lack of result. " This is Leons secondary special move, True Undead Novavoid. My Leon is not just spinning on top of yours, but every second it does it is using it's defensive heavy weight to push you into the ground- a submission hold you can say! I've been saving this move for a good foe like you, Shoren!"
Ace and Emma could do no more than simply watch in awe as Shoren and I defeated each other. Shoren started to gasp, she realized that she wasn't going to beat me while under the mighty Novavoid; she had to find a way to get him out....
I am no longer accepting requests with the fire element.
How to make a character request:[spoiler]
Name:
Bey: (MFB. Can be a actual combo or made up I don't mind.)
Age: (Christian is 13)
Gender:
Special move(s):
Bio:
Bey Description and Type:
Any extra things needed(Including Beyblade abillities and cool things your character can do (optional)
PS: The timing for me to start righting a new chapter will probably depend on how long it takes me to edit grammar mistakes. I'm young so grammar is not always my best ability. I will still attempt to make new chapters in 1 day- 3 days if not less (And sometimes I will do less.)
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - Dual - Aug. 07, 2013
There are grammar mistakes, but its pretty good!
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - RagerBlade - Aug. 07, 2013
I like it. Has grammar mistakes. I look forward to reading the story.
EDIT: Beat!
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - Themeeny7 - Aug. 07, 2013
Ty for your replies. I am sorry about my grammar mistakes, I will try to go back and fix as much as possible in my spare time.
I was so pumped to make this story. I will go ahead and work on Chapter 2 now, so we can at least get the plot of the story out of the way.
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - кαмυι カムイ - Aug. 07, 2013
I would like to make a Character Request:
Name: Emma Rozoni (Is it okay if I could make a girl )
Beyblade: Flash Blaze TR145RDF
Age: 12
Gender: Girl
Special Moves: Burning Blaze Assault, 5 Flames of Fury, Sol Emerald Blast
Biography: Orphan girl. Seeking for a family. Otherwise she is a happy energetic girl who controls fire.
Bey Description:
Face: Depicts of the Sun.[Real Face]
Clear Wheel: From Sol Blaze but color is Purple
Metal Wheel: Burn- Color is Red with White stripes
Spin Track: White with Red wheels.
Performance Tip: Color is purple.
When Emma gets mad her bey catches fire and her hair, clothes, and eyes turn into fire.
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - Themeeny7 - Aug. 07, 2013
(Aug. 07, 2013 1:47 AM)Sorablader Wrote: I would like to make a Character Request:
Name: Emma Rozoni (Is it okay if I could make a girl )
Beyblade: Flash Blaze TR145RDF
Age: 12
Gender: Girl
Special Moves: Burning Blaze Assault, 5 Flames of Fury, Sol Emerald Blast
Biography: Orphan girl. Seeking for a family. Otherwise she is a happy energetic girl who controls fire.
Bey Description:
Face: Depicts of the Sun.[Real Face]
Clear Wheel: From Sol Blaze but color is Purple
Metal Wheel: Burn- Color is Red with White stripes
Spin Track: White with Red wheels.
Performance Tip: Color is purple.
When Emma gets mad her bey catches fire and her hair, clothes, and eyes turn into fire. I will attempt to add your beyblade character to the story. Sorry I took so long, was making chapter 2. And yes, it can be girl or a boy I don't care as long as your beyblade request makes sense and it does so I don't mind. I might be able to make a chapter with her today. But can you describe the special moves more? And what type is her beyblade, attack, defence, stamina, or ballence?
chapter 2 is up
(Aug. 07, 2013 2:33 AM)Themeeny7 Wrote:
(Aug. 07, 2013 1:47 AM)Sorablader Wrote: I would like to make a Character Request:
Name: Emma Rozoni (Is it okay if I could make a girl )
Beyblade: Flash Blaze TR145RDF
Age: 12
Gender: Girl
Special Moves: Burning Blaze Assault, 5 Flames of Fury, Sol Emerald Blast
Biography: Orphan girl. Seeking for a family. Otherwise she is a happy energetic girl who controls fire.
Bey Description:
Face: Depicts of the Sun.[Real Face]
Clear Wheel: From Sol Blaze but color is Purple
Metal Wheel: Burn- Color is Red with White stripes
Spin Track: White with Red wheels.
Performance Tip: Color is purple.
When Emma gets mad her bey catches fire and her hair, clothes, and eyes turn into fire. I will attempt to add your beyblade character to the story. Sorry I took so long, was making chapter 2. And yes, it can be girl or a boy I don't care as long as your beyblade request makes sense and it does so I don't mind. I might be able to make a chapter with her today. But can you describe the special moves more? And what type is her beyblade, attack, defence, stamina, or ballence? Add those changes and then I will include her into chapter 3, and maybe have a battle.
chapter 2 is up
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - кαмυι カムイ - Aug. 07, 2013
Balance
Burning Blaze Assault-Sends down Meteors from the air
5 Flames of Fury-Hits the bey five times in a row. On final strike Blaze hits with flaming matal Wheel.
Sol Emerald Blast-Hits with the power of the Sol Emeralds and blasts the bey out the stadium.
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - Themeeny7 - Aug. 07, 2013
(Aug. 07, 2013 2:57 AM)Sorablader Wrote: Balance
Burning Blaze Assault-Sends down Meteors from the air
5 Flames of Fury-Hits the bey five times in a row. On final strike Blaze hits with flaming matal Wheel.
Sol Emerald Blast-Hits with the power of the Sol Emeralds and blasts the bey out the stadium.
Alright thank you. I am writing chapter 3 as we speak. I will split it into two parts so you can see your character inrtoduced, however. Is it okay if I make her a blader and a mechanic at the same time?
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - кαмυι カムイ - Aug. 07, 2013
As long she keeps her flame temper. lol
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - Themeeny7 - Aug. 07, 2013
(Aug. 07, 2013 3:20 AM)Sorablader Wrote: As long she keeps her flame temper. lol
Oops Read chapter 3, she actually used it lol
Edit: I thought you said keeps her flame temper in controll :l Sorry about that rofl
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - кαмυι カムイ - Aug. 07, 2013
I hope she uses it alot. I like flames. By the way she has a short temper.
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - Themeeny7 - Aug. 07, 2013
(Aug. 07, 2013 3:29 AM)Sorablader Wrote: I hope she uses it alot. I like flames. By the way she has a short temper.
Ah okay thanks for telling me that I will try to make her use it as much as possible without it being too overused.
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - кαмυι カムイ - Aug. 07, 2013
Probably in a beybattle.
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - Themeeny7 - Aug. 07, 2013
(Aug. 07, 2013 3:35 AM)Sorablader Wrote: Probably in a beybattle.
Yeah. My character is sort of annoying at times though so probobally at him too xD
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - FeedFear - Aug. 07, 2013
i would like to add a character but don't rush to put him in if you don't want to
name:Kobe K. Ulinzi
beyblade: if zero-g is allowed, samurai genbull bd145r2f/if not basalt "xuan wu"(dark green orso) bd145r2f
age:15
gender:male
special move: turtle distortion, zero ver.: bey speeds up and circles around the edge causing gravity to to distort and makes all light beys lose traction to be hit later. normal ver.: instead of just going in coircles it ticks in the middle of the stadium.
bio:a pretty normal guy who smiles and taunts most of the time but knows when to retreat inside his shell.
face: genbull
normal bey
clear wheel:N/A or dark green
fusion wheel: nothing special
track and bottom: black and dark green
zero g
chrome wheel:green camo hexagon stickers
crystal wheel: dark green
track and bottom:same as above
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - Themeeny7 - Aug. 07, 2013
(Aug. 07, 2013 3:43 AM)Ifrit Wrote: i would like to add a character but don't rush to put him in if you don't want to
name:Kobe K. Ulinzi
beyblade: if zero-g is allowed, samurai genbull bd145r2f/if not basalt "xuan wu"(dark green orso) bd145r2f
age:15
gender:male
special move: turtle distortion, zero ver.: bey speeds up and circles around the edge causing gravity to to distort and makes all light beys lose traction to be hit later. normal ver.: instead of just going in coircles it ticks in the middle of the stadium.
bio:a pretty normal guy who smiles and taunts most of the time but knows when to retreat inside his shell.
face: genbull
normal bey
clear wheel:N/A or dark green
fusion wheel: nothing special
track and bottom: black and dark green
zero g
chrome wheel:green camo hexagon stickers
crystal wheel: dark green
track and bottom:same as above Sure I can put him in. I dont understand the shell thing though. Is he a teenage mutant ninja turtle or something ? xD I am still going to start writing chapter 4 so I can easily put him in as one of the members of Team Flame Universe. Also, can I shorten it's energy ring name to xuan?
Chapter 3 is done
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - FeedFear - Aug. 07, 2013
yes you can shorten it to xuan. and the shell is supposed to represent introvertedness(if you know what i mean)
i was impossing that he is bi polar since he uses an attack defense mix beyblade
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - Themeeny7 - Aug. 07, 2013
(Aug. 07, 2013 3:59 AM)Ifrit Wrote: i was impossing that he is bi polar since he uses an attack defense mix beyblade
That's called anti attack, and having a anti attack beyblade doesn't make you bipolar :l I don't really want to add any disorders or diseases into the story either because it may offend readers with that disorder/disease.
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - FeedFear - Aug. 07, 2013
dude if i can deal with it they can deal with it but i respect your decision
but offense and defense are supposes to be [b]polar[b] opposites and i know it is called anti attack but i was trying to make the point that they are on opposite spectrems in pop culture
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - Themeeny7 - Aug. 07, 2013
Edit: I am dropping this subject. I am also declining your character request due to the posts you have sent, only because I don't want to include negative things like such :I
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - FeedFear - Aug. 07, 2013
bipolar is defined by bursts of hysteria followed by dips of depression(but sometimes this causes anger, i would know) throughout the day and it isn't so much his type but i wanted him to have a duality/nature/balance theme in general because some turtles act aggressively but are still defensive.
but i agree this is going to go on for a while so lets just stop here ok but just know i understand where you are coming from and respect your views
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - Themeeny7 - Aug. 07, 2013
Alright ty. You can make a new character request, just nothing related to disorders and no Zero-g if you read the story :l
Hey guys, I'm going to finish typing chapter 4 and then I'm going to call it quits :l It's late and I'm sort of tired at the moment- sorry.
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - FeedFear - Aug. 07, 2013
I included two versions one for zero-g and one for normal,
instead of giving him bi polar give him
a personality of mania, really upbeat and intense and pretty irratible
fixed
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - Themeeny7 - Aug. 07, 2013
Alright ty. Can you edit your request and take away the Zero-g part though? it makes it harder for me to find what I need to include for the story when you do it that way :l
RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - FeedFear - Aug. 07, 2013
EDIT:
name:Kobe K. Ulinzi
beyblade: basalt "xuan wu"(dark green orso) bd145r2f
age:15
gender:male
special move: turtle distortion,normal ver.: instead of just going in circles it ticks in the middle of the stadium.
bio:a pretty energetic guy who smiles and taunts most of the time but can get iritated quickly
face: genbull
normal bey
clear wheel:N/A or dark green
fusion wheel: nothing special
track and bottom: black and dark green
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