never mind..... Kyuubi, youve got mail!
The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story)
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Okay, if someone posts there character on the thread, it will be ignored (From Bladerpiguy200 until I say so).
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(Dec. 19, 2010 10:03 PM)Kyuubi-Master Wrote: Okay, if someone posts there character on the thread, it will be ignored (From Bladerpiguy200 until I say so).
sorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorry i meant to PM it to ya..... i edited it and did just that, soooooooooooooooooooo,,,,, can you put me in? I RRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAALLLLLLLLLLLLYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY want to be in your awesome story!!!!!
Yes, but in the tournament Arc only.
oh, thanks. *PHEW*
Change of plan! To those of you I said would be in the next chapter I'm sorry, but I need the space for a different battle. This one will take up the entire chapter. Read this chapter until the end and you'll understand what battle I'm talking about. I'll post tomorrow for sure because of it. RockAries7000 will like the end of this chapter.
Chapter 12
I went to arena 4, as my chart told me to. Waiting for me was a kid of about 10 years old with spiky blue, yes blue, hair dark sunglasses.
"Your Alex?" I asked.
"Of course I am! Who else would I be, freakin' Charley Brown?" He responded.
"Watch your tongue or I'm gonna have to watch it for ya!" I said while raising my launcher.
"Three!"
"Two!"
"One!"
"Go Shoooot!" Said everyone in the area.
"Go Rudolf! Rapid assault!" Said Alex.
His Bey, Snow Rudolf Thin145 Bell, was literally smacking Blowfish left and right. for every attac it used, it rotated in a way that made it attack the other side. It was odd. Rudolf was a stamina type!
"Your probably wondering how I keep attacking like this. It's the bottom. There's a little ball in it like a bell would have and it causes the bey to loose balance. But the way in which the bottom was built, it regains balance just as fast causing Rudolf to swerve like that."
'This isn't good,' I thought, 'I need to think up something fast.'
"Alright Blowfish, Special Move, Waterwall Barrage!" I said.
Because of how close Rudolf was to Blowfish, he was sent flying on to the outer edge of the stadium. However, the ball in the bottom caused him to swerve right back at Blowfish.
"Beat him out of the middle Rudolf!" Said Alex.
Rudolf came down at such speed that, Blowfish was nearly knocked out as well.
"Rudolf, it's time. Special Move! Jingle Bells!" He said.
Then, the weirdest thing happened. His bey started to move in odd patterns and emitted a strange sound. Eventually I realized what the sound was. It wasn't really a sound at all. His Bey was playing Jingle Bells! Almost as soon as I figured that out, a colourful musical note flew at Blowfish.
"Dodge, Blowfish!" I said quickly. He evaded it just in time.
"Keep it going!" Said Alex.
He shot a musical note I dodged. He shot a musical note again, I dodged again. This went for about 10 minutes until I decided to act.
"Down the Blowfish!" I said.
"Ha! You want to lose so badly, here ya go. Blast him Rudolf!"
The Musical note hit Blowfish head on, but did almost no damage. My plan had worked! His special move only worked when I was on the wall because I couldn't move too fast. But if I attacked head-on without fear, it did nothing.
"Momentum Smash!" I said.
Blowfish hit Rudolf dead-on. Rudolf was sent flying straight past Alex's head.
"Carp! I lost!" Said Alex, whipping off his sunglasses violently and walking away.
I won my first match! Just three more until the finals and hopefully, Ino.
"The next match will be between Ino Kagetuchi Vs. Rez McMahon!" Said the announcer into his microphone.
"REZ!?" I said.
In my sig there is a link to a story. Can you guys do me a favour and read then posting in it about what you think about it? It belongs to alexscott and I'm helping by coming up with characters and such and he says the more people post, the more often he'll post or something like that. I really want to see my characters used! As a favour to me!
Chapter 12
I went to arena 4, as my chart told me to. Waiting for me was a kid of about 10 years old with spiky blue, yes blue, hair dark sunglasses.
"Your Alex?" I asked.
"Of course I am! Who else would I be, freakin' Charley Brown?" He responded.
"Watch your tongue or I'm gonna have to watch it for ya!" I said while raising my launcher.
"Three!"
"Two!"
"One!"
"Go Shoooot!" Said everyone in the area.
"Go Rudolf! Rapid assault!" Said Alex.
His Bey, Snow Rudolf Thin145 Bell, was literally smacking Blowfish left and right. for every attac it used, it rotated in a way that made it attack the other side. It was odd. Rudolf was a stamina type!
"Your probably wondering how I keep attacking like this. It's the bottom. There's a little ball in it like a bell would have and it causes the bey to loose balance. But the way in which the bottom was built, it regains balance just as fast causing Rudolf to swerve like that."
'This isn't good,' I thought, 'I need to think up something fast.'
"Alright Blowfish, Special Move, Waterwall Barrage!" I said.
Because of how close Rudolf was to Blowfish, he was sent flying on to the outer edge of the stadium. However, the ball in the bottom caused him to swerve right back at Blowfish.
"Beat him out of the middle Rudolf!" Said Alex.
Rudolf came down at such speed that, Blowfish was nearly knocked out as well.
"Rudolf, it's time. Special Move! Jingle Bells!" He said.
Then, the weirdest thing happened. His bey started to move in odd patterns and emitted a strange sound. Eventually I realized what the sound was. It wasn't really a sound at all. His Bey was playing Jingle Bells! Almost as soon as I figured that out, a colourful musical note flew at Blowfish.
"Dodge, Blowfish!" I said quickly. He evaded it just in time.
"Keep it going!" Said Alex.
He shot a musical note I dodged. He shot a musical note again, I dodged again. This went for about 10 minutes until I decided to act.
"Down the Blowfish!" I said.
"Ha! You want to lose so badly, here ya go. Blast him Rudolf!"
The Musical note hit Blowfish head on, but did almost no damage. My plan had worked! His special move only worked when I was on the wall because I couldn't move too fast. But if I attacked head-on without fear, it did nothing.
"Momentum Smash!" I said.
Blowfish hit Rudolf dead-on. Rudolf was sent flying straight past Alex's head.
"Carp! I lost!" Said Alex, whipping off his sunglasses violently and walking away.
I won my first match! Just three more until the finals and hopefully, Ino.
"The next match will be between Ino Kagetuchi Vs. Rez McMahon!" Said the announcer into his microphone.
"REZ!?" I said.
In my sig there is a link to a story. Can you guys do me a favour and read then posting in it about what you think about it? It belongs to alexscott and I'm helping by coming up with characters and such and he says the more people post, the more often he'll post or something like that. I really want to see my characters used! As a favour to me!
cool and whoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
So i am Next right?
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Kyuubi read my character on page 6 i really wanna be in it please Kyuubi please
I'm not even going to say anything because I know I'll get banned for it.
will i be in it again?
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Depends on if I have a stroke of genius involving Arix...Just did! LOL!
ha! well i gotta admit you're doing very well on this story!
Thanx! BTW, in your sig, you forgot the Tip.
no it's usernames one for me as a gift, he's having trouble with the tip and hes making it now...
yeah, hope it will be up soon, but he might be able to make a 3d batle, mine against his...
(Dec. 11, 2010 3:19 PM)Dracovianauis Wrote: new charcter xd
name: shadow rokazu
Age: 11
Bey: Wood Ninja SH110 SHRSF (R/L)
Bey description: Wood: 4 lobes facing right with small spikes on the rear end
Ninja: same shape as Bull but with small shurikens pointing outwards and dark green in color
SH110: similar to T125 except shorter and has a shuriken built in
SHRSF: SHuriken Rubber Sharp-Flat: similar to RSF except it has a rubber shuriken surrounding it.
Type: attack
Special move(s):
1 shuriken wave: shurikens fly out of the track horiantally.
2 shuriken grave: W- ninja flies up and sends a shower of shurikens down trapping the opponent bey in a spot then transforms into a shuriken and slams down on it, bouncing off after impact with the shurikens dissappearing and W-Ninja transforming back into a bey .
No offense but, shuriken obsession!
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sorry for late post, yeah i do like ninjas but what if i sent a bey based on zerkers.... =))
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MOAR STORY MOAR MOAR MOAR!!!
lol but seriously,its been 10 days since a new chapter,please make more
thx 
lol but seriously,its been 10 days since a new chapter,please make more
thx
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hi mate sorry about this but MORE STORY PLEASE
kyubbi can you please make the next part
W
when can i be in it
when can i be in it
kyuubi it has been forever since the last part can you please make a knew one.