The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story)
Poll: Is the story bad, decent good, or great?
| Great |
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36 |
| Good |
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5 |
| Decent |
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4 |
| Bad |
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9 |
| Total: | 100% | 54 vote(s) |
if you dont believe us here is the link
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Fury-Capricorn-100HF <- offtopic
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Fury-Capricorn-100HF <- offtopic
Jenshi Ogawa age-1 3
Bey -Lava Oni 125 FT
What bey looks like- Lava wheel has 6 jagged blades that cause recoil damage when hit.
Energy Ring-Orange & Green glows yellow when battling.
FT-Fury Technique. FT make the bey heavy causing no lift from ground.
Special Move: Inferno Blaze - The bey becomes invisible then instantly it's transported on top of opposing bey then the tip digs into bey causing fire to burn deep inside opposing be
Jenshi Ogawa -13
Bey- Lava Oni 125 FT
Father died when Jenshi was 4.
Lava Oni and Jenshi are great partners.
Jenshi is super kind and has a great sense of humour.
Bey -Lava Oni 125 FT
What bey looks like- Lava wheel has 6 jagged blades that cause recoil damage when hit.
Energy Ring-Orange & Green glows yellow when battling.
FT-Fury Technique. FT make the bey heavy causing no lift from ground.
Special Move: Inferno Blaze - The bey becomes invisible then instantly it's transported on top of opposing bey then the tip digs into bey causing fire to burn deep inside opposing be
Jenshi Ogawa -13
Bey- Lava Oni 125 FT
Father died when Jenshi was 4.
Lava Oni and Jenshi are great partners.
Jenshi is super kind and has a great sense of humour.
hey kyuubi when are you gonna make the next part?
Srry but he said he would not answer any question because:
1) His to busy (I think)
2) He does not want to spoil but im not sure about asking him when's the next part
So Yeah
1) His to busy (I think)
2) He does not want to spoil but im not sure about asking him when's the next part
So Yeah
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oh well could you give me a list of all the fusion wheel names then lord Wolfblade
ok thnx Kai-V i really appreciate it
new charcter xd
name: shadow rokazu
Age: 11
Bey: Wood Ninja SH110 SHRSF (R/L)
Bey description: Wood: 4 lobes facing right with small spikes on the rear end
Ninja: same shape as Bull but with small shurikens pointing outwards and dark green in color
SH110: similar to T125 except shorter and has a shuriken built in
SHRSF: SHuriken Rubber Sharp-Flat: similar to RSF except it has a rubber shuriken surrounding it.
Type: attack
Special move(s):
1 shuriken wave: shurikens fly out of the track horiantally.
2 shuriken grave: W- ninja flies up and sends a shower of shurikens down trapping the opponent bey in a spot then transforms into a shuriken and slams down on it, bouncing off after impact with the shurikens dissappearing and W-Ninja transforming back into a bey .
name: shadow rokazu
Age: 11
Bey: Wood Ninja SH110 SHRSF (R/L)
Bey description: Wood: 4 lobes facing right with small spikes on the rear end
Ninja: same shape as Bull but with small shurikens pointing outwards and dark green in color
SH110: similar to T125 except shorter and has a shuriken built in
SHRSF: SHuriken Rubber Sharp-Flat: similar to RSF except it has a rubber shuriken surrounding it.
Type: attack
Special move(s):
1 shuriken wave: shurikens fly out of the track horiantally.
2 shuriken grave: W- ninja flies up and sends a shower of shurikens down trapping the opponent bey in a spot then transforms into a shuriken and slams down on it, bouncing off after impact with the shurikens dissappearing and W-Ninja transforming back into a bey .
![[Image: kiritoxasua_tag_1_crop_awesome_by_kujikato-d8mkgbh.png]](https://orig08.deviantart.net/b598/f/2015/080/f/6/kiritoxasua_tag_1_crop_awesome_by_kujikato-d8mkgbh.png)
please post the next part
i loved it now my caracterxf
Name: Skyress/Anemone
Age: 13
Bey:desert faroh EC145XB
what do the parts do: ec(eternal claws basicly the round center that holds the claws spin)145 XB(extreme ball)
faroh is a bull like clear wheel but it is made of metal so it is heavy and it has a sand like texcture and it is yeallow and the face is clear green, desert its a completly round metal wheel painted gold
i am the bad guy and i have 2 personalitys the good one is Skyress and the bad one is Anemone Skyress is one of the main carecters best friends but later they discober i am a bad guy
speaciel move: sand crusher: the beyblade jumps and then cames down with a sand made snake
Name: Skyress/Anemone
Age: 13
Bey:desert faroh EC145XB
what do the parts do: ec(eternal claws basicly the round center that holds the claws spin)145 XB(extreme ball)
faroh is a bull like clear wheel but it is made of metal so it is heavy and it has a sand like texcture and it is yeallow and the face is clear green, desert its a completly round metal wheel painted gold
i am the bad guy and i have 2 personalitys the good one is Skyress and the bad one is Anemone Skyress is one of the main carecters best friends but later they discober i am a bad guy
speaciel move: sand crusher: the beyblade jumps and then cames down with a sand made snake
First, does anyone read the OP anymore? Second, sorry I haven't posted. My teachers have been piling on the homework before the christmas holidays and I have to study for a math test on the day before the last day of school. The reason is that my teacher is Scottish and as a tradition, she has to have evrything finished before the New Year. WILL POST SOON (Today or tomorrow)! Look forward to Friday because I'll be on vacation and be able to post like crazy!
Also, skyforce, if your talking about the ancient egyptian leaders in the bey's name, it's Pharoah
No offense but, shuriken obsession!
Also, skyforce, if your talking about the ancient egyptian leaders in the bey's name, it's Pharoah
(Dec. 11, 2010 3:19 PM)Dracovianauis Wrote: new charcter xd
name: shadow rokazu
Age: 11
Bey: Wood Ninja SH110 SHRSF (R/L)
Bey description: Wood: 4 lobes facing right with small spikes on the rear end
Ninja: same shape as Bull but with small shurikens pointing outwards and dark green in color
SH110: similar to T125 except shorter and has a shuriken built in
SHRSF: SHuriken Rubber Sharp-Flat: similar to RSF except it has a rubber shuriken surrounding it.
Type: attack
Special move(s):
1 shuriken wave: shurikens fly out of the track horiantally.
2 shuriken grave: W- ninja flies up and sends a shower of shurikens down trapping the opponent bey in a spot then transforms into a shuriken and slams down on it, bouncing off after impact with the shurikens dissappearing and W-Ninja transforming back into a bey .
No offense but, shuriken obsession!
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the story of beyblade epicness make more of these dude i look forward to the next one !
I cant wait for the next part this story is amazing and awesome
I have one
name Rezora Takuvitch
age :14
Bey: shell cancer gdc 165 ewb
shell: Looks like two claws mainly circular with two blades and medium bumps on the end.
gdc 165. gravity Double circle like the gravity bowl except the bearings go around the core so the bearing go round and round, and theres one pair over the other. It's weird hight and extra weight gives it a advantage.
ewb extra wide ball of great friction and had to move. Like the xf ti the wf except with ball.
special move
1. momentum claw smash. with the gdc it gains momentum kneel down and smashes opponents to the ground.
2. momentum grind. the less powerful it uses the circular part to rub off the opponent with the kneel effect.
plot: parter/rival
personality weird yet well meaning
quote" Cool... (in whisper) what just happened"
momentum claw smash revise.
It does it with the bumps.
name Rezora Takuvitch
age :14
Bey: shell cancer gdc 165 ewb
shell: Looks like two claws mainly circular with two blades and medium bumps on the end.
gdc 165. gravity Double circle like the gravity bowl except the bearings go around the core so the bearing go round and round, and theres one pair over the other. It's weird hight and extra weight gives it a advantage.
ewb extra wide ball of great friction and had to move. Like the xf ti the wf except with ball.
special move
1. momentum claw smash. with the gdc it gains momentum kneel down and smashes opponents to the ground.
2. momentum grind. the less powerful it uses the circular part to rub off the opponent with the kneel effect.
plot: parter/rival
personality weird yet well meaning
quote" Cool... (in whisper) what just happened"
momentum claw smash revise.
It does it with the bumps.
revise
shell Looks more like two claws raping around the center.
shell Looks more like two claws raping around the center.
Name:Blake Hiratomi
Age:13
Bey: Enigma Ifrit DC120SWB
What The Parts Do
nigma is a Fusion Wheel that that has four claws and cuts through the opponent DC120 is Dragon Claws witch are the on spin track, and SWB is Swift Wide Ball
Special Move: Enigma Claw Disorientation, which what it does it circles the opponent bey accouple of times, the claws come out and it digs under the opponent bey
Enigma Wheel= Stamina/Attack
Age:13
Bey: Enigma Ifrit DC120SWB
What The Parts Do
nigma is a Fusion Wheel that that has four claws and cuts through the opponent DC120 is Dragon Claws witch are the on spin track, and SWB is Swift Wide BallSpecial Move: Enigma Claw Disorientation, which what it does it circles the opponent bey accouple of times, the claws come out and it digs under the opponent bey
Enigma Wheel= Stamina/Attack
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Read the OP.
what is the OP??
Opening Post.
Okay, I have a comprimise. If you want your character now, it will only be seen once. For example, in the tournament arc, I'll need a few characters, but they'll be minor.
Chapter 11
"Three!"
"Two!"
"One!"
"Go SHOOOOT!"
Our Beys raced off. Actually, it was only Blowfish. Her bey was already in the middle.
"Alright, Blowfish, stop and smash!" I said.
Blowfish rocketed towards the the center to attack, but then, the seemingly impossible happened. Her Bey jumped!
"Andromeda! Crush him!" Said Ino.
Her Bey, Andromeda, dropped and hit Blowfish in the face (pun not intended) with her Tip.
"It's a bit early but, go Blowfish! Special Move! Waterwall Barrage!" I said.
I sent her Andromeda flying, but it recovered quickly.
"Nice skills kid! But let's see how you handle this! Invisible Wipeout!" She said.
Then, Andromeda disappeared. Blowfish started to wobble slightly.
"To the edge, Blowfish!" I said.
"Alright comeback and protect your self with Mystical Wave!" Said Ino.
As she had told her, Andromeda became visible again, but there was nothing special except... she was vibrating?!
"Attack Blowfish!"
He tried, but instead of heading straight at her, he rocketed quickly around Andromeda, not even getting close.
"It's over kid! Throw him away!" She said.
Andromeda started to lean over and threw Blowfish out of the arena. I... lost.
"Ha! You weren't even worth my time!" She said. "Oh man! I'm late for the tournament!"
Wait a tournament!? I ran as fast as I could. I made it just in time to register. It may not have been a long battle, but the lines at tournaments are killers.
"My first battle is against a kid named... Alex." I said. "That defeat hurt, but I'll pay her back! Watch out Ino, I'm coming for ya!"
Okay, I have a comprimise. If you want your character now, it will only be seen once. For example, in the tournament arc, I'll need a few characters, but they'll be minor.
Chapter 11
"Three!"
"Two!"
"One!"
"Go SHOOOOT!"
Our Beys raced off. Actually, it was only Blowfish. Her bey was already in the middle.
"Alright, Blowfish, stop and smash!" I said.
Blowfish rocketed towards the the center to attack, but then, the seemingly impossible happened. Her Bey jumped!
"Andromeda! Crush him!" Said Ino.
Her Bey, Andromeda, dropped and hit Blowfish in the face (pun not intended) with her Tip.
"It's a bit early but, go Blowfish! Special Move! Waterwall Barrage!" I said.
I sent her Andromeda flying, but it recovered quickly.
"Nice skills kid! But let's see how you handle this! Invisible Wipeout!" She said.
Then, Andromeda disappeared. Blowfish started to wobble slightly.
"To the edge, Blowfish!" I said.
"Alright comeback and protect your self with Mystical Wave!" Said Ino.
As she had told her, Andromeda became visible again, but there was nothing special except... she was vibrating?!
"Attack Blowfish!"
He tried, but instead of heading straight at her, he rocketed quickly around Andromeda, not even getting close.
"It's over kid! Throw him away!" She said.
Andromeda started to lean over and threw Blowfish out of the arena. I... lost.
"Ha! You weren't even worth my time!" She said. "Oh man! I'm late for the tournament!"
Wait a tournament!? I ran as fast as I could. I made it just in time to register. It may not have been a long battle, but the lines at tournaments are killers.
"My first battle is against a kid named... Alex." I said. "That defeat hurt, but I'll pay her back! Watch out Ino, I'm coming for ya!"
cool mate
Awesome story!
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yea ill go with that i like that compromise
Also, part of the compromise is that your ideas are sent to me by PM to reduce the clutter. And people, please don't ask when new ones will be up, they'll be up when I have time. On that note, I know I said that I'd post on Friday, but I forgot my key in my house so I spent 3 hours at my old babysitters house. Then, my mom drove my sister and I to Wal-mart for groceries. And last, I went to a Thai restaurant 1 hour away from my house and by the time I got home it was 1:00 AM.