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The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - Kyuubi-Master - Nov. 18, 2010
People in Book 1:RockAries7000
People in Book 2:
People in Book 3:
If you want a character, use this template:
Name:
Age:
Bey:
What The Parts Do
If you made your own parts)REQUESTS WILL NOT BE TAKEN FOR A LITTLE WHILE. ALL REQUESTS AFTER BrandonW. WILL NOT BE ADDED UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE.
Here are the first three character (you guys will make up the rest):
Name: Hitaiyo Inimaki
Age: 13
Bey: Bubble Blowfish BSK145PWB
What The Parts Do/Look Like: Bubble- Eight metal spheres surrounding the Clear Wheel
Blowfish- Kind of like Leone but smooth with little bumps
BSK(Blast Spike)145- 145 track with eight spikes (you'll learn what Blast means later)
PWB(Polish Wide Ball)- Basically, WB, but with the plastic of PD.
Name: Akashi Inimaki
Age: 10
Bey: Archer Saggitario HC145 PS
What The Parts Do/Look Like: Archer- A Clear Wheel compatible version of Saggitario
HC(Hooked Claw)145- The C145 Track with hooks on the claws
PS(Polish Sharp)- Basically, Sharp, but with the plastic of PD
Name: Kaila Crystel
Age: 13
Bey: Shadow Bunny MCH145RQ
What The Parts Do/Look Like:Bunny- This clear wheel has 2 ear-like protrusions. On each protrusion side there are five tooth-like blades.
Shadow- Shadow is a light-weight Fusion Wheel like Dark, but the wheel is backwards with the spikes doing the damage
MCH(Move/Change)145- This Track is a fusion of the Move and Change Tracks
RQ(Rubber Quake)- A rubber version of Quake.
On with the story...
Chapter 1
It was a beautiful day in Arichi Town. The birds were chirping, the sun was shining, beyblades were spinning... Why beyblades you ask? This was the town in which beyblade was invented!
"Hey," yelled an unfortunately familiar voice,"Let's have another battle, Bro."
"Why waste my time?" I asked,"I'll just beat you again."
"C'mon," he insisted,"Please?"
"Oh all right," I said, "just to get you off my back."
"Three!"
"Two!"
"One!"
"GO SHOOT!" We yelled.
"Attack, Saggitario!" Said my brother
I sighed. He still didn't understand he had a stamina type so attacking was a bad idea. Besides, Bubble Blowfish can block all of the attacks he possibly could throw at us. Or so I thought. I noticed something odd. It did a little damage!
"Whoa! What just happened?!" I said.
"I changed my C145 to HC145." He said
'Oh,' I remembered,'this must be that new track he bought'
"Well, you've had your fun, but now it's over." I said
"Not again." he said, pouting.
"Oh ya! SPECIAL MOVE! WATERWALL BARRAGE!" I yelled.
Soon, an enormous torrent of water sprayed from the edges of Blowfish, creating a wall of water that pushed him out of the stadium.
"Aw man!" He said,"I need a special move too!"
"One day you'll get one Akashi," I said, "One day."
"Okay Hitaiyo." My brother said.
Sorry for the long post.
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - Dude - Nov. 18, 2010
(Nov. 18, 2010 10:19 PM)Kyuubi-Master Wrote: This was the town in which beyblade was invented!
Holy carp, must be a really old town
Also, I would have laughed so much if the special move was actually Waterfall, instead of Waterwall...
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - Kyuubi-Master - Nov. 18, 2010
WOW! I was thinking about waterfall while I wrote that! Can you read minds?
Also, I'm going to post every day and this will be a trilogy.
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - rockaries7000 - Nov. 18, 2010
Name: rez mcmahon
Age: 14
Bey: magma scorpian sb145 f
What The Parts Do: magma a mix of flame and rock
sb145 is slasing blades that extend a little bit for the fusion wheel that can cause damage
f is just flat
attack type
special move magma stinger = blades extend more and are like there on fire and smashes other bey out area
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - Kyuubi-Master - Nov. 19, 2010
"Dad! Can Kaila come over?" I yelled up the stairs.
Kaila has always been my best friend. We met back in Kindergarten. I remember it like it was yesterday...
...
"Hello, class. Today is a special day." Said my kindergarten teacher, Miss Jewel, "Today, we have a new student named, Kaila""Hi." She said in front of the class,"I'm Kaila Crystel."
I was a shy child back then. I hid away in the back to avoid eye contact.
"Hey you in the back," she said, pointing a finger at me,"come here for second"
Doing as I was told, I came up front.
"You're my new boyfriend," she said, "so now, tell me what a boyfriend is?"
I did the most sensible thing in the world at that moment. I ran.She caught up to me within seconds. I had to tell her. I told her it was a boy who really liked a girl. She looked sick.
"Eeeewwwwww! I never want a boyfriend ever!" She said "Well, can we be normal friends?"
"Uuuuuhhhh... sure"
And to this day we've been the best of friends.
...
"Sure," said my dad, "but if your going to beyblade, do it a Hinta Park please."I once broke our new big screen TV while creating my special move.
"Okay." I said.
After an hour of waiting, she finally arrived.
"FINALLY! Let's go to Hinta Park." I said.
She agreed and we went off to Hinta Park. She was really eager to go today. I had no idea why. I never lost to her in a beybattle before, what's different now?
"Now, let's start this thing!" She said.
"Alright." I said.
"Three!"
"Two!"
"One!"
"GO SHOOT!" We yelled.
I noticed something weird about her Bey today. It was bouncing higher than usual!
"You like the upgrade?" She said, slyly,"I got the new Shadow Metal Wheel and got RQ!"
Blowfish started taking massive blows from the top.
'Well, I'll just beat her like normal.' I thought.
"SPECIAL MOVE! WATERWALL BARRAGE!" I screamed.
"Not today buddy." She said calmly.
I realized too late what she meant. The new Shadow Wheel is a reverse version of Dark so the blades were sticking counter-clockwise which meant... she could cut through the Waterfall Barrage!
"Gotcha! SPECIAL MOVE! SHADOW CUTTER!" She said.
She then hit Blowfish in his only weak spot, in between the Clear Wheel and Metal Wheel. Even with his incredible weight, he was sent flying out of the stadium. Unfortunately for Kaila, Bunny's RQ made her jump out of the Stadium at the same time as Blowfish.
"Well, it's better than losing." She said, shrugging.
"I guess." I said.
"Oh snap!" She said checking her watch,"It's 6:30! Gotta go!"
"Bye." I said, while she ran away.
'I wonder where she went in such a hurry.'
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - rockaries7000 - Nov. 19, 2010
hey man just got a question what gave you the idea for bubble blowfish ?
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - .:J:. - Nov. 19, 2010
Name: Arix Dranity
Age: 16
Beyblade: Orbit Drahelix G90X
Orbit changes during battle to what you need to do, eg. Needs to defend, so it changes shape to look like rock/ earth... needs attack, turns into tornado, needs to be lighter, changs into thermal style... G90 increases gravity around the bey so that if it gets hit up into the sky it comes crashing down again straight away, also it makes all other beys orbit drahelix... X changes shape when needed so if it needed to become an attack type the edge around the WB shoots up and becomes flat, special move Gravity Orbit, it keeps the opponent bey in orbit shoots up the edge of the stadium and chucks the opponents beys out of the stadium, other Orbit Unique orbit!, the parts that change on Orbit detach and spinaround orbit at high speed, making like a ring of parts around it...
all round type bey...
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - Kyuubi-Master - Nov. 19, 2010
(Nov. 19, 2010 9:11 PM)rockaries7000 Wrote: hey man just got a question what gave you the idea for bubble blowfish ?
I was thinking about Aquatic-themed defense types in the Custom MFB Names thread and Blowfish came to mind. For Bubble, I was thinking about a more defensive and powerful version of Poison.
To Nwolf: The original one you created for Night's story? Night's story is actually what inspired me.
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - GIYGAS - ãƒãƒ‹ãƒ¼ - Nov. 20, 2010
Name: Jake Dogeina
Age: 16
Bey: Gravity Perseus GADUWD
What The Parts Do: UWD: Ultimate Wide Defence: A tip that has more stamina and defensive proporties.
GAD: Gyro Armor Defence: A Track that has both AD's build and GB's Special System.
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - Kyuubi-Master - Nov. 20, 2010
Today was a special day, my birthday. Unfortunately, my parents had said last year I wasn't going to have a party. I sighed and got out of bed. Brushed my teeth, took a shower and the works. When I went downstairs, I noticed something strange. My parents weren't there. Normally my family woke up earlier than me on a Saturday morning. It was already 12 o'clock! I walked into the kitchen and noticed a note on the fridge. It read:
"Hello Hitaiyo, have you noticed anything weird today? Like your family not being here? If you ever want to see them again, go to Hinta Park at 3:30 with your Bey.
Sincerely, XXXXXX"
I ran to my room and got out Blowfish. Who ever did this attacked the wrong family.
...
At 3:30 at Hinta park, not a soul was there. I got closer until my eardrums were assulted by a deafening scream.
"SURPRISE!"
I fell back and laughed. Everyone was here my parents, my brother, Kaila and a few of my other friends.
"I thought you said I wasn't having a party." I said to my parents.
"Oh! So you don't want a party? I'll just tell everyone to go then." Said my father.
"No no no! It's okay. I was surprised is all." I said.
"Well, that's the point of a surprise party, isn't it?" Said my mom.
"Now, let's open some presents, shall we?" Said Kaila, eagerly.
From my parents I got an angle compass.
"Thanks!" I said, happily.
From my brither I got a Dragon Winder.
"I need this! I'll be way more powerful now!"
"Sorry I couldn't get you big present like everyone else." He said, sadly.
"It's okay. I needed one of these anyways."
From my other friends I got me the BSK145 accesory, metal spikes.
"Yay! Weight increase."
The best gift of all was from Kaila.
"I hope you like it. It was difficult to get." She said while I opened the small box.
It was exactly what I wanted. A MF-H!
"Thank you, thank you, thank you! I've been wanting one of these for months!" I said happily.
As soon as they came out, every store in a 50 mile radius of my house was sold out for months.
"I went all the way to Lorenzai Town to get it."
That's where she went yesterday!
"Okay, so who's up for a battle?" I said while screwing on the MF-H and adding Blowfish's sticker.
We battled the rest of the day. After I had beaten everyone, they started to leave. When everone had left except my brother and I, something shiny came towards me. My cheek started bleeding.
"Ha! And you call your self a blader?!" Said an unfamiliar voice.
Turned around to see a kid around my age dressed like a cowboy.
"Yes, I do call myself a blader. Are you aswell?" I asked.
"Darn tootin'! I'm Rez McMahon and I'm here to destroy yo' bey there."
I was about to raise my launcher when my brother stopped my arm.
"Let me handle this." He said.
I wanted to tell him it was too dangerous, but I let him go. I knew he would go anyway.
"If you want to get to my brother, YOU'VE GOT TO GO THROUGH ME FIRST!" He said, angrily.
"Ha! I could use a little practice!" Said Rez.
"Three!"
"Two!"
"One!"
"GO SHOOT!" They yelled.
The battle had begun.
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - Flames150 - Nov. 20, 2010
Awesome! I love this story! Anyway I would kinda like to join I guess:
Name: Joseph Taokan
Age: 10
Bey: Aerial Aquila/Eagle WA130WHF
What the parts do/Look like;
Aerial - Helps Aquila soar in the air for aerial attacks. With two wings and two smaller wings in the gaps pushed close the bigger wing.
WHF[Winged Hole Flat] - The width of the performance tip is bigger and shaped as two wings to help it stay balance while wobbling.
Special Move: Aquila Tornado Strike - Aerial Aquila flies up in the air then strikes down attack the opposing bey three times.
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - Kyuubi-Master - Nov. 20, 2010
Would you mind if your special move created three beys that attack instead of one attacking three times? It's easier that way.
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - .:J:. - Nov. 20, 2010
(Nov. 19, 2010 11:23 PM)Kyuubi-Master Wrote:(Nov. 19, 2010 9:11 PM)rockaries7000 Wrote: hey man just got a question what gave you the idea for bubble blowfish ?
I was thinking about Aquatic-themed defense types in the Custom MFB Names thread and Blowfish came to mind. For Bubble, I was thinking about a more defensive and powerful version of Poison.
To Nwolf: The original one you created for Night's story? Night's story is actually what inspired me.
To be honest actually, I designed it for my story, if you read Drahelix is born! the last part of the story, Sonic Drahelix turns into Orbit drahelix, I just wanted to be part of my friends stories...
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - Deadpool - Nov. 20, 2010
I like your story , but it can use a few improvements
Name : Sora Kagamine
Age : 15
Blade /Parts : Divinity Virgo B130 DS
Face : Original Virgo face
Clear Wheel : Virgo , original Virgo clear wheel.
Metal Wheel
ivinity ; Quite circular in shape , but two , double-edged slopes , which provide very-good Upper Attack , even though it was meant for Stamina.Track : B130 :
Ball 130 , similiar to Gb145 , but instead two metal bearings fixed on to the outside , which , when hit , are pushed to the center which absorbs most of the shock .
Bottom : DS :
Defensive sharp , very similiar to SD , but taller and skinnier , resulting in poor balance.
Char. Bio : Orphan , grew up in alley , blah , blah , blah , found blade in trash can.
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - Flames150 - Nov. 20, 2010
(Nov. 20, 2010 3:52 PM)Kyuubi-Master Wrote: Would you mind if your special move created three beys that attack instead of one attacking three times? It's easier that way.Ok! Cool idea! Your way is better.
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - .:J:. - Nov. 20, 2010
are you going to be able to post any more of your story today?
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - Kyuubi-Master - Nov. 20, 2010
To Nwolf
I actually just finished Chapter 4.
To Black-Blade
What kind of improvements?
To rockaries7000
Your special move is going to become overkill.
Chapter 4
"Magma Scorpion, attack!" Said Rez
"Saggitario! Evasion Technique!" Said Akashi.
All of a sudden, Magma Scorpion's dead-on attack...missed. He kept attacking trying to hit Saggitario, but it kept missing. Then it hit me. It was the track and bottom. The hooks on HC145 let it attach to the other Bey and causes it to move away without stamina loss because of the low friction of PS.
"Its gonna take more than a few little tricks to beat me!" Said Rez, confidently,"Rapid attack!"
His attacks started to get more random, more powerful and faster.
"Hold on Saggitario!" Said Akashi, desperately.
"Too late! SPECIAL MOVE! MAGMA STINGER!"
It started getting hotter. Then, three enourmous blades of magma grew out of Rez's Bey's Track. They started to cut at Saggitario's Track!
"Saggitario jump!" Said my brother. He was worried the blades would melt Saggitario.
"Uh uh uh. No can do. Magma Scorpion, attack!"
Magma Scorpion smashed Saggitario right into the air.
"Heh heh." Laughed my brother.
"What's so funny!? You're about to lose!" Said Rez, angrily.
"No, you are. Saggitario! SPECIAL MOVE! DEADLY HARPOON!
Instead of falling to the ground, Saggitario flew straight down on top of Magma Scorpion! He flew back to the edge of the stadium, narrowly missing it.
"Ha! That's all you've got? Well then, it's over! MAGMA STINGER!" Yelled Rez.
"Ya, for you that is." Said my brother.
Then, instead of all three of the blades growing, only two grew to full size! This caused Scorpion to lose all balance and stamina.
"Bu-bu-but how?!" He said, shocked.
"The whole point of my special move was to hit you on the edge of your bey. I hit it so hard, I broke one of the blades off your Track. When you used your special move, the other two grew and you lost your balance. You beat yourself."
"I admit defeat." He said, falling on his knees.
"If you can't beat me, you have no chance of beating my brother." Said Akashi.
"So, who sent you here?" I asked him.
"The Organization." He said quietly
"The what?"
"I can't explain things here," he said,"let's go somewhere safer."
I wondered why anyone would want to destroy my bey.
I know it's kinda short but it's the second one I posted today.
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - .:J:. - Nov. 20, 2010
cool! am i in the next part?
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - Kyuubi-Master - Nov. 20, 2010
Ya, but I can't tell you what happens.
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - .:J:. - Nov. 20, 2010
will it be up today?
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - Kyuubi-Master - Nov. 20, 2010
To é‡åŠ›ãƒšãƒ«ã‚»ã‚¦ã‚¹ and Nwolf, do you mind if I change your last names?
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - .:J:. - Nov. 20, 2010
well with mine it kinda needs to be that... cause Dranity is meant to sound like Drahelix...
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - Kyuubi-Master - Nov. 20, 2010
Oh okay, if é‡åŠ›ãƒšãƒ«ã‚»ã‚¦ã‚¹ doesn't care, don't worry.
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - ROCKSCORPIOROCK - Nov. 20, 2010
THAT'S SICK WHEN R U GOING TO MAKE MORE POST ME OR SEND ME ALL OF THEM BECAUSE THERE VARY INTERESTING
RE: The Battle Of The X-Force! (A Beyblade Story) - Kyuubi-Master - Nov. 20, 2010
First, no all caps please. Second, I make at least one everyday so I don't have anymore right now.