Double post. Sorry. I'm sad to say that I will be closing this story for a bit. Those bullies have gotten to me, yet again. They've pushed me back into depression. I'm sorry guys.
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Frickin Awesome! |
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Pretty Good. |
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Ok. |
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Total: | 100% | 41 vote(s) |
(Jul. 06, 2012 8:57 PM)Emperor Wrote: Epic chapter 31! GO JAKE! So like when USA wins... Or lose, that's the end of this story? Maybe a sequel? And those guys, GRRRR. Why you? You don't deserve to be treated like that. I want to read more of this story and if they do it again, I'll just want to punch them! Well great job!
(Jul. 17, 2012 12:16 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote: I liked pretty much the entire Chinese team, TBH... And i liked Chapter 32 by the way! Whoa, what the hell happened to Karan???
(Jul. 17, 2012 12:17 PM)Death Bro Wrote: Nooooooooooo!
Not Karan!
Shawn will kick your butt Jake.
Great Chapter!
Alfred is my favorite
(Jul. 17, 2012 12:27 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote:(Jul. 17, 2012 12:16 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote: I liked pretty much the entire Chinese team, TBH... And i liked Chapter 32 by the way! Whoa, what the hell happened to Karan???
He was dragged to hell. Sadly.
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(Jul. 17, 2012 12:29 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote:(Jul. 17, 2012 12:27 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote:(Jul. 17, 2012 12:16 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote: I liked pretty much the entire Chinese team, TBH... And i liked Chapter 32 by the way! Whoa, what the hell happened to Karan???
He was dragged to hell. Sadly.
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Oh, I know he's coming back, otherwise you wouldn't have given me his character to use for my story! XD
But I like that concept of that. Makes it suspenseful, and surprisingly realistic! Good idea!
(Jul. 17, 2012 12:17 PM)Death Bro Wrote: Nooooooooooo!
Not Karan!
Jake will kick your butt Shawn
Great Chapter!
Alfred is my favorite
(Jul. 18, 2012 6:40 AM)Stormybob Wrote: It's awesome! For the final battle (Ivan vs. Shawn), I think Ivan should be the one who wins. Everyone goes home, and Karan and the others who "died" were just in a coma. Shawn keep blaming himself for losing, and thinks Taylor wants to dump him. That's why he keeps denying her calls thinking it ws to break up. Taylor finally leaves him a voice mail saying that even though he lost, she knows he did his best, and says she still loves him. The final battle should be 2 chapters long and the part about going home and Shawn blaming himself and all the phone calls should be the Epilogue.
(Jul. 18, 2012 12:57 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote:I like his idea, but I have other plans...(Jul. 18, 2012 6:40 AM)Stormybob Wrote: It's awesome! For the final battle (Ivan vs. Shawn), I think Ivan should be the one who wins. Everyone goes home, and Karan and the others who "died" were just in a coma. Shawn keep blaming himself for losing, and thinks Taylor wants to dump him. That's why he keeps denying her calls thinking it ws to break up. Taylor finally leaves him a voice mail saying that even though he lost, she knows he did his best, and says she still loves him. The final battle should be 2 chapters long and the part about going home and Shawn blaming himself and all the phone calls should be the Epilogue.
While that might sound like a good idea, you really should take that to PM's, because people might disagree...
Also, the creator might have different plans...
But good thought though!