Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [100% Completed. Just needs Approval]

(Mar. 07, 2011  4:15 AM)Bey-Heart Wrote:
(Mar. 06, 2011  11:30 PM)L-Drago rules Wrote: I edited a few things.
Where did you get "Eighteen Spikes" from? The Poison Metal Wheel only has fifteen spikes. Are you blind?
Oops, I reworded it and I must of accidentally put eighteen instead of fifteen.
Bump again...

Ok. Now I think it's ready to be published...
In the SW145 part clockwise is not hyphenated.
Counterclockwise is one word.
I think that instead of Burn Bull 145SD, you should put Burn Bull AD145SD.
Bump

Fixed.
Couldn't it be Burn mold 1-2/Earth mold 1?
this should go up...definitely ad ga i dunno 'bout that maybe i s'pose
Bump

I changed it to DF145 instead of AD145. Since DF145 is on the top-tiers list.
The outdated top-tiers list, you mean?
(Mar. 12, 2011  2:45 PM)GaHooleone Wrote: The outdated top-tiers list, you mean?
Yeah... I haven't looked at the testing for AD145, did it outclass DF145? I wasn't expecting that to happen...
(Mar. 12, 2011  7:56 PM)Bey-Heart Wrote:
(Mar. 12, 2011  2:45 PM)GaHooleone Wrote: The outdated top-tiers list, you mean?
Yeah... I haven't looked at the testing for AD145, did it outclass DF145? I wasn't expecting that to happen...

Both AD145 and 145 outclass DF145, iirc
It goes like this: AD145>145>DF145. The wings on DF145 make it more unbalanced compared to the 'circular' 145 and actually circular AD145.
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Fixed. And I also added that in the SW145 section.
Just to say my Poison Serpent SW145 SD beat my friend's Dark Eagle t125 WD (my friend usually beats me with that combo) quite easily and i think your under estimatung serpent's true power.
(Mar. 27, 2011  5:59 AM)BurningPoison Wrote: Just to say my Poison Serpent SW145 SD beat my friend's Dark Eagle t125 WD (my friend usually beats me with that combo) quite easily and i think your under estimatung serpent's true power.

That is because Dark Eagle T125WD is an awful combination, and you use Hasbro BeyStadiums. Before you act as if we were totally going over something important, read around, you need to learn several things first.
After waiting, and waiting, and more waiting for an approval, I think this Draft is finally finished. Could a Committee Member please read through this and tell me if it is ready or not? In my opinion, it's ready...
Well after reading this much times, (60), I find no flaw OTHER than this:

Quote:Bottom: Semi-Defense

Weight: 0.5 grams

SD is of the "Defense" series of bottoms. It's the smallest of SD, D, and WD

You should change it to:

It's the smallest of Defense Series Performance Tips.
Blamé moi for that, ahah.

How about:
"SD is the smallest of the "Defense" series of Bottoms.

And take out the first sentence
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Thanks for pointing that out. I can't believe I didn't notice that before.

I edited it a bit. I used the Edit that SSJ suggested, but I also took out a bit of the second sentence so it would make sense.

Ok, now it's finished.Joyful_2
AD145 sucks for defense.
Ok, so I see how this draft is done and I contacted Kei. Yes, I actually did and he responded by saying that he is very busy, which he really is.

He did say though that he will get to this Draft as soon as possible.

So, it could even take months for that. So Bey-Heart hold on tight because it will take some time. Since I analyzed this, I see that there are NO mistakes. I suggest that you could get this thread locked, prerhaps?

But ya, you could improve this:

Quote:Defense would be AD145, GB145, BD145, R145 or 230.

Also add H145 at the end, it does have some capabilities.
Also, add Dekailo's combo, LLD SW145MF.
(Apr. 04, 2011  9:03 PM)BeyBladestation Wrote: But ya, you could improve this:

Quote:Defense would be AD145, GB145, BD145, R145 or 230.

Also add H145 at the end, it does have some capabilities.
Any suggestions? I haven't been keeping up to date with the TT Metagame lately. I spent to much time focused on the Hasbro Metagame.

Since when? Even ED145 would be better than H145.