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Hi! I've been on and off this site for a while now, but if you're new or just seeing this I hope you enjoy your stay on the WBO.

Drawing of Vis (hopefully the link works.)

https://imgur.com/a/Hb2Kt

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Drawing of Vis (hopefully the link works.)

https://imgur.com/a/Hb2Kt

long legs, skinny arms but apart from that, really good!

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Drawing of Vis (hopefully the link works.)

https://imgur.com/a/Hb2Kt

long legs, skinny arms but apart from that, really good!

proportions are a little off I accept that. But pretty good for a first attempt. And thanks.

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Hi! I've been on and off this site for a while now, but if you're new or just seeing this I hope you enjoy your stay on the WBO.

@[MWF] so is there going to be some kind of section of the story where Vis becomes kind of like Shu does? (based off Blind Eye post in Character thread)...

There could be two possibilities,
1. Vis pulls a shu somewhere in the story
2. The snake pit is working with pilito and created mS to be like the dark beyblade equivalent of iS and Blind eye is a different blader.

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Sorry guys... I wasn't there for the past two months... I was really very very busy. So sorry...
But I wanted to ask something.
1. If I don't write the first arc then will I be excluded from writing anything in the second and third arc? My characters are there I guess...
2. Is Kage a boy or girl? Sorry but I saw posts referring to Kage as both he and she. I'm confused...

1. No you won't be excluded.
2. Kage is a she

sorry for the blunt answers...

Thanks for clearing the confusion :-)

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blind eye and project Spectrum are canon to the story.

just a little info.

in the story the snake pit is part of a larger organization with the goal to create stronger bladers. project Spectrum is part of a different branch of the organization lead by Zac Tordaline. Vis' blind eye persona is just to prevent other bladers from recognizing him so both bladers will give their all.

Now for Rykos, Let's say Rykos and Vis end up battling but they did not know they did because it was the subjects of Project Spectrum and Project Draco battled to test the progress of the two newer projects. Projects Spectrum and Draco are part of the same department and because the subjects of the two projects know eachother the codenames were put in place.
So it would be Blind Eye vs. Draco? mS.Or.Ct vs. rD.9U.Zn

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Hi! I've been on and off this site for a while now, but if you're new or just seeing this I hope you enjoy your stay on the WBO.

that would be interesting, to say the least...

I was actually going to mention that Rykos (as Draco) battles and shatters Tidal Leviathan, which IMO would make more sense for Iris to gain a new Leviathan.

Backstory:

Originally Rykos actually joined to test his willpower, but stayed in a constant conflict with a newly created persona that emerged due to the psychological damage he suffered from Project Draco. Joins a side tournament I guess?

btw, I may draw "Draco" lol...

So Rykos joined to test his strength. And lost it due to the intensity he set on himself? By the time Vis and Rykos (Blind Eye and Draco) battle would Rykos even acknowledge it if he found out he was against Vis?

Also what is the dragoon evolution line at the moment? is it neo evolves via synchronization into nova then something happens and it becomes Raijin?
does nova shatter and Raijin replace it?

With Vis, after the team tournament Zac got an offer as a beyblade scientist by the organization that the snake pit resides under. The catch, Vis has to agree to be the topic of the project. Vis went up against a snake pit blader who turned out to be Pilito and Iris Sonar shattered. That is where Muted Sonar comes into play.

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Hi! I've been on and off this site for a while now, but if you're new or just seeing this I hope you enjoy your stay on the WBO.

So Rykos joined to test his strength. And lost it due to the intensity he set on himself? By the time Vis and Rykos (Blind Eye and Draco) battle would Rykos even acknowledge it if he found out he was against Vis?

Also what is the dragoon evolution line at the moment? is it neo evolves via synchronization into nova then something happens and it becomes Raijin?
does nova shatter and Raijin replace it?

With Vis, after the team tournament Zac got an offer as a beyblade scientist by the organization that the snake pit resides under.  The catch, Vis has to agree to be the topic of the project. Vis went up against a snake pit blader who turned out to be Pilito and Iris Sonar shattered. That is where Muted Sonar comes into play.

Rykos doesn't lose his strength, its fragmented...or rather, his mind is. His actual persona still remains, but he's unstable sometimes and switches. This could potentially open rifts between him and his friends...which would be interesting, as they'd have no clue whatsoever.

To answer your question, Rykos claims he was going to the Arctic to reignite Nova, but on the way he tries to take an opportunity by testing his willpower. He fails to do so, but the end result works in Snake Pit's favor. Neo Dragoon is left over, while Raijin Dragoon is created to take its place. In doing this, Dragoon's "beast" is also fragmented, with both of the new personalities being one entity effectively to form "Draco."

Kind of a "I'm Spriggan" thing that Shu does in the manga (and what we glimpse in the anime recently), except a bit more severe due to the somewhat insane mindset the persona possesses. (Scratch that, Shu's gone nuts too, thinking about it)

Or...a more interesting thing IMO...Neo Dragoon evolves into Nova (as intended, where Rykos reaches the Arctic and successfully reignites the bey) but instead, Snake Pit interrupts the process to trigger a darker half of Dragoon to emerge. Along with Rykos' strong bond with Dragoon, it infects him as well, but the tie they have makes an entity with their worst traits combined. Neo is left as a husk while Raijin descends into "Draco"'s hands. The same bonds make the bey very in tune with its half-owner/owner. 

idk...thinking about this makes it really interesting...lol

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Repost of Rykos' profile, now updated.
Name: Rykos Azuki

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A Blader with a fiery spirit, he strives to be one of the best to fulfill his strict grandfather's dying wishes. His hair is a spiky mess of white, his eyes are a deep blue, and he is very fit, almost as if he was an inactive weightlifter. His clothes usually consist of azure robes (or other garments) lined with gold coloration. However, he now often wears a loose pair of long pants and a cerulean shirt with his bey's emblem on it. He is part of the Korean Team, Heavenly Trigram. He is generally relaxed and kind, but when provoked, he becomes cold and serious, sometimes even sadistic, as shown when he cracks part of Legend Spriggan (albeit Red-Eye attempted to hurt Iris by flinging a bey out of the stadium, and Oraiyun had taken the blow). He is best known for his double over finish against Free, and has even bursted Lui's Lost Longinus on one occasion. The first time he faced Lui, he utilized his Nova Storm for the first time and broke his string launcher. Afterwards, he always used a light launcher and a long winder. His beyblades are Neo Dragoon 7T. Eg/Nova Dragoon 7I. Nv./Raijin Dragoon 9U. Zn

Beyblade: Neo Dragoon (nD) 7T (Tail). Eg (Engulf)

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Layer: Neo Dragoon

This layer is a part of the God/Evolution Layer System and consists of four blades similar to the black blades found on Legend Spriggan. The heads are reminiscent of the original Dragoon's design from the Plastic/HMS gen. The layer gimmick is that the undersides of the blades are filled with metal that has been hollowed out underneath. The God Chip is reminiscent of the design found on Dark Knight Dragooon's Crystal Face, but with a more linear design like that of Shelter Regulus' God Chip, and depicts a dragon's head "molded" into the shape of a "D" in white upon a transparent cerulean God Chip. The layer is white, with red highlights alongside smaller green highlights representing Dragoon's eyes along the blades. This layer also possesses teeth slightly taller than that of Legend Spriggan, making it very difficult to burst when combined with the weight of the layer. However, the layer also possesses lower stamina than others due to its aggressiveness, making it a slightly riskier option in terms of attack types.

Disk: 7

The disk found on Neo Dragoon is called 7, and is also found on Legend Spriggan. It is the heaviest burst disk as of now, and is optimal when combined with strong attack layers, such as lS and nD.

Frame: Tail

The frame is similar to Meteor, except with a more aggressive hook design. The design does not protrude much more than Meteor, however, and also causes more scraping when destabilized.

Driver: Engulf

This is the most unique part of Neo Dragoon. The driver resembles Dragoon MS's Grip Flat Core or Rubber Flat from MFB, but encircled with a thinner outer layer of circular rubber that can be raised or lowered to the user's preference. The driver is extremely fast, and can even boost its speed like Unite and Merge due to the outer ring of rubber. However, the outer ring does not intrude upon the main RF of the tip, allowing for stamina conservation when needed.

Techniques:
- Nova Storm: Rykos launches nD at an angle to utilize its "acceleration ring" moving so quickly around the stadium, that it can burst an opponent's bey in one strike. This move can also be used when Neo/Nova Dragoon speeds up using the ring, and can be used multiple times in one match.
- Breaker Grapple: When Rykos faces a stamina or defense stance bey, he utilizes this technique to cycle around his opponent's bey in a chainsaw-like fashion with nD. This technique eventually drains the opponent's stamina or bursts them.
- Bound Storm: nD rushes around the stadium using Nova's speed, then, after accelerating to an almost unnoticeable state, it strikes the opponent repeatedly, landing heavy blows. Rykos used this technique to double over finish against Free once before losing to his opponent's 100% effort. Rykos can also use this technique in single strikes, so as not to lose spin against beys like Drain Fafnir.
- Stardust Nova: A stronger version of Nova Storm that can burst even free-spinning layers with pure force, and has the potential to crack layers. First seen when Rykos uses it in an attempt to defeat Vis, and narrowly loses.
- Nova Impact: Dragoon spirals around the stadium, using Nova Storm to accelerate, then tilts onto the ring, speeding up due to the increased aerodynamics and striking the opponent in a similar manner to kD's move (can't remember the name).

- Rykos does use a string launcher when a tournament/format battle requires a "standard launch."

Reborn Beyblade: Nova Dragoon 7I (Inferno) (Nv) Nova

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Layer: Nova Dragoon

An enhanced and original version of Neo Dragoon, Nova Dragoon is unlocked when Rykos fully masters Synchronization with Dragoon on a journey in the Arctic Circle. The layer is now filled with metal underneath the layer, but is only filled under the main contact points. The teeth are also barely taller now. The layer now has better slopes for destabilization, and becomes slightly more aggressive, having sharper points on the slopes.

Disk: 7

Frame: Inferno

A light, but nonetheless metal frame with an aggressive Meteor style design. Adds decent weight and is rounded for LAD.

Driver: Nova

The driver is now a R2F and also has a gear shaped "acceleration ridge" now. This allows for even greater acceleration, to the point where it nearly nullifies free-spinning techniques like Gripping Counter if fast enough, not always bursting or clicking them, but having a greater chance of KOing them.


Note: To counter the increased mass, longer increase in acceleration time, and launcher breakage, some techniques have been altered (Ex. Nova Storm can still accelerate at same rate via Nebula driver) and the launcher has been upgraded to a Neo Light Launcher by Iris and Oraiyun (thanks @[MWF] for the concept), having a longer ripcord, and bigger gear teeth to withstand the pressure applied to the launcher, but still provide great amounts of speed and launch strength. The launcher is also fused into a short, rotating grip, and allows for left or right handed launches, as well as having a beylogger integrated into the grip. This variant is known as the Neo Wing Launcher variant, and still uses the long winder equivalent of a ripcord. Alongside this, a weight can be moved from the launcher "grip" to the "head" of the launcher itself for stability or power respectively. The grip also has rubber on it to help with maintaining a proper grip during launches. Fyleon uses a similar variant in a verdant green and gunmetal grey color scheme that has scythes encircling the "launch countdown gem" and a string launcher setup rather than a ripcord set-up. Fyleon's variant is called the Neo Titan Launcher, and also has a weight shift, but with metal weighted grips instead of a rubber grip.

Techniques:
- Burst Impact: Rykos launches using his left hand to pull the ripcord, and with the greater strengh of his right arm, pulls the launcher body. The direction of the stadium allows Dragoon to swiftly begin its acceleration process, in contrast to right handed launches where it has to be launched a bit more precisely. This can also be used to trigger other technique, and is specifically a left-handed launch. He uses this technique in his second match against Vis, as he realizes the importance of a quicker acceleration that Dragoon needs to defeat opponents. He still uses a normal launch alongside the above launches, however, as this launch can be vulnerable to left-spinning beys.

Rykos also possesses another bey during his time as "Draco" in Project Draco (Snake Pit stuff because why not). In this state, his mental condition is worsened by a new persona forming within him (due to extreme training), as well as the fact that it possesses the worst traits of himself and Dragoon. As "Draco," Rykos owns Raijin Dragoon 9U. Zn (Zenith)

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Raijin Dragoon 9U. Zn

Layer: The layer can be separated into four separate Upper Attack based blades or two main blades in a similar manner to tN. the other gimmick is metal filling each blade, granting high OWD. Metal also coats part of the inner section of the layer underneath. Strong teeth and is left-spin.

Disc/Frame: (9 is a reboot of Nine) 9 for decently high weight, Under for some LAD.

Driver: Zenith

Zenith uses a Burst version of LRF for high speed and control, resulting in quality attack, but lower stamina. Has a free-spinning plate located around it to allow for LAD like Destroy.

By lost it I mean he lost himself. as in he lost his sanity or it is fragmented.


also with the fact that Rykos/Draco basically has a split personality disorder now things could get interesting.

the biggest change with Vis after project Spectrum is his beyblading style is more aggressive and a sadistic side started to appear occasionally.

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Hi! I've been on and off this site for a while now, but if you're new or just seeing this I hope you enjoy your stay on the WBO.

By lost it I mean he lost himself. as in he lost his sanity or it is fragmented.

On point then, sorry lol

no problem I could have worded it better.

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And could my new character (sharpen) be included in this?

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And could my new character (sharpen) be included in this?

how would your character fit into the storyline?

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hey with Rykos/Dracos would the beyblade switch between Nova and Raijin depending on if Rykos or Draco is the one at the wheel?

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And could my new character (sharpen) be included in this?

how would your character fit into the storyline?

like blind-eye and Draco, sharpen is actually David

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Hi! I've been on and off this site for a while now, but if you're new or just seeing this I hope you enjoy your stay on the WBO.

hey with Rykos/Dracos would the beyblade switch between Nova and Raijin depending on if Rykos or Draco is the one at the wheel?

No. I decided on Raijin being a separate bey. Nova is left behind and Iris uses it for a while before gaining Abyss Leviathan anyways.

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or rather, Neo is left behind. Draco picks it up and leaves it behind one day, leading Iris to find the trail to his actual identity.

plot convenience okay? don't judge me lol

Makes sense. So Draco had no use for neo Dragoon so he tossed it. And Iris found it and kept because it is the only link to Rykos left.

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Hi! I've been on and off this site for a while now, but if you're new or just seeing this I hope you enjoy your stay on the WBO.

The thing is, Snake pit/whatever organization it is bites off more than they can chew, because Draco doesn't bow down at all. Kind of a liability for them, since they more or less "hired" a mercenary who is not only somewhat insane and unstable, but also doesn't care what happens so long as he gets stronger and destroys his ties to his alternate self.

while this is going on, who's going to be the main character?

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Hi! I've been on and off this site for a while now, but if you're new or just seeing this I hope you enjoy your stay on the WBO.

dunno. maybe Iris?...

huh??? But I thought Rykos was the main character??? 
I seem to be confused a little right now...

1. Start with a protagonist.
2. What type of burst bey is the protagonist using. Explain the details of the bey.
3. Name the avatar of it. What type is it??
4. The companions  and frnds and rivals of protagonist and their beys and avatars.
5. A perfect storyline for the burst series...with different type of scenes and few tragedy scenes as well...
6. Character designing with pictures..
7. U may include songs as well...Its optional..

These r the things of followed...A series will be created...

Voting is required for the choices of characters...Each and every person can give their opinions...
Lastly....try to make the series popular...

This sounds logical. Seems like somebody has experience already

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