Megablader9 Story: Blader Squall

Temporal · Jan. 15, 2011 8:22 AM

I don't wanna do this, but one of the characters will die soon. I will post a poll to see who it is. How do you change the poll? Sorry.

Whatzzer · Jan. 15, 2011 4:14 PM

Character request
Name:Gray
Bey:Assault Cyborg 230 RB(Rubber Ball),Rapid Cyborg 80MWD(Metal Wide Defense)Both beys Can combine into one powerful bey:AxeTreme Cyborg 85MF( Metal Flat)
Characteristics:His bey Is both Left -right Spin.He has two charcteristics on ethe bad side,one the good side...when in the bad side,He will have a darker version of his bey and stronger(somewhat Like Tsubasa)He is nor good nor bad...Mysterious guy........

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The Fire Wyrm · Jan. 15, 2011 5:15 PM

(Jan. 15, 2011 8:22 AM)Megablader9 Wrote: I don't wanna do this, but one of the characters will die soon. I will post a poll to see who it is. How do you change the poll? Sorry.

Cynthia can die.(She's supposed to get corrupted anyways)But its your choice if she does or not

Temporal · Jan. 16, 2011 6:49 AM

(Jan. 15, 2011 4:14 PM)Whatzzer Wrote: Character request
Name:Ken
Bey:Assault Cyborg 230 RB(Rubber Ball),Rapid Cyborg 80MWD(Metal Wide Defense)Both beys Can combine into one powerful bey:AxeTreme Cyborg 85MF( Metal Flat)
Characteristics:His bey Is both Left -right Spin.He has two charcteristics on ethe bad side,one the good side...when in the bad side,He will have a darker version of his bey and stronger(somewhat Like Tsubasa)He is nor good nor bad...Mysterious guy........

Erm.. I already have a character named Ken.

Whatzzer · Jan. 16, 2011 6:53 AM

Aww man,I forgot bout that...heres another name...Gray?

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Temporal · Jan. 16, 2011 6:56 AM

Sure! But he may be only a cameo character. I'm done with main characters until the second arc, which will start on part 17.

Whatzzer · Jan. 16, 2011 7:06 AM

What do you mean by cameo?This guy should be one of the main characters for the second arc I think

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Temporal · Jan. 16, 2011 7:28 AM

A cameo is when he appears, and has a somewhat important part, but only temporarily. If he's a main, he'll either be a member of a rival team, or just be evil.

HEADS UP! I need a main antagonist for the second arc. PM me your ideas! The best one gets in. Backstory needed too.

Whatzzer · Jan. 16, 2011 7:29 AM

Oooo,But cant you make him appear at the second arc as the main character?

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Temporal · Jan. 16, 2011 7:31 AM

He'll be there as a rival, I guess. he'll be recurring, but won't be on the main team. I'll stick with Terry, Nii, Miyu, Rex, and Ken for the main team. Sorry Niel Mayender, but you'll go to another main team for a rematch against Terry.

I Repeat! the best PM'ed idea for a 2nd main antagonist gets in the 2nd arc as the main villian. I'd prefer a female one but it doesn't really matter, there is no bias.

Whatzzer · Jan. 16, 2011 7:34 AM

On second arc?

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Temporal · Jan. 16, 2011 7:43 AM

Yup. He will be a kind-sorta main character. Unless you want to enter him into the antagonist contest.

Whatzzer · Jan. 16, 2011 7:44 AM

Ok...When will you do the next part?Cant wait man

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Blue is my Favourite colour.What's your's?
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Temporal · Jan. 16, 2011 7:46 AM

Probably Monday. I may do Part 11, act 1 tomorrow.

Temporal · Jan. 17, 2011 10:09 PM

It has been decided. Ken is dead, and Do not read spoiler below before reading the new part.

Spoiler (Click to View)

All will be answered soon.

The Fire Wyrm · Jan. 17, 2011 10:29 PM

(Jan. 16, 2011 7:31 AM)Megablader9 Wrote: He'll be there as a rival, I guess. he'll be recurring, but won't be on the main team. I'll stick with Terry, Nii, Miyu, Rex, and Ken for the main team. Sorry Niel Mayender, but you'll go to another main team for a rematch against Terry.
I Repeat! the best PM'ed idea for a 2nd main antagonist gets in the 2nd arc as the main villian. I'd prefer a female one but it doesn't really matter, there is no bias.

Cynthia got it.(YAYZ)
btw can my char kick her @$$(please?)

Temporal · Jan. 17, 2011 10:35 PM

Hrm..Sure, besides, Terry's team will probably stay depressed for 2 acts. Yeah. I got no PMs, so Cynthia wins in epic fashion.

The Fire Wyrm · Jan. 17, 2011 10:36 PM

(Jan. 17, 2011 10:35 PM)Megablader9 Wrote: Hrm..Sure, besides, Terry's team will probably stay depressed for 2 acts. Yeah. I got no PMs, so Cynthia wins in epic fashion.

YAY!

Temporal · Jan. 17, 2011 10:37 PM

Hrm... Before that, I may do a Cynthia vs. Gingka showdown. Anyone like that idea?

The Fire Wyrm · Jan. 17, 2011 10:40 PM

YAY! (is that my third YAY! or fourth YAY! ?)

Temporal · Jan. 17, 2011 10:43 PM

I believe 4th. So Gingka vs. Cynthia in act 2 it is! Who will win in this battle of enemies?! Will Ken's body play a role? If so, how?! Read the next part to find out! (Man, I advertise my stuff well!)

Edited end to reflect the next part. And to finalize the fact that Ken is not coming back, and can't be saved. Sorry, Ken.

Decided. Wyrm will fight her, but the outcome is no longer guaranteed. He might win, but he could just as easily lose. This will be Part 12, act 2.

Temporal · Jan. 18, 2011 12:51 AM

Okay, act 2 is up! Looks like Terry will not fight Gingka after all! The next era of darkness starts now! Will Terry withstand Cynthia's spreading control? What about Ryuuga? Will Cynthia enslave Miyu? Read the next part to find out!

Ga' · Jan. 18, 2011 2:44 AM

WTH... This story just took a random, yet extremely major plot twist...

EDIT: I just realized something...
"You...YOU KILLED KEN!"
South Park reference anyone? Wink

"In many ways, the work of a critic is easy. We risk very little, yet enjoy a position over those who offer up their work and their selves to our judgment. We thrive on negative criticism, which is fun to write and to read. But the bitter truth we critics must face, is that in the grand scheme of things, the average piece of junk is probably more meaningful than our criticism designating it so. But there are times when a critic truly risks something, and that is in the discovery and defense of the new. The world is often unkind to new talent, new creations. The new needs friends. Last night, I experienced something new: an extraordinary meal from a singularly unexpected source. To say that both the meal and its maker have challenged my preconceptions about fine cooking is a gross understatement. They have rocked me to my core. In the past, I have made no secret of my disdain for Chef Gusteau's famous motto, "Anyone can cook." But I realize, only now do I truly understand what he meant. Not everyone can become a great artist; but a great artist can come from anywhere."

-Anton Ego/Peter O'Toole (1932-2013)

Temporal · Jan. 18, 2011 3:04 AM

What?! Are you referring to "You Killed Kenny! You Bastards!"? I didn't notice! But yeah, I came up with that idea about 2 minutes before I wrote it.
I am working on Part 12, act 1. It will be up in a few days. But I Still need Feedback.

Ga' · Jan. 18, 2011 8:57 PM

(Jan. 18, 2011 3:04 AM)Megablader9 Wrote: What?! Are you referring to "You Killed Kenny! You Bastards!"? I didn't notice! But yeah, I came up with that idea about 2 minutes before I wrote it.
I am working on Part 12, act 1. It will be up in a few days. But I Still need Feedback.

Great, can't wait! And yes, I am referring to that quote. A coincidence, and a very funny one too.

"In many ways, the work of a critic is easy. We risk very little, yet enjoy a position over those who offer up their work and their selves to our judgment. We thrive on negative criticism, which is fun to write and to read. But the bitter truth we critics must face, is that in the grand scheme of things, the average piece of junk is probably more meaningful than our criticism designating it so. But there are times when a critic truly risks something, and that is in the discovery and defense of the new. The world is often unkind to new talent, new creations. The new needs friends. Last night, I experienced something new: an extraordinary meal from a singularly unexpected source. To say that both the meal and its maker have challenged my preconceptions about fine cooking is a gross understatement. They have rocked me to my core. In the past, I have made no secret of my disdain for Chef Gusteau's famous motto, "Anyone can cook." But I realize, only now do I truly understand what he meant. Not everyone can become a great artist; but a great artist can come from anywhere."

-Anton Ego/Peter O'Toole (1932-2013)

Yes	76.67%	23
Somewhat	16.67%	5
No	6.67%	2
Total:	100%	30 vote(s)

Megablader9 Story: Blader Squall

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